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Originally posted by: rachandeep

awww so sweet of u....ab kal tak i will do special part ok?

awwwwww soo sweet of u rachuu......

wowwwww kal spl part........yummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Originally posted by: ankuhujulover

awwwwww soo sweet of u rachuu......

wowwwww kal spl part........yummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

kool...will wait 4 spl. part 😉

Rachu (hope you don't mind that), hey I was around here in Kum Kum forum for quite a while and was getting bored because ther weren't new topics then I saw this one-fan fic-so I decided to just look at it but when I knew what it really was I was so imaptient Now I'm really gonna be a lot more than before because before I was at my Dad's office reading the story till 14 pages and when I was coming home alone on the way in the train, I was keep thinking about the story and when I came home I started to read and finish it-until you last wrote(till your last update till now)-BELIEVE ME!!.....I love it!! Plz try to update a longer one or earlier than before. Thx! I love this whole thing!!

Hey rachandeep, you said that you'll write the special thing today.......You won't believe that I came here evry hour and checked if you wrote the next scene yet or not-really I checked more than 27 times but everytime when I checked-you haven't-really I'm not lying seriously-I promise my God that I'm not lying. I'm not being rude here-I'm just letting you know how impatient I am-there are some people here, I don't know about others but I am, who are very impatient to read your story. Dosro ko satana acha nahin hota. I just finished reading your whole story-up till now-yesterday and as I told you in the last update how I was keep thinking about the story and all today the whole day wohi same halat thi meri-don't know why(actully I make stories-some short and some long-and while making them I also imagine them and when i was reading your story I imagined everything as well-I liked the dialoges and all and so I made a new story-don't worry it's not the same-what I'm talking about-it's something different).

I think so that's about it. but don't get me wrong or anything. I was just sharing my feelings-HOW IMPATIENT I AM-after all I'm only 15 na-not like Kum Kum jo itna intezaar bardaasht karegi.

I really really LOVE the story-THX but at the same time I'm sorry if I said something wrong or something which hurt you. And plus I'm sorry everyone that I wrote a lot!!

awwww hun thts sooooo sweeeet!!!! im realllii tuched!!! sorry sweetie i had gone cinema 2 watch KANK and as it was night shw i spent yday at my cuzinz house so cudnt update but will do asap!! thanx alot 4 ur comment and im v flattered tht u checked tht many tyms.....yep i also imagine the scenes as im writing them and no u havent sed nethin rong im v happy tht u like the story 😃

Originally posted by: rachandeep

awwww hun thts sooooo sweeeet!!!! im realllii tuched!!! sorry sweetie i had gone cinema 2 watch KANK and as it was night shw i spent yday at my cuzinz house so cudnt update but will do asap!! thanx alot 4 ur comment and im v flattered tht u checked tht many tyms.....yep i also imagine the scenes as im writing them and no u havent sed nethin rong im v happy tht u like the story 😃

Hey you did one mistake-I don't like it-I LOVE IT!!-

sorry 4 the delay guys....i spent an hour and a half writing it up last nyt but my comp crashed n i lost everything i wrote so had 2 start again....

Special Part 10

Kumkum and Sumit have just got married, the bidai has taken place and the Whadwa Parivar is welcoming the new daughter in law into the house. Veena does the aarti and Kumkum kicks the container with the rice in

Veena - ab is rang mein apne pehr rakho aur ghar mein aajao

Kumkum does as shes told, Veena sits Sumit and Kumkum down and everyone gathers around, after a while Shilpa comes

Shilpa - Kumkum humhare saath aao

Kumkum - kahan?

Shipla - aao tho sahin...

Kumkum gets up and Shilpa takes her to Sumit room, she whispers something in her ear and closes the door. Outside Rahul and his friends are teasing Sumit, Kul comes

Kul - arre tum log isse chordo, Sumit jao Kumkum tumhara intezaar kar rahi hai

Sumit - ji papa

He gets up and heads towards the room, he opens the door and sees Kumkum sitting on the bed with her dupatta covering her face

Sumit - chehra kyun chupaya? chalo koi baat nahin...tum kush ho na

Kumkum nods her head slowly, Sumit laughs

Sumit - ab bolne se bhi sharam aati hai?

She nods her head again, Sumit smiles and goes towards Kumkum, soon he is right beside her.

Sumit (softly) - ab tho chehra mat chupao mujhse..

He closes his eyes and lifts the dupatta off her face, as soon as he opens his eyes he screams.

Sumit - VERNI!!! tum yahan kya kar rahi ho! Kumkum kahan hai?

Behind him Kumkum, Shilpa and Nidhi come out of the bathroom and start laughing, Verni takes the dupatta off and joins them.

Sumit (angry) - haha very funny, tum logon ko aaj ke din bhi yeh sab?

Nidhi - ab kya karein Sumit, aaj ke baad mokha nahin milega

Verni - haan iske baad tho tum Kumkum ke saath busy ho jayenge na..

They laugh again

Sumit - hogaya? ab niklo abhi!!!

Shilpa - teek hai, bye....have fun...

Sumit - have fun? tumhein tho main...

Before Sumit can do anything the girls run out, he closes the door and locks it, he turns around and sees Kumkum is laughing

Sumit - tum bhi inke saath?

Kumkum - of ho Sumit, mazak hi tha....tumhara chehra dhekne layak tha

Sumit looks at Kumkum and laughs as well

Sumit - tum kush ho?

Kumkum - hmm nahin...jee karta the ke mandap se bagh jaoon

Sumit - kya!

Kumkum (laughs) - im just joking! tumhare sense of humour ko kya hua? vaise aaj main bohat kush hoon

Sumit comes closer to Kumkum and hugs her, she pushes him away and goes to the dressing table and begins taking her eaarings off, Sumit comes behind her and stops her and does it him self. he sits her on the bed and takes off all her jewellery. He then kisses her hand

Kumkum - Sumit...tum

Sumit puts his hand on her lips and kisses her forehead, he then kisses her eyes, cheeks and leans foreward to kiss her lips but she moves away, Sumit pullz her back and kisses her shoulder

Kumkum (softly) - kya kar rahe ho?

Sumit (softly) - tumse pyaar...ab kuch mat kaho

He moves her hair out the way and kisses the back of her neck, Kumkum gets up and runs towards the window, he comes after her and holds her from behind, the song Jiya Dhadak Dhadak from Kalyug plays

tujhe dekh dekh sona
tujhe dekh dekh sona
tujhe dekh kar hain jagna

maine yeh zindagani
sang tere bitaani
tujhmein basi hain meri jaan hai

jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

tujhe dekh dekh sona
tujhe dekh kar hain jagna
maine yeh zindagani
sang tere bitaani
tujhmein basi hain meri jaan haai

jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

(Sumit looks in Kumkums eyes then kisses her neck)

kabse hai dil mein mere armaan kai ankahe
kabse hai dil mein mere armaan kai ankahe
inko tu sunle aaja chaahat ke rang chadha jaa
inko tu sunle aaja chaahat ke rang chadha jaa
kehna kabhi to mera maan hai

jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

(Sumit and Kumkum hug each other)

lagta hain yeh kyu mujhe sadiyon se chaahu tujhe
lagta hain yeh kyu mujhe sadiyon se chaahu tujhe
mere sapno mein aake apna mujhko banake
mere sapno mein aake apna mujhko banake
mujhpe tu kar ehsaan hai

jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

tujhe dekh dekh sona
tujhe dekh kar hain jagna
maine yeh zindagani
sang tere hain bitani haai

jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

dhadak jaaye jiya
dhadak jaaye jaaye
jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak

dhadak dhadak dhadak jaaye
jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

Sumit lies Kumkum on the bed next to him, the moon is shown outside. The next morning Kumkum wakes up and sees Sumit is still asleep, she watches him for a while then gets out of bed and goes to the bathroom. 10 minutes later Sumit puts his hand out for Kumkum but cant find her, he gets up and looks around

Sumit - Kumkum....Kumkum? kahan gayi

Kumkum - tho tum ut gaye

He looks at the door and sees Kumkum holding a tray with two cups and a pot.

Sumit (smiles) - tum kab uthi?

Kumkum - bas, thodi dher hui hai, tum jao aur fresh ho jao main tumhare liye chai bana thi hoon

Sumit gets out of bed and kisses Kumkum on her cheek and goes in to the bathroom, 5 minutes later he comes out

Kumkum - yeh lo tumhari chai

Sumit - thank you...Mrs Whadwa

Kumkum smiles

Sumit - neeche chale? mummy papa intezar kar rahe hoge

Kumkum - haan chalo

They go downstairs, Veena and Kul are at the breakfast table, they say good morning to Sumit and Kumkum, Kul hands Sumit an envelope

Sumit - papa yeh kya hai?

Kul - tumhare shaadi ka thofa

Kumkum - kya hai ismein?

Veena - khol kar dheklo

Sumit opens the envelope and finds two airline tickets

Kul - two tickets to Mauritius, tumhare honeymoon ke liye

Sumit - wow thanks a lot

Kumkum - lekin iski kya zuroorat thi...

Veena - zuroorat hai, aaj ki flight hai

Kumkum - aaj ki? tho main packing shuru karti hoon

Sumit - lekin mujhe office....

Kul - uski chinta mat karo main hoon na

Kumkum gets up and goes to pack, Sumit has breakfast with his parents and joins Kumkum

Sumit - packing hogayi?

Kumkum - haan bas hone vali hai, voh sariyan faraho

Sumit - tum vahan sari wear karogi?

Kumkum - of course

Sumit - of ho Kumkum, hum honeymoon par ja rahe hai, kuch tho masti vale kapre rakho

Kumkum - chee! mere paas vaise vale kapre hai nahin

Sumit - acha? koi baat nahin main tumhe vahan se lekar aaonga

Kumkum - tum bhi naa

15 minutes later Sumit and Kumkum come outside their room with the bags. They say bye to Veena and Kul and head for the airport

Sumit - kitna mazaa aayega na

Kumkum - haan bohat, vahan jaa kar kitni shopping karenge

Sumit - kya?shopping, Kumkum! vahan hum shopping ke liye nahin...ek dusre ko achi tara se jaane ke liye ja rahe hai

Kumkum smiles, they board the flight. The aeroplace takes off.

To be continued

Kumkum and Sumits honeymoon in part 11!!!