ff: mohabbat ( juhi sangeet preperation on pg60)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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MERA NAAM HAI MOHABBAT
THIS IS MY FIRST ATTEMP OF WRIRING FF EVER IN MY LIFE AND I REALLY DONT HAVE ANY IDEA . THAT HOW MUCH I WILL BE SUCCED
I DONT KNOW HOW MUCH U LIKED IT OR NOT
AND MODERATOR IF U COULD FIND ANY THING WRONG IN THIS FF U PLESE CLOSE IT

CHARACTER NAME:
sumit: student of a bba 2 year
kumkum: student of a bba 1 year
karan: sumit best friend
sara: kumkum best friend
mr amit : principle of collage

this is a chracterization of a first episode

sumit a young smart and a heatrob of all the students of a collage and he belong to a middle class family
its a sunny day in collage all are looking all ready as they had to welcome their joinior students whose first day will be at collage
sumit with her gang is also making a plan that how thwy are going to rig with a new enterant
sumit warned their gang that they should do make fun but not in cause of hurrting any ones feeling

a car stop near a gate and two girl come out from a car . one wear a top and a short scirt all boys looked at that girl even sumit and sumit gang too
and a girl who was in sciry was sara . kk cousin and a bet frind . then a second girl also come out from a car wear a black silwar kameez she wear a few bangle in her hand . her hair was tie abd wear a glasses. and she is none other then kumkum
kumkum is a daughter of a very rich business tycon of india mr mihir virani

all hunks of a collage just starring at sara and nobody didnt even noticed kumkum . sumit gang also starring at sara
and kk . sumit and his one of a gang member karan who is sumit best bbudy tought to go meet sara and give them their introduction
karan along with sumit go to sara .

karan to sara: hi

sara: hi

karan: new

sara : oh plz mr . dont u have some thing new idea to talk with girl . try some thing else and give me a side

karan didnt like her behaviour and both sumit and karan understand that sara is a rich rude girl
and sumit decided that he will take arevence of his friend humilation with a sara

kk see a sara behaviour and aplozised to karan and sumit on her friend behaviour
karan ignore kk and move from there . as sumit here this voice " i m sorry sir" sumit turn around and look at kk .
and in first glance sumit start to like her . sumit sees kk and he said in his heart that i found my life who i had always dream for

coz sumit had always imagine a girl in her dream who is exactly like kumkum


sumit: hello

kumkum: hi sir

sumit: ghalti kisi aur ki sorry koi aur . by the who are u to say sorry on her behave

kumkum: sir she is my cousin

sumit in his mind what a big difference between two cousin any mujhay kia

sumit: do i know your good name

kumkum: sir kumkum

sumit : sir kumkum yeh kaisa naam hai:

kumkum: no sir my name is kumkum

sumit :ok

kk is leaving

sumit: kumkum

kumkum turn her face and asked . jee sir

sumit : plz dont call me sir . aur haan apnay to mera naam nahin poocha lakin mai khud ko khud hi introduce ker leta hon
i m sumit

kumkum. smile and says oh sumit i m going

sumit. take care this is your first day in a collage and here all senior will try to have a fun from joniou

kumkum: yeah i will but u r also senior an du can also make a fum of mine

sumit: haan yeh to hai

kumkum: acha mai chlti hoon

sumit: ok bye and take care

kk leave from there and sumit was just looking at her and says kitni pyari larki hai . isho dekhnay kay bd to yehi lagta hai k koobsurti ishsay shru hoker ish per hi khatam hai
and then he said to him ohay sumit yeh kia hogaya tujhay. yu bhool raha hai k tujhay ajj ragging kerni hai

end of first episod

episod 2 on page 3
episode 3,4 on page 4
episode 5 on pg 5
episode 6 on pg6
episod7-9 on pg9
episod 10, 11 on pg 11
episod 12 on pg 15
episod 13 on pg 16
episod 14 on pg 19
episod 15 on pg 22
episod 16 on pg 24
episod 17 , 18 on pg 27
episod 19 0n pg 30
episod 20 on pg 32
episod 21 on pg 34
episod 22 on pg 38
episod 23 on pg 41
episod 25 on pd 42
episod 25 on pg 46
episod 26 on pg 48
episod 27 on pg 49
episod 28 0n pg 52
episod 29 on pg 54
episod 30 on pg 56
episod 31 on pg58
episod 32 on pg60

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.x. Simran .x. thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awwww Aimen Di.....
Very very very cute beginning......
Su and Kk are soooo cute.... I love the way Kk is soooo pyari....
I can't wait to read more please write more soon......


tsaian thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey thanks simran 4 encourage me
this mean alot
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Posted: 16 years ago
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fantastic start for the ff, do keep continuing. almost visualised the scenes
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwww very cute aimen...love the college track..uff i can imagine Sumit all cute and a hunk and Kk so sweet and gorgeous..keep writing its very cute....looking forward to next part...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh woww the Intro sounds grt dear👏👏...please do continue with your FF as I loved the entire College backdrop😳...Very well written👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowwwwww very nice start...keep it up....👍🏼will b waiting for next😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aimen will read it tomm..too busy abhi just read tht Sumit and Kumkum both are doing BBA hehe..then Kumkum ismy classmate..lol.
anyways..all the best with it!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey that was a great part dear😛
very lovely.................i really enjoyed it a lot
hope to read the next part soon😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thats so nice aimen the intorduction is quite good loved it hope you continue soon

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