Dil Ke Dushman - Fanfic PT7 PG6 READ!!!! - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
looooool some funny stuff man where is my name in the story 😆

Serious u lot should write for star plus 😆 😆 😆

would be better than most of the stories they come up with dont u think? apart from KA tho....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32

HEY RACH YOU'RE TOO GOOD YAH!! And I know I'm annoying sometimes when I get impatient 😉 but it's partly coz of you 😉 coz you write so good!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
😆 lol rickz ddnt i tell u....i sent sum stuff in2 sum online magazine but they ddnt reply 😭 so imma allow it....unis starting soon so its ayt....Shazia sweety ur nt annoyin stop sayin tht....after all the fanfics r 4 all of u 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
yah..............ok then....i just sometimes feel like i might be........ok then I'll try my best not to say that..................and yah.... 😉 I'm waiting...... 😆 . I'm just too sensitive in these things sometimes........i'm a bit emotional type......i dun wanna make the other party to mistake me or mind me and so on....so sometimes i feel like I m a _ _ o y _ n _!! 😊 that's almost how i m.......i'm not in search for enemies na......juz friends...and very good ones like all of u here!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Dil ke Dushman – part 4

All 3 couples are getting ready for the party and excited

*Sen Household*

Shezz is still getting ready while Soham is waiting impatiently

Soham: jaldi karo na Shezz were gonna be late (he says while looking at his watch)

Shezz rolls her eyes

Shezz: two more mins plz

Soham: uff hoo shezz hurry up

Shezz: ah rey hoon baba

Then Shezz makes her way downstairs and Soham looks up and smiles and Shezz smiles back

Soham: wow my wife is looking beautiful

Shezz: why thank u Mr Sen

Soham smirks and hugs her from behind

Soham: um why don't we forget the party and stay here and do our own little party

Shezz: ooo acha leekan hum jayege party u think after spending so much money on this outfit I'm not going to strut my stuff? then ur crazy abh chale aur shayed baad mein humara party hoga

Soham: your such a tease

Shezz: acha me a tease I neva knew that ( she said saracastically)

Soham: chalo

Shezz and Soham make their to the car and then drive off for the party

*Whadwa household*

Sharman is sitting down working on a file while waiting for Rach

Rach: uff ho Sharman ur doing work now humko party mein jaana hai na chalo

Sharman: bas 4 mins phir khatam

Rach rolls her eyes

Rach: tum itne kahm mein busy hai ke tumne mujhe deekha bhi nahin

Sharman sticks his tounge out and puts the file down and walks up to Rach and smiles

sharman: bohot khoobsurat laag reh hoo

Rach smiles

Rach: thank you abh chale

Sharman: chalo

Then just as Rach was about to leave Sharman grabs her wrist Rach shakes her head

Rach: choro na mujhe

Sharman: maan nahin kaar rah hai

Rach: Sharman Whadwa choro mujhe humhe party mein jaana hai

Sharman: chor diya ab do we have to go?

Rach: haan abh chalo na

They both make their way to the party meanwhile Swayam and Noori are making their way to the party

Noori: are you sure this dress looks okay on me

Swayam: yes baba tum bhi na

Noori: well i want to look better than these other wives ok

Swayam: well u look gorgeous and u will certainly turn heads

Then Noori switches on the radio and Ek pyar kahaani comes on then all of a sudden the car stops

Noori: kya howa

Swayam: wait deekh tha hoo

Then Swayam tries to start the car but it doesn't start

Noori: oh no

Swayam: wait

Swayam gets out of the car to check and he smiles and then clears his throat

Noori: kya howa

Swayam: paata nahin fiqaar maat karo fix karta hoon

Noori comes out of the car and sees what Swayam is doing

Swayam: arre tum yaha kya kare hoo

Noori: bored hoon

Swayam then grabs Noori towards him and begins to kiss her Noori then lets go and smiles

Noori: haila um deekho does it work

Swayam and Noori go back to the car and starts the car up

Noori: yes it works

Swayam: maine bahana kiya tha, nothing was wrong with the car

Noori: I know

Swayam: kya

Noori: haan leekan its sweet

Then Noori kisses swayam's cheek and he drives faster

Noori: Swayam (she giggles)

Plz leave ya comments as usual

Luvz ya

Luv noori😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
hey noori gr8 going....ab toh is fan fic ka bhi garuu shuld know 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
😆 😆 😆 of course na...usse kahoon ge ke parlo 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: rachandeep

😆 😆 😆 of course na...usse kahoon ge ke parlo 😆 😆

haan zarur thn he wl b on d floor....kahega paagal pan kam karo plzzz😆😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
kyaaaaaaaaaaa u will make him read dis
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
Great going Noori di...................it was awesome............loved all the 3 couples' scenes!!

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