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Nazia16 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update as soon as possible
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi preet,promo very good.i am soo happy that suku miting.i also driming suku romantick song(my driming song-mere hath me tera hath ho saari janete )i thing this song fit this sechwesion.i hope preet you update veery soon.jayada intgar mat karwana yar.šŸ‘šŸ¼you are superb preet and your idea is mindebloingšŸ¤—šŸ¤—.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Nazia16

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update as soon as possible



m working on the update dear
will post it tonight
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: seejeet.huju201

hi preet,promo very good.i am soo happy that suku miting.i also driming suku romantick song(my driming song-mere hath me tera hath ho saari janete )i thing this song fit this sechwesion.i hope preet you update veery soon.jayada intgar mat karwana yar.šŸ‘šŸ¼you are superb preet and your idea is mindebloingšŸ¤—šŸ¤—.



thanks alot dear......i will try to include ur fav song in this update..........
m writing the update dear
will post it tonight
thank u so much dear
luv preet

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Posted: 15 years ago
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preet awesome updates dear
loved all of the parts
now i can't wait for SuKk meeting
update it soon dear

afreen
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: juhuti

preet awesome updates dear ............thanks alot dear
loved all of the parts....m glad that u liked that
now i can't wait for SuKk meeting ............u will not have to wait more..........update coming in 5 mins
update it soon dear

afreen




thanks alot dear..........i was waiting for ur comment
just updating the ff
luv preet
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part-7


Later that evening, rahul comes to see kumkum.

kumkum:- Hiii rahul, aaj yahan kaise?

Rahul:- Hiii Kimi, mein yahan tum se hi milne aaya tha. Tumne to mujhe bataya nahin par shenu ka phone aaya tha usne bataya tumhari tabiyat theek nahin hai.

kumkum:- are me to bilkul theek hun, ye shenu bhi na. Bas wo nkle me sprain aaya tha but now I am perfectly fine, aur vese bhi shenu ko to har baat bahda chadha ke karne ka shonk hai

Rahul:- bilkul theek kiya usne...nahin to tum to mujhe batati hi nahin.

kumkum:- Rahul, m fine. kal raat ko kafi dard tha par ab mein bilkul theek hun.

Rahul:- R u sure?

kumkum:- yes, m 200% sure.

Rahul:- ok, then lets go.

kumkum:- par kahan?

Rahul:- wo aaj summit ne party di hai isliye

kumkum:- now, whos summit?

Rahul:- are mera friend summit, jis par tumne apni sari drink ghira di thi

kumkum:- what?

Rahul:- Are tum bhool bhi gayi, parso ki hi to baat hai. Wo tumne drink kar liya tha to.....oh..let me correct myself...wo tum us din over-drunk thi aur ussi haalat me tumhe apni sari drink summit par ghira di, uppar se us bechare pe chilane lag padhi. Ek to tumne uski dress kharab kar di aur uppar se uspe chilayi....tum se aisi umeed nahin thi mujhe. par ab jo ho gaya wo ho gaya, aur kar bhi kya sakte hain. tumne kafi pi hui thi shayd issi liye tumhe yaad nahin hai ye sab.

At this, kumkum was staring at Rahul with open mouth, then Rahul again says.

Rahul:- kya hua kimi, aise kyn dekh rahi ho tum?

kumkum:- Rahul, isse pehle mein tumhara khoon kar dun, tum yahan se bhaag jao.

Then without wasting a second, kumkum start beating him with a pillow. Prerna enters in hall and see all this.

Prerna:- kumkum, ye kya kar rahi ho tum?

kumkum:- wo ma...........

Rahul:- Namestey Aunty

Prerna:- namestey beta, ye kumkum tumhe maar kyun rahi thi?

Rahul:- wo aunty, mene to bas kumkum se yehi kaha tha ki isse drink nahin karni chahiye, its not good for her health, bas yehi kehne ki der thi aur kumkum mujhe marna lag padhi, ab aap hi bataiye aunty ji, kya mene kuch galat kiya?

Prerna:- nahin beta, tumne bilkul theek kaha, par kimi ne aaj tak kisi ki koi baat suni hai jo ab yeh sunegi.

kumkum:- par maa, meri baat to suniye

Prerna:- mujhe kuch nahin sunana kimi, aur rahul kese aana hua beta?

Rahul:- wo aunty aaj mere ek frnd ne party di hai aur me kimi ko lene aaya tha. Bharti bhi aa rahi hai, mene usse yahan se pehle inform kar diya tha.

Prerna:- Theek hai beta, par time par vaapis aa jana.

Rahul:- Ji aunty ji.

Prerna:- and kimi, pichli baar jo hua wo dubara nahin hona chahiye.

Prerna leaves from there.

kumkum:- Rahul ke bache, kya bol raha tha tu maa ke samne?

Rahul:- kya galat kaha mene? Now forget all this and get ready.

kumkum:- no, i am not going anywhere.

Rahul:- Oh come on kumkum, look m very sorry, mein to sirf mazak kar raha tha

kumkum:- ok...par me kahiin nahin ja rahi. aur wo bhi us summit ki birthday party me jo us din mujhe marne wala tha

Rahul:- dekho yaar, puri galti summit ki nahin thi, tumhari bhi thi, jab tumhe usse maafi mangani chahiye thi to tum uske saath jhagada kar rahi thi..u must have say sorry to him

kumkum:- I know, meri galti thi par.............

Rahul:- par kya yaar, he is a very nice person. bas gusse pe control nahin rakh sakta but he is gold at heart. ek baar usko jaan jaogi to kabhi aisa nahin bologi uske bare me

kumkum:- I understand, but mein kaise?

Rahul:- kya tum mere liye itna bhi nahin kar sakti................He said making a puppy face.

kumkum:- Ok fine, m coming.

Rahul:- thanks yaar, chal ab jaldi se ready ho ja.

kumkum:- will be ready in 5 mins.

saying this kumkum leaves. after some time they left for Bharti's home.

On the other hand, summit is enjoying with his friends.

Vikas:- yaar, ye tera friend rahul kahan reh gaya?

Summit:- bas aata hi hoga yaar.

Vikas:- par tum dono ek dosare o kaise jante ho?

Summit:- yaar, we are very old friends. Hum bachpan se saath me hi padhe the, phir kuch misunderstanding ki vajah se hum alag ho gaye the. But now everything is all set and I got my biggest buddy back.

Vikas:- I dont know, u r so emotional.

Rahul:- summit bahar se chahe jitna bhi strong ban le par andar se wo ek chota sa bacha hai.

Summit:- hey rahul, so finally u r here.

Rahul:- Hi summit, meet my friends kimi and bharti.

Summit became upset on seeing kumkum. But didnt say anything due to Rahul.

Summit:- hiiiiiii

Kumkum:- Hiii, happy belated birthday.

Summit:- thanks

kumkum:- m sorry 4 the last time.

Summit:- Its ok....but i think logon ko utni hi drink karni chahiye jitni ki wo bardasht kar saken.

kumkum:- I know that I behave bad...and m very sorry 4 that.

Summit:- Its ok...lets not discuss that.

kumkum:- thanks

Summit:- my pleasure. so, what r u doing these days?

kumkum:- I have just given exams of 2nd year and having holidays dese days.

Summit:- that's great.

kumkum:- thanks, what about u?

Summit:- I have finished my studies..and will join buisness soon.

Kumkum summit were just discussing all that aur baki sab hairaan ho rahe the ki summit ko kya ho gaya hai aaj wo ek ladki se itni der se baat kar raha hai. At the same time, we see another two people discussing about themselves. that were Bharti(kumkum's friend) and Armaan(summit's friend.)

Armaan:- so bharti, rahul ko kab se janti ho tum?

Bharti:- mein to rahul ko 2 saal se janti hun. we are in same course. and what about u?

Armaan:- I just know him from two days. parso jab summit aur uska jhagada hua tha aur kal jab wo aur summit saath me aise enjoy kar rahe the jaise ki hmesha se saath rehte ho.

Bharti:- ya, they both share a good relationship.

All this was going in the party and we see a girl entering in party wearing a mini skirt and a lots of make up. she is renuka. but as summit saw her, he transfer his gaze to kumkum and asked her for a dance.

Summit:- May I have the pleasure to dance with u?

Kumkum:- sure.

Rahul see all this and told the dj to play a romantic song.

As summit extends his hand....the music plays.....

Mere haath me tera haath ho sari jannatein tere saath ho (kumkum gives her hand in summit's)

Mere haath me tera haath ho sari jannatein tere saath ho (summit carries kumkum to the dance floor)

Tu jo pass ho phir kya yeh jahan (kumkum places her hand on summit's shoulder)

Tere pyaar me ho jaun Fanah (summit's closes the distance between them and then places his hand on kumkum's back)

Mere haath me tera haath ho sari jannatein tere saath ho (kumkum hesitates a bit but then start watching in summit's eyes)

Tu jo pass ho phir kya yeh jahan tere pyaar me ho jaun Fanah (kumkum and summit are just seeing in each other eyes with a lots of love)

To be continued............................................


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Posted: 15 years ago
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New characters:-
Bharti khanna (played by ragini khanna):-



She is best friend of Kumkum, understands her the best. Very bubbly girl, always ready to do masti. She always tease kumkum about her prince charming. But kumkum an Bharti are more like sisters than friends.

Armaan malik(played by aamir ali):-



Best friend of summit, after rahul and vikas. He speaks less but he observes alot. He understands everything, summit ki har baat bina kahe hi samajh leta hai.

Renuka malik(played by tasneem sheikh):-



she is sister of armaan and loves summit. But summit always neglect her, she can't see anyone with Summit pr summit hi usse door bhagta hai. She is a rich and a selfish girl, can do anything for means.
Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
OMG aweosme part
yaar loved it
tooooooooooooo goood

and luved the new characters
aur renuka armaan ki sis hai
bahi itna acha hai
aur woh selfish hai yeha pe bhi

overall the part was superb
thanks for the pm
mariam
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks for informing us about precao . like both parts continue soon .

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