Dil Ke Dushman - Fanfic PT7 PG6 READ!!!! - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 😆 noori we will ask him.....doubt he will tho
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey if he read the fanfic....won't he read all your posts and all also?? 😆

I think you must have gotten what I mean.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 😆 well dhekte hai....we gunna ask him 2 visit IF.....to see the fanclubz/fanficz/shaadi topics etc etc...
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Dil Ke Dushman Part 5

The 3 couple's arrive at the party the news crew and photographer's are outside and the first to go in are Shezz and Soham

Shezz is wearing this


Soham is wearing this


Press reporter: Mrs Sen India times here u are looking great may I ask what its like being married to a famous tycoon

Shezz and Soham have their arms wrapped around their waists while photographers snap photos

Shezz: its great I mean no complaints rite (she giggles)

The press reporters laugh then Soham and Shezz make their way in then Rach and Sharman are arrive and the press reporters are shouting their name

Rach is wearing this


Sharman is wearing this


Sharman has his arm round Rach's waist n gives Rach a kiss on the cheek

Press reporter: hi Mrs Whadwa mid-day here and u are looking absoultly stunning in ur dress, with the busy schedule Mr Whadwa has how do u find time to spend with him

Rach: as long as he's home that's what matters

Press reporter go aww and Rach and Sharman make their way inside then Noori and Swayam enter and the camara's are clicking away

Noori is wearing this


Swayam is wearing this


Swayam is huggin Noori from behind and his head is on her shoulders and Noori is giggling

Press reporter: Hi Mr Shergall India-forums here how do u feel about ur wife spending money on the latest fashion, shoes and jewellery

Swayam: well if it makes her smile and happy tou phir mein bhi khush hoon

Noori then faces Swayam and smiles and they both make their way inside

Meanwhile Shezz and Soham

Shezz: arre Mr and Mrs Basu kaha hai everybody is wondering

Soham: paata nahin

Then they show Rach and Sharman

Rach: uff where is Mr and Mrs Basu I am getting bored

Sharman: they must be coming chill

Then they show Noori and Swayam

Noori: uff is this how long they make us wait

Swayam: we just got here they are just probably busy now shh

Then the lights go off and the a spot light flashes on stage and they show a girl's back and she begins to dance with the dancers and Mehbooba from Ajnabee comes on

Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba
Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba
Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba, mehbooba
Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba
Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba
Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba, mehbooba

Mukti
Tu sirf mera mehboob, main teri mehbooba
Tujhe chaahegi bada khoob teri mehbooba
Tu sirf mera mehboob, main teri mehbooba
Tujhe chaahegi bada khoob teri mehbooba

Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba
Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba
Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba, mehbooba

Prem
Main sirf tera mehboob, tu meri mehbooba
Mujhe chaahegi bada khoob meri mehbooba
Main sirf tera mehboob, tu meri mehbooba
Mujhe chaahegi bada khoob meri mehbooba
Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba

Mukti
Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba

Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba, mehbooba
Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba
Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba
Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba, mehbooba

Mukti
Hai jawaan jawaan yeh haseen samaa
Aa gale lagaa le yaara
Hai mujhe pataa na teri khataa
Tujhe meri adaa ne maara

Prem
Afsaana bana, deewana bana
Main tere liye deewani
O jaane wafa hai judaa judaa
Teri meri yeh prem kahaani

Mukti
Saanson mein tu

Prem
Meri baaton mein tu

Mukti
Koi maane nahin

Prem
Koi jaane nahin
Tu hi pehla tu hi aakhri ajooba

Mukti
Tu sirf mera mehboob, main teri mehbooba
Tujhe chaahegi bada khoob teri mehbooba

Prem
Main sirf tera mehboob, tu meri mehbooba
Mujhe chaahegi bada khoob meri mehbooba
Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba

Mukti
Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba

Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba, mehbooba

Mukti
Jo dekha tujhe, jo socha tujhe
Mera dil yeh tujhi pe aaya
Har khushi mili, bekhudi mili
Jo manga tha maine paaya

Prem
Tu kahe agar, o jaane jigar
Tujhe sone se aaj sajaaoon
Dil chaahe karoon, baahon mein bharoon
Tujhe taaron ke sair karaaoon

Mukti
Mera yeh dil

Prem
Ab tera nahin

Mutki
Yeh aashiqui

Prem
Deewangi
Main tere pyaar ke saagar mein dooba

Mukti
Tu sirf mera mehboob, main teri mehbooba
Tujhe chaahegi bada khoob teri mehbooba

Prem
Main sirf tera mehboob, tu meri mehbooba
Mujhe chaahegi bada khoob meri mehbooba
Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba

Mukti
Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba
Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba, mehbooba

Prem
Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba

Mukti
Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba


Mehbooba mehbooba mehbooba, mehbooba

*song finishes and everybody applauds*

Mukti is wearing this


Prem is wearing this


Shezz: mein abi aye Soham I will just meet Mukti

Soham: okay (he says while smiling)

Then they show Sharman and Rach

Sharman: go and meet Mukti Rach I will just come

Rach: okay jaan bye (givin him a kiss on the cheek)

Then they show Swayam and Noori

Noori: okay Swayam I will be rite back ok

Swayam: ok sweetheart

Shezz,Noori and Rach make their way to meet Mukti then the 3 of them bump into each other

Noori: uff nazaar nahi arra kya

Shezz: excuse me I think its your fault

Rach: its both of ur fault okay

Then they face each other and are shocked

Noori, Rach and Shezz: TUM

To be continued

How do Shezz, Noori and Rach know each other? what will be their reactions upon seeing each other? find out in part 6 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey I'll be the one who's desperate to read the next part!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
😆 😆 so sweet..jus few more commentz 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
Hey thought id say hello to ur post noori...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Previously

Then they all see each other

Rach, Shez and Noori - TUM!!!!



Dil Ke Dushman part 6

all go - TUM!!!

Rach - pata nahin Mr Basu kin logon ko jaante ho

Shez - oh my GOD Soham lets go......

Noori - haan Swayam yahan ka mohol kharab hogaya hai

Swayam - Noori kya bakwas kar rahi howe cant go like this

Soham - haan Shezz. we have 2 stay

Rach - agar yeh yahan rahege tho main ja rahi hoon. Sharman chalo

Shez , Noori and Rach walk off

Swayam - yaar im soo sorry about this..you know how they can be sometimes

Soham - yeh tell me about it

Sharman - * laughed* anyways so tell me about your companies i have heard about them.....

Soham - well i sell the same as you

Swayam - me too

Soham - i was thinkin why dont we all open a business together i meen it will get so much publicity because we all have a great reputation

Swayam - wow great idea

Sharman - great so shall i make the annoncement

Soham - yh sure

Meanwhile......

Noori , Shez and Rach all go to the dancefloor which is on the groundfloor.....

Noori - oh I cannot belive i have seen them

girl - aww huni just chil

girl 2 - just chil chil just chil

Noori * lafed* - u got me into da song!! just chil chil just chill*singin*

Girls laughin

Rach - omg im gonna kill her aaaaa

girl - uff hoo Rach calm down come on

girl 2 - and anyways u can always bitch about them at our kitty parties

Rach *lafed* - ye

girl - come on then girls lets party!!!!

Shez - HAILA!!!omg omg sara pass me a drink please.....

Sara - *passes drink* - hun take it easy........

girl - Shez come on calm it its not like its the end of the world is it and anyways tomorrow we will go shoppin i know a new place downtown realli nice clothes all designer

Shez - yeh cool.......

Sara - so come on lets dance!!!!!

Back at the Party........

Sharman - ladies and gentlemen i got a annocenment to make.......

everyone settles down

Sharman - Me...Mr Sharman Whadwa and Mr Soham Sen and Mr Swayam Shergil are going to open a new business together

Everyone claps

Soham - so in this celebration free drinks for everyone

Everyone cheered

After few hours

Shez - okay guys im tired now im going home

Girl - okay huni see ya

Shez - bye

Shez goes down to see Soham

Shez - Soham lets go home now

Soham - itne jaaldi

Shez - haan

Shez held Sohams hand and walked out

lady - congratulations Mr and Mrs Sen

Shez - oh thanks

Soham - thanks

Shez - thats strange whats al this about?

Soham - um kuch nahiin chaloo

Swayam txt Noori

"come on hun lets go"

Noori - okay guys hubby's callin me gotta go

girls - okay Noori see ya

Noori went to see Swayam

Swayam - lets go

man and lady walk up

they both congratulate them

Noori - um thanks kis khushi mein

Swayam - woh..um.....come on lets go

Noori - umm okay

Rach - um girls im missing my Sharman

girls - ooooooooo

Rach *smiled* - haanji im going now

girls - okay Rach remmeber Mrs Kapoors kitty party tomorrow

Rach - yh i wont forget i promise

girls - laterz

Rach went to see Sharman

LAdy - oooooo Mrs Whadwa congrats

Rach - ohh thank you

lady walked off

Rach went up to Sharman

Sharman - hello darling

Rach - aww hi

Sharman - so shall we go

Rach - haan chalo

Next morning................

Shez and Soham at breakfast table

Soham - so what u doin today

Shez - da usual

Shez n Soham - SHOPPING

Shez * smiled *

Shez - kaka pass me the newspaper

Soham - tum newspaper.......?

Shez - gossip ,,, u know party gossip

Soham - oh ryt cool

Shez lookin

Shez - hmmmm Mrs Sen had a fabulous red dress and looked amazing with her husband Mr Sen ummm umm..........wht else...............Mrs Whadwa....blah blah blah,,,,,,,,Mrs Shergil,,,,wht eva,,,,,,,,,ummm THREE RIVALS JOINED

Soham - umm kya

Shez - MR SEN MR WHADWA AND MR SHERGIL!!!!!!!!!!!!

Noori and Swayam at the breakfast table

Noori - im gonna feed u today

Swayam -- oooo bohot pyaar ara hai paathi par

Noori*smiled*

Noori feedin Swayam paratha

Swayam - anyways huni did u like the party

Noori - haan or gossip it will b on da news

Noori puts tv on

headlines

"THREE WELL KNOWN RIVALS JOIN HANDS"

MR SHEGIL MR SEN AND MR WHADWA JOIN HANDS AND HAVE OPENED A LARGE BUSINESS

Noori - KYA!!!!

Rach and Sharman at breakfast table

Rach - u know wht i missed u at the party

Sharman - me too.....

Rach - anyways you know Kashish shes got married 7 times now

Sharman - oo realli i think i shud go n marry her it will be her eighth

Rach - shut up

Sharman*lafed*

Rach on the internet *on laptop*

NEWS

"THREE WELL KNOWN RIVALS JOIN HANDS"

MR SHEGIL MR SEN AND MR WHADWA JOIN HANDS AND HAVE OPENED A LARGE BUSINESS

Rach - KYA!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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the wives....oh GOD!!....and the husbands....sho shweet!! Sorry ladies.....but the 3 wivs were totally opposite their hubbies!!
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Previously

NEWS

"THREE WELL KNOWN RIVALS JOIN HANDS"

MR SHEGIL MR SEN AND MR WHADWA JOIN HANDS AND HAVE OPENED A LARGE BUSINESS

Rach - KYA!!!!


Part 7

All three wives have found out that Soham, Swayam and Sharman have joined hands to open a new business. All three wives are arguing with their husbands

**Sen Household**

Soham - whats the problem in it Shez?

Shez - look tum naya business kholo i dont care..kisi ke saath kholo mujhe koi fark nahin parta bas sirf Mr Shergill and Mr Whadwa ke saath nahin

Soham - lekin kyun!!!! theyre great businessmans jaan, aur is merger se humhe bohat faida hoga

Shez - main kuch nahin jaanti tum yeh deal cancel karo

Soham - agar tum ziddi ho tho main bhi tumhara paati hoon....main yeh deal karoon ga, unless...

Shez - unless what?

Soham - tum mujhe batao, us din tum Mrs Shergill aur Mrs Whadwa ke saath jagra kyun kiya...tum kyun nahin chahti ke hum yeh deal karein....

Shez - maine kaha nahin i dont want to talk about it

Soham - teek hai agar tujhe yeh baat nahin karni tho mat karo lekin main yeh deal karoon ga

He leavses the room and goes towards the study, he slams the study door when hes inside

Shez (thinks) - kaise batoon tumhe....uff kuch samaj nahin aah raha

**Shergill Household**

Swayam - whats the big deal...its a business deal baby not a lifetime of friendship

Noori - i dont care......tum bas Mr Whadwa aur Mr Sen ke saath kaam nahin karoge

Swayam - Noori chordo na....jab tum koi modelling company sponsor karti ho ya jab tum kisi designer ko sponsor karti ho main tumhe rokta nahin..main tumse yeh nahin kehta ke is ke saath kaam karo...us ke saath kaam karo tho tum aisa kyun keh rahi ho?

Noori - meri khathir Swayam darling please....cancel the deal

Swayam - baby i love you a lot....aur tum jaanti ho ke maine aaj tak tumhari koi baat ko na nahin kaha

Noori - i know

Swayam - lekin is baar i have to say no....im doing this deal

Noori - but Swayam

Swayam - no Noori ive made my mind up.......lekin tum batao ke tum Mrs Sen aur Mrs Whadwa ko nafrat kyun karti ho?

Noori is silent

Swayam - hmmm teek hai mat bolo....but im doing this deal babe

Swayam leans forward to give Noori a kiss on the cheek but she moves away, he turns around and goes for a drive

Noori (thinks) - uff kya karoon....

***Whadwa Household***

Rach - lekin tumhe aur koi nahin mila merger ke liye...Mr Garewal, Mr Virani...Mr Bajal kitne tho hai

Sharman - i know babes lekin is merger se bohat faida aur paisa aayega

Rach - paise tho bohat hai....please janu meri liye yeh merger ko na kardo

Sharman - janu please.....meri liye yeh merger ko haan kardo

Rach - Sharman please

Sharman - nahin Rach im doing the deal.....

Rach is upset, Sharman hugs her from behind

Sharman - upset mat ho.....and im sure is merger ke saath tum aur Mrs Sen aur Mrs Shergill....

Rach - unka naam mat lo

Sharman - kyun? kya baat hai jo tum mujhse bhi chupa rahi ho?

Rach looks at Sharman and walks out

Rach (thinks) - oh god agar yeh dono vahan nahin hote tho yeh merger nahin hota....kis uljaan mein phaas gayi

The next day Soham, Sharman and Swayam meet up to finalise the deal. Just before they sign they all get a text message from their wives

*Sohams phone*
"Soham please dont do the merger"

*Sharmans phone*
"janu please dont sign"

*Swayams phone*
"baby please...na kardo"

They look at the messages and at each other...all are hesitant to sign, but one by one each of them sign. They shake hands

Sharman - ek baat poochoon?

Soham/Swayam - kaho

Sharman - humhari biwiyan jaani dushmans kyun hai?

Soham - pata nahin...i asked lekin usne kuch kaha nahin

Swayam - same here....Noori us baat ko daalti rahi

Sharman - aakhir kya baat hai jo voh humse chupa rahi hai

The wives sit at home....they see the news that the deal has been finalised all are upset....they go to their cupboards and find an old box, one by one they open it and each take out a photograph. They look at it and a tear falls in each other their eyes.
They hear their husbands and put the photgraph down........its clearly visable..its a photo of Rach, Shez and Noori.....who clearly look the best of friends......

To be continued

If the girls are shown as enemies.....then why do the each have a photgraph with the three of them very happy together......find out in part 8!!!

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