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Layland

@Bollybiz101

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Awesome Sonali👏 Well... death of Sumit and Kumkum is always very painful to me😭 only wish if u were in BAG 😊

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Afreen

@-Afeelicious-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Wow another ff by u
its going be great and lovely as other ones

i haven't read it yet
u know itna lamba and want to read and finish at one time
so, i will sure read it later and comment

love afreen

Edited by juhuti - 16 years ago

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.DarkandTwisty

@.DarkandTwisty

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

First of thanks for this......it's really touching yaar 😭
the dialogs r too good 😉.....Great job,well done 👍🏼
Waiting for ur more works 🤗

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srijani

@buchuni

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

grtt job sonu....agree wid maureen..u should there as one of the creatives of bag.

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soundsofcedar

@soundsofcedar

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

OMG Amazing Job I loved it😃👏 Even though I don't like when Sumit and Kumkum die but you wrote it in such a terrific manner👏...You really are a great writer Sonali and the only sad part is that it was a short ff but I REALLY LOVED IT...it was very romantic how he married her😭 SUPERB JOB👏

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Afreen

@-Afeelicious-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

OMG!!!!!!!! Sonu
kitna emotional ff likha hai
itne emotional scenes to movies or serials mein bhi nahiin hote
great job......OUTSTANDING..........MINDBLOWING......
SUPERB................
totally loved it....

best part of the ff is that both of them die at the end..........i know its sad they had to die.....but.....it was good.......agar ek mar jata to dosra akela kia karta

while i was reading mujhe aisa feel hua ke mere khud ke body se jaan nikal gaye ho
u really brought tears in my eyes😭
i cannot stop my self from cyring
thanks for making me cry
ohhhhhh mere to khud ke haath-pair thande ho rahe hai
this was the most emotional and touchy ff i have ever read

love afreen

Edited by juhuti - 16 years ago

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cute_canada

@cute_canada

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Sonali,

Wonderful FF. You did an amazing job!!

But yeh kya yaar, I was expecting that you come up with some super cool surgery or something and kumkum gets well in the end but they both died. Kya yaar, subah subah rula kar rakh diya...........😭😭

But you did an excellent job....

Keep it up!!

Sukhman

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ambreen

@-Amby-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

hi sonu

great one

it was so touching

i had tears in my eyes in the end

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noorya

@...Noorya...

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

OMG sonali!!!.....................that was AWESOME!!! AMAZING! MINDBLOWING!!!!!.............................god u wrote it sooooooooooooooo amazingly......i was lost in it!!!!...................................gosh how touching dialogues....im speechless!!....................gosh i couldnt stop myself from crying in the last part............i swear i was like😭................i love the ending...i know both sukk die but the way u wrote it that was the best end for it.....and just for that👏....u are an amazing ff writer dear..keep it up😳