Ravishing the Rockstar - An Abhigya OS

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Miss.M

@Miss.M

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Rani! Omg I loved it!

Res the rest...i read it while half asleep and it was still hot...so I'm going to read it again when I'm slightly more awake and uunres.

Love you for posting it! Wow!

Okay Res

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TeluguAmmayi

@TeluguAmmayi

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Res..
Unres...

Wow !! Excellent !!
The way u wrote about her feelings when he was in the concert was too good..
Bold and beautiful pragya.. Aww.. I love her ...

The green room Thing was hot..

Thanks for writing this.. 👏 I am going to read it again 😊

Edited by harisha_kb - 10 years ago

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x-Ri-Ri-x

@x-Ri-Ri-x

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

This was excellent!! Absolutely loved how sexy Pragya was! You've written this so well, and I love how you portrayed the characters ! Well done xx

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: adyaa
Hi,, to amazing ... .well biggest fannn ... ...awww... Well I love this BOLD Pragya 😉Wish to see in the show ,,,, would love to rad more frm u ...

Thank you Adyaa for reading! Glad you liked this new avatar of Pragya. 😊 You can check out my index if you want to read more 😳

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: kdsubs
Oh my god Rani!! I was slammed with work and MIA for days, only to come back to this utterly ravishing piece of work. (I don't mind more such crazy work days if i can always come back to awesome writings like this one 😉).

That had to be one amazing concert (I mean the one you heard - will check the album out. Thank you). Not a big fan of attending live concerts, so i haven't experienced the in-the-moment crowd craze (which is precisely why i don't attend concerts). But i totally get that moment of Pragya's when the music was in her and she didn't know if what she was feeling was from the beat or from something else. Or both.

You know, both as a reader as well as a writer, i maintain that sex is a very powerful tool in the craft of writing. But i am not a fan of smut for the sake of it, as we get so often. But when i read something like this piece, or your other one (Vulnerable) - now these are perfect examples of using the sexual act to tell the story.

Wonderfully written. Thank you for sharing.

Wow thank you Kat, this is really a compliment! But for my part I'll wish you aren't often slammed with work. 😆

Yes check out the albums, this concert was actually at my college and a very sedate, academic crowd, so no crazy head-banging and sweat-spraying. 😆 But sitting in my American college, hearing Carnatic ragas from an electric guitar, somehow it moved me so much. And I was so aware of how I was one of the only people in the audience who was getting moved to that extent (because of my cultural origins)...idk somehow that feeling of cultural identity transformed into this fic 😆😳

Thank you for your comment on the sex. I personally don't care much for sex without a strong emotional or narrative foundation either so I'm glad to learn I succeeded in my endeavor.

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: simsim25
RES! YAY RANI, YOUR BACK WITH A STORY!! <3
Unres! Wow! Rani the start with Pragya's thoughts was great, beautifully written and then Pragya's boldness as Abhi arrives, great work Rani! The way you write is fantastic! 👏

Hi Simi! Thank you so much! 😳

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: -mina-
Yay :D

Thank you ji! 😉😃

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: indi
Ravishing the Rockstar!!! How appropriate a title!!!!

Mind blowing ... so beautifully scripted and tastefully done to reflect the beauty and depth of their feelings for each other!!! Powerful writing indeed 👏!!!!

Thank you!!!!

Thank you indi! The credit for the title goes to Mina actually because I was going to title it something else and she convinced me to title it thus.

Thank you so much, I'm happy you found it tasteful and emotional - that was always meant to be the foundation of all of this.

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: kubare
Rani...beautiful beautiful beautiful...it was just mind blowing-ly awesome...

The way you described her feelings...the way she felt and her wanting to be with him in that space...just awesome

A very apt title and loved it...the whole sensuality of it...was just perfect...blend of her emotions taking over...and sex is a way to shown one s feelings and emotions with out words...beautifully done...loved it..

Thank you so much Krish! 😃 I'm glad the sex and feelings worked well together for you. Actually like I mentioned before the credit for the title partly goes to Mina and partly to another fic I'm working on where Pragya reads romance novels with ridiculously alliterative titles. 😆

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sudanindia2014
Rani ..I always love how you describe the emotions behind the desire .I always love the " mature scenes" you wrote because you built up the moment so well from the start to the end and it is never just a physical act it is just like how you described it here a symphony ..The scene it self if written with anonymous couple is worth reading so when the couple is Abhi and Pragya, Rockstar and chashmish fuggy ..the couple we love very much and dream about their love and romance everyday,, it become 100 times better and 1000 degree hotter
Thanks Rani ..always waiting to read for you it is granted that I will not be dissapointed

Thank you so much Nuha for your beautiful comment - symphony is really what I was trying to get at and I'm so happy you used that word. I always try to think up a strong foundation below any sex scene as to why it is there so it's very gratifying when the underlying emotions come out through the smut. 😃

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