FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 25

Originally posted by: mathimurali

👏 very good really appreciate ur work
more interesting than real kk
i am eagerly waiting for the updates
plzzzzzz continue 👏

and Mathi im eagerly waiting for ur utsav updates! 😉

lets strike up a deal...we exhange updates regularly! 😆 😆 😆

wat say?.....(jus kidding)

do keep tuning in and enjoying! 😃

Originally posted by: janu_2006

wow gr8 part
hope kk gets 2 knw abt su's illness(i think bt)nt sure so nt mentioning it
n hope vishal helps her(kk) 2 knw da truth abt su's illness soooooooooooooooooon

thanks....

...everything will happen all in good time tho....

...keep visiting da fanfic regularly! 😉

Originally posted by: ankuhujulover

omgggggggggg wowwwwwwwww whhttttttttt a lovely update...w8ting fr the breath taking story ahead 😉 😳 😳

keep it up guys 👏 👏

Anku my sweet little fan 🤗

saans waapis aya keh nahi????? 😆

ur right about 1 thing the upcoming story will surely take away your breath with its swiftness...partey raho...😉

Later on that evening su is sittin in his room…his phone rings

Su: Hello

Dr: Hi Mr wadwa…

Su: arre aap 😲…(eagerly) kay yeh kya baat hai? 😕

Dr: maine aap ki saari reports assess karli hain…

Su: aur??? (impatiently)

Dr: Dehkiyeh Mr. Wadwa aap ka best option yeh hai kay app jald se jald yeh operation karlein…boliye kya aap tayar hain operation key liye

Su: (upset…slowly manages to say) kya wakey koi aur raaste nahi hai 😭

Dr:…yeh operation sirf aap ka chance hai…aur aap to samaj tey hain kay risk bohut hai…lehkin aur koi bhi raasta nahi hai 😕

Su: (unwillingly) acha…mein….yeh…operation karne 😕 (tearfully) kay liye tayar hoon 😭

Dr: per aapko kal ko aana hoga

Su: (shocked) Kal? 😲 😲 😲

Dr: haan jonsa specialist hai who bus yahaan 2-3 din tak hai aur who kal hi operate karna chahta hai…

Su: ….goes really quiet

Dr: mujhe pata hai kay yeh ahsaan nahi hai…lehkin kya main samjoon kay aap kal ko aah rahe hain?

Su: (tears fall down his cheek) hmm 😭

Dr: c you 2morrow then Mr.Wadwa….bye!

Su put the phone down…

Su: bus yeh ek raat hai mere paas 😭…kal mein rahoon nah rahoon 💔

He hold his head and thinks for a while …he wipes his tears and decides to phone home and hear every1s voices for the last time…su really doesn't believe in this operation.😕

He rings and asks how every1 is…they wonder why su is keep on asking such questions 😕 and y suddenly out of the blue he wants to talk to every 1 and why all of a sudden he is apologizing so much for even little things…😭but they don't ask him…they jus go along with it. 😭

Finally su puts down the phone…and he thinks only one thing…

Su: maine kk se akri baar milna chahoonga….😔

He gets up and goes to find her…he sees shallu as she tells him kk is sitting on the terrace…su races there…

He is breathless by the time he gets there…but all his tiredness goes away on seeing her there. 😊 He shuts his eyes tight and thinks I have to do this its for the best and for kk's happiness.😵 Slowly walks up to her.

Su: …kk…

Kk: (doesn't turn on hearing his voice)

Su: mein jaanta hoon kay tum mujhse bohut naraz ho 😒…issliye tum mujse baat nahi karna chahtee …lehkin iss mein tumhari koi galti nahi hai…main hoon hi tumhari nafrat key kabil….😡

Kk: (has tears in her eyes on hearing this)

Su: kk…please mujhe maaf kardey nah 😕 …mein ja raha hoon…hamesha key liye😭

Turns too leave…kk quickly grabs him and hugs him tight…she cries hysterically 😭 😭 😭

Su: (shuts his eyes tight 😵 thinking this is probably the last time he will be able to hug kk…he is feeling truly shattered from inside 💔)

Kk: kyun sumit 😲…kyun karey ho aeisa 😲….mujse se kya galti hogaye hai jo tum mujse alag hona chahtey ho…😭 (grabbing his shirt)

Su: (looking into her eyes) tumhari koi galti nahi hai 😕

Kk: to phir kyun?

Su: kyun ki...(looks the other way)….main tumse pyar nahi karta 💔

Kk: joot hai yeh (crying) 😡 😭

Su: (tearfully) such…such hai yeh! 😒

Kk: main nahi maanti 😳….yeh nahi ho sakta hai (shaking him desperately)

Su: moves kk away from himself 😒

Kk: (she looks at him her eyes all numb…wanting to come into his arms) 😭

Su: (sees the look in her eye 😭 but manages to look away and not react)

Kk: falls to the ground helplessly 😭

Su manages to gather all his feelings and decides he's wasted too much time already in not being able to say this…now he doesn't have that time anymore….its now or never…😳

Su: (Sits down on his knees)…kk

Kk: (doesn't want to hear everything she's heard too much already)

Su: (hold her by the arms….angrily) rona bund karo…bohut hogaya tumhara yeh jota natak 😡 😡

Kk: (shocked) 😲

Su: aur kitna sahoon mein tumhari wajah se 😡

Kk: 😲…sumit…(puts her hand on his arm)

Su: (shrugs her hand off) pyar karti ho naa mujse? 😡

Kk: (shakes her head) haan 😭

Su: (shouts) nahi karti ho…mujhe pura yakeen hai 😡 😡

Kk: (gets scared)…tum aeisa kyun kar rahai ho sumit…😕

Su: 😡aeisa kyun kar raha hoon…😡sub kuch jaante hui bhi yunh anjaan baney ki khoshish mutt karo tum…😡

Kk: sumit please ….chilao mutt mujhe darr lag raha hai 😭

Su: aur main kya karoon pyar se to tumhai meri koi baat sumaj mein nahi aate hai…😡 (angrily) chor do mera peecha karna…😡chor do akela mujhe😡

Kk: completely shell shocked 😲

Su: chali jao yahaan se 😵…meri zindagi se…nahi karta mein pyar tumse 😭

Kk: (wipes her tears) tum pyar karo nah karo 😒…per main tumse pyar karti hoon…kaise akela chor doon tumhe…(puts her hands on his face)

Su: pyar karti to meri baat maan lehti…aeise mujhe pareshaan nahi karti

Kk: (gazes into his eyes really hurt) 😕

Su: agar tum mujse pyar karti to tum mujhe akela chor dehti…aur apni zindagi phir se shuru karti 😕

Kk: tum…meri zindagi ho! 😭

Su: (removes her hands from his face and holds then putting his hands together) Bagwaan kay liye mujhe chor do…😡

Kk: sumit mein tumhai kaise sumjaon😭…tumhari bina mein jeen nahi paoongi 😭 😭

Su: jee paogi…tumhai jeena hoga 🤔

Kk: (getting angry now) 😡tumhe mere pyar per kyun nahi yakeen hai???? 😡 Kya karoon…kya kahoon jisse tum yeh baat per yakeen karlo 😡…batao mujhe

Su: (shuts his eyes…he doesn't want to say but forces himself) 😵 tum…tum Vishal se shaadi karlo 🤢…agar tum mujse suchi mohabbat karti ho to yeh intehaan tumhai dehna hoga…😭 😭

Kk: completely shell-shocked stares at him…😲 😲 😲 😲 takes her hands away from his

Su: (putting on an act)…kya hua…nahi kar sakti? 😈...bus yeh thi tumhari mohabbat…itne gahree?.😈..ab to mein maan loon nah keh tum mujse suchi mohabbat nahi karti…

Kk: (puts her hand on his mouth)… 😳 nahi meri mohabbat jooti nahi hai…yeh intehaan kya…mein tumhai pane kay liye koi bhi intehaan deh sakti hoon 😳

She gets up from there not quite believing what she has agreed to…😕 😕 😕

Su: (watches for the last time) yehi to mein chahta tah…tum khush raho kumkum…hamesha….…aur mujhe pata hai kay tum yeh jaanti ho… I love you 💔

Watches her disappear from his life…helplessly! 😭

gr8 writing henna 👏 👏 👏
my turn now...

so sumit asks kk to marry vishal...she agrees coz she wants to show sumit how much she loves him n how much she can do 4 him 😭

trying to forget sum1 u love is like trying to remember sum1 u never knew..

it's not easy 4 kk to forget sumit...he has asked alot from kk..she knows that this is going to change her life for ever...but she can't miss this chance of proving her true luv to sumit..

sumit sits on his knees crying helplessly...
kk goes to her room..shez completely lost...

she is passing thru the corridor..vishal sees her...
vi - are..tum is haalat mein..kya hua...
shez crying...not listening to what hez saying...
vi holds her tightly (i know many of u will kill me 4 this 😆 😆 ) n says - kya hua...
kk really sobbing..culdn't speak...

just hugs him tightly....keeps on crying 4 a long...
n then manages to tell him what actually happened b/w her n sumit

vishal - what???? sumit ne aesa kaha...
kk - haan...crying 😭
vi makes kk look into his eyes - theek hai..agar wo yahi chahta hai to phir...he stops...kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi kk
kk want to say no but she can't deny sumit's words...
she stays silent...
vi - kya tumhari khamoshi ka matlab main haan samjhoo...
kk bows her head n wipes her tears...she didn't uttered a single word
vi holds her face - main tumhe hamesha khush rakhoonga...hamesha...tum dekhna hamari shaadi k baad sab kuch theek ho jayega...

he is happy that now he'll marry kk
but she is fully determined that she might marry him but she will never stop loving sumit😊
he was her first love..is still her love..n will remain her love for ever

kk goes to her room..tries to sleep..but the days n sweet moments she spend with sumit..kept on coming in her mind...
finally she decides to b strong n try to accept this...

sumit on the terrace is sitting n cursing himself...even he culdn't beleive what he said...
he was distress at that moment...kk had shallu n vishal with whom she can share her feelings..but sumit..he had none...he was all alone..suffering the pain...going thru a trauma...feeling helpless n sad

the next morning...b4 every 1 can woke up..kk packed her bags n rushed to the airport to went back mumbai...
she just left a small note 4 shallu sayingthat shez returning mumbai...

sumit went to the hospital n meets the specialists...

kk is shown crying in the flight...

sumit wears his clothes 4 the operation...

the flight lands mumbai...
kk went home n hugged rahul n told him everything
rahul culdn't do nething but regret...

kk was crying hugging him...she says that shez ready to marry vishal as sumit wants this..n she cannot deny his wish
ra - nahin kk..tum aesa nahin kar sakti...sumit ko...sumit ki koi majboori hogi.. u shuld wait na..
kk - bhaiya usne pehli baar mujhse kuch maanga hai...main mana nahin kar sakti...agar mujhe vishal k saath dekhkar wo khush hai to main bhi uski khushi main khush hoon

there sumit has gone in the ope. theatre...

kk leaves rahul's hands n goes to her room

ra - kk...kk..ruka...meri baat to suno...

he gives up..n says to himself - akhir tum jeet hi gaye sumit..jeet gaye tum..manva hi lee tumne apni zid...(sighs)...
he is speech less...

kk in her room crying..akshat comes n says - didi..
she wipes her tears quickly...
kk - haan...
ak - didi maine yeh poem likhi hai..sunogee..
kk - akshat jhoot mat bolo...i know u can't write a poem on ur own...batayo..kisne likhi hai..
ak - he..he..papa ne di thi..school competition k liye
kk - that's better...
ak - suno na...
kk - to bolo na...

akshat is the only 1 who can make kk forget her pains..n kk too njoys alot with him...

so he starts the poem in his soft n cheeky voice -

the angels in heaven cried silently
they wept their tears of gold
they saw us apart our ways
yet they saw us in future grow old

kk was moved on hearing this...

he continues -

my soul cried along with them
a million tears i shed
my soul cried out its longing
for it now felt as if it were dead..

but after all this time
i asked why my soul was still in pain
they told me the angels continue to cry
the tears that fall r all in vain..

for i'm with out u
with out holding u in my arms
my soul is still yearning
my soul is still paining..

for the angels will stop crying
once i stop trying to pretend
this emptiness i feel with out u
i will luv u untill the end....

there was a silence 4 2 minutes..kk was watching akshat n thinking what he said...he was looking into her eyes n asked innocently - mujhe first prize milega 😳
kk culdn't stop her tears n hugged him tightly 😊 - haan..zarooro milega...

amrit and henna that was gr888888888888888 👏

achcha tell me what do u want that kk shud come to know the truth now or during her marriage with vishal...........tell me soon. 😊

aaawww akshat is so sweet...🤗

...he can have 1st prize anyday... 👏 👏 👏

great write up amrit! 👏

woah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!so much has been happening here....
sorry for the late comments guys...but ITZ AWESOME!!!!
👏
I was really shocked to read the garden scene...but it all made so much sense in the end.. 😆 😆
And ... I was 😭 😭 😭 when Sumit put up his fake angry act to get kk to marry vishal... And I'm still 😕 that the story is at a point that kk has agreed to marry vishal!!! omg!!
lotsa emotions in each of the pieces....lovely!!
Again, great going ppl!!

amrit and henna it was just great 😃 .
now i became fan of your story.
keep the good work 👏 👏