Dil Ke Dushman - Fanfic PT7 PG6 READ!!!! - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

woh Rach nice update.........wanted to ask if this fanfic will go like PART 1 PART 2 PART 3 and so on or will it have Special parts too?

yea i think this is gna b part 1,2,3 etc.....i doubt ne special parts 😊bcuz its done with freinds
hey thanx a lot aman!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey not thankx me thankx to u k aap humare liye story likhte hai thankx u soooooooooooooooooooooooo much😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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GR8 keep it up😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww shoo shweeet will update sooon....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey have you 3 forgotten about this FANFIC.....it just started and no one's bringing it forward! I don't know about the others but I love this FANFIC!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nahin yaar not forgotten....one of the girls is ment 2 update.....shud b soon sorry 4 the delay!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh ok....den it's ok.......coz I thought that you guyz had really actually forgotten!! I'm sorry if I was annoying!! And thx!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3

**Shergill House**

Swayam is at home, he is watching a program on the latest cars, he hears someone come in the house, he doesnt get up as he knows the person will come in the room

Swayam - aah gayi? have you eaten?

The person's face isnt shown but its a girl

????? - haan ive eaten aur tum?

Swayam - yes dear i ate, you know i had a race with Nikhil today

???? - really, you win?

Swayam - of course

Swayam gets up and goes outside, he sees the girl in the hallway, her back is towards him

Swayam - kyun tumhe kya laga? Swayam Shergill haar jayega?

She turns around, its Noori, she looks at Swayam and smiles

Noori - of course not. main janti hoon ke mere pati kabhi nahin harta

She gives him a hug and kisses him. Later....

Noori - Swayam ....

Noori goes into their bedroom

Noori puts make up on

Swayam comes out the shower with a robe on and hugs her from behind

Swayam - so babes how was the show?

Noori - it was great i saw loads of nice tops and im gonna get myself one made like tht

Swayam - aww cool wht else

Noori turned around and put her arms round Swayam

Noori - and i saw a nice top for you and i bought it

Swayam - realli

Noori - ahaan

Swayam - okay then darling put it on me

Noori - uff hoo im going .......

Noori walked off

Swayam pulled her forward

Swayam - kya hua

Swayam kissed noori

Noori - Swayam!!!

Swayam - Noori!!!

They both laughed

Meanwhile Sharman has arrived home from the office, he looks in the driveway and sees another car there

Sharman (thinks) - margaya......

He goes inside and looks for someone, he finds a girl in the bathroom, he knocks on the door

Sharman - hi.....kya kar rahi ho?

A girls voice comes from inside the bathroom

????? - dance kar rahi hoon....tumhe kya lagta im in the bathroom stupid so obviously naha rahi hoon

Sharman - yea of course......erm tumhari party kaisi thi?

????? (irritated) - absolutely great!

Sharman - achi nahin thi? thats a shame..kaho kya khabar layi ho?

????? - kuch nahin

Sharman - oh ok then.....naraz ho?

The bathroom door opens, its Rach

Rach - nahin....kyun naraz hogi

She moves him out the way

Rach - sab ke pati party mein the lekin tum....business hi business

Sharman holds her from behind

Sharman - sorry baby, lekin you know me....

Rach - i know

She smiles and kisses his cheek.Later Rach is trying to reach a sari from the top of the wardrobe, she is on a small stool

Sharman - what you tryin to get:?

Rach - woh umm sari

Sharman - uff mujhse poochleya hota you gonna fall....hatou let me get it

Sharman comes forward, Rach trips and falls into Sharmans arms

Sharman - Rach tum teek tho ho na...

Rach - owww my foot

Sharman carries her and lays her on the bed, they stare at each other, Sharman gets the first aid box and gets the medicine and puts it on Rachs foot

Sharman - tum bhi na....aapna khyaal bhi nahiin raksati

Rach - main aapna khyaal kyun rokhoon jab tum mere saath hoo

Sharman- true...........*laughs*

Sharman kisses Rach on the forehead. Elsewhere Soham is in the house study looking at some business files. He looks at the time and thinks

Soham (thinks) - 8 PM......mujhe abhi kuch karna tha...lekin kya...yaad nahin aah raha

He forgets it and carries on working, 30 minutes later

Soham - oh s***! dinner? oh my god she is going to killl me

He gets up and rushes to the bedroom, he gets his jacket and his car keys, he gets in his Nissan Skyline and revs the engine up. He drives and arrives at the Sunshine Restaurant, he looks in the window and sees a girl waiting

Soham - oh god

He gets out and goes inside the reastaurant

Soham - scuse me sir, erm can i get a rose please

Waiter hands him a rose

Soham - thanks

He goes towards the girl, she has her back towards him, he shows her the rose over her shoulder

?????? - 30 minutes late, mujhe laga ke tum har jaaga time par paunchte ho?

Soham - voh main...kahm mein busy hogaya tha aur...

???? - aur tum bhool gaye kyun

Soham - haan voh......im sorry, phool tho lehlo

The girl gets up, she turns around its Shez

Shez - kya Soham, tum na hamesha serious hote ho

She laughs a little, hes confused

Soham - kyun?

Shez - kyunki meri sweet se husband...main bhi 10 minues pehle hi paunchi......bas i made it look as if i was here from the start

Soham - kya! Shez tum na.....mujhe kitna burah laga yeh soch kar ke tum meri vaja se yahan wait kar rahi thi

Shez - acha baba main bhi sorry..ab dinner kar liye?

Soham smiles, hands her the rose and gives her a kiss on the cheek and sits down.

The next day each of the married couples get a phonecall from Prem Basu

*Sen House*

Shez - Soham aaj raat ko ek party hai, humhe jaana hai

Soham - nahin yaar i dnt want to go

Shez - koi bahana nahin sun na, tum ja rahe ho ok? be ready 7:30 PM ok sweetie

Soham - jaisa tum kaho

*Shergill House*

Noori - Swayam aaj raat ko apni meeting aur whatever cancel karo

Swayam - kyun?

Noori - Prem Basu phoned, usne ek party rakhi hai aur humhe bulaya hai

Swayam - Prem..ok what time?

Noori - 7:30 PM

*Whadwa House*

Rach - Sharman....hi baby

Sharman - hmm kya hua

Rach - ajj raat ko tum busy tho nahin ho?

Sharman - hmm nahin kyun...bahar jaane ka maan kar raha?

Rach - haan voh..ek party hai....

Sharman - oh no kiski?

Rach - Prem Basu.....7:30PM

Sharman - ill be ready my jaan

To be continued

What will harpen at the party when all three married couples come face to face.....find out in part 4!



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Posted: 18 years ago
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gret work sweets
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great work sweets

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