Spellbound | [COMPLETE all parts p1] | AbhiGya Hogwarts AU FF by mina - Page 9

Originally posted by: nikki-73

Read the next part...and its amazing..

Abhi is one of a kind seriously...one the one hand hes going out with tanu and on the other hand he's choosing clothes for pragya... poor confused pragya :)

Eagerly waiting to read the next part in which abhi redeems itself.. i'd also love to read a grovelling abhi...maybe begging pragya for forgivenss and pragya not relenting 😃

I never have had much luck writing a grovelling Abhi - he refuses, you know? But I love scenarios where Prags doesn't relent. One of these days maybe I'll find a way to make it work.

And indeed our Abhi is one of a kind. He has a unique sense of priorities. I hope you'll like the next part but even if you don't I'll look forward to your thoughts 😉

Thanks for reading and commenting!

EDIT: I just remembered...I think the closest to grovelling I've ever managed with Abhi is his coaxing in the last part of one of my earliest fics, The Divorce. The banner links to it if you're interested 😊

Part three is up on page one! Thank you everyone for reading, please let me know your thoughts! I'd also be curious to know if anyone would be interested in reading a companion fic for this story involving Neiliya and Rabul. I had stories in mind for them for this universe but they just didn't fit here...😊

Mina beautifully written, loved it.
Amazing ending . Loved see the jealousy side of Abhi.
Thanks for the amazing story. Do write about Rabul and Neiliya

Res :)

Originally posted by: -mina-

Hello my sunny Sanny!! So glad you are liking the story. Glad to know this Chashmish appeals to you! And good to know your thoughts on Phataka and Raghav too 😉

I haven't updated my index in like a year really...so if I have new stories and updates you won't find them there 😕 Umm if you're reading Anarkali, I posted chapter three just before Christmas...other than that I can't think of anything major I posted. I'm always, always, always writing, but most of it stays in my private files for a looong time until it's ready to post so I get confused between what's actually public and what I'm only still working on...😆

Nice to see you back Sanny, thanks for the comment!! 😃 🤗

Hmm...I'll go read Anarkali then. 😃
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Mina, you made up for it for big time 😳 😆...

Mina this is amazing. Loved every chapter.
Finally abhi got a taste of his own medicine. That matured conversation between the teenage abhigya is better than the show's grown up abhigya conversations so far.
Abhi 😡 how dare you hit my raghav. But loved the end so much.

Oh my god.
Atlast I readed tge last chapter minu.
On eating my lunch I checked out time of canada it is 1 A.m
So I preferred eating rather than thinking on that you may be posted story.
But I was wrong. When I opened it I am shocked about u updated the story but felt bad that topic represent that you completed the story.
I opened the story willing and the semma story ( superb story)
Perfect.
Like I wanted jealous.
You did that with pragya-raghav.
Wow but I didn't expect pragya to be with him on library public.
And hurting raghav for vengeance it perfect about abhi that he did.
And I am whole a happy that abhibconcluded the problem finishing they are done with past.
I could clearly make out pic from writing of abhi expression as welll as pragya.
Little I disappointed with pragya doibg with raghav. I think it is little.
But I liked the bickering they did on the place after truth.
Valentines permission seeking from abhi really love it.
The dialogue did breathing is a chance.
Wow superb didn't expect such dialogue from abhi.
But seriously I loved your rhetoric dialogue skill.
Awsome.
And the last making out each other.
Abhi. Once again he made astound by saying better thinks are needed to be at home.
Wow once again a perfect dialogue.
Pragya be demanding I liked it. I knew even you always use like this because you always expected pragya be so demanding with him. Like I do.
Abhi being sorry for his doing I liked that he been genuine.
And he kept eyes on him on the dance. After picture he held her by waist.
Didn't it show now he is jealous before their relationship exist.
And I liked overall.
Superb and mind boggling.
At last may be today I will sleep peacefully not thinking of story.
So thanks for such a story minu.
Love it minu.
Minu minu Awsome keep writing and try to epilogue for me.
Pretty please minu.
If won't their won't be problem either.
Love you minu and kiss and hugs

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Originally posted by: sanya_p

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Tit for tat, we always wanted to see in the soap, you fulfilled our demand. Thank you so much for that.

Dialogue of the fic- "Is breathing a choice?"

Abhi always felt chashmish as part of his growing years at home. I so imagined it like this from the beginning.

I really appreciate the way you tried to make Abhi to come clean so that he will be the Mr. Right for Pragya.😃

Something that left me wondering - since beginning Pragya has been depicted as a very emotional girl, unlike Abhi who is capable of being in and out of a relationship. I wonder how Pragya came out of feelings that she had started feeling for Raghav.

While I do understand the hormonal part but her going to a certain extent (library part) with someone without having strong emotions is still debatable considering her emotional side. And if she had feelings, how could she make immediate flip after meeting with Abhi?

Just my thoughts I felt like sharing with you.

I really enjoyed reading it and was literally waiting for Sunday to come fast.😊

Hey sanya correct.
Yeah tit for tat 😆