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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 karoon gi na verni jaan im in the thinkin process 😆 😆 😆
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GR88 PART 👏
plz cont SOON
LOVE
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wow great part i just luv ur story its really good 😳
waiting for the next part . well done 👏 👏 👏
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hey rach awesome story 👏 .............just love it 😉
i really liked the way u introduced all of us.....
wow.....i cant stop smiling 😃 .........me - su's college frnd 😉 😛 ........thnks a lot hunny 😳 😳
i'll be waitin 4 the next part 😉 😊
btw congratulations sweety, u r goin 2 be a member of the wadhwa family 😆 😆 😆
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😆 lol im glad u liked it nidhi, i tried 2 include every1.....lol haha member of whadwa family soundz good!!!! 😆 😆 😆
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Hey soz 4 the delay guys!!!!!! ino u missed my fan fic 😉 lol and i kno i shud b revisin lekin i cudnt resist updating!!!

Special Part 3

Place - Whadwa House

Sumit is in his room reading, Kumkum comes to talk to him about Sharman and Rach

Kumkum - Sumit suno tumse bat karni thi

Sumit - bolo Kumkum

Kumkum - pehle book neeche rakho

Sumit - teek hai ye lo, ab batao kya gal karni hai

Kumkum - Sharman ke bare mein

Sumit (laughs)- ab kya kiya usne

Kumkum - mujhe lagta hai uski bhi shaadi kara diye

Sumit laughs, Kumkum hits him

Kumkum - Sumit be serious

Sumit - ok ill be serious, pehle yeh batao is duniya mein kaun si ladki humare bete ke saat shaadi karegi (laughs again)

Kumkum - ek ladki hai, issi duniya mein aur issi ghar mein

Sumit is shocked

Sumit - kaun hai?

Kumkum - Rach

Sumit - Kumkum tum pagal hogayi, us ladki ki zindagi kharab karne ja rahi ho

Kumkum - Sharman aur Rach ek dosre ko pasand karte hai

Sumit (laughs) - mujhe to lagta tha ke Sharman ko Maya ke eklavya kuch aur nazar nahin aata

Kumkum - dekho maine Sharman se kaha ke main tumse baat karoon gi lekin agar tumhe yeh sab mazak lagta hai to teek hai

Kumkum walks off, Sumit goes after her

Sumit - acha im sorry, is baare mein soch loon ga, lekin meri ek baat maan ni hogi

Kumkum - kya

Sumit - aaj raat hum dono baar ja rahe hai, dinner ke liye

Kumkum - nahin Sumit, ghar mein itna kham para hai

Sumit - i dont care, hum ja rahe hai bas

Later on Sumit and Kumkum arrive at the restaurant. They go and sit at the table given to them and order some food

Waiter - may i take your order please

Sumit - yes, she would like some spaghetti bolognese

Kumkum - and he would like some vegetarian pasta with some salad thank you

The waiter goes hes a bit shocked that insted of ordering for themselves, Kumkum and Sumit ordered for each other

Sumit - Its so great

Kumkum - kya

Sumit - hum dono ko abhi bhi yaad hai ke dosre ko kya chaiye

Kumkum - haan itna pyaar jo karte hai

After food

Sumit - Kumkum, will you give me the pleasure of this dance?

Kumkum - of course

They get up to dance and Sumit begins to sing Tumhe jo maine dekha from Main Hoon Na

(Sumit to Kumkum)
tum bhi ho main bhi hoon
paas aao to keh doon
aakhir kyun pal yun deewaana main ho gaya

tumhe jo maine dekha
tumhe jo maine jaana
tumhe jo maine dekha
tumhe jo maine jaana
jo hosh tha voh tho gaya

badan ki yeh kushboo
jataane lagi jaadoo
tho hoke beqabu
dil kho gaya

tumhe jo maine socha
tumhe jo maine maana
tumhe jo maine dekha
tumhe jo maine jaana
jo hosh tha voh tho gaya

itni kyun tum khoobsurat ho
ke sab ko hairat ho
duniyan mein such-much hi rehti hai
paariyon si bhi zyada pyaari si ladki koi
haaan itni kyun bolo haseen tum ho
jo dekhe ghum-sum ho
dekho na main bhi hoon koya sa
behka sa mujhpe bhi chaayi hai deewaangi

tumhi ko maine pooja
tumhi ko chaha paana
tumhe jo maine dekhe
tumhe jo maine jaana
jo hosh tha voh tho gaya

badan ki yeh kushboo
jatane lagi jaadoo
tho hoke beqabu
dil kho gaya

tumhe jo maine dekhe
tumhe jo maine jaana
tumhe jo maine dekhe
tumhe jo maine jaana
jo hosh tha voh tho gaya

(Kumkum to Sumit)
tum bhi ho main bhi hoon
paas aao tho keh doon
tumne jo dekha toh kya jaane kya ho gaya

jaane kyun rehti hoon koyi si
jaagi na soyi si
ab dil mein armaan hai saanson mein toofaan hai
aankhon mein khwaabon ki hai chaandni

aa…jaane kyun behka sa ye mann hai
mehka sa ye tan hai
chalti hoon itraake ithlaake sharmaake
balkhaake jaise koyi raagini

tumhe jo maine samjha
tumhe jo pechana
tumhe jo maine dekha
tumhe jo maine jaana
jo hosh tha voh tho gaya

(sumit to kumkum)
badan ki yeh kushboo
jataane lagi jaadoo
tho hoke beqabu
dil kho gaya

(both)
tumhe jo maine dekha
tumhe jo maine jaana
tumhe jo maine dekha
tumhe jo maine jaana
tumhe jo maine dekha
tumhe jo maine jaana

Later that evening while on their way home in the car Kumkum falls asleep, suddenly the car breaks down

Sumit - god isse abhi hi rookna tha

Kumkum wakes up

Kumkum - kya hua, gaadi kyun rookhi

Sumit - soch raha tha yahan gaadi chordke pehdal chaloon ghar

Kumkum - kya

Sumit - obviously gaadi kharab ho gayi

Sumit goes outside to check the car, he gives up and tries to phone a mechanic but the phone has no service

Kumkum - ab kya hoga, kisi ko phone bhi nahin kar sakte

Sumit is fed up, hes looking around and sees a little cottage nearby. Him and Kumkum go towards it. An old couple answer the door and tell them to come in as it is very cold

Sumit - thank you uncle, bas aapka phone use karna tha

uncle - sorry beta lekin yahan bijli chale gayi

Kumkum - oh no

aunty - dekho ab bohat raat ho gayi tum dono yahin rok jao aur kal jab bijli vapas aa gayi tab phone kar lena

after much consideration Kumkum and Sumit decide to stay the night

meanwhile at Whadwa House

Veena - pata nahin ye dono kahan re gaya

Sharman - haan ma aur pa ko ab tak aana chaiye

Rach - dont worry Sharman, voh aa jayenge

Dhruv - haan chalo lets go to bed

the next day

Sumit and Kumkum arrive at home safely, they see that everyone is waiting for them, before they got told off, Sumit quickly told them what happened. They go to their room

Sumit vaise kal raat bohat mazza aaya

Kumkum - haan bilkul, koi bache nahin, bas sirf hum dono

Sumit - kya kehti tum, is hafte dinner par gaye, agle hafte honeymoon....

Kumkum - Sumit behave, hum ek raat ke liye ghar nahin the aur ghar vaale itne pareshaan ho gaye, ab honeymoon par gaye tho jaane kya haal hoga

Sumit - god you're so boring

Kumkum - voh tho main hoon

Kumkum laughs and runs away from Sumit, he chases her.
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hey guys....... onli 1 comment.....u guys gettin bored???????? 😭 😭 😭
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hey rach nt bored.....the story s awesum.....gud wrk
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😭 even tho no1s commented, guess ur all buzi or sutin, since my examz have finished im updating the next part, so plz try n comment thanx a lot guys

Part 6

previously Kumkum had found out that Sharman and Rach have feelings for each other and agree to sort out their marriage after Dhruv and Siya's wedding. now to continue

Place - Whadwa House

Sharman is still asleep, Rach comes to wake him up

Rach - chalo Sharman, subah hogayi, oothoo

Sharman - bas 5 mins

Rach - Sharman, main aunty nahin hoon jo tumhe 5 mins dhene wali hoon

Rach turns to open the curtains when Sharmans grabs her and pulls her on the bed

Rach - kya kar rahe ho, chordo mujhe

Sharman - nahin, mujhe pehle ek kiss do

Rach - pagal ho gaye ho tum, koi aajeyga

Sharman - so i dont care, tum meri hone wali biwi ho

Rach - abhi tak baat pakhi nahin hui, agar maine naa kar diya aur tumhe chord ke chali gayi tho?

Sharman gets upset and lets Rach go

Rach - hey im sorry, mazak kar rahi thi

Sharman - aisa mazak? dheko ab teek hai, lekin dobara yeh mat kehna ke tum mujhe chord ke chali jaogi. tum nahin janti, i love you so much

Rach - im sorry and i love you too, ab oothooooo

Later Rach is waiting for Sharman at college as he woke up late and she left without him

Rach - god yeh Sharman bhi na, kitni dher lagata hai

Rach's phone rings

Sharman - main aah raha hoon, kahin mat jaana

Rach - Sharman jaldi karo

she hangs up. 15 mins later, a guy comes behind Rach and covers her eyes with his hands. Rach is happy thinking it's Sharman, she turns around with a smile on her face but as soon as she sees it's not Sharman, it disappears

Rach - tum, yahan

The guy picks Rach up and twirls her around

Rach - stop, neeche rakhooo

Guy - i missed you soooo muchhh, tumhari bohat yaad aayi mujhe

Rach - lekin kya karne aaye ho

Guy - tumse milne aaya hoon stupid, kya hua, mujhe dekh kar kush nahin ho

Rach - nahin ye baat nahin hai, haan kush hoon, lekin im surprised

Guy- surprised, i see, so wheres my hug!!!

Rach hugs the guy, as she looks over him she sees Sharman whos looks heartbroken, he turns and walks away

Rach - Sharman!!!!!

She lets the guy go and goes after Sharman

Rach - Sharman rokoo, meri baat suno

Sharman - kehne sune ke liye bacha kya hai, jo dekhna tha voh maine dhek liya

Rach - Sharman tum bina kuch jaane aisa nahin khe sakte

Sharman - acha tho kaun tha voh?? haan bataao, main bhi jaanoon voh tumhe aise kyun mila

Rach - voh mera......

Sharman(laughs) - tum bataa nahin sakti na

Rach - lekin meri baat suno please

Guy - hey, kya hua, tum aise kyun chale gayi? yeh kaun hai?

Sharman - main Whadwa, Sharman Whadwa hoon, aur tum

Guy - i see, nice to meet you Sharman, im Prem (played by Manoj Bohra), Rach ka chahne vala

Prem (hugs Rach) - we love each other so much, lekin yeh mujhe vahan Chandighar main chord gayi thi isliye main iske peeche aaya hoon

Sharman is upset and is holding back his tears, Rach is shocked and looks at Sharman

Sharman - acha, then i'll go, see you later, have fun

He walks away, he turns around and sees Prem hugging Rach, as he goes round a corner he punches his fist against a wall

Later at Whadwa House

Kumkum - kya hua Sharman, akele kyun bete ho?

Sharman - bas aise hi ma

Kumkum - teek hai nahin batana chahte tho nahin batao

Dhruv comes into the room with Sumit

Sumit - kya batein ho rahi hai ma bete mein

Kumkum - kuch nahin

Dhruv sees Sharman is upset, he makes some excuse and makes Kumkum and Sumit go outside

Dhruv - hey bro kya hua, tumhari girlfriend ke bina dil nahin lagta

Sharman - uska naam mat lo

Dhruv - kya hua, koi jagra

Sharman tells Dhruv what happened, meanwhile in the cafe

Prem - hey, tum kahan kohi hui ho

Rach - tumne aaj teek nahin kiya

Prem - kya kiya maine

Rach - tumne Sharman ko yeh kyun kaha ke hum dono ek dusre ko pyar karte ho

Prem - kyun, maine sach kaha tha

Rach - nahin Prem, mere yahan aane se kitna kuch badla hai

Prem(angrily) - jaise

Rach - jaise ke main tumse ab pyar nahin karti, Sharman se karti hoon

Prem is angry and hurt, he bangs his fists on the table and scares Rach

Prem - i knew it!!! is liye main tumhe yahan aane se rok raha tha, jaanta tha ke tum mere saath aisa hi karogi

Rach - lekin Prem, maine jan bhuj kar yeh nahin kiya

Prem grips Rach's hand

Prem - suno, agar tum meri nahin ho sakti tho us Whadwa ki bhi nahin ho sakti

Prem gets up and goes, Rach is worried and scared and wants Sharman, back at WH Sharman is still upset

To be continued.....

What will happen will Rach and Sharman sort out their misunderstandings, or will Prem cause more misunderstandings. Find out in part 7
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nice going 😛 ... and also...we are not bored at all...

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