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My lovely readers......
Previously
Everyone is having fun at the Whadwa House, Kripa tells Angad they are getting late, Angad drives the car faster. He is talking to Kripa at the same time, he doesn't see a car ahead of him and swerves the car. They crash into a tree. Flashes of the past come before Kripa's eyes.
Part 36 - Finale!!!!!!!
Kripa slowly opens her eyes, she looks around, she is lying on the floor, many people have gathered around, she gets up and touches her head, she sees she is hurt
woman - are you ok?
Kripa - erm yea.....voh....
woman - he is there
Kripa is helped up, she looks and sees another gathering of people, she goes towards them and finds Angad, she rushes to him and shakes him
Kripa - Angad uthoo!!!! Angad uthoo please!!! Angad!!!
She gives him a hard shake and Angad slowly opens his eyes, he looks at Kripa and sees she is hurt, he gets up in an instant and hugs Kripa
Angad - tum teek tho ho, Kripa, oh my god this is all my fault agar tumhe kuch hota fhir...Kripa you ok?
Kripa - pehle utho....(he gets up) tum teek ho?
Angad - meri chord Kripa...
Kripa - doosri baat...mere naam Kripa nahin....
Angad - kya?
Kripa - Angad....mujhe lagta hai is accident ke baad mujhe meri yaadaash vapas milgayi....
Angad - kya!!! (Angad looks very upset)
Kripa - yes...my name is Mrs Rach Whadwa......
Angad - yaadaash......(puts a smile on his face) im so happy Kri.....Rach im glad you got your memory back
Rach smiles and gives him a light kiss on his cheek
Rach - agar tumhe zyada chot nahin hui tho humhe jaldi jaana hai
Angad - kyun? Kri....i mean Rach.....koi zuroori kaam hai
Rach - haan humhe shaadi...
Angad - oh damn shaadi mein shamil hona hai
Rach - nahin Angad...shamil nahin voh shaadi rokhni hogi
Angad - what! kyun?
Rach - kyunki jis se Antara ki shaadi hone vali hai....voh mera paati hai
Angad - oh damn chalo jaldi!!! Taxi!!!!
Angad and Rach get in the taxi, while in there Angad steals glances at her and a tear comes to his eye as he remembers the times he had with her.
Rach - driver jaldi!!!!
At the Whadwa House, the masti and fun is over, the pandit calls for the bride and groom, Antara and Sharman walk towards him, the taxi is shown driving fast, Antara and Sharman stand opposite each other
Kumkum - Sharman yeh lo, Antara ko varmala pehnado
Sharman takes the varmala off his mom and smiles at Antara, he is about to put it on her when it falls out his hand, he bends down to pick it up, he is about to put it on her again when
?? - rukjaooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Everyone is shocked, Sharman and the family look towards where the voice came from, they can't see anything as people are gathered in front, they slowly move out the way....and...before their very eyes they find...Rach
Sharman - Rach.....
Rach - yeh shaadi nahin ho sakti.....
Sharman drops the varmala and it falls into the fire, he runs from the mandap to Rach, he looks at her with disbelief
Rach - aise kya dhek rahe ho? yeh main hoon tumhari Rach
A tear falls down Sharman's eye, Rach wipes it away, Sharman holds her hand, he then touches her face to see if she is really there
Sharman - tum...tum...zinda ho...
Rach - haan....(she explains what happened)
Sharman hugs Rach, he kisses her face and both are crying, he holds her hand and takes her to the family
Sharman - dheka ma maine kaha tha ke yeh zinda hai, pa main kehta raha ke maine isse dheka tha...lekin meri baat sunta nahin tha koi
Shravan - Di
Rach - Shravan.....
They hug, one by one Rach hugs each family member, she reaches to Antara
Rach - im very sorry.....
Antara - tum kyun maafi maang rahi ho? tumne tho kuch kiya hi nahin...Sharman hamesha tumhara tha aur tumhara rahega
Rach hugs Sharman again, from over Sharman's shoulder she sees Angad is left standing there, as all other guests left the house, she lets Sharman go and walks to him
Rach - hum kabhi teek se mil nahin paaye...hi im Rach...
She extends her hand forward and Angad shakes it with a tear in his eye
Rach - main jaanti hoon ke tumhe bohat dhuk hua hai, aur main jaanti hoon ke tumhara dil toot gaya hai....lekin yeh mera iraada nahin tha....aur haan tumne jo mere liye kiya voh main kabhi nahin bhool paoongi
Angad - yeh kya keh rahi ho Kripa.....sorry Rach....jaise maine kaha tha..ke mujhe bohat khushi hai ke tumhe apni yaadaash mil gayi aur apno se mil gayi ho.....
Sharman walks to Angad and gives him a hug
Sharman - tumne mere pyaar ko bachaya....main zindagi bar tumhara ehsaan maanooga
Angad - agar tumhe mujhe kuch dena hai...tho voh Rach ki khushi hai...yeh lo
Angad hands Sharman the mangal sutar that Rach had kept in her purse, Sharman smiles, he takes Rach to the mandap and the preform the wedding rituals again, Angad looks on, he has a smile on his face
Rach - thanks a lot Angad....
Angad - hey thanks kahegi tho maroonga....tum bale Mrs Whadwa ho..lekin mere liye zindagi bar, tum hamesh meri Kripa rahogi
With that he turns around and walks out the house, the Whadwa family are very happy, Sharman takes Rach to the mandir in the house and puts sindoor in her forehead
Sharman - i love you
Rach - i love you too....
Flashes of the past is shown, then a photo studio....where the Whadwa Family..along with a few extra members are getting ready to take a picture....
Sumit and Kumkum are standing at the back, in front of them there are 2 chair, on which Siya and Rach are seated, on the left of Siya stands Dhruv and on the right of Rach stands Sharman.....and sitting on the floor...by Rach's feet are two cute boys, Rach sorts their hair out and makes them look forward. And in Siya's arms is a baby girl, everyone sorts themselves out one more time and all smile at the camera...a photo is taken!
The photo is shown....the camera zooms out of the photo...and the photo is shown glued in a photo album, a hand closes the book, a voice comes behind
man - kya kar rahi ho...
woman - kuch nahin yaadein taza kar rahi hoon
The man is shown its an old Sharman and he looks at the woman and its an old Rach, she smiles at him
Sharman - acha photo albums....
Rach - haan abhi tho sirf ek dheki hai....theen chaar reh rahi hai....
Sharman sits next to Rach and both open up the front cover to the next photo album.....
The end......
Writers note!!!!
I feel so sad ending this fanfic 😭 .....but kya karoon..with uni and my other fanfic ishq ki kasam, i rarely had time to update it. But i enjoyed writing this as much as you guys enjoyed reading it. Its not the end of the story...more like a new beginning. Im very sorry..especially to Aman and Shazia u 2 didnt want me to end.....very sorry...but hey at least now you can collect all parts n make a novel 😆 😆 but seriously i loved this fanfic, not only because it was of me and sharman but because of all the response i got, when i first started i never thought people would like it but im glad you all did......neways im also sorry for leaving the sukk parts incomplete......well as i was finishing this off i forgot bout them so please forgive me....i hope you enjoyed reading this and i love you al 😭 😭 😭 !!!!!
Hum Tum....a fanfic by Rachandeep......(mods you may close after a while)
Previously
Everyone is having fun at the Whadwa House, Kripa tells Angad they are getting late, Angad drives the car faster. He is talking to Kripa at the same time, he doesn't see a car ahead of him and swerves the car. They crash into a tree. Flashes of the past come before Kripa's eyes.
Part 36 - Finale!!!!!!!
Kripa slowly opens her eyes, she looks around, she is lying on the floor, many people have gathered around, she gets up and touches her head, she sees she is hurt
woman - are you ok?
Kripa - erm yea.....voh....
woman - he is there
Kripa is helped up, she looks and sees another gathering of people, she goes towards them and finds Angad, she rushes to him and shakes him
Kripa - Angad uthoo!!!! Angad uthoo please!!! Angad!!!
She gives him a hard shake and Angad slowly opens his eyes, he looks at Kripa and sees she is hurt, he gets up in an instant and hugs Kripa
Angad - tum teek tho ho, Kripa, oh my god this is all my fault agar tumhe kuch hota fhir...Kripa you ok?
Kripa - pehle utho....(he gets up) tum teek ho?
Angad - meri chord Kripa...
Kripa - doosri baat...mere naam Kripa nahin....
Angad - kya?
Kripa - Angad....mujhe lagta hai is accident ke baad mujhe meri yaadaash vapas milgayi....
Angad - kya!!! (Angad looks very upset)
Kripa - yes...my name is Mrs Rach Whadwa......
Angad - yaadaash......(puts a smile on his face) im so happy Kri.....Rach im glad you got your memory back
Rach smiles and gives him a light kiss on his cheek
Rach - agar tumhe zyada chot nahin hui tho humhe jaldi jaana hai
Angad - kyun? Kri....i mean Rach.....koi zuroori kaam hai
Rach - haan humhe shaadi...
Angad - oh damn shaadi mein shamil hona hai
Rach - nahin Angad...shamil nahin voh shaadi rokhni hogi
Angad - what! kyun?
Rach - kyunki jis se Antara ki shaadi hone vali hai....voh mera paati hai
Angad - oh damn chalo jaldi!!! Taxi!!!!
Angad and Rach get in the taxi, while in there Angad steals glances at her and a tear comes to his eye as he remembers the times he had with her.
Rach - driver jaldi!!!!
At the Whadwa House, the masti and fun is over, the pandit calls for the bride and groom, Antara and Sharman walk towards him, the taxi is shown driving fast, Antara and Sharman stand opposite each other
Kumkum - Sharman yeh lo, Antara ko varmala pehnado
Sharman takes the varmala off his mom and smiles at Antara, he is about to put it on her when it falls out his hand, he bends down to pick it up, he is about to put it on her again when
?? - rukjaooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Everyone is shocked, Sharman and the family look towards where the voice came from, they can't see anything as people are gathered in front, they slowly move out the way....and...before their very eyes they find...Rach
Sharman - Rach.....
Rach - yeh shaadi nahin ho sakti.....
Sharman drops the varmala and it falls into the fire, he runs from the mandap to Rach, he looks at her with disbelief
Rach - aise kya dhek rahe ho? yeh main hoon tumhari Rach
A tear falls down Sharman's eye, Rach wipes it away, Sharman holds her hand, he then touches her face to see if she is really there
Sharman - tum...tum...zinda ho...
Rach - haan....(she explains what happened)
Sharman hugs Rach, he kisses her face and both are crying, he holds her hand and takes her to the family
Sharman - dheka ma maine kaha tha ke yeh zinda hai, pa main kehta raha ke maine isse dheka tha...lekin meri baat sunta nahin tha koi
Shravan - Di
Rach - Shravan.....
They hug, one by one Rach hugs each family member, she reaches to Antara
Rach - im very sorry.....
Antara - tum kyun maafi maang rahi ho? tumne tho kuch kiya hi nahin...Sharman hamesha tumhara tha aur tumhara rahega
Rach hugs Sharman again, from over Sharman's shoulder she sees Angad is left standing there, as all other guests left the house, she lets Sharman go and walks to him
Rach - hum kabhi teek se mil nahin paaye...hi im Rach...
She extends her hand forward and Angad shakes it with a tear in his eye
Rach - main jaanti hoon ke tumhe bohat dhuk hua hai, aur main jaanti hoon ke tumhara dil toot gaya hai....lekin yeh mera iraada nahin tha....aur haan tumne jo mere liye kiya voh main kabhi nahin bhool paoongi
Angad - yeh kya keh rahi ho Kripa.....sorry Rach....jaise maine kaha tha..ke mujhe bohat khushi hai ke tumhe apni yaadaash mil gayi aur apno se mil gayi ho.....
Sharman walks to Angad and gives him a hug
Sharman - tumne mere pyaar ko bachaya....main zindagi bar tumhara ehsaan maanooga
Angad - agar tumhe mujhe kuch dena hai...tho voh Rach ki khushi hai...yeh lo
Angad hands Sharman the mangal sutar that Rach had kept in her purse, Sharman smiles, he takes Rach to the mandap and the preform the wedding rituals again, Angad looks on, he has a smile on his face
Rach - thanks a lot Angad....
Angad - hey thanks kahegi tho maroonga....tum bale Mrs Whadwa ho..lekin mere liye zindagi bar, tum hamesh meri Kripa rahogi
With that he turns around and walks out the house, the Whadwa family are very happy, Sharman takes Rach to the mandir in the house and puts sindoor in her forehead
Sharman - i love you
Rach - i love you too....
Flashes of the past is shown, then a photo studio....where the Whadwa Family..along with a few extra members are getting ready to take a picture....
Sumit and Kumkum are standing at the back, in front of them there are 2 chair, on which Siya and Rach are seated, on the left of Siya stands Dhruv and on the right of Rach stands Sharman.....and sitting on the floor...by Rach's feet are two cute boys, Rach sorts their hair out and makes them look forward. And in Siya's arms is a baby girl, everyone sorts themselves out one more time and all smile at the camera...a photo is taken!
The photo is shown....the camera zooms out of the photo...and the photo is shown glued in a photo album, a hand closes the book, a voice comes behind
man - kya kar rahi ho...
woman - kuch nahin yaadein taza kar rahi hoon
The man is shown its an old Sharman and he looks at the woman and its an old Rach, she smiles at him
Sharman - acha photo albums....
Rach - haan abhi tho sirf ek dheki hai....theen chaar reh rahi hai....
Sharman sits next to Rach and both open up the front cover to the next photo album.....
The end......
Writers note!!!!
I feel so sad ending this fanfic 😭 .....but kya karoon..with uni and my other fanfic ishq ki kasam, i rarely had time to update it. But i enjoyed writing this as much as you guys enjoyed reading it. Its not the end of the story...more like a new beginning. Im very sorry..especially to Aman and Shazia u 2 didnt want me to end.....very sorry...but hey at least now you can collect all parts n make a novel 😆 😆 but seriously i loved this fanfic, not only because it was of me and sharman but because of all the response i got, when i first started i never thought people would like it but im glad you all did......neways im also sorry for leaving the sukk parts incomplete......well as i was finishing this off i forgot bout them so please forgive me....i hope you enjoyed reading this and i love you al 😭 😭 😭 !!!!!
Hum Tum....a fanfic by Rachandeep......(mods you may close after a while)
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