A Suitable Husband | in progress | a Pregnancy Track FF by mina - Page 5

Originally posted by: harisha_kb

This is fun only because dadi is beliveing Abhi can't do this.

Somewhat soothing it is to read this dadi after watching the budiya in the show 😆

You know about my patience, right ?
I may read it agian after 4-5 chapters are up 😆

Till then, I will be happy with dadi you wrote 😊

Nice one mina. 😊

Rishu 😆 🤗

Thanks for taking a peek. Glad you like this version of Daadi. Started writing this before her grand/awful plans on the show. Never dreamed she could be so useless and wrong!! So yeah this is my version. Will look forward to your thoughts around part five or six, thanks for the comment! 😃

Originally posted by: Mystery1

Heyyy Mina ji, I am back 😊...

Prologue was fun to read. Really liked the way you described the way they are peeling their fruits 😆 And Swarni Daasi yaayyy, soo unexpected along with the two Daadi's I thought she was dozing off and what a idea she came out with. First I thought it was to make Abhi jealous then I re-read and all the Daadi's plans is to make Pragya realize they are made for each other, not the other way around right?! So this has nothing to do with jealousy but something else, now I am more curious how and what they are going to do Abhigya...

Iquuu dreams with TiSha/Abhigya coming true here 😊 😆 And imagination rolls with the banner images. Love the banner, all three of them look slay in their own way eventhough they don't look happy in the pics 😛 😆...

I am so glad you enjoyed and mentioned the peeling fruits. Was an important detail for me...I needed them to be doing something and that's what I thought of 😆

They do want it to work the other way around too, I guess I should have had them say so. Their goal is to keep AbhiGya together. I wouldn't say their plan has nothing to do with jealousy, but neither is jealousy the sole aim. But I guess you'll see as it unfolds how it will work 😆

And lol yeah I didn't have as many Iqqu pics to work with when I made this banner, because it was before his latest show started...I didn't realize that he doesn't look all that happy in the banner 😆. But it's ok because his role here is going to be fairly serious. And AbhiGya of course look unhappy because their lives are a total mess! That's from a screencap of one of the May or April episodes I think.

Thank you for the detailed comment Nadz!!

Originally posted by: Mystery1

Great start. Enjoyed reading it...

Pragya agreed for Abhi sake in other words and even started asking about possible groom ahahaaa and the best part was, no one was listening to Abhi, poor thing 😆. Loved how you referenced Ekta Kapoor Serial, it sure is...

In here they haven't confessed love to each other right?! So they are unaware of each other's feelings...

Looking forward for more :)...

Yay, glad you're liking the story!

Prags agreed for the baby's sake as well as Abhi's...this is from the part of the pregnancy track when she was telling herself that her love story wasn't more important than an innocent child's need for parents. So that's where she's coming from. And why would Prags and Daadi listen to Abhi when they have important business to discuss and he's just being childish? 😆 Couldn't resist the Ekta Kapoor reference either, glad you liked it.


So this story starts pretty much right after Prags finds out Tanu is pregnant and tells Abhi her confession was a joke. Abhi slaps her and then regrets it and wants to apologize. However, unlike the soap where Prags thought only Tanu should be allowed to share her news, in this story Prags herself told Abhi and everyone in MM about it right away. (Most of these details are referenced in Abhi's thoughts in part one) So if you can imagine how that would have played out...Prags confessed to Abhi and then pretended it wasn't true, but Abhi didn't accept that. Abhi wanted to confess to Prags but didn't get the chance, and right now Prags has too much on her mind to think about Abhi's feelings. So neither of them are precisely aware...nor are they unaware. If that makes sense 😛

More will be up later today...like a lot later, since it's 2am here 😆. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts!

Originally posted by: hailly

Awesome update, Mina. Loved it.
Ah poor Abhi nobody listens to him 😆. Eager to what dadi actuall plan is.
Continue soon please.

Hi Hailly, so glad you liked the chapter. You'll find out about Daadi's plans soon but gradually. Next chapter will be up at the end of the day. Thanks for reading and commenting 😊

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Amazing start..
It was really good...
The prologue is really good...

Thank you so much! Glad you are liking it. Thanks for taking the time to comment! 😃

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Amazing update...
I am really glad that Dadi and Dasi dont believe that Abhi is the dad of Tanu's child..
Ahahahaah i really loveed the whole convertation...
Poor Abhi he was talking but nobody was ready to listen to him..
Ooohhh the new hero made his entry...
Cant wait for the next update...
It was really a good and actually funny chapter...

Yes Indu Daasi is very sensible in this story and helps Daadi to be sensible too 😆

I am happy to know you found some funny bits in this chapter! Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment. Next update will be up later today 😃

Originally posted by: kaustavi

Loved this a lot. At first I started reading p1 and I thought Dadi really agreed Abhi- Tanu and wants to marry Pragya with other guy. And this must be a jealousy track. But after that I haven't read prologue and realised that this is a plan. So happy that Dadis trusted Abhi. ...Loved the banner. Glad to see Iqbal Khan with Abhigya. ...
Waiting for next chapter.

Good thing you found the prologue!! There might be a little bit of a jealousy track as the story unfolds, I guess we will see. Glad you are liking the story and the banner. Thank you so much for reading and commenting 😃

Originally posted by: chubbygirl

Mina awesome opening
I am waiting for the next update😃

Glad you liked it! More will be up soon. Thanks 😃

Originally posted by: Tisha1313

Dadi's plan looks perfect. You are on the right track. Now pragya and abhi will be suffering in this all plan.. I have sympathy for them.

I am glad you updated it so soon. Loved it. And late evening in according to EST. I also live in Canada, so I will be...waiting.

But now the suspense for eqbal 's entry. Ufff! Cannot wait for part 2 😃

Haha indeed they will be suffering, good observation. Nice of you to have sympathy for them 😆 Always happy to meet a fellow Canadian on the forum! I will post the next part in the evening after coming back from work. Iqbal's character's entry will be included. Please let me know what you think. Thanks for reading and commenting!

Originally posted by: Sowmii_cutiee

Mina u can't leave us in suspense.. I want to know how iqbal s entry would be.. Can't w8 for part 2

You will know in the next part, which should be up in about 20 hours 😆 Thanks so much for reading and sharing your comment!! Means a lot ❤️