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Posted: 16 years ago
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You've made my day 2day............as there is no KK...............it's nice 2 read ff's on Sukk...................do continue with more Sukk parts..............
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42

thanks alot friends to encourage me and read my ff

next part is coming soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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episode # 6

su is searching for kumkum but kk is no where in hall. su got to canteen, play groung . and he cheked the whole collage but he didnt afind kumkum . them sumit see kumkum who was sitting on a bench and sumit go to kumkum . su see that kk is crying

sumit: kumkum kia hoa

kumkum: kuch nahi

sumit: to yeh ansoo

kumkum: bus aisay hi

sumit : aik baat kaho

kumkum: han bolo

sumit: tumhari ankhoon per yeh ansoo bilkul achay nahin lagtay then sumit say sorry

kumkum: sorry 4 what

sumit: 4 karan behaviou he should not do that

kumkum: ghalti kisi aur ki aur mafi koi aut

sumit: laugh and say vey smart meri bili muj ko hi miyaoom

kumkum : also laugh

sumit: karan nay jo kia wo kerna to nahin chaiyay tha . lakin us nay jo kia acha kia

kumkum: kia matlub

sumit: agar karan aisa nahin kerta to hamain kaisay maloomchala k iik achi larki nay ish collage pay kadam rakha hai.jis mai itni sari qualty hai

kumkum: apka dost kam tha jo ap bi app paploo fit ker rahay hai

sumit: yeh lo app achai ka to zamana hi nahin raha

kumkum: i was just kidding

sumit : acha to tum azak bi ker leti ho waisay poora collage ish waqt tumhara ghun gha raha . tum nay to sub per apna jado chala lia hai: karan ki ragging nay tumhain nuqsaan ponchnay k bajahy tumhain fahida hi poncha dia hai

kumkum: wo shayat ish liyay k apki wishes sath thi

sumit: acha yeh bataoo tum nay karan ka naam priciple k samnay q nahin lia

kumkum: ta kay karan ka impression principle k samnay ghalat na parh jahay

sumit: waisay wo kahan hai

kumkum: kon

sumit: wohi jiski waja say yeh tamasha hoa wohi jiski waja say subah tum nay mujjhay sorry kaha tha

kumkum: sara pata nahin kisi kam say ghai thi abi tak ayee nahin. ap mujhay chalna chaiyya sara wait ker rahi hogi

sumit: ok bye and take care

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episod 7 on page 9
Edited by tsaian - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
hi amien..well u know i am very happy with fc...as u know why..here u have given course of bba to su-kk and i too am doing bba...so happy to know that and lovely parts..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45

awsome work

yar u r too good
and plese contine
i m desperately waiting
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
ops i amm little late bt they r really very well written
Posted: 16 years ago
#47
very nice, we were thinking of writing something of this sort, but had no time and courage. but you have done an excellent job, keep up.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
great work di
hats off to u
and plz continue soon
Posted: 16 years ago
#49
wow what a story!! you should be a writer, you have written very well thanks, and keep up
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50

Awwwwwwwww another cute episode.......

Aimen you have made a Fan for life......
I absolutely love this FF and I can't wait to seee what direction the story takes now.....
I can see sparks between Su and KK.....Hehe soooo romantic....

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