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Posted: 16 years ago
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woow NAZ.....ur such a fab vm maker.........& now a writer too.....such a multitalented person u r sweets.....wud say one thing only........write soon.....eagerly waitin😍

& yes.....must say u hv put all gud looking actors in one place..thanku for tht😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Haila..
Thank u all so much for such a tremendous welcome to my Fanfic
i really hope that the fanfic is good aur main aap sabki expectations pe khadi utroon
i was soooo nervous to post the Fanfic as i was going to give an exam yaar..
but Noorya and Simmie bahut himmat di mujhe tab maine jaa ke FF post karne ko decide ki
So thank u Noorya and Simmie for giving me that himmat
and all u guys thank u so so much for giving me the motivation to send the Fanfic
waise this is my second FF, i have written a Ff before on the couple RuSim from serial Meri Doli Tere Angana, but its my first of SuKk
all u guys are so sweet and so nice..uff kaash main tum sab se mil sakti aur hug karsakti
a big hug for all u 🤗

@ Sahar (KumkumisGR8) : OMG yaara such a grand comment intro mein hi..?😆 im so glad everyone likes the intro, chalo intro to hogayi, awww sweetie itni excited ho I hope u will like the story..aur teri expectation ki kabil ho meri FF. arre yaar heartattack ho teri dushmans ko, so sweet comment dekh ke meri to hosh urgayi…I really hope the ff is good. And ya I used Simmie and Raj in the FF😳…and it will be multiple lovestories..

and ya Surjan is after Renuka in my ff..😆
kuch to farak hona chahiye na actual story se..and don't worry like u love lamba comments me also love it..so I hope that u will love the fanfic..aur yaar u being the writer master will read my fanfic omg im so nervous and happy..patta nahi achha hain ya nahi..i hope u will like it

@Afreen (juhuti) : awww thnks sweetie and yes seriously..im writing a ff, and thank u so much for yr sweet comment yaar, now im also excited to send the part and see what u guys think about it. And ur right SuKk ke pyaar sab ko pyaar karna sikha dete hain..

and ya do do vamps hain is kahani mein…kahani mein twist lane ki liyee vamps ki bahut zaroorat hote hain..i hope u will like the part..

@Aimen (tsaian): Thank u so much yaara and im glad that u will also read my fanfic. I hope it is interesting enough and u being a writer urself will be such a honour that u will read my fanfic..thank u so much

@Marrukh (marrukhkhan): Awww thnk u dear I hope u will like it..

@ Affu (mirza_ajju) : Thank u so much sweetie..hope u will read it and enjoy it

@Noorya (mdtafan): Ya yaar Finally himmat huwi ff post karne ko, thanks to u, aggar to nahi kehti to shayad main post hi nahi karti..im so glad u loved the intro..hehe suspense to serial ka doosra naam hain right.isiliye intro mein hi some suspense diya maine…yaar issi liye main nervous thi phasne ki darr thi par phir maine socha..tum sab ke liyee phasna wo bhi manzoor hain..and wow u read my RuSim fanfic awesome..thnks for loving that one..that was my 1st ff ever..i hope my SuKk ff is also good..and such a honour that u being a writermaster urself will read it..hope u will like the story..

@Muskan (muskan087): hee thank u Muskan, im so glad all u like the intro and will read the fanfic..thanks again

@ Simmie (.x. Simran .x.): Awww thank u so much meri jaan and ur such a sweet person. Hehe ya yaar finally himmat huwi FF post karne ko, Noorya aur Tune mujhe himmat di FF post karne mein warna main to shayad post hi na karti..hehe ya yaar I love that vm of urs tera saath hain kitna pyaar..i think that vm is the best vm from all the vms that are ever made..i really love it and ya I included u and Raj in my fanfic. It was coincidence when I started the ff I had used the name raj in it aur phir mujhe yaad aaya arre Raj to Simmie ki hain and I know hw much u love Karen Patel, to usko raj banadiya aur yaar raj aggar ff mein hain to Simmie kaise na hoti..isiliye and yes ofcourse my jaanu Gaurav wo to meri dhadkan hain to uske bina to FF adoora rehta tah..mm and me being romantic..baap re..i hope so …ab to wo parts post karne ki baad hi patta chalega..i hope u will like it..i will pm when I post the first part…

@Maureen (maureen100001): hehe ya yaar maine bhi SuKk ff likh hi diya..awww thnks for liking my spoilers..wo kya hain na meri ek buri aadat hain main bahut zyada bholti hooon to jab ek type karna shuru karti hoon to ungli pe lagaam lagana mushkil hojaati hain..thank god koi bore nahi hota…uff yaar ab to mujhe darr bhi lagne laga..i hope u will find the story romantic and all..aur sab ke expectations pe khadi utroon main.. and thanks for liking the intro and ya Sumit and Kk are modern..kk does wear salwaar kameez but also she wear western clothes and stuff in my ff..haila yaar I hope u will find it the most romantic FF in the world..

@Poorvi (sweetpoorvi): Thank u so much yaara I hope u will like my FF as much as u like my vms…

Ok ab baaten hogayi hain to pls read my 1 part of the FF

Thank u all

-Love Naz-

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ok Guys here is first part then...hope u will like it..

Sumit & Kumkum - Tera Saath Hain Kitna Pyaara

Part 1

The story starts on a morning at college campus. A group of students are hanging around on the stairs of the college. A girl ,(wearing a long blue skirt with a white top), also in the group is pacing from left to right and constantly checks on her watch. The guys from the group which are her dost tease her

Ravi : hee chill yaar, abhi 9 am nahin huwa..wo aajayega…

The girl stops pacing and looks at the guy Ravi..

Girl: Ravi..i know it's not 9 am yet..par hamesha wo late aate hain..patta nahin kyon on time nahin aata hain..every morning it's the same…uska sister to aagayi hain, patta nahi usse kyon time lakta hain..

Raj: Lekin phir bhi tum uska intezaar karti ho…aur uske sister to car se aati hain na..aur apni yaar ki to alak style hain…

Ajay: haan yaar,apna dude to alak hain. Renuka.. you know he only sees you as his friend. Wo tumko pyar wyar nahi karta..usne khud kaha hai tumse lekin phir bhi tum nahi maanti…ur just wasting ur time..

Girl: kaun kehta hai ke wo mujhse pyaar nahi karta..dekhna tumsab ek din wo mera hoga….

A guy from the other corner is watching all this with his group of dosts and says something to the girl..

Guy: Arre meri jaan, kabhie mera bhi intezaar karliya karo..i am always on time..

Girl: Shut up!! Suraj..

Suraj: hai shut up kehti ho to wo bhi kitni ada se..main to teri adawon pe fida hoon meri jaan…

Then a car arrives and the girl all excited looks at the car..but instead of a guy a girl steps out of the car. Ravi smiles towards her and looks at her with dreamy eyes and a cute smile on his face..

Ajay: Ravi lo aagayi teri Raksha, tumhari raksha karne ko..

Raj: arre yaar deko na kaise sharmaah raha hain…

Ravi: tum dono na..kabhie nahi sudro ghe..

Raksha comes towards the group and hugs Ravi. Ravi gives her a kiss on her cheek. Raj and Ajay all go woooooo..makin Raksha smile..

Raksha: Hello guys..kya horaha hain

Ajay: Bhabi ab kya batawoon..waise u don't mind me calling u bhabi right...?

Raksha shyly smiling: jo tumhe pasand ho kehdena

Ajay: ohoooo, aisi baat hain..hai bhabi kya sharmaati hain aap

Ravi: yaar ab tum meri raksha ko tease mat kar..

Raksha: arre baba theek hain, kya main nahi jaanti iss shaitaan ko, chalo choron batao kya horaha hain..

Ajay: arre wohi jo roz morning ko hota hain..laad sahaab ka intezaar horaha hain..

Raksha smiling and knows what Ajay means.

Girl: Raksha dekho ab tum bhi mat shuru hojaana innke tarha lecture dene mein..

Raksha: arre nahi yaar, main kahaan kuch bol rahi hoon..tum wait karo..meri itni himmat nahi ke main kuch boloon…wo bas Simmie ne abhi call kiya tah mujhe to maine socha wo aagayi to laad sahaab bhi aagaya hoga, par its ok u wait Renuka wo aajayega…

Raj all excited: Kya Simmie aagayi hain..?

Ajay with a bola look: Tum utna utawla kyon horaha hain..?

Raj: k k kaun m m main, main kahan utawla horaha hoon, wo to mujhe sirf laga ke ke Simmie aagayi to hamara dost abhi kyon nahi aaya..

Ajay: achha aisi baat hain..

Raksha: achcha main chalti hoon…waise bhi mera lecture ka time hogaya main to jaati hoon aur Simmie bhi wait karrahi hain meri..bas aaya tah apne Ravi se milne..warna isse bhi isski jaisi haal..mera matlab hain intezaar karna parta..

Raksha kisses Ravi on his cheek and leaves before the girl can say anything to her. The guys start laughing which irritates the girl. Just as she wants to say something a guy comes on a motorcycle. He is hot and handsome. He stops the motorcycle with style in front of the guys. Slowly he removes his helmet. He runs his fingers through his hair and removes his sunglasses. He smiles towards the guys and the impatient girl. He has the cutest face with dreamy eyes and a smile to die for. He is wearing blue jeans with a white tank top and a motorcycle jacket. The girl angrily walks towards him..

Girl: Sumit… itna late..? its 5 mins past 9, do you have any idea how long I have been waiting? Where were you…?

Sumit Raichand is the son of Omi Raichand the richest business tycoon in Mumbai who has several resorts over several countries and also overseas nowadays. Being a rich bachelor all the college girls have an eye on Sumit. But Sumit his dil did not go to any of the girls..as he know that he is only their fav. Coz of his wealth. He is still waiting for that special girl. It is his last year at college and after that he is planning to go in business with his dad. At college his dost are Raj, Ajay and Ravi..with whom he spend most of his time. Because of his mother Yashoda Raichand's good parvarish he is not at all a guy with ego who thinks he is God coz he is rich. He doesn't show of with his dads hard earned money. He even takes jobs during vacations. He has the sweetest nature of all. He has a big family with his dada and dadi and his sister Simran and his cousin Amit. Su friend Raj likes Simran and she also likes him and they have a rishta going on but Su doesn't know it yet..infact no one knows it yet..at least that is what Raj and Simran thinks..Also in the group of friends we have Raksha who is the girlfriend of Ravi and when their last year of college is khatam they will be getting engaged… Sumits tahu and taiji lives abroad

Sumit: Renuka yaar just chill…u know na I come everyday at the exact same time. Aur waise bhi maine to nahin kaha tumhe mera wait karne ko..aur mera watch pe to ab 9 am hua hain..

And ya Renuka…Renuka Mehta is a girl who is dreaming of being Sumits girl so that she can swim in his wealth. She is only after his money and trying to make Sumit hers no matter what..even though Sumit doesn't pay her any attention in that way,,Renuka believes that someday she will make Sumit realize that she is the best girl for him..

While Suraj who thinks he is the macho man of the college and has always felt second to Sumit has his eyes on Renuka since the day he saw her, he actually loves her but his ego is to big to tell Renuka about it and tries to get her by flirting and in his own ghunda style..

Renuka: I know I know..tumne nahin kaha wait karne ko..par main karti hoon kyonke..

Ajay: Kyonke..kyonke Sumit jaante ho ye Renuka khud ko tumhari girlfriend samachti hain..

Renuka: Shut up Ajay…tumhe kisne kahaa bolne ko..?

Ajay: Arre baba maine socha tumse nahin bola jaata to main bol deta hoon..?

Ravi: Haan Renuka, aggar hum dost tumhare madat karrahe hain to isme bura kya hain

Raj: yes guys ab tum sab sahi baat kahi hain..ye Renuka se to nahi hoga..

Renuka: Tum teeno ko to main dekh lungi...

Raj: To dekho naa..hum to kabse yahaan hain tumhare saamne

Ravi: aur abhi tak nahi dekha tumne humko..

Ajay: arre buddies kaise dekhti isko to Sumit ka intezaar tah..

And all the 3 guys makes fun of Renuka and laughs pissing her off

Renuka: Shut up!! All u three..main tum teeno ko…

Sumit: Arre baba stop fighting you all. Guys kyon tan karrahe ho isko. Aur mera girlfriend..? Renuka, tum sirf meri dost ho.. aur mera girlfriend..wo to jab aayegi meri zindagi mein to main tum sab ko batadunga..filhaal to aisa kuch nahi hain..

Renuka: par…

Sumit: kuch..par war nahi yaar. Renuka seriously yaar maine pehle bhi tumse kahaa hain ki tum sirf meri ek achhi dost ho. Let's go ..waise bhi class ka time hogaya na..aur hum sab ki last year hain to humein class miss nahi karna hain….chalo chalo..

Sumit goes with all the guys inside while Renuka is standing and thinking..

Renuka thinking:..Sumit..tum kya sochte ho...tum kahoge ke main tumhari girlfriend nahi hoon aur main maan lungi? I don't think so…ek din to main tumhe apna banake chorongi..chaahe kuch bhi hojaaye…tumhare saath hi to main apne saare kwaab jo maine dekhi hain poore karpawungi..

Later after the lecture is over, there are all students running, walking through the corridors looking for their classes for the next lecture. Sumit and his friends are standing in a corner nearby a class. Their lecture will start in 15 min. So they wait outside and are chatting. Sumit is telling something to his buddies and takes a step backwards. He bumps to a girl (wearing a beautiful crme/blue chiffon salwaar kameez) who is in a hurry. They bump to each other and her books fall on the ground. She hurriedly picks up her books..Sumit turns and kneels and also helps her pick up her books. She looks up and Sumit looks into her eyes and is lost, such beautiful eyes he had never seen..such an innocent and gorgeous face, her dark long hair glowing in the light, a beauty that he had never seen. She is saying something but Sumit is not hearing anything he just stares at her forgetting the whole world around him…

Girl: I'm..sorry..i'm really sorry.. my lecture starts in any minute and I can't find the classroom. I was in a hurry aur maine aapko nahin dekhi…I'm really sorry

Sumit says nothing and just stares at her…The girl confused looks at Sumit wondering why he isn't saying anything. Renuka of course notices this and does not like it. She wants to say something but Ajay butts in..

Ajay: Which class are you looking for?

Just as the girl wants to answer the question her friend Ashu comes and calls her.

Ashu: Kumkum…Kumkum tum yahaan ho chalo I found our classroom..

Kumkum smiles and Ashu comes to her. Kumkum tells her what happened

Ashu: O ok..sorry ha guys..ye meri dost hain Kumkum. She just joined one day ago..She is new..isliye class right away nahi milti..

Kumkum: ya..I'm really sorry..

Meanwhile Sumit is back to his senses but still can't keep his eyes of Kumkum..

Kumkum smiles and leaves with Ashu while Sumit still stares at her at the corner

Sumit whispers with a sweet voice still dreamy: Kumkum…what a beautiful name…

Ravi: Kya huwa Sumit..wo chali gayi..

Sumit smiles and says nothing while his friends tease him. Renuka not liking all this angrily looks on and thinks..

Renuka: hmm I have to do something before Sumit falls for this Kumkum girl. Kuch sochna parega..

During the lecture Sumit can't concentrate. He only sees Kumkum's face in front of him..her beautiful, cute face, her eyes, her smile that made his heart beat faster, her beautiful long hair, and the gesture how she cutely with her hand moved her hair from her face behind her ears, and her voice..her sweet voice..And when she turned back and shyly smiled to him...At first sight she had created a strange kind of magic. A sweet nasha in which Sumit was all drunk, forgetting the whole world around him….

To be continued

Edited by RuhaanSimifan - 16 years ago
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OMG Ms. VM AND FF MASTER NAZ DI (that's a long name😆😆😆)...First of all CONGRATULATIONS for posting AN AMAZING FIRST PART...Ok ap mujhe acha writer kehthi hain and what are you??😃😃😃...OMG Sweetie apne toh pehle part se hi mujhe ITNA IMPRESS kardiya hai...OMG...Oh you would have no problem meeting our expectations Di kyon ki already you exceeded mine👏👏👏...Apka part padh kar I had this smile on my face😊😊😊...Mujhe bhi Sumit ki tarah nasha chad gaya hai Di😆😆😆...What a start👍🏼...I loved the beginning...Renuka😡 waiting for this MYSTERY man😍...Shurroo se hi yeh Renuka mujhe buri lagnay lagi hai😡...Suraj I like his character kyon ki he is going to bother Renuka😆😆😆...I loved Ravi, Raj (Dr. Simmie's Raj😉) and Ajay's nok jok...they are SO CUTE...I love them for teasing Renuka😆😆😆...Phir apne toh abhi se romance bhi daal diya...thanks for that...Raksha aur Ravi SOUND SO ADORABLE...Their hug and kiss on the cheek...awwwwwwwww...Ajay is so cute when he said bhabi to Raksha😊😊😊...The way Raj got excited for Simmie that was so ROMANTIC😃😃😃...I am loving the feeling of the love in the air in your ff (That's a confusing sentence but I know you will understand what I am saying😆😆😆)...Arre yaara phir toh apne mujhe maar hi dala...SERIOUSLY I WAS FIDA OVER THE DESCRIPTION OF OUR HANDSOME, CUTE, HOTT, SWEET, ADORABLE, WONDERFUL and the list goes on SUMIT...I read the description over and over again...You wrote it SO WELL Di...Dreamy eyes😍...Cutest face😍...Blue jeans😍...White tank top😍...Jacket😍...(Sahar faints 😆😆😆)...Jaise kay ap kehtay ho mujhe kuch kuch hone laaga Di😍...His character sounds so down to earth and I LOVE THAT...I love how he tells Renuka that she is only his friend...maaza agaya😆😆😆...OMG Di apne toh SuKk ki meeting bhi kara di it took me like 12 parts to do that😆😆😆...Hats off to you Hun...Itni CUTE meeting I LOVED IT...I was imagining it😍😍😍...Kumkum sounds SO CUTE and ADORABLE...I love how she was alittle confused about where to go...awwww...Aur yeh kya humare Sumit toh already fida for her...Well can we blame him??...Kumkum hai hi itni pyaari😳😳😳...I am just nervous that Renuka will try to ruin there relationship😭😭😭...Par I understand twist toh hoga hi na...Ok so Di khash ap eik aur part post kardein abhi but I know that is not possible so kal school se akar I will check the forum right away for your update...So please do UPDATE TOMORROW PLEASE...Mere liye toh abhi wait karna mushkil ho raha hai😕😕😕
Hugs for AN AMAZING START:🤗
This is for your ff:👏
Luv Alwayz Sahar
PS: Thanks for not minding my long comments😃😃😃
Edited by KumkumisGR8 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowowow cooll part awesome ff
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haiiiiiiiiiiii main marjawan😍
Di.......kya part tha!!!.........ufffffffffffff ending mein su nashe mein tha lekin mein tho shuru se hi nashe mein thi😆😆..

sach Di the part FABULOUS!!!!.......just love su's friends and the way they tease Renuka...soooo funny😆😆
and OMG what an entry for Su...............hai raam meri tho hosh udh gaayi😳😳......really sab kuch dekh rahi tho mein apne dimaag mein.......su on his motrcycle......apne helmet utar tha hai and omg runs his fingers through his hair.................uffffffffffffffffffffff iss pal mein mein tho behosh ho gaayi thi kuch secs ke liye lekin phir yaad aaya ke maine padna khatam nahin kiya😆😆......so kisi bhi tarah apne aap ko samhala end tak😆😉..

uffffffffff story abhi shuru nahin hui hai aur Renuka ka raang dikhaya😡😡.....but acha hai issi tarah hum bachke rahenge uss se😉...

and omg.........kk ki entry😳..........shooooooooo cute😊....the way she bumped into su and su lost in her eyes😍😍..........ufff kuch kuch hone laaga😆😆...............yaara that part was sooo magical ke kiya bolun😳.....................and su couldnt concentrate in class.........yaar vahan su kk ke waje se concentrate nahin karpa raha hai classes mein aur yahan hum su ke waje concentrate nahin karpa rahe hain chahe voh classes mein ho ya phir work mein😆😆....

hmmmm ab jaldi next part post karo kyunki maine kaha naa tumse ek bar jo phas gaayi tho phas gaayi😆.........aur tum tho hume janti ho we always want MORE😉😛...

Edited by mdtafan - 16 years ago
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Well Done !!!

Di from the first sentence I knew this FF was going to be amazing....

I loved how you actually set the scene at the beginning.....
I love the Guys Ajay Raj and Ravi...and the way the talk about su...
Ewww Suraj.... He reminds me of those creepy boys you see when you out with your friends....
Arrrey Bhootni ke put you tongue back in you mouth 😆
OMG Ajay is soooo cheeky.... totally love that sentence
Ravi lo aagayi teri Raksha, tumhari raksha karne ko....
I could really imagine him saying that in a sarcastic way...
Raksha Bhabi thats sooo sooo cute....
Awwwww and how cute is Mera Raj ...I mean your FF's Raj.....😳
Di totally loved the way you described Su.... Ohhh i wonder who knows about Simmie and Raj
But di it's kinda funny beacuse now everyone who is reading probably know about me and my Raj now...
Thank you.... I'll know who to go to when I want the news about the engagement to be announced 🤣
OMG yeh Renuka bhi naa.... At the beginning I honest thought that she might like Su for reasons other than money.... but I guess she is evil...😡 hehe but thank god the boys put her in her place... I mean Renuka aur Sumit ki girlfriend??

OMG and Kk enterance beautiful Di .... Loved it... We all know Kk is beautiful but Di the way you described her was perfectly done... hehe and who could blame Su for staring..

I actually I don't understand why you need me and noorya to encourage you Di ... Your an amazing writer...No doubts about it Vm master.... I mean FF master...I am totally loving the storyline... I can't wait to see how it develops into an epic tale... OMG and I wanna know if Su will talk to Kk or just stare.... hehe kulla moo style like at Mini and Guarav wedding.... Can't wait to find out...
update soon...
Love you Di 🤗
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Edited by .x. Simran .x. - 16 years ago
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Oh God Naz!!!! I dn't know what to say. Arrey yaar tumne tho meri bolthi band kardi. mare ronte kadhe ho gayi.😳😳 kya kahoo main?????
Brilliant just Brilliant!!!!!! mera tho bohoth expectations thi tumse and u passed all the limits yaar👏👏
the young college feeling, the young emotions..u name it everything is there in your ff!!!
while reading automaticaly the whole thing picturized in front of me😍 and yaar Sumit is clean bowled from the first sight it self.😳 Kumkum tho hai hi aisi😍
Honestly dear hope u got what I wanted to convey. I dn't know how else to tell you that this is just brilliant! Agar main India mein hotha tho, I will take your script and produce this story with Hussain and Juhi 😍 U be the writer, Director everything!!
aur ek baath Naz, U have made Sumit use the words 'seriously, yaar' here. U tell me u purposely made him use those words or? because those two words in real life Hussain uses all the time.😊😳
tikhe now I started my buk buk😛 Waiting for the next epi
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Naz Di...Mujhe abhi abhi apka message mila and I just wanted to say...take your time and update when you can...I WILL BE WAITING😃😃😃...I know it will be worth the wait just like Noorya's ff, Simmie's siggies and vms and your vms...So don't worry about updating tomorrow😃😃😃...I am SO EXCITED for your update though😃😃😃

Luv Alwayz Sahar😳
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Oh my goodness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! naz di ..........main te gaye😍

what a mindblowing start...................totally loved it.............................OMG seriously aapke ff ne to kamaal he kar dia......................pehle to main aapke vms ki fan thi..........and now its looks like i will be ur ff fan too................... it is seriously superb starting.........................i have no word to express my feelings about ur zabardast ff...................its really very nice................

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! college kitna exciting and fun place sounds karta hai.......................but mera college itna boring hai ki kia kahoon....................sirf padhaai-padhaai no fun at all😭😭😭......................mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki main bhi ise college mein addmission le loon😆😆😆....................................btw college ka name and address bata dena!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

the part was superb.....................liked all of the character and their sweetness and cuteness............they sounds really great and caring for eachother............. except................. both vamps😡............. are ye bahut accha hai ki woh suraj us renuka😡 ke peeche hai pada hua hai...................................chalo accha hai ki kkoi innocent person uske peeche nahiin hai..........................becuase she doesn't deserve any good and innocent person..... chalo accha woh suraj uska jeena haraam karega..................................

i hate renuka woh to sirf paisoon ke he peche bhaagti hai......................hate her😡...........chalo accha hai ki su uske jhaanse mein nahiin hai........otherwise woh use ruin kar degi.........................

kia entry thi su ki..........bole to ek dum jhakaas..............i love his character........itna rich hone ke baad bhi use paisoon ka kkoi ghamand nahiin hai.......................wowwwwwwwwwww thats sooooo sweet of him😳😳😳..........
and kk ki bhi entry kuch kam nahiin thi....................... really liked her entry................dono pehli he mulakaat mein takra gaye wowwwwwww so sweet..............and ye kia su to uski aankhoon mein abhi se he kho gaya😳..........hi...........useki aankhein hai he itnia pyari.....ki kkoi bhi usme kho jaaye...........

su ki reaction ko dekh kar!!!!!!!!! i feel like to sing this song😳

pehli nazar mein
kaise jaado kar diya
tera ban baita hai mera jiya
kya hoga kya pata
tera ban baita hai era jiya

❤️

jab pehli nazar mein he ye haal hai to..........................age chal kar ke hamare su ka kia hoga....
su sambhalo apne aapko😆

i hope u don't mind my lambaaaaaaaaa comments
i couldn't not stop my self from writing a big comment
do cont soon
love afreen🤗


Edited by juhuti - 16 years ago

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