FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 28

Originally posted by: raji05

awesome write up!! I really like the way Rahul's character has been potrayed ... he understands and wants to stand by his sis....
I loved this line the best...

The mehndi goes on kk is there but her heart is elsewhere and rahuls eyes are only on kk…he can see her sadness but can't bare it…

hehe thanks! 😆

u know what....for a minute there when i saw the bold writting i thought u might have written a part of the story! 😆 😆 😆

newayz keep posting! 😉

👏 gud work bachcha........henna......chalo i'll carry on.... 😊

.......so kk is crying........ra unhappy........su in comma.........

kk was sitting unhappily.....vi goes near her (plzzzzzzz dont kill me for it)

vi:kk
kk is lost in thoughts...

vi (touches her hand) 😡 :kk main tumse baat kar raha hoon.

kk comes back from her thoughts........removes her hand from his'.....and says....

kk:haan.
vi:kya hua? kya soch rahi ho?
kk:hmm.......kuch nahi.
vi:tum khush to ho naa.
kk (thinks) :agar su khush hai to main bhi.
vi:kk maine tumse kuch poocha.......kya tum khush ho?
kk(looks down) :hmm. 😭

then all the girls start dancing ........they call rahul and pr to dance ra not very happy but still goes........then they take vi to dance and then kk toooo.....

g1:chalo kk.
kk:nahi mera mann nahi kar raha.
g2:aise kaise chalega????
g3:haan dance to karna padega.........woh bhi jiju ke saath....
then they all laugh and drag kk near vi..... 😡

kk unwillingly stands there and looking around she sees su.....

she smiles su comes near her takes her hand up and starts dancing with her 😛 😃 ........she is happy she turns and sees vi standing her smile fades.......she turns and sees no one there....... 😭

vi:kya hua?
kk:main abhi aayi...

she goes away to her room takes su's photo and starts crying....... 😭 😭

gr8 part 👏 👏 👏
n hope kk cms 2 knw abt su
rahul tels kk everythg n kk cancles a marriage wth vishal

bachcha will write tom or some other day.....now tooooooooo busy........waise amrit one more supppppppperbbbbbbbbbbbbb part 👏

are wah!! both parts were really good....
was so glad to know that rahul let slip something...nice twist!!!
and flashback ..... uske bare mein kuch kehne ki zaroorat hai kya??? 😆 😆 😆
superb pieces people!!

A week passes and time is as though it is standing still for the wadhwa's…su has shown no improvement. 😕 Kul and Veena are growing more and more worried 😕…but their prayers do not stop…

At kk House time rushes on!

Wedding preparations have begun…all invites are being sent out…lights/ decorations are being planned…Priya has taken care of the catering and all other small duties. Rahul is in extreme pain 😔 having to witness all of this. He never thought kk would leave the house under such circumstances. 😭

Kk's mum and Priya are completely wrapped up in all preparations and everything being perfect 😃…they are so excited and can't talk about nothing else…😆

Vishal too is sitting in his house thinking about how life will be after he marries kk…he grins to himself 😃

Vi: (thinks) Sumit akir tumne mera kaam kar hi diya…tumne sahi dosti nibhai hai…dost ho to tum jaisa..i hope k tum hamesha khush raho…aur tum dehkna waqt aaney pey mein bhi yeh dosti issi tarah se lotaonga! 😉

Continues smiling to himself. 😆

Kk is in her room,,,she can hear Priya and her mum talking about the wedding…she covers her ears in an attempt to drown out the noise…😭 Akshat comes running into her room 😳

Ak: didi…didi 😳….dehko naa 😃 (pulls her arm)

Kk: (looks at him) kya hua?

Ak: look didi…mein jeet gaya I got 1^st prize…😆 (laughs)

Shows her the little cup he has won 😳

Kk: (smiles) cheating kar key? 😳

Ak: kya didi 😕…papa ney bus help ki thi…likha to maine tah naa 😛

Kk: acha…to yeh cheating nahi hai? 😊

Ak: (laughs) nahi 😆

Kk: (sits him up on the bed next to her)

Ak: didi ek baat poochoon? 😳

Kk:…🤔..erm poocho

Ak: didi aap shaadi kyun kar rahi ho? 😳

Kk: (speechless) 😲 …yeh aap kyun pooch rahe ho?

Ak: kyun key didi mein nahi chahta key aap chalee jao 😃

Kk: (smiles at Akshat's innocence) 😊

Ak: batao naa didi…kya aap jah rahi ho? 😳

Kk: (sad now) haan…ek nah ek din to janah hi tah naa 😒

Ak: nahi didi aap nahi jaa sakti 😡

Kk: (has tears in her eyes) 😭

Ak: (Sees the tears and gets sad…but he doesn't really understand y) acha didi aap ko janah hai to aap jahiyeh mein nahi rokoonga per didi aap dukhi naa ho 😕

Kk: (smiles faintly at him…n thinks) tumhai kaun chor kar jaana chahey gaa Akshat...per kya karoon mere majboori hai 😭

Ak: didi agar aap mere yeh baat nahi maan sakti to ek aur baat hai jo aap ko maani hogee

Kk: kaunsi?....😕

Ak: nahi iss baar pehle promise karein (puts his hand out) 😛

Kk: (puts her hand on his) acha promise ab batao

Ak: aap sirf Sumit uncle se shaadi kareinge 😛….woh mujhe ache lagtey hain…yeh doosrey uncle nahi achey 😆…unho nai mujhe icecream bhi nahi lekey di….😆

Kk: shocked to hear such a demand from Akshat 😲

Ak: (carries on) aur haan…sumit uncle to roz aatey hain…to mein aap miss bhi nahi karoonga😆 (laughs)…sumit uncle bohut achey hain…👍🏼(streches his arms out to show how much he likes Su) 🤗

Rahul is at the door listening to their conversation 😭…he has tears in his eyes on seeing even Akshat has become so attached to Su. 😭

Ra: Akshat yahaan aao….didi ko tung mutt karo! 😳

Ak: (goes running to him) papa hum jeet gaye 😆…(rejoicing) 😆

Ak shows Rahuls the cup and Rahul takes him away from there.😳

Kk: yehi to mein bhi chahtee thi Akshat…lehkin kismet ney kuch aur hi likha hai taqdeer mein…

so every1 busy in arrangements 4 kk's marriage..
a small get together going in the house coz this is kk's last night with her family...

every1 njoying but rahul n kk were separately sad..
the song going on -
meri saanson mein tu hai samaya
mera jeevan to hai tera saya
teri pooja karoon main to har dam
yeh hain tere karam..kabhi khushi kabhi gham

kk sitting there like a statue..w/o any expression...thinking what shez going to do....

meanwhile..in the hospital...
sumit slowly moves his hand...
veena happy to see this...
ve - sumit...ankhen kholo sumit...
su not in full conciousness right now
ve - sumit...
su - ah....
veena has tears in her eyes...wipes them n calls kul...
su murmurs in his soft voice - kumkum...

kul n veena overjoyed to hear this...
veena holds sumit's hand...
he slowly opens his eyes...sees every1
su - maa....papa...

at kk's home...
strong wind blows n kk's hair cums to her face...she slowly moves them away...while shez doing so...she feels as if it's sumit's touch...she culd sense his presence though he was not there...

ak - didi kya hua...
kk looking at the open window - kuh nahin...

at the hospital...
sumit has regained his senses n veena hugs him tightly...
ve - tumne hume kyun kuch nahin bataya..sab kuch akele sehte rahe...
sumit too feels secure in her arms n creid...
kul - ab tum theek ho gaye ho na..sab kuch pehle jaisa ho jayega..main abhi rahul ko fone karke batata hoon ki tum hosh mein aa gaye ho aur wo kk ki shaadi rukwade...yeh shaadi ab nahin ho sakti...
sumit stops him saying - nahin..aap use mat batana...kk apni nayee zindagi shuru karne jaa rahi hai...main..mujhme uska saamna karne ki himmat nahin hai...wo jab mujhse sawaal karegi to mere paas koi jawaab nahin hoga...aap kisi ko nahin batayoge..kuch bhi nahin...jo ho raha hai use hone do...

just then doctors came n ask the parents to wait outside as they want to check sumit...
they went outside..n kul decides to call rahul irrespective of what sumit said...

ra picks up the fone n kul tells him everything...he is on cloud 9 after hearing this...
ra - sach...sumit theek ho gaya..thank god...main bahut khush hoon..ab sab kuch pehle jaisa ho jayega..kk ko vishal se shaadi karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai...main abhi wahan aa raha hoon....
kul - lekin ek problem hai...sumit wahan aane ko taiyaar nahin hai..wo chahta hai k kk vishal se shaadi karle.
his smile fades
ra - main wahan aakar usse baat karta hoon..wo aesa nahin kar sakta

he cuts the fone n goes to his room to pack his bags..priya came n asks him where is he going at this moment...
ra didn't tell her coz he wants sumit to get ready first..what if sumit doesn't come n it will again hurt kk..so he says that hez going 4 an urgent meeting..
pr - lekin...kal kk ki shaadi hai...
he starts walking off...
kk is standing at the door..
kk - aaj aap ka business mujhse zyaada zaroori ho gaya
ra - keeps his luggage n hugs her - bahut zaroori kaam hai..isiliye jaa raha hoon....tum dukhi mat hona..ab bas khushiyaan aane waali hain...

he kisses kk on forehead n leaves...
kk tries to understand what he said...

so he reaches the hospital..it took him 6 hours
he saw sumit in the garden sitting on a bench lost in his thoughts..he goes there
ra - kk ke baare mein soch rah ho..
su shockd to see him - aap yahan...
ra - pehle maine sawaal poocha...kya kk ke baare mein soch rahe ho...
sumit with a bowed head - haan...
ra - wo to aaj bhi tunhara intzaar kar rahi hai...chalo na uske paas
su looking in his eyes - nahin...mujhmein uska saamna karne ki himmat nahin hai...main nahin chal sakta...

rahul n sumit had a long argument...
ra - tum kk se pyaar nahin karte kya...
then finally sumit gave up..agrees to go with rahul...
hez immensely happy...hugs sumit...

sumit seeks his parents blessings b4 leaving...
kul n veena - jao..jaldi se kk ke paas chale jao..ab aur intzaar nahin hota
ra - aap hamare saath nahin chalenge...
su - haan..maa..tum saath nahin chalogi kya..
ve - nahin hum kal ayenge...yahan ek mandir hai jahan maine mannat maangi thi..tum theek ho gaye ho to mannat poori karke kal hi ayenge...tab tak tum kk ka khayal rakhna...
su smiles after a long time

they leave 4 the airport...

at mumbai...
kk is looking like an angel..princess...dressed in red..a haevy necklace n hanging earings...she was just looking beautiful...she had verything..that charm..that glow..but 1 thing was missing...her smile...she was sitting in her room....

pr came to kk's room - rahul abhi tak nahin aaya...pata nahin kahaan reh gaya...
kk is silent..she doesn't reacted to this
pr sat along her - aaj itni khoobsurat lag rahi meri kk..kisi ki nazar na lag jaye..
kk - nazar to pehle hi lag chuki hai bhabhi..meri khushiyon ko..
priya undrstands what she wanted to say n hugs her...

at the airport...
rahul n sumit came to know that their flight is 2 hours late...
ra - oh..no..is flight ko aaj hi late hona tha..
they decides to wait there..
rahul calls home to tell every1 that he is cuming with sumit n that the marriage wuld not take place but due to all the noise in the house..no1 picked the fone....it kept on ringing but no1 picked it up...
he is shatterd...

wow gr8 part
ydodnt rahul cal vishal n tel her evrythg n vishal stops/delays da wedding n sukk gets married 😉
hwz tht