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Posted: 16 years ago
aimen seriously yar your story is too good
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after phone conversation

sumit:

mai tumhari kushi mai kush hoon

kumkum: nahin sumit mai kush nahin hoon

sumit and kumkum go to their tarrace

both see a thtuta tala . they both make a wish

sumit: mai ajj sirf tum say kumkum k liyay kushian mangta hoon . kumkum ko uski zindagi mai her woo cheez milay jo wo chati hai . uskay pyar per kisi ki nazar na lagay

kumkum: mujhya to shayat mera pyar nhain mil sakta lakin sumit ko uska pyar milwado .

and they both see a brighten star on sky

kumkum shoked on herself: yeh mujhay kia hoa . ajj mainay tootay hoay taray say sumit k liyya kyun manga . jabkay mainay herbat toothay hoay taray say . apnay bachpan k dost k liyay manga hai.

ajj aisa kyun hoa kay jab mera dil kisi apnay say baat kernay ko caha to mainay sumit ko call ki . jab kay hamesha jab bi mujhay kisi apnay say baat ker ka maan hota hai to mai apnay us bachpan kay dost ki di joi gurya say baat ki

ajj jab kay mai janti hon kay k mainay hamesha kay liyay apnay us dost say milnay ki umeed khatam hogai hai . lakin ish baat say bi zyada mujhay ish baat say kyun udashi horahi hai kay ajj sumit udass hai.

kyun mai jab jab apnau us dost ko yad kert hoon to sumit ka cahera meray samnay ajata hai . yeh kyu ho traha hai meray sath . akhir kyun mai uski taraf kinchain ja rahi hoon . akhir kyun

sumit to him self: ajj tak mainay toothay hoay taray ko dekhker hamesha apnay dost k liyay kushi mangi hai . aur ajj bi mang raha ho. lakin ajj yeh farq hai kay kal tak wo mer dost thi . aur ajj wo mera pyar . lakin meri baqkismatti hai k mai usay yeh bi nahinkah sakta k wo meri dost hai . aur mera pyar bi

summit and kumkum togather: jab bi mainay tumhain yad kia mainay in taroon mai tumhain dhoondnay ki kosish ki . yeh sooch kay kahin ddur tum bi inhi taroon ko dekh rahi ho . lakin ajj mai janta hoon kay ab mai tum say ya rym mujsy kabhi nahin mil sakti

kumkum: ajj yeh kaisi raat hai . jismai mainay apna sub kuch khoo dia lakin lagta hai k mainay iak rishta jeet lia

sumit: yeh kaisi ajeeb raat hai : jismai mainay apna sub kuch pa ker khoo dia. lakin phir bi aik umeed zinda hai

kumkum: aj kyun her cheez badli badli lag rahi hai: yeh kaisa ahsaas hai jinki mai samaj nahin pa rahi hoon

summit: ajj jer rishtay badal gahay : aur yehi ahsaah dil samjna nahuin cha raha

kumkum: mai nahin janti kya mera dil kia cha raha hai

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sumiy: mujhay ish dil ko samjana hai

kumkum: mujhay usay milna hai. aur mujhay meray dost say milwanay mai sumit hi meri madad ker sakta hai

sumit: k ab hum kabhi mil nahin sakthay

kumkum: her raat k baad aik subah hoti hai

sumit: ish raat ki koi subha nahin hai

aur usi waqt suraj ki pahli kiran sumit aur kumkum dekthay hain. kumkum decide that she will tell abt her child hood friend to sumit . so that he can help her

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Posted: 16 years ago
Woowwwwwwwww👏
Aimennnnnn👏
Hats off👏
Fabulousssssssssss👏
Mind Blowing👏
Lovely👏
Superb👏
Outstanding👏
Lved it seriously👏
U r 2 a writer yaar😳
M simply speechless😕😕😕
Exellent And Marvelousssssss👏
Love😳
Annie😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey aimen fabulous the part is really fantastic
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Posted: 16 years ago
Really Wonderful update dear .......... too good .
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi

fantastic part dear

curious to know what happens next

norzar
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Posted: 16 years ago
Aimen dear wonderful part!!!😛..............just loved it!!!
the way sukk taron ko dekh kar ek doosre ki khushi maangte hai....uffff soooooooooooooo cute😳......
and omg kk want to meet her childood friend!!.............ab jaldi usse su ke pass baijh do aur usse batao ke su hi uska dost hai....aur uska pyaar bhi😉
keep up your fantastic writting sweety!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

good going dear

lov ur dialogues ....to sukk pass ho kar bi door hai ....waiting 4 next

keep it up dear

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Posted: 16 years ago
Aimen Di Just beautiful......
I love the way it was written
and the way SuKk were looking at each other and praying for each others happiness....amazing...
seriously can't wait for your update....

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Posted: 16 years ago

Awsome part . i really enjoyed it . continue soon

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