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Posted: 18 years ago
so kk wakes up n thinks sumthing bad has happend...
there doctorsa say that sumit has gone in coma..

dr1 - humne pori koshish ki...lekin..
dr2 - ab kya karen...
dr1 - we need to call his parents n inform them about this..

nurse goes to call veena n kul..
sumit is shifted to a room..kk is just getting very impatient..she feels as if sumit is in trouble..her fear is right...

there veena n kul upset when they receive the call..they rush to that place...

ve - bataeeye dr kya hua hai sumit ko..
dr - he is in coma...

veena is shell shocked

kul - kya yeh aap kya keh rahe hain..wo to bilkul theek tha..aese kaise kuch ho sakta hai use..
dr - use brain tumour tha...he was on the last stage...he has come here for the operation...

kul n veena wathing each other n really depressed..veena sits on the floor crying...kul gives her support..hugs her...

n asks dr - ab wo kaisa hai...
dr - kuch keh nahin sakte...wo is waqt coma mein hai..aur coma ka patient 1 hafte mein bhi hosh mein aa sakta ya phir 1 saal mein...hum kuch nahin keh sakte...

both of them crying...
dr - agar aap use dekhna chahte hain to..plz..wo andar hai

they went inside...
sumit was lying as if sleeping..veena sat acroos him n puts her hand on his head...
ve - kyun..kyun..hum sab ko nahin bataya..kyun..kya hum mar gaye the...

she starts crying n kul asks her to control herself as they have to tell kk all this..

ve - nahin..aap kk ko kuch mat batana...
ku - are kyun...use batana zaroori hai
ve - aap nahin samjhe...sumit ne kk se shaddi karne k liye inkaar isiliye kiya that taki kk khush reh sake...wo nahin chahta tha ki kk uski bimaari k baare mein jaane...

kul becomes silent...

ve - mere bete ne bahut badi kurbaani di hai...aur main use zaaya nahin jaane doongi...2 hafte mein kk ki shaadi hone jaa rahi hai vishal k saath...use yeh sachayee na hi pata chale to acha hai...wo apni nayee zindagi shuru karne jaa rahi hai...

just then fone rings n kul picks it up
kul - hello
its rahul - uncle...kya hua..sumit theek to hai na..
ku - nahin....
ra - silent
kul tells him everything n in the end says - tumhe kk ki shaadi vishal se karvaani hai...kamzor mat padna...yahan sumit ka khayal rakhne k liye hum hain..tum..tum...kk ko khush rakhna...

n he cuts the fone...
rahul culdn't stop his tears..kk comes n sees this
kk - are bhaiya..aap ro rahe ho..
ra - nahin to...
kk - phir yeh aansu...
ra - bas....tumhe veeda karne ka waqt jo aa gaya hai..isiliye thoda emotional ho gaya...
kk - oh bhaiya..i luv u..
she hugs him n thinks of sumit...
rahul too remembers sumit's lil things

so sumit is in coma...far away from kk
today it's her mehndi ki rasam...
every1 is njoying except rahul n kk...

she thinks of sumit..
n sumit moves his hand a bit n takes a deep breath...veena rushes to dr...he cums n checks his pulse n says - koi improvement nahin hai abhi...is ki haalat abhi bhi waisi hi hai..

veena again becomes sad...
kk is having mehndi on her hands..
n the song plays -
Soni Banno Chan Si Chamke
Mathe Uthe Jhumkar Dame
Palka Uth Diya Ne Thum Thum Ke
Main Vari Vari Java
Soni Banno Chan Si Chamke
Mathe Uthe Jhumkar Dame
Palka Uth Diya Ne Thum Thum Ke
Main Vari Vari Java

Tu Vekh Tai Lai Aj Raj Ke
Apne Sariyan Nu
Cheti Apne Nahi Mil De
Ja Banno Pave Khushiyan Te Dil Dariyan Tu
Pave Armaan Sab Dil De
Tu Vekh Tai Lai Aj Raj Ke
Apne Sariyan Nu
Cheti Apne Nahi Mil De
Ja Banno Pave Khushiyan Te Dil Dariyan Tu
Pave Armaan Sab Dil De

Tum Ho Gham Ko Chupaye
Main Hoon Sar Ko Jhukaye
Tum Bhi Chup Ho
Main Bho Chup Hoon
Kaun Kise Samjhaye
Ab Dooriyan Itni Hain To
Milna Yahan Kal Ho Naa Ho
Ab Dooriyan Itni Hain To
Milna Yahan Kal Ho Naa Ho


Tu Vekh Tai Lai Aj Raj Ke
Apne Sariyan Nu
Cheti Apne Nahi Mil De
Ja Banno Pave Khushiyan Te Dil Dariyan Tu
Pave Armaan Sab Dil De

Sach Hai Ke Dil To Dukha Hai
Hamne Magar Socha Hai
Dil Ko Hai Gham Kyon
Aankh Hai Nam Kyon
Hona Hi Tha Jo Hua Hai
Us Baat Ko Jaane Bhi Do
Jiska Nishaan Kal Ho Naa Ho
Har Pal Yahan Je Bhar Jiyo
Jo Hai Sama Kal Ho Naa Ho...

guys..i'm going to b inactive from today coz of exams..i'll keep on reading the fanfic n will try my best to update it...hope u all will miss me..i'll b back soon

luv
amrit

Edited by amrit23 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwwww.... that was sooo touching!!!! we'll miss you all right!!
good luck for your exams!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 18 years ago
of course we will miss u 😊 ..........well written amrit.... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
very well written amrit 👏....
i read it after a long time coz i m also a li'l less active coz of xams 😳 😳.....
& hey we'll surely miss u 😳 😳...
best of luck 4 ur xams 👍🏼 👍🏼....& cum bak soon 😳 😳...
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Posted: 18 years ago

Veena sits with su…hold his hand praying that everything would be alright … meanwhilst kul is in a consultation with one of the surgeons.

Kul: mein jaana chahoonga key kya hua hai? 😭 😡

Dr: dekhiyeh Mr wadwa…😳 humney sumit so usski marzi se diagnose kiya tah…who saare risks jaantey hui…iss operation key liye raazi hua tah 😳

Kul: per aap bataye to say key situation kya hai? 😕

Dr: Operation key dooran hum kaafi kamjab rahai tumour ko remove 😊 karne mein...per achnak koi complication hogaye 😔 jisse ki wajah se Su coma mein chala gaya…

Kul: kya complication? 😲

Dr: Humne su ko kaha tah key who bilkul relax kare…kuch mutt soche…Brain per zyaada booj mutt dahleh…per wo shayad aesa kar nahi paya…...he lost a lot of blood…

Kul: to ab kya koi umeed nahi hai 😭

Dr: nah umeed naa hoyeh Mr. Wadwa…😊 tumour remove ho chukka hai per su agar khabi coma se bahir aayega….yeh kehna muskil hai

Kul: (unable to control his tears) 😭 😭

Dr: aap ab sub kuch bagwaan per chordein…jo hoga bether key liye hi hoga…😳

With these words he leaves from there….kul turns around and looks at su from outside the room…veena is in the same state as Kul 😭

At kk house:

All friends are gathered around kk and are busy chattering away…making remarks about about Vishal and kk and laughing to themselves. 😆 Kk is sitting there silently having mehndi put on her hands ignoring what they are saying 😒…she is lost in her own thoughts

Rahuls looks at kk from a distance and sees her all ghumsum and can't bare the pain. 😕

Pr: (happily) kitna acha lag raha hai naa yeh sub kuch 😃

Ra: (sad) hmm…haan

Pr: Maine khabi socha bhi nahi tah key kk haan kareigee 😆

Ra: (looks at kk again)

Pr: dehka aapne….waqt sub gao baar dehta hai…kumkum ki zindagi mein phir se khushiyan aayeingi..

Ra: (listening with tears in his eyes) 😭

Pr: arre aapko kya hua hai? 😊...abhi kk yehein pey hai 😳…abhi se vidhei kah ghum? 😃

Ra: kk key bayger yeh ghar kitna soona ho jaiga naa?

Pr: hmm…who to hai…per yeh to hona hi tah 😊

Ra: looks at her and smiles faintly..

Pr: she puts her hand on his shoulder and smiles…then leaves him

Ra: kash sub kuch aesa nahi hota😭…kash mein kumkum ko sumit ki majboori batah pata 😡….kyun hora hai hai yeh sub kuch inn dono key saath…kyun? 😭

The mehndi goes on kk is there but her heart is elsewhere 😕 and rahuls eyes are only on kk…he can see her sadness but can't bare it…😭

Edited by Henna042 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
wowwwwwwwww gr8 wrk dearoos 😳 😳

jaldi yeh rona band karo plzzz 😛 😛

amrit gud luck 4 xams 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ankuhujulover


jaldi yeh rona band karo plzzz 😛 😛

haha....nahi...bilkul nahi 😆 😆 😆

to gain some happiness u have to bare some sadness...😆

have some patience Anku...😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Henna042

haha....nahi...bilkul nahi 😆 😆 😆

to gain some happiness u have to bare some sadness...😆

have some patience Anku...😃

😭😭lack of patience

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ankuhujulover

😭😭lack of patience

hey Anku yaar...don't cry...i cant c ppl upset!!! 😒

cheer up...😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome write up!! I really like the way Rahul's character has been potrayed ... he understands and wants to stand by his sis....
I loved this line the best...

The mehndi goes on kk is there but her heart is elsewhere and rahuls eyes are only on kk…he can see her sadness but can't bare it…

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