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Avleen ( Cj or sijay)

@Btsarmy

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#91

A very amazing story actually you have made full of fun, jeoulsy ,sadness and happiness with each other. 😊Abhigya only have the chemistery with each other not raghav or tanu's appereance with them. Poor raghav what abhi has done with him. Thank god tanu got somebody else.

And you were right that abhi will get what he deserves especially his chashmish.😃

We would love to read more of stories from you .keep it up mina.😃

Edited by Tisha1313 - 9 years ago

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Nora9497

@Nora9497

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Very nice Mina👏

And yes I'd love to read more of that HP. ABHIGYA that will be Amazing

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dreamtoshine

@dreamtoshine

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Oh Mina Gi..

Mind blowing chapter.. I felt I am in the pensive containing Pragya's memories.. Thats how clearly framed it was..

Was awestruck at ur skills seeing how well u placed Abhi's first confrontation.. Not when he saw them at the library.. Not at the quidditch ground.. But in the astronomy tower, exactly where he had declared about his girlfriend.. Hats off!!

When u wrote the below lines.. U saved Abhi from looking like a jerk.. I love you for that.. He is ignorant..but not heartless.. U justified his mistakes in the past.. Thankfully!!

Pragya's own heart was telling her that it didn't matter if Abhi had done the same or worse than she had. He had surely never realized he could be hurting her, whereas she had known the whole time that she was wronging both of them by doing anything with Raghav.

The way he wanted to come clean before claiming his rights.. Awww.. That was sweet..

Pragya's disappointment on not receiving gifts on valentine's day was very cutely described.. And the fact that he gifted her togetherness instead of anything materialistic is definitely the icing on the cake for me.

I wish u write many more of Abhigya and HP combos..until then I ll keep rereading this one.😊

Dreamer

Edited by dreamtoshine - 9 years ago

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Spellbound and captivated with your abhigya.. Truly magical - loved loved how abhi planned their valentine's day with the room of requirement - jus them under their tree in their fav place their garden that holds a lot of memories for them.. Jealous abhi was fun, he was sly and smart like a slytherin to plan on how to break a few bones of raghav!! Quidditch it was for abhi to put raghav in his place!! 😳Aww abhi, poor raghav (poor guy didn't even do much with phataka) - jealous much, Abhi?😆 Totally loved the possessive streak of abhi, the convo - the suppressed anger to not vent on chasmish when he was summoned by the owl - but also loved how he didn't think twice about calling it off with tanu but also went a step ahead and unite -TaKhil.. His apology to chasmish was sweet for putting her through seeing him with tanu although he didnt do it intentionally.. Chasmish-abhi banter was cute... Its like magic seeing them, defo a start for their future! Lovely fic, totally enjoyed reading it!! Hats off for bringing abhigya to Hogwarts!! Is abhigya's next destination Hookup?

Edited by frenzyy - 9 years ago

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sweetysathya

@sweetysathya

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Mina di... this is awesome di

When i started to read this story i thought abhi is going to hurt pragya and then in the next chapter he hurted her and in the last chapter he apologised to her. Nice to see abhi having his own treatment to others. So nice to see pragya and raghav together. She is not deliberately want to kiss raghav to make abhi jealous. It just happens. Its really nice to see pragya straightforwardly asking abhi about tanu immediately. Unlike the soap you made her stand on her own feet. She is behaving what a normal girl wants and feels disappointed when abhi is cheating on her.

But she comes out of it and handle the situation very delicately. That is so nice of pragya. You nailed her character(at the begining of the show). Its a nice read di. Just now i read it and commenting about it. Please pm me when u update any story. Because i maynot log on until i feel it. I am eagerly waiting for ur other stories di. Pls pls pls update it.

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Ayesha

@NasreenAyesha

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Nora9497
Very nice Mina👏
And yes I'd love to read more of that HP. ABHIGYA that will be Amazing

Yeah nora.
Even I wanting more HP. Abhigya 😳

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: hailly
Mina beautifully written, loved it.
Amazing ending . Loved see the jealousy side of Abhi.
Thanks for the amazing story. Do write about Rabul and Neiliya

Thank you so much hailly! 😳

Glad you enjoyed the ending. I definitely hope to write that Rabul & Neiliya story, good to know you would be interested. Thank you for reading and commenting!😳

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: -Sunkissed

Hmm...I'll go read Anarkali then. 😃
😃

Be sure to let me know what you thought of it 😉 😃

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Mystery1
Mina, you made up for it for big time 😳 😆...
My favourite...

Is breathing a choice? ...

This blew me away, imagine Pragya, she was definitely flying high...

Loved his reaction to Raghav 😆

Will unres more soon...wait for me...

Heehee glad that line had the desired impact!! And also happy you liked his method of dealing with Raghav 😉 Waiting waiting!! Come back with lots more ok 😃 😛

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: vlhs12993
Mina this is amazing. Loved every chapter.
Finally abhi got a taste of his own medicine. That matured conversation between the teenage abhigya is better than the show's grown up abhigya conversations so far.
Abhi 😡 how dare you hit my raghav. But loved the end so much.

Yay! So happy you liked it. Thank you so much for your thoughts. I do like a mature AbhiGya...show AbhiGya has the potential, though they may never reach it 😛

And what Abhi did to Raghav is actually astonishingly vicious from a Muggle point of view...but since magic heals bones and bruises so much more easily, I don't know if either he or Raghav would have found it as violent as you and I do! I know weird thought...but yeah. Thank you so much for reading and commenting, I'm really glad that you enjoyed this story!