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Posted: 19 years ago
#81
😆 😆 glad u read it, yea ill continue it dont worry lol add Prem 2 the list of guys i got nw 😆 😆
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Part 8

Previously a new girl entered the college, Sharman befriends her to make Rach jealous. When Sharman tells Rach he hates her, Rach decides to go with Prem. Now to continue

Place - Prems House

Prem wants Rach to move in with him and forget about Sharman, he brings Rach to his house

Rach - wow main tho bhool gayi thi ke tumhara ghar kitna bada hai

Prem - obviously, tum itni dher se yahan aayi jo nahin, chalo ill show you my room, lagta hai tum voh bhi bhool gayi

Prem takes Rach to his room, she sees that his room is full of photos and paintings of her

Rach - Prem, itni saare tasveerein?

Prem - haan voh.......tum yahan nahin thi issliye main tumhare tasveeron ke zariya tumse baat karta tha

Rach - aww soo sweeettt

Prem - neways, bhook lagi hai??

Rach - haan thodi si

Prem - chalo, ill make dinner

Rach (laughs) - tumhe kahna banana aata hai?

Prem - very funny, tumhare bigear seekna para mujhe, now chalo

Rach and Prem go to the kitchen and Prem begins cooking

Rach - vaise kya bana rahe ho?

Prem - thumara favourite......spaghetti bolognese

Rach - wow chalo jaldi karo

Prem - arre fikar not, fhir main bade pyaar ke saath apne haathon se tumhe khiladoon ga

Rach remembers Sharman

*flashback*

Sharman - hey dont worry, baad main bade pyaar ke saath, apne haaton se tumhe khiladhoon ga

*reality*

Rach is upset thinking about Sharman

Prem - hey, kahan ko gayi?

Rach - oh, kuch nahin, kahna bangaya?

Prem - yep, kaho aur batao kaisa laga

Meanwhile at the Whadwa House, Dhruv and Siya are trying to cheer Sharman up

Dhruv - hey bro, dhek Maya aagayi

Siya - stop it Dhruv, Sharman picture dhekne chalo ge

Sharman - guys stop it please

He walks away

Dhruv - ab kya karein?

Siya - Ma aap hi bataye, Sharman ka mood kaise teek kare

Kumkum - Fikar mat karo, tumhare Krish uncle ke aate uska mood teek ho jayega, chalo main aur Sumit airport ja rahe Krish ko pick up karne

Dhruv - haan aur unki beti bhi aah rahi

Kumkum and Sumit go to the airport to pick Krish and his daughter up. At the airport Krish comes out straight away

Krish - Sumit bhaiya, bhabhi nice to see you

Sumit - yea you too Krish

Kumkum - tumhari beti kahan hai, kahin nazar nahin aah rahi?

Krish - yahin kahin thi, patha nahin kahan chale gayi

A few steps away at the counter a girl is having an arguement with the assistant

girl - how could you charge me this much?

assistant - i assure you maam, this is the right price

girl - god, you rob people of their money

Sumit, Kumkum and Krish see what is happening

Krish - hey Aman 😉 kya ho raha hai

Aman turns around

Aman - dhekiye na Papa, ek chocolate ke liye kitna charge karte hai

Krish - dheko, yeh larne ki jaaga nahin hai, chalo, ill pay

Aman - lekin Papa....

Krish - bas, tumne dheka nahin, tumhare Sumit uncle aur Kumkum aunty kaare hai vahan

Aman - Sumit uncle!!!! Kumkum aunty!!!!

She hugs them straight away and takes their ashirwaad

Kumkum - chalo ghar chaliye, vaise Krish ki ghar par kitni zuroorat hai

Krish - voh kyun bhabhi

Sumit - tum chalo, sab bata the hai

They reach home, Krish goes to Sharman

Krish - hey my carbon copy, kaise ho

Sharman - Krish uncle, teek hoon, aap

Krish - im fine, tumhari choti si behen baar hai,

Shaman (smiling) - Aman aayi hui hai?

Krish - haan jaake usse mil lo

Outside

Sharman - Aman!!!

Aman - hey Sharman!!!!

Kumkum - shukar hua Aman ka

Sumit - kyun?

Aman - uske aate hue, Sharman aaj pehli baar muskar raha hai

Siya - haan Ma sayee kaha aapne, vaise mujhe nahin lagta ke Rach uske saath itna bada dhoka kar sakti

Dhruv - tum yeh sirf khe rahi ho kyunki Rach tumhari dost hai

Siya - issiliye, main usse achi tara se janti hoon

Kumkum - arre tum dono ka dhikmakh kharab hai, abhi abhi Sharman kush hua hai, Rach ka naam sunte voh fhir se dhuki ho jayega

Sharman - London kaisa tha?

Aman - teek tha lekin India better hai, anyways chalo mujhe tumhara college bhi dhekna hai

Sharman - haan of course, chalo

They reach college, Sharman sees Mohini

Mohini - hi Sharman

Sharman - hi Mohini, kaisi ho?

Mohini - teek ho, yeh tumhare saath?

Sharman - oh yeh meri behen hai

Mohini - ok, vaise maine ghar par ek party rakhi hai, sab ko bulaya, tum aaoge na?

Sharman - of course ill b there

Mohini gives Sharman a kiss on the cheek and goes. Rach sees all this and walks away, Sharman sees Rach and starts thinking about her and everything he said

*flashback*

Sharman - tum mere nafrat ke liyak bhi nahin......i hate you......

Rach - tumhe kabhi nahin pareshaan karoon gi

*reality*

Aman - hey kya huaaa

Sharman - kuch nahin

Aman - uss ladki ko dhek kar kahan kho gaye

Sharman - kaun si ladki

Aman - vahi jo samne thi, kaun thi voh

Sharman - nahin aisi koi baat nahin, i dont know her

Later on, Sharman and Aman go to the party. Sharman sees Rach there with Prem

Mohini- hey Sharman lets dance

Sharman - cool lets go

Aman - arre mujhe akela chord rahe ho

Sharman - dont worry, kisi se baat karlo

Aman - Sharman.....

By chance, Aman bumps into Rach and starts talking to her

Aman - hi im Aman

Rach - im Rach

Aman - cool tum akele aayi ho

Rach - nahin kisi ke saath, tum

Aman - main bhi kisi ke saath

Aman sees Rach staring at Sharman and Mohini who are slow dancing

Aman - us ladke ko pasand karti ho

Rach - nahin kyun

Aman - kab se dhek rahi hoon, tum ussi ko dhek rahi hai

Rach - voh........

Aman - dheko main jaanti hoon hum abhi hi mile, lekin tum mujhe bata sakti ho

Rach - main usse pyar karti hoon

Aman (shocked) - kya

Rach tells Aman everything

Aman - dont worry main tumhare saath hoon, main usse samjaoon gi

Rach - voh kaise tum usse jaanti nahin ho

Aman - maine kaha tha main kisi ke saath aayi hoon, main Sharman ke saath aayi hoon, voh mera bhai hai

Rach (shocked) - oh my god, dheko tum usse kuch nahin bataogi

Aman - lekin tumhare beech galat fhemiyan ko door karne hoge

Rach - nahin, dheko voh Mohini ke saath kitna kush hai

Aman sees Sharman and Mohini laughing together

Aman - teek hai main usse kuch nahin bataoon gi

Mohini gives Sharman a kiss and tells him she is going to ladies room, while in the ladies room she is talking, it looks as if shes talking to herself

Mohinin- God voh Sharman bhi na, kitni aasani se usse pataliya, ab voh uski Rach ko bhool jayega. Bas do meeti meeti batein aur voh samaj tha ke main usko chahti hoon

Mohini laughs, behind her we see a guy smiling

guy - thats great, ab tum usko apne jaal main phasalo thakhe voh Rach ko poori tara se bhool jaye, yahan thak uska naam bhi nahin yaad aaye usse

Mohini - dont worry mera kahm tho ho jayega, tum kya karoge

guy - tum bas apna kahm karo, meri chinta tum mat karo, mujhe pata hai ke mujhe kya karna hai

Mohini is smiling, she turns and looks at the guy, and its none other than Prem......

To be continued

Find out what these two are up to in part 9!


Edited by rachandeep - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#83
omg.....rach! thnx so much.....nd thnx for lettin me be with sharman 😳 😉 i can imagin him nd me rite now...lol..liek drulling here...lol..good thing my "dad" is krish..the cute nd kool guy( HU ND SHARMAN R WAY BETTER THO 😉 😆 )but krish is kool aswell 😛 ....nywayz....luv ur story...hrry cant wait to read wat happens next.. 😉 😛 thnx..luv u(L) muahhh ❤️
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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
😆 😆 😆 lol i was confused on hw 2 intro u........tht was the onli thing i could think of, neways glad u liked it hun, lol i onli jus updated wait a day or so n ill update soon, luv ya xxx
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Posted: 19 years ago
#85
uuuuuuuuuu rock hun simply rocking loving your fanfic 👏

Luvs Ya

Luv Noori
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86
awww thanx a lot hun luv ya 2!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwww hun plz plz jaldi karo post d next part

Luvs Ya

Luv Noori
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Posted: 19 years ago
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lol ok i willlllll btw ne ideas 4 the KA one, then email me acha?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok hun i will am at college so i will as soon as poss
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lol sorry Noori lekin before i update part 9 i have 2 update part 4 of the su/kk part 😆 😆 dnt kill me

Special Part 4

Kumkum is sitting in her room, she is worried about Sharman, Sumit sees her and joins her

Sumit - tum yahan akeli kyun bheti ho

Kumkum - Sharman ki fikar ho rahi hai

Sumit - tum uski chinta mat karo

Kumkum - kaise na karoon, ma hoon, mujhe mere beta ki chinta hai

Sumit - main hamesha ke liye thoree khe raha, bas tum abhi chinta bandh karo, aur dheko main kya laya hoon

Sumit shows Kumkum some airline tickets

Kumkum - yeh kya hai

Sumit - honeymoon ke tickets

Kumkum - humhare liye?

Sumit - nahin.......Dhruv aur Siya ke liye lekin agar tum kaho tho hum chale jathe hai

Kumkum - Sumit tum bhi na, chalo unne dhe diye

Sumit and Kumkum go to find Dhruv and Siya who are sitting in the living room

Sumit - Dhruv yeh lo

Dhruv - yeh kya hai dad

Kumkum - tumhare shaadi ka thofaa

Siya - lekin papa iski kya zuroorat thi

Kumkum - zuroorat hai aur humhara hak banta hai

Siya - wow Mauritius!!!!

Dhruv - thanx dad, thanx mom

Siya - chalo, Sharman aur Aman ko batathe

Dhruv and Siya go

Sumit - kitne kush hai dono

Kumkum - voh tho honge

Sumit gives Kumkum his mischevious look

Kumkum - aise kyun dhek rahe ho

Sumit - kya kehti ho, chale hum honeymoon ke liye

Kumkum - Sumit tum na.....

Sumit - kabhi nahin sudroga, jaanta hoon

Kumkum - agar jaante ho, tho aisa karte kyun ho

Sumit - kyunki tumhe satana acha lagta hai

Kumkum - acha, tumhe main abhi dhekloon gi

Sumit runs away, Kumkum runs after him

Kumkum - rokooooo

Sumit (laughing) - nahin pehle pakdo

Kumkum gets tired, she sits down on the setee

Sumit - kya hua

Kumkum - main thak gayi

Sumit comes and sits by her, he starts messing around again

Kumkum - dheko pareshaan mat karo

Sumit- kyun kya karlo gi

Kumkum - Sumit!!!!!

Kumkum gets up to walk away, but Sumit picks Kumkum up in his arms

Kumkum - hey, chordo mujhe, neeche rakho, koi aajeyga

Sumit - aane do, humhe kya

Kumkum - uff Sumit, dheko Sharman aageyaa

Sumit quickly puts Kumkum down and looks behind him, theres noone there, he turns around and sees Kumkum has run away laughing

Later that day

Kumkum - Sumit tum kahm bohat karte ho

Sumit - ab kya karoon, Dhruv honeymoon ke liye ja raha tho kahm mujhe hi karna para hai

Kumkum - kisi ki madat lehlo

Sumit - ab kis ki madat leh sakta hoon, aditya bhi yahan nahin hai

Kumkum - Krish ki madat lehlo

Sumit (laughs) - Krish ki, are you mad

Krish - kyun bhaiya main aap ki madat nahin kar sakta

Sumit - oh Krish sorry, lekin tumhe business.....

Krish - tho, seekloon ga

Sumit - teek hai yahan aao

Sumit and Krish start discussing business, Kumkum decides to check upon Sharman

Kumkum - phone par kaun tha

Sharman - ma, Mohini

Kumkum - yeh Mohini mujhe teek nahin lagti

Sharman - tho kya hua ma, jo bhi ho Rach se achi hai

Kumkum - tune Rach se baat ki

Sharman - nahin ma, usse sirf Prem chaiye, aur usne yeh saaf saaf bata diya

Kumkum - phir bhi, tumhe usse baat karni chaiydi

Sharman - ma please, uske baare mein baat karna chordo

Kumkum - teek hai nahin karti

Kumkum goes

The next day Sumit is having a shower, Kumkum is in the room

Sumit - Kumkum,.......Kumkum

Kumkum - kya hua

Sumit - mujhe towel farado

Kumkum - uff Sumit, tum pehle towel lekar jaya karo

Sumit - agli baar lehloon ga, ab tho dhedo

Kumkum goes to hand Sumit the towel, she knocks on the door

Kumkum - ab leh bhi lo

Sumit - darvaza kula hai

Kumkum - main andar nahin aane vali

Sumit - mat aao, lekin darvaza kholo aur main towel far loon ga

Kumkum opens the door slighty and sticks her hand in to give Sumit the towel, but instead of Sumit grabbing the towel he grabs Kumkum into the bathroom

Kumkum - ahhhhhh Sumit!!!!!!!!

Sumit - arree ankhen kholo

Kumkum - nahin, tumne kuch nahin pehna

Sumit - tho, arre ankhen kholo please

Kumkum slowly opens her eyes and sees Sumit is already dressed he has a grin on his face

Kumkum - Sumit!! agar tumne kapre pehne the tho towel kyun maanga???

Sumit - yeh karne ke liye

Sumit tries to kiss Kumkum

Kumkum - nahin, stop it Sumit

Sumit - kyun, pyar kar raha hoon

Kumkum - acha aaj itna pyar kyun aa raha

Sumit - pyar tho humesha aata hai lekin karne ko mohka nahin milta

Kumkum - acha jo bhi ho, mujhe jaane do

Sumit - pehle ek kiss do

Kumkum - teek hai aankhen bandh karo

Sumit - lo karle

Kumkum leans in to kiss Sumit but instead splashes water on his face

Kumkum - yeh raha tumhara kiss!!!!

Sumit - achaa, ab tumhari vaari

Kumkum - dheko maine abhi kapre badle hai, mujh par paani nahin phek na

Sumit - nahin sazza tho milni hai

He splashes her with water

Kumkum (moans) - Sumit........mere kapre gile hoge, ab fhir badal ne pare

Sumit - ab yeh tumhari glati hai, tune pehle paani pheka, ab sorry bolo varna main aur phek doon ga

Kumkum - teek hai sorry!!!!

Sumit - aise nahin, ek kiss dhe kar

Kumkum runs away before Sumit realises


lol hope u enjoyed tht guys, hehe i kept trying 2 imagine the scenes while writing it!!!!

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