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Posted: 19 years ago
#91
awwwwwwwww i won't kill ya i promise hunny lol u make me laugh oh and i like the kumkum and sumit parts too hun their really cute

Luvs Ya

Luv Noori
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey thnx..pleze hrry nd post the next part cant wait to c wat happens 😊 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 noori jaan tum bhi na, hey Aman ill post it soon ok dont worry if u go 2 page one ull see u become one of the permanent characters 😃 😃
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omg..thnx so much... 😆 luvv u so much 😆 cant wait till the next part 😊 soo far soo good 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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rachu(like your nickname?)
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i think u should have been the writter of kumkum 😆
waiting 4 more........ 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very nice rachu 😛 .
i hope they include the above scene in kumkum it would be very nice.
continue plz.
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hey guys thanx 4 ur comment aww luv u 2 aman sis, love the nickname sukk haan i shud hunnna, thanx preethi 😊
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can u plzzzz ad ashi and yuvi's character???
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hey millie whos ashi n yuvi????
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Posted: 19 years ago
soz for the delay guys uno the football n all!!!!!

Previously Rach meets Sharmans cousin Aman, Aman finds out about Rach and Sharman she wants to sort things out but Rach stops her. Mohini is working with Prem, now to continue

Part 9

Place - Mohinis party

Prem and Mohini are discussing their plans on how to make Sharman forget about Rach totally, Prem has an idea to make Rach hate Sharman, he tells Mohini

Prem - kiyal rakhna, kisiko pata na chale

Mohini - dont worry Prem, akhir main tumhari dost hoon, chalo mujhe Sharman ke paas chale jaana chayida varna voh mujhe dhoondthe yahan aajao ga

Prem - teek hai tum jao

Mohini leaves

Prem (thinks) - bas dheklena Mr Whadwa ab main kya karta hoon

Outside Sharman is waiting for Mohini, he cant take his eyes off Rach, Mohini comes

Sharman - kahan thi tum?

Mohini - sorry dher lag gayi, kyun miss me?

Sharman hugs Mohini

Sharman - of course miss kiya

Mohini gives Sharman a kiss, she hugs him while looking over his shoulder she makes a stupid face

Mohini (thinks) - uuff kahan paas gayi

meanwhile Rach is looking for Prem, she sees him at the other side of the room, while on her way there some guy grabs her hand

guy - come dance with me baby

This angers Prem, he comes running

Prem - haath chord iska

guy - kyun? kya karlo ge

Rach - Prem hes hurting me

Prem pushes the guy on the floor, as the guy is holding Rach's hand tightly she falls aswell. Prem picks Rach up but as she had been wearing bangles he sees that the guy squeezed her hand so tight she begins to bleed, as soon as he sees the blood he gets very angry

Prem - tumhare haath mein tho khoon beh raha hai

Rach - dont worry, main teek hoon

Prem - kahan teek ho

He looks at the guy on the floor, then at Rach's hand and then starts beating the guy up badly

Prem - tunhe isse chooha kaise, maar daaloon ga tumhe

Rach - Prem stop it, Prem please

Prem - nahin isne tumhara khoon baya hai, isse main nahin chordoon ga

Rach - Prem tumhe meri kasam!

Prem stops

Prem - bach gaya tu

Prem takes Rach outside, he rips his t shirt and ties the cloth on Rach's hand, he has tears in his eyes

Rach - ro kyun rahe ho

Prem - kyunki tumhara khoon baya hai

Rach - itna sa tho hai

Prem - tho kya hua, meri jaan nikal gayi

Rach - bilkul pagal ho, chalo ghar chaliye

Rach and Prem go home, Sharman looks on, Aman comes behind him

Aman - kya dhek rahe ho bro

Sharman - kuch nahin, chalo hum bhi ghar chalthe hai

Mohini - nahin Sharman rokoo na please

Aman - bro tum rok jao ill go home

Sharman - akeli kaise jao gi

Aman - Sharman ill be ok na

Aman leaves, Sharman goes inside with Mohini meanwhile Rach and Prem reach home

Prem - tum teek ho?

Rach - haan teek hoon baba

Prem - baitho

Rach - kya hua

Prem - kitne dinoo se tumhe kuch poochna tha

Rach - kya? poochoo

Prem gets down on one knee and takes out a ring

Prem - tum janti ho ke main tumse kitna pyar karta hoon, ek baat aur main tumhe bataaoon, tumhare bina main jee nahin saktha issliye main chahtha hoon ke tumhara saath kabhi na choote, ke tum meri jeevan saathi bano

Rach - Prem, tum.......

Prem - Rach mujhse shaadi karogi?

Rach - Prem, hum shaadi......lekin

Prem - dheko mujhe jawab abhi nahin chaiye tum soch lo aur fhir jawab dhena

Prem leaves Rach alone, she's confused

Rach (thinks) - main isse shaadi kaise kar sakti, main Sharman se.......uuff kya karoon

At Mohini's house, Sharman and her are having drinks, Sharman excuses himself to go to the bathroom, while he is gone, Mohini slips pills in his drink. He comes back

Mohini - yeh lo tumhara drink

Sharman - thanx

He drinks it and suddenly faints on the setee, Mohini takes his shirt off and throws it on the floor, she then gets some lipstick and draws lip shapes on his chest. She goes and changes into a nightie, she smiles at Sharman then calls Prem

Mohini - kahm hogaya, tum aajao uske saath

Prem - good job

Prem goes to Rach

Rach - kya hua

Prem - maine meri jacket Mohini ke ghar chord di, main usse jake leh aata hoon

Rach - main bhi chaloon gi

Prem smiles (thinks) - perfect

Prem and Rach reach Mohini's house, the door is open, Prem goes to get his jacket, Rach waits outside first but then goes inside to find Prem when he takes ages

Rach - Prem?

She looks around but doesnt see him, she then looks inside the living room and is horrified to see Mohini kising Sharman's chest. Rach is heartbroken and angry

Prem (behind her) - lab gayi, upar thi, kya hua

Rach points to Mohini and Sharman, Prem looks and acts shocked, just at that moment Sharman awakens from unconciousness and sees Mohini and his state, he then looks up and sees Rach

Sharman - Rach yeh sab....

Rach doesnt listen and runs out, Sharman gets up grabs his shirt and goes after her, pushing Prem out the way

Sharman - Rach rokoo, jaisa tum samaj thi ho vaise yeh hai nahin

Rach - dont touch me, door raho mujhse, main kabhi soch nahin sakthi ke tum aisa karoge

Sharman - lekin meri baat suno

Rach - kuch nahin sun na chahthi, ghin aati hai mujhe tumse, chi!

Sharman - please Rach....

Prem - apni subhan se uska naam mat lo, chalo Rach

Rach (in tears) - nahin, ghin tumse nahin, aapne aap par ho rahi hai, ke maine kabhi tumse pyaar kiya, teek thi main jo Prem ko chuna. I hate you Mr Sharman Whadwa, i hate you, mujhe tumhari shakal aur naam se bhi nafrat hai

Sharman - nahin Rach, aisa mat kaho, main tumse pyar karta hoon

Rach (laughs) - tum toh pyaar ka matlab nahin jaante, pyaar karne aaye ho, tum toh kisi ke pyar ke laiyak nahin ho

Sharman - Lekin

Prem - tumne iski baat nahin suni, leave her alone, varna mere saath nipatlo

Rach - chalo Prem

Rach and Prem leave, Sharman is left alone, he is upset with Rach for misunderstanding him and angry at Mohini for doing what she did

*The next day*

Kumkum - Sharman chalo, college ke liye dher ho rahi hai

Sharman - nahin ma main nahin jaoon ga

Kumkum - kyun kya hua

Sharman - bas ma, nahin jaane mujhe

Meanwhile at Prem's house, Rach is on the phone to her father (guest appearance by Cezzane Khan as Anurag Malhothra)

Rach - hi papa

Anurag - arre beti tum, kaho kaisi ho?

Rach - teek hoon papa, aap se baat karni thi

Anurag - kaho kya baat hai

Rach - yaad hai jab aapne mere liye ladka dhoonda aur shaadi ki baat sheri, maine kaha ke mujhe ab shaadi nahin karni

Anurag - haan tho

Rach - papa mera faisala badal gaya, mujhe shaadi karni hai

Anurag - arre beta thats great, lekin ab ladka kahan milega

Rach - ladka hai papa, aur aap usse jante ho

Anurag - kaun hai voh

Rach - Prem

Anurag - thats great, aaj main bohat kush hoon, thank you beta

Rach - papa aap yahan jaldi aajao aur shaadi ki baat pakhi karlo, mujhse aur intezaar nahin hota

Anurag - main abhi nahin aa saktha lekin main tumhare bhai, Shravan ko vahan phej raha hoon, ok beta

Rach - ok papa bye (thinks) - yeh sab aisa kyun hua, kaash main kabhi Sharman se milti nahin

Rach has flashback of Sharman frm the day they met to last night, the song Jaane Ja from Zeher is playing in the background

Jaane ja jaane ja jaane jaan
tujhse bichar ke main jahoon kahan
jaane ja jaane ja jaane jaan
tujhse bichar ke main jahoon kahan

Hokhe judha hai saath bhi
tu door bhi tu paas bhi
jaise zameen se hai yeh aasman

Jaane ja jaane ja jaane jaan
tujhse bichar ke main jahoon kahan
jaane ja jaane ja jaane jaan
tujhse bichar ke main jahoon kahan

tujhse alag hokhe bhi main
tujhse alag ho na payaa
darthi par jitna gagan hai
utna hi tera sayaa

tujhse alag hokhe bhi main
tujhse alag ho na payaa
darthi par jitna gagan hai
utna hi tera sayaa

yaadein teri baatein teri
dil hai tere raatein teri
pahoon tujhe hi main jahoon jahan

jaane ja jaane ja jaane jaan
tujhse bichar ke main jahoon kahan
jaane ja jaane ja jaane jaan
tujhse bichar ke main jahoon kahan

haathon se haath hai choote
dil se dil choote nahin hai
rishton ke phool abhi tak
shahon se totee nahin hai

haathon se haath hai choote
dil se dil choote nahin hai
rishton ke phool abhi tak
shahon se totee nahin hai

kushiyan teri gham hai tere
dil mein mere mausam tere
mehkha tujhi se hai yeh gilsitan

jaane ja jaane ja jaane jaan
tujhse bichar ke main jahoon kahan
jaane ja jaane ja jaane jaan
tujhse bichar ke main jahoon kahan

Hokhe judha hai saath bhi
tu door bhi tu paas bhi
jaise zameen se hai yeh aasman

jaane ja jaane ja jaane jaan
tujhse bichar ke main jahoon kahan
jaane ja jaane ja jaane jaan
tujhse bichar ke main jahoon kahan

Prem is listening outside and hears Rach agree to her father about marrying him, he is happy

Prem - dheka Sharman, main jeet gaya, Rach meri hai sirf meri

To be continued......

Will Rach marry Prem? Kya Rach aur Sharman ek ho payenge? What will happen when Shravan comes?
Find out in Part 10!!!
Edited by rachandeep - 19 years ago

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