Abhigya OS Trilogy - Inner Moments - Page 3

Originally posted by: sudanindia2014

Min I just saw it and I was so happy to know the all 3 are already posted and I enjoyed reading them so much specially the first one I think you know why do not you ? to know what is going inside Abhi's head is something I will always enjoy in the show and in fictions and you gave us a big piece of that here ..I'm so glad the girls talked you into posting it I really loved it

P.S is it inappropriate to take this chance and ask you about the black anarkali update and also your old one about Abhi and Pragya met each other in the school as kids..the last update was Abhi's birthday and Pragya and Purab bought him a gitar he was wishing for as a gift ..I loved it so much and I can not let go till now ..so any hopes?

Originally posted by: kubare

Min Loved it loved it loved it!!!

Beauty : Loved how you described so beautifully how Pragya had effected him no matter what he said or wanted to do..his possessiveness...his jealousy...his knowing her ...believing her and wanting to know her intimately...beautifully expressed with such subtly.👏

And best of all his irritation with her show of skin and wearing the Lengha thats showed more then he ever saw..😆😆😆courtesy himself really...😆😆😆

And best of all finding any reason to stop what he started...

Conflict: Pragya and her inner conflict ...beautifully..no brilliantly described...Her conflict with marrying Suresh..Suresh agreeing to marry her...them being innocent of the given crime...the helplessness of not being able to prove her innocence, the conflict with wearing something so revealing but doing it because he wanted it so..and the emptiness of not having the Mangalsutra and no other filling that emptiness...👏

Desire: Both feeling it...her wanting it him wanting it too...loved how you showed him stopping it as there was so much that needed to be cleared in his mind and between them too...👏

Min awesome all three parts...and thanks for posting so we could read it too...😃

P.S...Like Nuha want to know when you are updating the other fics of yours...

Min it was beautifully written
I have a preference for Inner beauty
Abhi was affected by Pragya presence
I loved how you described Pragya with Abhi's words ..
It was fabulous

This trilogy is so intricately woven MinMin. I am in love! I adore the way you spun the tale and brought in the different PoVs - his, hers and theirs. You have no clue what that means for me. Too much info, but i am gonna dump it on you anyway 😊. I am writing a novel with the same structure - 3 parts, his, hers, theirs. And i have been nervous to see how it plays out. So i am so very thrilled to read your trilogy and see the same structure, albeit on a smaller scale.

Loved how you explored Abhi and Pragya's psyches on that one fateful night. His acknowledgement of her innocence and slow realization of her inherent grace and beauty that has already held him captive. Her bone deep insecurities, about herself, her looks, her place in his life. And yet how she decides to just get on with it, his way, because that is what he wants. And their relief at having successfully cancelled the dreaded wedding, only to finally find solace in each other's arms.

Lovely read. And thank you for sharing.

Wonderful OS trilogy MMM! I loved how the POVs converging mimicked Abhigya themselves coming together and the meeting of their minds (and hopefully in the future their bodies 😆😉). I was happy in the last OS that Abhi realized that he had been so unfair to her and decides to be fair by talking things out. I would ask you to continue because I want to read more of your writing but no, this is perfect as it is. 😊

MINMINMEHRA!!!!