THE END PG59 :'( MUST READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Page 8

omg.....its awesum rach

n why u saying no1 commenting.....we doing na

keep up d gud wrk sweety

w8ting 4 d next part.....n kool rach chandigarh se 😃

awww glad u liked it, haan mujhe tumahri yaad aakar chandighar kaha

Originally posted by: rachandeep

awww glad u liked it, haan mujhe tumahri yaad aakar chandighar kaha

awwwwwwwwwwwww shooooooooooooooo cute of u dearoo😳

hey rach! very nice story its soo romantic...sometimez i forget that its made up..that i start too look for the movies on the forum to ur storyy..so stupid naaa 😆 ......eh mujhe add karne liyea bhoolnaa na..han? yan phir tum mari dost nhi? lol..u must be sayin that u dont even noe me that well....wel actually i've seen all ur post, comments..nd everythin u seem liek a very kind, caing, nd loving..etc.lol....well tum mujhe jaanno...aur mujhe tumare story mai rakho..its ur choice if u dont want me in it..i wont mind...its so interesting in the first place..keep up the good work! AND PLEZE DO PArt7 VERY VERY FAST CANNOT WAIT NY LONGER 😆 ..thnx..byeeee 😊

awwwww thats sooooo swwweeeetttt, of course were mates, ill defo include u amany!!!!!!

HEY..THNX RACH..AM SO EAGER TO READ NEXT PART...CANNOT WAIITTT!!! 😃 I KEEP COMIN BAK TO THIS TOPIC TO CHEK IF U UPDATED IT YET..HOW STUPID OF ME..LOL...THNX AGAIN:p(k)(l)...LUV YA....BYEEEE 😊 😛

well aman u have 2 wait no longer!!!

Previously Sharman found out that someone else loves Rach, her ex lover Prem returns. now to continue

Part 7

Place - Siya's House

Rach is in Siya's room, she is trying to get through to Sharman on the phone but he is not answering her calls

Rach - Sharman phone utaoo, tum phone kyun nahin uta rahe, mujse itna naraaz ho

her phone rings, Rach thinking its Sharman answers straight away

Rach - Sharman!!

Prem - nahin, Prem

Rach - oh tum, batao ab kya chaiye tumhe

Prem - maine sirf yehi kehene ke liye phone kiya, ke agar tum khedo ke tum mujse ab bhi pyar karti ho, tho maine tumhe maaf karke, sab kuch bhula doon ga

Rach - Prem, kitni baar tumhe batana para, main sirf Sharman se pyar karti hoon, main tumse nahin pyar karti

Prem - maine tumhe ek mohka diya lekin tum, bas ab tum dheklena us Whadwa ki main kya haal karta hoon

Prem hangs up, meanwhile at the Whadwa House, Sharman is in his room, he is looking at Rach's photo

Sharman - tumne mere saath yeh kyun kiya, main tumse itna pyar karta hoon, aur tum.....

Sharman smashes the photo against the wall, he puts his stereo on, the song " Bhula Dhenge Tumko Sanam" from Humko Deewana Kar Gaye is playing


Na jee sakein yahan
na maar sakein yahan
hasne ki baat chordo
na ro sakrin yahan

tho jaye hum kahan
tho jaye hum kahan
tho jaye hum kahan........

yeh dard ki aahein
judha hui rahein
bhula dhenge tumko sanam dheere dheere
mohobbat ke saare sitam dheere dheere
bhula dhenge tumko sanam dheere dheere
mohobbat ke saare sitam dheere dheere


abhi naaz hai toote dil ke wafa pe
abhi naaz hai toote dil ke wafa pe
ke tootenge saare baram dheere dheere
bhula dhenge tumko sanam dheere dheere


switches to Prem

dil mera chaiye ke seene se
dil main nikal ke phekdoon
bedard is behrem ko hawa
main uchal ke phekdoon

dhoka diya mujhko dhoka hua
dil ne mere hai yeh kya kiya
dil mera chaiye ke seene se
dil main nikal ke phekdoon

lamhon se haare bujhe nazarein
ab tho saheinge yeh gham dheere dheere
bhula dhenge tumko sanam dheere dheere


switches back to Sharman

tanha akele mein yaadon ke
mele mein tum gaye chord ke
vaadon ki raasom ko chahat
ki kasmon ko tum gaye thord ke

ghariyan sitamgar kat thi nahin
ulfat ke manzar se hat thi nahin
tanha akele mein yaadon ke
mele mein tum gaye chord ke

jahan bhi jaooon tumhe hi paooon
rukhenge humhare kadam dheere dheere
bhula dhenge tumko sanam dheere dheere


switches back to Prem

abhi naaz hai toote dil ke wafa pe
abhi naaz hai toote dil ke wafa pe
ke tootenege saare baram dheere dheere

shows Sharman and Prem

ke tootenege saare baram dheere dheere
bhula dhenge tumko sanam dheere dheere
mohobbat ke saare sitam dheere dheere

Later Rach goes to the Whadwa House to see Sharman, Kumkum answers the door

Rach - hi aunty

Kumkum - hi Rach, kaisi ho?

Rach - teek hoon, aunty, voh Sharman....

Kumkum - apne kamre mein hai, ja uske paas

Rach goes to Sharmans room, she knocks on the door, Sharman answers

Sharman - tum yahan?

Rach - tumse baat karni thi

Sharman - dheko tum yahan se jao, mujhe tumse koi baat nahin karni

Rach - Sharman, kham se kham mujhe andar tho aane do, varna aunty kya sochegi

Sharman hesitates but lets Rach in

Sharman - kaho, kya kehne aayi ho

Rach - Sharman im sorry, voh Prem......

Sharman - mujhe pata tha ke tum ussi ke baare mein baat karne aayi ho, but listen i dont want to hear anything about him or you

Rach - lekin Sharman

Sharman - lekin vekin kuch nahin, achi tara se sunlo, i hate you, understand, i hate you

Rach (almost in tears) - Sharman......

Rach turns around to leave the room, her hand is on the handle

Rach - teek hai, aaj ke baad main tumhe kabhi nahin pareshan karoon gi

Sharman sees her leaving, he puts his hand out to begin to stop her but he doesnt, Rach runs out the Whadwa House crying.

Kumkum - arre Rach, tumhe kya hua....

Kumkum goes to Sharmans room, she sees Sumit is already there

Sumit - tum dono ke beech kya hua? voh is tara se kyun chale gayi

Sharman - pa please, aap kuch maat poochiye

Sumit - dheko agar koi baat hui tho humhe batao, hum tumhari madat kardoon ge

Sharman - teek hai Pa tho sono

he tells Sumit and Kumkum everything

Sharman - usne mera dil thod diya pa,

Kumkum - oh my god, Sharman tum fikar mat karo sab teek hoga


*a few days later*

Its Dhruv and Siya's wedding day, the whole house is decorated, the barat has gone to Siya's house, Sharman is very happy til he sees Rach, she wants to talk to him but remembers what he said and walks away

The wedding takes place, everyone is having fun, Sharman keeps looking at Rach

Kumkum - agar usse baat karni hai tho jake karlo

Sharman - nahin ma, main usse baat nahin karna chahta

Sharman is walking around when he bumps into Rach, their eyes lock on to each other, they keep stairing into each others eyes until someone pushes Rach and she lands on top of Sharman

Rach - im sorry

Sharman - ey dhek ke nahin chal sakta kya

guy - sorry

Sharman (to Rach) - you ok?

Rach - haan teek hoon, main janti thi

Sharman - kya?

Rach - ke tum abh bhi mujse pyar karte ho

Sharman - hey aisa kuch nahin hai, voh tum ghir gayi is liye poocha tha, varna mere paas ladkiyan ki koi kamhi nahin hai

Rach looks upset and walks away

The next day at college Sharman is in the canteen, he sees a new girl and looks at her, he then sees Rach staring and decides to make her jealous by finding out who the girl is, he starts singing Kaun Hai Voh from Ishq Vishk

Hey Kaun Hai Woh
Kaun Hai Woh
Hey Kaun Hai Woh
Heere Jaise Aankhon Wali Kaun Hai Woh
Sone Jaise Balo Wali Kaun Hai Woh
Chandi Jaise Galo Wali Kaun Hai Woh
Dhimi Dhimi Chalo Wali Kaun Hai Woh
Kaun Hai Woh

Laakhon Haseen Dekhe Koi Thehra Na Saamne
Aate Hi Iske Dekho Sabke Chehre Utar Gaye
Yeh Bala Kaun Hai
Is Ka Naam Hai Kya
Rehti Ho Kahan
Karti Kaam Hai Kya
Laakhon Haseen Dekhe Koi Thehra Na Saamne
Aate Hi Iske Dekho Sabke Chehre Utar Gaye
Yeh Bala Kaun Hai
Is Ka Naam Hai Kya
Rehti Ho Kahan
Karti Kaam Hai Kya

Laal Dupatta Uche Sandal Reshmi Kameez
Pehle Na Dekhe Thi Maine Aisi Koi Cheez
Is Jawan Hoor Se Baat Kar Door Se
Ho Jaye Na Yeh Khafa
Laakhon Haseen Dekhe Koi Thehra Na Saamne
Aate Hi Iske Dekho Sabke Chehre Utar Gaye
Yeh Bala Kaun Hai
Is Ka Naam Hai Kya
Rehti Ho Kahan
Karti Kaam Hai Kya

Har Dhadkan Ko Meri Tamanna
Labon Ko Meri Pyaas
Sab Hai Mere Ishq Mein Pagal
Sab Ko Meri Talaash
Mujh Mein Hai Shokhiyan
Mujh Mein Hai Mastiyaan
Har Dil Pe Mera Nasha
Laakhon Haseen Honge Koi Mujhsa Yaha Kahan
Kitne Jawaan Ladke Meri Chahat Pe Margaye
Yeh Umar Yeh Nazar
Husn Ki Yeh Ada
Jisne Dekha Mujhe Hogaya Woh Fida
Laakhon Haseen Dekhe Koi Thehra Na Saamne
Aate Hi Iske Dekho Sabke Chehre Utar Gaye
Yeh Bala Kaun Hai
Is Ka Naam Hai Kya
Rehti Ho Kahan
Karti Kaam Hai Kya
Heere Jaise Aankhon Wali Kaun Hai Woh
Sone Jaise Balo Wali Kaun Hai Woh
Chandi Jaise Galo Wali Kaun Hai Woh
Dhimi Dhimi Chalo Wali Kaun Hai Woh
Kaun Hai Woh


Sharman stops in front of the girl

Sharman - hi im Whadwa, Sharman Whadwa, and you are?

Girl - hi im Mohini (played by Tasnim) nice to meet you handsome

Sharman - aao main tumhe college dhikata hoon

Mohini - chalo

Sharman puts his arm around Mohini and walks with her deliberately in front of Rach, Rach is hurt, she runs away crying, she goes and sits on a bench, suddenly Prem sits by her

Prem - maine kaha tha, voh Whadwa tumhare liye teek nahin hai

Rach - Prem tum, dheko us ke baare mein aisa maat bolna

Prem (laughs) - tumhe uski fikar hai, jo us anjaan ladki ke saath flirt kar raha hai (Rach sees Sharman flirting with Mohini) lekin main?, jo tumse itna pyar karta hoon, meri koi fikar nahin

Rach - tumhari fikar hai Prem, lekin pyar.......

Prem - yeh pyar bhi ajeeb hai kyun, main tumse pyar karta hoon, lekin tumhe koi aur chaiye, tum Sharman se pyar karti lekin usse koi aur hi chaiye

Rach - voh mujhse pyar karta hai

Prem - acha, sabit karke batao

Rach - teek hai, dheko

she goes up to Sharman, and grabs his arm

Sharman - tumhe kya chaiye

Rach - tum Prem ko batao, ke tum mujhse pyar karte ho

Sharman - pyar aur tumse (laughs) jao, tum tho mere nafrat ke layik bhi nahin

Sharman walks away, but stops and turns around, Rach sees him, she looks the other way and sees Prem, Sharman is hoping she comes after him, but Rach turns and runs towards Prem

Rach- PREM!!!!

Prem has his arms out and hugs Rach

Prem - main janta tha, ke tum mujhse pyar karti ho

Rach (crying) - im sorry Prem, mujhe maaf kardo

Prem - hey bas rona bandh chalo smile for me

Sharman is heartbroken that Rach chose Prem, Mohini is still with him

Mohini - chale

Sharman - haan chalo

Prem is still hugging Rach, he looks at Sharman and gives a big grin as he knows Sharman cannot see him hugging Rach

Prem - dont worry Rach, sab teek hoga

Prem has a evil look on his face

to be continued........

What is Prem up to? Who is Mohini really?? find out in Part 8!

wow awesome rachh..i luv the story so far...cant wait to c wt else u have on ur mind for the next part. 😊

thanx 4 ur commentz guys, ill update soon,

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