Dil Ke Dushman - Fanfic PT7 PG6 READ!!!! - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey thats a lovely part....ita liek the episode of the guyz..cuz u introduced all the main guyz..i think..lol. good work
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
GR8 starting yar keep writting & gR8 story
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gud startin 😊
keep it up!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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o I love it...and you know how much I do na.......thx for a new fanfic but I hope Rach, you aren't finishing the old one where only you update......I love this fanfic and the other one too!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanx shazia....no im nt finishing the other one jus yet.....it will still be carrying onn......this is one wiv my friends 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey bachcha log..gud going................ 👏 👏
begining is gud..........par yeh naam...."dil ke dushman"
..........hey kahiin ekta serial type to nahi ki pyaar karne waale alag ho gaayen..........don't do that..... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hehehehe verni....dnt worry jus keep readin
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 2

A girl is shown in a shoppng mall, she is followed by someone who looks like a driver, he is holding several bags.
Her eyes are shown, she looks into a shop, the driven waits patiently outside.
Inside she selects some outfits, she goes inside the changing room and gets changed, 5 minutes later she comes out and looks in the mirror.

?????? - vaah i look fabulous, mmm indeed i do!

Her cell phone rings

?????? - yes darling? party? oh definately......cummon yaar a party without Shez? impossible!!!!

She laughs and hangs up, she turns around and a beautiful young girl is shown.
She gets changed and purchases the clothes, she gets the bag and hands it to the driver

Shez - cummon driver uncle lets go

driver - ji beti

Elsewhere a fashion show is taking place, models are shown,then a group of women sitting next to each other are shown. The girl in the centre is watching the models closely

??? - i luv that top shes wearing...kaash i had one like tht

friend - well why dont you go out and buy one?

??? - buy? never....id rather phone the designer and get it especially made

friend - of course, tumhare contacts bhi khafi hai

??? - haan but i dont use for my own faida you know

friend - haan haan lo manager aahgaye

manager - Noori.....you have a phonecall

Her eyes are shown, then slowly her face is shown

Noori - thanks manager

She gets up and a fashionable girl is shown she answers the call, it is one sided

Noori - yes? oh right youve arrived? thats great ill be there in a while

She turns around and smiles to her self. She goes back to the group

Noori - sorry ladies i have to dash see you

group - byee noori!

A few blocks away a party is taking place, everyone is laughing and having fun, a woman laughs, her back is shown

???? - oh please Mrs Garewal doesnt know anything, voh apni pati ki nahin ho payii apne bete ki kahk hogi

Everyone laughs

???? - honestly mujhe nahin pata ke Mr Garewal uske saath rehta kyun hai, kisi aur ke saath kyun nahin chalta??

girl 1 - jaise ke tum? tumhe tho bahar jaane ka kitna shock hai, ab agli baar jab jaogi tho Mr Garewal ko apne saath le jao

???? - oh please Riya, tum mujhe janti nahin ho ok

Riya - kya hua Rach.....sach sunkar burah laga?

The girl is shown, she looks at Riya angrily

Rach - dheko main yahan koi tamasha nahin karna chahti, its not my style, tumhari tho hogi na!

She turns and walks out and gets into her car and drives off

To Be continued


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Posted: 19 years ago
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woh Rach nice update.........wanted to ask if this fanfic will go like PART 1 PART 2 PART 3 and so on or will it have Special parts too?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey awesome part..keep it up 👏 write fast!! 😃

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