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i decided 2 update soon bcuz anku wants the special part done lol

Previously Rach gives Prem the divorce papers but he rips them, she tells him they will see each other in court. Aman breaks Shravans heart, he says he wont come near her again. Sharman finds out about Prem, him and Rach hug. Now to continue.


Part 20

Rach and Sharman are taking a walk in the park

Sharman - tho ab kya hoga?

Rach - ab.....court jayenge

Sharman - lekin i think....

Rach - kya?

Sharman - ke tum Anjali ko bata do tumhare aur Prem ke baare mein kyunki agar usse court mein pata lag gaya....tho usse bohat dhuk hoga

Rach - janti hoon lekin kya karoon, mujhse hoga nahin, uska dil main nahin tod sakti, ab Prem hi bataye ga

Sharman - ok

Rach is upset thinking about everything, Sharman feels sad seeing her like this

Sharman - chalo ab yeh sab chordo, lets get some ice cream...

Rach - nahin maan nahin kar raha

Sharman - meri baat nahin manegi?

Rach - Sharman tum bhi na....chalo lets go

Sharman - great!

They get ice cream, while eating Sharman starts laughing

Rach - kya hua??

Sharman - tumhara chehra!!

Rach - kya hua usse

Sharman keeps laughing, Rach looks in a store window and sees she has ice cream on her chin, she smiles and gets a tissue from her bag to wipe it but Sharman stops her

Rach - arre let me wipe it

Sharman - tehro

He puts Rach's hand down and leans forward and kisses Rach's chin, the ice cream comes off, Rach and Sharman stare in each others eyes until Rach backs away

Rach - voh...erm...mama hotel par wait kar rahi hai, humhe jaana chahiye

Rach goes to walk away but Sharman holds her hand

Sharman - mujhse door kyun bagh rahi ho?

Rach - voh maine kaha na....mama ko.....

Sharman - kya hua Rach.....kya tum mujhse pyaar nahin....

Rach - Sharman yeh tum kaise soch sakte, of course main tumhe....

Sharman - tho fhir yeh doori kyun

Rach - Sharman, maana ke main Prem se nafrat karti hoon lekin main ab bhi uski biwi hoon isliye, tumhare paas...

Sharman - teek hai

Rach - naraz mat hona please

Sharman - nahin youre right....chalo ill take you back to the hotel

Rach - ok lets go

As they are going back to the hotel the song Kitne Door Kitne Paas from Kitne Door Kitne Paas plays in the background

idhar bhi udhar bhi
yahan bhi vahan bhi

idhar bhi udhar bhi
yahan bhi vahan bhi
dono taraf lagi yeh aag
dono taraf jagi yeh pyaar

hum tum hum tum
hum tum kitne door door door kitne paas
kitne door kitne paas
door door...paas paas

idhar bhi udhar bhi
yahan bhi vahan bhi

(Sharman looks at Rach then turns his head, Rach looks at him then turns her head)

pyaar ki raaste aise jaise phool buleya
kaache dhaage se tum humko bandhlo sainyaa

pyaar ki raaste aise jaise phool buleya
kaache dhaage se tum humko bandhlo sainyaa
dil chahe ek dusre ki tamlein baiyan
dil chahe ek dusre ki tamlein baiyan

hum dono kho jayenge hota hai aisa aisa
hum dono kho jayenge hota hai aisa aisa
hum tum hum tum
hum tum kitne door door door kitne paas
kitne door kitne paas
door door...paas paas

idhar bhi udhar bhi
yahan bhi vahan bhi

(Sharman puts his hand on the gear stick to change gears, his brushes against Rach's they look at each other for a brief moment)

yahan vahan kya saath sumandhar paar nahin milta
logon ko rab mil jata hai yaar nahin milta

yahan vahan kya saath sumandhar paar nahin milta
logon ko rab mil jata hai yaar nahin milta
is duniya mein sab ko aisa pyaar nahin milta
is duniya mein sab ko aisa pyaar nahin milta

jinko milta hai yeh pyaar hote hai voh dil kuch khaas
jinko milta hai yeh pyaar hote hai voh dil kuch khaas
hum tum hum tum
hum tum kitne door door door kitne paas
kitne door kitne paas
door door...paas paas

idhar bhi udhar bhi
yahan bhi vahan bhi
dono taraf lagi yeh aag
dono taraf jagi yeh pyaar

hum tum hum tum
hum tum kitne door door door kitne paas
kitne door kitne paas
door door...paas paas
kitne door kitne paas

They arrive at the hotel and Sharman watches Rach walk into the hotel without looking back. He feels sad and drives off. Meanwhile Prem is drunk and is looking photos of him and Rach at Anjalis house

Prem - nahin Rach tum mujhe chord kar nahin ja sakti, tum (drinks alcohol) aisa nahin kar sakti....i wont let you

He throws the photos on the floor and goes to the bar room and drinks more, Anjali goes to their room and sees the photos

Anjali - yeh sab? yahan?

She picks the photos up and sees Rach and Prem

Anjali - Rach? yeh Prem ko kaise jaanti...Prem se poochti hoon

She turns around and looks for Prem, she hears some glass smash and heads towards the noise, she finds Prem in the bar room, she is about to go in when she hears him talking

Prem (drunk) - tum yahan kyun aayi! agar tum yahan nahin aati tho tumhe kuch nahin pata lagta....tumhe yeh nahin pata lagta ke Anjali mri biwi hai (drinks alcohol) tum kya sochti ho, main tumhe jaane doon ga?

Anjali (to herself) - yeh kis ki baat kar rahe hai

Prem (drunk) - nahin Rach....

Anjali (shocked) - Rach.....

Prem (drunk) - main tumhe aise jaane nahin doon ga...tum..tum use Sharman ke paas chali jao gi...(drinks alcohol) nahin main tumhe divorce nahin doon ga my dear wife....never!!!

Prem smashes all the bottles and glasses on the floor and screams

Prem - jaane nahin doon ga....kuch bhi kar ke tumhe rok loon ga....tum...tum meri biwi ho Rach aur tum mere paas hi rahoo gi....main...main Anjali ko chordoon ga, tum main aur Lakshya chale jayenge yahan se bohat door

Prem collapses on the floor,, whislt Anjali has tears in her eyes

Anjali - Rach...Prem ki biwi hai! itna bada dhoka....iska matlab Rach, Prem se divorce chahthi hai...Prem aisa kaise kar sakte hai.... main usse kitna pyaar, aur humhare paas Lakshya.... main Rach aur Prem ka divorce karvake rahoon gi aur Prem ko chord kar kahin door chale jaoon gi

Prem (drunk) - kya karoon? kaise tumhe rokhoon......

He picks up one of the peices of glas and cuts his wrist

Anjali - PREM!!!

Anjali rushes to Prem, his wrist is bleeding

Anjali - yeh tumne kya kiya Prem oh my god

She phones the ambulance, elsewhere Aman is at the hotel lying on the bed, she looks at the clock and sees its 8pm, she has a flashback

**flashback**

The clock shows 8pm, Amans phone rings

Aman - hi Shravan

Shravan - hey Aman, tumhe kaise pata ke main hoon?

Aman - kyunki tum roz 8pm phone karte ho isliye

Shravan and Aman laugh

**reality**

Aman gets her phone and checks her missed calls, its empty

Aman - yeh kaise ho sakta? 8 pm hai aur Shravan ka koi phone nahin aaya...

She remembers the other night

**flashback**

Shravan - teek hai, aaj se main tumse miloon ga nahin, na tumse koi baat karoon ga, tum azaad ho

**reality**

Aman feels bad and decides to phone Shravan herself, he doesnt answer. She gets upset. Meanwhile Rach is at the hotel, she bumps into someone

????? - oh sorry

Rach - its ok

She sees who it is

Rach - arre Tara tum!!!

Tara - oh hi Rach how are you?

Rach - im fine thanks, tum?

Tara - haan teek hoon

Rach - thats great

The two carry on talking until Rach's phone rings, its Anjali, shes very upset

Rach - kya hua??

Anjali - voh....Prem....

Rach - kya?

Anjali - usne apni khilai khat di....hum hospital hai tum jaldi yahan aajao

Rach - ok im coming (hangs up) Anjali ne mujhe kyun phone kiya, kahin Prem ne usse sab kuch bata diya...

Rach rushes to the hospital, Anjali hugs her and cries

Anjali - doctors usse dhek rahe hai

Rach - oh....erm tumne mujhe....

Anjali - kyunki main janti hoon ke tum unki biwi ho

Rach is shocked, Anjali explains to her what happened

Rach - im sorry.....mujhe pata nahin tha...

Anjali - maafi mat maango galti tumhari nahin Prem ki hai

The two girls sit outside ICU, the song Souten from Souten - The Other Woman plays in the background

Maine udhi ishq ki chunar
Jab main naachi khass ke ghoomar
Jaane kiski nazar lagi
Hai bijli gir gayi mere aangan
Souten souten mujhe mil gayi souten
Souten souten mujhe mil gayi souten

Maine udhi ishq ki chunar
Jab main naachi khass ke ghoomar
Jaane kiski nazar lagi
Hai bijli gir gayi mere aangan
Souten souten main ban gayi souten
Souten souten main ban gayi souten

Tujhe mil gayi souten
Tu an gayi souten
Souten souten
Souten Souten

Prem ki peenge badi nighodi jaise lagi jawani
Mujhe pata na chala haai kuchh ban gayi aur kahaani
Souten souten
Souten souten

Hai nayi naveli hai tu ishq mein kaun tujhe samjhaye
ishq ka bichwaa kise pata hai kab kisko das jaaye
Zehar chadha meri nass nass mein ho ho
Zehar chadha meri nass nass mein
Main to nahi khud ke bas mein

Jaane rabba ab kya hoga rab mujhko to bas haai dass gayi naagan
Souten souten mujhe mil gayi souten
Souten souten mujhe mil gayi souten
Souten souten
Souten souten

Ankhiyan se toh nazar na aaye kya hai peed parayi
Souteli thi ban gayi souten kismat kya rang laye re
Souten souten
Souten souten

Loot ke koi duniya meri mujhse hi yeh bole
Joh hona tha ho hi gaya ab hans le ya tu ro le
Huk uthi hai aisi dil mein haai
Huk uthi hai aisi dil mein
Main toh aa gayi aise bas mushki mein

Chun ne ko main phool gayi aur kaanton mein haai bas fass gaya daaman
Souten souten main ban gayi souten
Souten souten main ban gayi souten

Maine udhi ishq ki chunar
Jab main naachi kass ke ghoomar
Jaane kiski nazar lagi
Hai bijli gir gayi mere aangan
Souten souten mujhe mil gayi souten
Souten souten mujhe mil gayi souten

Maine udhi ishq ki chunar
Jab main naachi kass ke ghoomar
Jaane kiski nazar lagi
Hai bijli gir gayi mere aangan
Souten souten main ban gayi souten
Souten souten main ban gayi souten
Souten souten...

To be continued

What will happen to Prem?? find out in part 21!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
wah wah wah mere jaane plz don't get more distant with sharman 😭 i can't stand seeing u two apart makes me feel sad continue soon

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Posted: 19 years ago
wowy!!! its very touching 😭 when that prem gets into jail or whenever he leavez...im goin to party liek i've never partied b4 😉 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
rachuu jaan thanku soooo much....waise am always very adamant fr d spl part 😳

gr8 write up althu pata hi hai tumhein 😆 😆 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Amany

wowy!!! its very touching 😭 when that prem gets into jail or whenever he leavez...im goin to party liek i've never partied b4 😉 😆

awwww sweeetie fikar mat karo.....Prem ka kuch karte hai

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