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Mysterious7

@Mysterious7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: -mina-

Come back na 😆

Heyyy Mina ji, I am back 😊...

Prologue was fun to read. Really liked the way you described the way they are peeling their fruits 😆 And Swarni Daasi yaayyy, soo unexpected along with the two Daadi's I thought she was dozing off and what a idea she came out with. First I thought it was to make Abhi jealous then I re-read and all the Daadi's plans is to make Pragya realize they are made for each other, not the other way around right?! So this has nothing to do with jealousy but something else, now I am more curious how and what they are going to do Abhigya...

Iquuu dreams with TiSha/Abhigya coming true here 😊 😆 And imagination rolls with the banner images. Love the banner, all three of them look slay in their own way eventhough they don't look happy in the pics 😛 😆...

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Mysterious7

@Mysterious7

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Great start. Enjoyed reading it...

Pragya agreed for Abhi sake in other words and even started asking about possible groom ahahaaa and the best part was, no one was listening to Abhi, poor thing 😆. Loved how you referenced Ekta Kapoor Serial, it sure is...

In here they haven't confessed love to each other right?! So they are unaware of each other's feelings...

Looking forward for more :)...

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hailly

@hailly

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Awesome update, Mina. Loved it.
Ah poor Abhi nobody listens to him 😆. Eager to what dadi actuall plan is.
Continue soon please.

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Amazing start..
It was really good...
The prologue is really good...

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Amazing update...
I am really glad that Dadi and Dasi dont believe that Abhi is the dad of Tanu's child..
Ahahahaah i really loveed the whole convertation...
Poor Abhi he was talking but nobody was ready to listen to him..
Ooohhh the new hero made his entry...
Cant wait for the next update...
It was really a good and actually funny chapter...

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Badbuddy

@Badbuddy

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Loved this a lot. At first I started reading p1 and I thought Dadi really agreed Abhi- Tanu and wants to marry Pragya with other guy. And this must be a jealousy track. But after that I haven't read prologue and realised that this is a plan. So happy that Dadis trusted Abhi. ...Loved the banner. Glad to see Iqbal Khan with Abhigya. ...
Waiting for next chapter.

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chubbygirl

@chubbygirl

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Mina awesome opening
I am waiting for the next update😃

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Avleen ( Cj or sijay)

@Btsarmy

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Dadi's plan looks perfect. You are on the right track. Now pragya and abhi will be suffering in this all plan.. I have sympathy for them.

I am glad you updated it so soon. Loved it. And late evening in according to EST. I also live in Canada, so I will be...waiting.

But now the suspense for eqbal 's entry. Ufff! Cannot wait for part 2 😃

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Sowmii_cutiee

@Sowmii_cutiee

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Mina u can't leave us in suspense.. I want to know how iqbal s entry would be.. Can't w8 for part 2

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Abhi's reaction to dadi announcing pragya re-marriage - priceless😆😆😆 Poor guy kept on talking but neither dadi nor pragya paid any heed to him or his words 🤣 And now Angad is also here - I am loving this already😉

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