Abhigya OS Trilogy - Inner Moments

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sudanindia2014

@sudanindia2014

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Min I just saw it and I was so happy to know the all 3 are already posted and I enjoyed reading them so much specially the first one I think you know why do not you ? to know what is going inside Abhi's head is something I will always enjoy in the show and in fictions and you gave us a big piece of that here ..I'm so glad the girls talked you into posting it I really loved it

P.S is it inappropriate to take this chance and ask you about the black anarkali update and also your old one about Abhi and Pragya met each other in the school as kids..the last update was Abhi's birthday and Pragya and Purab bought him a gitar he was wishing for as a gift ..I loved it so much and I can not let go till now ..so any hopes?

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@kubare

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Min Loved it loved it loved it!!!

Beauty : Loved how you described so beautifully how Pragya had effected him no matter what he said or wanted to do..his possessiveness...his jealousy...his knowing her ...believing her and wanting to know her intimately...beautifully expressed with such subtly.👏

And best of all his irritation with her show of skin and wearing the Lengha thats showed more then he ever saw..😆😆😆courtesy himself really...😆😆😆

And best of all finding any reason to stop what he started...

Conflict: Pragya and her inner conflict ...beautifully..no brilliantly described...Her conflict with marrying Suresh..Suresh agreeing to marry her...them being innocent of the given crime...the helplessness of not being able to prove her innocence, the conflict with wearing something so revealing but doing it because he wanted it so..and the emptiness of not having the Mangalsutra and no other filling that emptiness...👏

Desire: Both feeling it...her wanting it him wanting it too...loved how you showed him stopping it as there was so much that needed to be cleared in his mind and between them too...👏

Min awesome all three parts...and thanks for posting so we could read it too...😃

P.S...Like Nuha want to know when you are updating the other fics of yours...