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Nazmien aka Naz

@NazNgs

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: KumkumisGR8
OMG Ms. VM AND FF MASTER NAZ DI (that's a long name😆😆😆)...First of all CONGRATULATIONS for posting AN AMAZING FIRST PART...Ok ap mujhe acha writer kehthi hain and what are you??😃😃😃...OMG Sweetie apne toh pehle part se hi mujhe ITNA IMPRESS kardiya hai...OMG...Oh you would have no problem meeting our expectations Di kyon ki already you exceeded mine👏👏👏...Apka part padh kar I had this smile on my face😊😊😊...Mujhe bhi Sumit ki tarah nasha chad gaya hai Di😆😆😆...What a start👍🏼...I loved the beginning...Renuka😡 waiting for this MYSTERY man😍...Shurroo se hi yeh Renuka mujhe buri lagnay lagi hai😡...Suraj I like his character kyon ki he is going to bother Renuka😆😆😆...I loved Ravi, Raj (Dr. Simmie's Raj😉) and Ajay's nok jok...they are SO CUTE...I love them for teasing Renuka😆😆😆...Phir apne toh abhi se romance bhi daal diya...thanks for that...Raksha aur Ravi SOUND SO ADORABLE...Their hug and kiss on the cheek...awwwwwwwww...Ajay is so cute when he said bhabi to Raksha😊😊😊...The way Raj got excited for Simmie that was so ROMANTIC😃😃😃...I am loving the feeling of the love in the air in your ff (That's a confusing sentence but I know you will understand what I am saying😆😆😆)...Arre yaara phir toh apne mujhe maar hi dala...SERIOUSLY I WAS FIDA OVER THE DESCRIPTION OF OUR HANDSOME, CUTE, HOTT, SWEET, ADORABLE, WONDERFUL and the list goes on SUMIT...I read the description over and over again...You wrote it SO WELL Di...Dreamy eyes😍...Cutest face😍...Blue jeans😍...White tank top😍...Jacket😍...(Sahar faints 😆😆😆)...Jaise kay ap kehtay ho mujhe kuch kuch hone laaga Di😍...His character sounds so down to earth and I LOVE THAT...I love how he tells Renuka that she is only his friend...maaza agaya😆😆😆...OMG Di apne toh SuKk ki meeting bhi kara di it took me like 12 parts to do that😆😆😆...Hats off to you Hun...Itni CUTE meeting I LOVED IT...I was imagining it😍😍😍...Kumkum sounds SO CUTE and ADORABLE...I love how she was alittle confused about where to go...awwww...Aur yeh kya humare Sumit toh already fida for her...Well can we blame him??...Kumkum hai hi itni pyaari😳😳😳...I am just nervous that Renuka will try to ruin there relationship😭😭😭...Par I understand twist toh hoga hi na...Ok so Di khash ap eik aur part post kardein abhi but I know that is not possible so kal school se akar I will check the forum right away for your update...So please do UPDATE TOMORROW PLEASE...Mere liye toh abhi wait karna mushkil ho raha hai😕😕😕
Hugs for AN AMAZING START:🤗

This is for your ff:👏

Luv Alwayz Sahar
PS: Thanks for not minding my long comments😃😃😃

Haila Sahar

sweetie thank u so much yaara

im speechless with ur zabardast comment yaar

patta nahi main kaise thnks boloon..

THANK U SO MUCH SWEETIE

sachchi mein it really means a lot to me

im so glad u love the ff

arre yaar behosh mat ho

arre baba entry to grand hona chahiye tah Sumit ka😆

ya maine SuKk meeting first part mein kardi

coz u know na main kitni impatient ho

meri do bure aadat hain

im to impatient aur main bahut bholti hooon😆

par don't worry Renuka hain na

aur jahaan Renuka hain wahaan chainn to bahut mushkil se hoti hain

anyways..im so glad u liked all the characters

i understand totally what u mean by the love in air feelin..😆

i just hpe aage mein bhi meri romantic parts pasand aayega

thank u so much yaara

and i wil update within this week..u don't worry

anyways i can't thank u enough..

love u

Naz

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Nazmien aka Naz

@NazNgs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Shafoo
wowowow cooll part awesome ff

Thank u so much yaara..glad u liked it...😃

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Nazmien aka Naz

@NazNgs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: mdtafan

haiiiiiiiiiiii main marjawan😍
Di.......kya part tha!!!.........ufffffffffffff ending mein su nashe mein tha lekin mein tho shuru se hi nashe mein thi😆😆..

sach Di the part FABULOUS!!!!.......just love su's friends and the way they tease Renuka...soooo funny😆😆
and OMG what an entry for Su...............hai raam meri tho hosh udh gaayi😳😳......really sab kuch dekh rahi tho mein apne dimaag mein.......su on his motrcycle......apne helmet utar tha hai and omg runs his fingers through his hair.................uffffffffffffffffffffff iss pal mein mein tho behosh ho gaayi thi kuch secs ke liye lekin phir yaad aaya ke maine padna khatam nahin kiya😆😆......so kisi bhi tarah apne aap ko samhala end tak😆😉..

uffffffffff story abhi shuru nahin hui hai aur Renuka ka raang dikhaya😡😡.....but acha hai issi tarah hum bachke rahenge uss se😉...

and omg.........kk ki entry😳..........shooooooooo cute😊....the way she bumped into su and su lost in her eyes😍😍..........ufff kuch kuch hone laaga😆😆...............yaara that part was sooo magical ke kiya bolun😳.....................and su couldnt concentrate in class.........yaar vahan su kk ke waje se concentrate nahin karpa raha hai classes mein aur yahan hum su ke waje concentrate nahin karpa rahe hain chahe voh classes mein ho ya phir work mein😆😆....

hmmmm ab jaldi next part post karo kyunki maine kaha naa tumse ek bar jo phas gaayi tho phas gaayi😆.........aur tum tho hume janti ho we always want MORE😉😛...

thank u so much Noorja meri jaan

hehe aur ab behosh mat hona yaar

kahin tumhare gharwale pareshan na hojaaye

aur tujhe manna karde phir internet pe aane ko

to i will miss u so much

so no more fainting

and im so glad all u liked the Su entry this much

and u guys thought it was magical..

par kya karoon jabse Kk dekne shuru ki maine na

feels like im floating on clouds

to dhimaag mein bhi sirf romatic baaten hi chalta rehti hain..

anyways im glad all lovd it

and ya me also hate renuka

isiliye to fanfic hain taaki main uska bura haal karsakoon 😆

aur tune sach kahaan yaar

mera concentration to waise hi ek saal se gayab hain

jabse meri nazron ne Gaurav ko dekha

aur ab to meri concentration lapataa hain

jabse zindagi mein aagayi hain SuKk😆

anyways thanks for loving and encouring me and

motivating me...

love u so much

-Naz-

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Nazmien aka Naz

@NazNgs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: .x. Simran .x.

Well Done !!!

Di from the first sentence I knew this FF was going to be amazing....
I loved how you actually set the scene at the beginning.....
I love the Guys Ajay Raj and Ravi...and the way the talk about su...
Ewww Suraj.... He reminds me of those creepy boys you see when you out with your friends....
Arrrey Bhootni ke put you tongue back in you mouth 😆
OMG Ajay is soooo cheeky.... totally love that sentence
Ravi lo aagayi teri Raksha, tumhari raksha karne ko....
I could really imagine him saying that in a sarcastic way...
Raksha Bhabi thats sooo sooo cute....
Awwwww and how cute is Mera Raj ...I mean your FF's Raj.....😳
Di totally loved the way you described Su.... Ohhh i wonder who knows about Simmie and Raj
But di it's kinda funny beacuse now everyone who is reading probably know about me and my Raj now...
Thank you.... I'll know who to go to when I want the news about the engagement to be announced 🤣
OMG yeh Renuka bhi naa.... At the beginning I honest thought that she might like Su for reasons other than money.... but I guess she is evil...😡 hehe but thank god the boys put her in her place... I mean Renuka aur Sumit ki girlfriend??
OMG and Kk enterance beautiful Di .... Loved it... We all know Kk is beautiful but Di the way you described her was perfectly done... hehe and who could blame Su for staring..

I actually I don't understand why you need me and noorya to encourage you Di ... Your an amazing writer...No doubts about it Vm master.... I mean FF master...I am totally loving the storyline... I can't wait to see how it develops into an epic tale... OMG and I wanna know if Su will talk to Kk or just stare.... hehe kulla moo style like at Mini and Guarav wedding.... Can't wait to find out...
update soon...
Love you Di 🤗
x

Thank u so much

meri pyaari gorgeous lil sis

Love u so much

im so glad u love the fanfic

and ya me also love the guys

and u knnow whom i love the most 😆

ooo so sorry yaar now everyone will know abt u and ur raj..😲

hehe ya engagement hoga to batana

tab main to aawungi zaroor teri engagement mein😃

hehe loved that u called suraj bhootni ke

and ya u recgnized him perfectly

he is one of those creepy guys

ab renuka jaise creepy ladki ke liye

creepy guy to hona chahiye 😆

ya Kk ki khoobsurti to lajawaab hain

to meetin to magical hi hona tha

and ya who can blame Su arre yaar main to khud

Juhi ke aankhon mein gaze karne lakti hoon😆

im so glad u love it

thank u so much angel

love u very much

-Naz-

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Nazmien aka Naz

@NazNgs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: maureen100001
Oh God Naz!!!! I dn't know what to say. Arrey yaar tumne tho meri bolthi band kardi. mare ronte kadhe ho gayi.😳😳 kya kahoo main?????
Brilliant just Brilliant!!!!!! mera tho bohoth expectations thi tumse and u passed all the limits yaar👏👏

the young college feeling, the young emotions..u name it everything is there in your ff!!!

while reading automaticaly the whole thing picturized in front of me😍 and yaar Sumit is clean bowled from the first sight it self.😳 Kumkum tho hai hi aisi😍

Honestly dear hope u got what I wanted to convey. I dn't know how else to tell you that this is just brilliant! Agar main India mein hotha tho, I will take your script and produce this story with Hussain and Juhi 😍 U be the writer, Director everything!!

aur ek baath Naz, U have made Sumit use the words 'seriously, yaar' here. U tell me u purposely made him use those words or? because those two words in real life Hussain uses all the time.😊😳

tikhe now I started my buk buk😛 Waiting for the next epi

thank u so much maureen sweetie

for ur brilliant comment

im so glad i passed ur expectations yaar

im really happy u love the story

and hehe Sumit ko to clean bowl hona hi tah

ab bhala kaun nahi hota kk ko dekh ke

😆 gr8 idea yaar batana kab bana rahe ho

aggar Juhi Hussain hain to main to zaroor

write aur direct karungi

par haan meri jaan Gaurav ka bhi role hoga yaar

usko to main nahi jhor sakti na😆

and haila i thought only me

had observed that

that seriously yaar

wo maine likha kyonke apna Hussain says it so cutely

and Sumit has also said it many times in the track of Kk

main to uske seriously yaar pe fida hoon😆

anyways thnks for loving the part

love u

-Naz-

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Nazmien aka Naz

@NazNgs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: juhuti
Oh my goodness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! naz di ..........main te gaye😍

what a mindblowing start...................totally loved it.............................OMG seriously aapke ff ne to kamaal he kar dia......................pehle to main aapke vms ki fan thi..........and now its looks like i will be ur ff fan too................... it is seriously superb starting.........................i have no word to express my feelings about ur zabardast ff...................its really very nice................

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! college kitna exciting and fun place sounds karta hai.......................but mera college itna boring hai ki kia kahoon....................sirf padhaai-padhaai no fun at all😭😭😭......................mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki main bhi ise college mein addmission le loon😆😆😆....................................btw college ka name and address bata dena!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

the part was superb.....................liked all of the character and their sweetness and cuteness............they sounds really great and caring for eachother............. except................. both vamps😡............. are ye bahut accha hai ki woh suraj us renuka😡 ke peeche hai pada hua hai...................................chalo accha hai ki kkoi innocent person uske peeche nahiin hai..........................becuase she doesn't deserve any good and innocent person..... chalo accha woh suraj uska jeena haraam karega..................................

i hate renuka woh to sirf paisoon ke he peche bhaagti hai......................hate her😡...........chalo accha hai ki su uske jhaanse mein nahiin hai........otherwise woh use ruin kar degi.........................

kia entry thi su ki..........bole to ek dum jhakaas..............i love his character........itna rich hone ke baad bhi use paisoon ka kkoi ghamand nahiin hai.......................wowwwwwwwwwww thats sooooo sweet of him😳😳😳..........and kk ki bhi entry kuch kam nahiin thi....................... really liked her entry................dono pehli he mulakaat mein takra gaye wowwwwwww so sweet..............and ye kia su to uski aankhoon mein abhi se he kho gaya😳..........hi...........useki aankhein hai he itnia pyari.....ki kkoi bhi usme kho jaaye...........

su ki reaction ko dekh kar!!!!!!!!! i feel like to sing this song😳

pehli nazar mein
kaise jaado kar diya
tera ban baita hai mera jiya
kya hoga kya pata
tera ban baita hai era jiya
❤️

jab pehli nazar mein he ye haal hai to..........................age chal kar ke hamare su ka kia hoga....
su sambhalo apne aapko😆

i hope u don't mind my lambaaaaaaaaa comments
i couldn't not stop my self from writing a big comment
do cont soon
love afreen🤗

Afreen Thank u so much sweetie

and i don't mind ur lamba comment yaar

i love it

and the song yaar that is the song i was listening to

when i was writing that part..😆

im so glad u love my FF as much as u love my VM

hehe ya suraj renuka ke peeche para hain aur

renuka su ke peeche 😆

what happens wo to tum read karlena in the future

mujhe abhi khud nahi patta kya hoga😆

im glad u loved the suKk meeting

and ya yaar meri college was also soooo boring

aisa kuch nahi hota tah arre koi Sumit jaisa ladka hi nahi tah

bas padhai padhai aur padhai...

anyways thnks for reading it and loving it

love u

Naz

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coorg.japan

@coorg.japan

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Naz!! No words to explain you as to how sweet and touching your new FF is.
Now i only wish you will give us quick dose soon!!!

Edited by coorg.japan - 16 years ago

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Priya

@Pearl29

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#28

OMG another FF........................i just love reading it.....................the more the better.......................because then i can imagine Sukk in sooooooo many different ways..................

Loved the 1st part but especially because it was soooooooo long which made it better...........o do continue soooooooonnnnnnnnn as i will be waiting 2 know what happens 2 Sukk & Renuka............continue soooooooonnnnnnnnn......................