OS : Breakdown part 3 updated (pg 5) Completed

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This OS refers to the acid attack and followed kidnapping track. Aliya and Tanu will be exposed while Abhi will be broken and end his relation with Aliya and throw out Tanu in jail. Pragya will know Tabhi's marriage.

New character
Pia : Tanu's elder sister, who never got love from her parents because of her working at NGO instead of model, even though the treatment she got from her family she is still concerned about her sister's better future, college friend of Abhi

Pragya : What? (shocked)

Abhi : I know I should have told you this earlier but I never got a chance

Pragya : Chance or you thought I would have told Dadi about it

Abhi : No its not that

Pragya : I know you more than yourself, but don't worry I will convince dadi this time

Dadi overhears everything and gets to know the whole truth. She faints.

Pragya : Dadi. are you okay

Dadi : pragya what is this? how can you agree for this marriage

Pragya : Dadi please, don't say no, you know he lived for your happiness

Dadi : If he did he would have told me the truth before

Pragya : he knew if he told you truth you would be hurt

Dadi : how much justify him but I will not accept this marriage

Pragya : dadi please, for my sake, for your Abhi (cries), you know from childhood you and Aliya are his happiness, I might never be able to make place in his heart but he will never be happy without your blessing

Dadi puts her hand on Pragya's hand

Dadi : I am sorry, I am not able to do anything for you

Pragya : Please don't, I want to thank you for bringing me in this house and Abhi's life, I will never repay for the love you gave me,

Dadi : how will you live alone?

Pragya : I am taking all memories with me and live with it, but please promise me you will stay strong like this and not become weak in front of Abhi

Dadi : I promise you beta, but that girl will never bring happiness in my Abhi's life nor this family

Pragya : But his happiness is with her, I am sure he will be very happy with her

Pragya goes to her room and controls her tears.

Abhi : did you talk to dadi

Pragya : I did, she agreed for it

Abhi : what are you saying? are you serious

Pragya : you can go and ask dadi,

Abhi : by the way will you miss me after you leave

Pragya : why should I miss you? i know you are joking, you will enjoy with your tanu and not miss me

Abhi : I am serious I will miss you fuggy

Pragya : Instead of missing me, why don't you focus on your marriage, i have a condition

Abhi : now what is it

Pragya : can we divorce after Bulbul's marriage

Abhi : Fine, don't worry about it

Purab and Bulbul gets to know about Abhi and Tanu's marriage

Tanu : You lost the challenge Bulbul

Bulbul : what do you mean

Tanu : I am getting married to Abhi

Purab : how should we trust you

Tanu : Then go and ask your Pragya di

Bulbul : I don't believe di hid such a big thing for us

Purab and Bulbul gets angry on Pragya

Pragya : Enough both of you (shouts)

Bulbul : You are shouting at me for no reason

Pragya : I have finalized my decision

Bulbul : You know what I can do

Pragya : Now you both listen to me carefully, if you both back out from this marriage or if you tell anything to Abhi then you will see me dead

Purab and Bulbul gets shocked hearing it

Purab : one second, who are you lying to, yourself

Pragya : I know what I am doing, from now i don't want to discuss this topic anymore, I will convince ma (leaves)

Bulbul : Purab we have to do something

Purab : No, we will not do anything this time

Bulbul : you mean we should let them separate

Purab : its their life, they are not kids, they are married, it they are destined together then nobody can separate them

Pragya : Its better you focus on your marriage now, get ready we are going out to mall, today is your engagement

Mehra house

Tanu : Aliya, why are you crying

Aliya : Purab is always praising that Bulbul , he thinks she is the most beautiful girl

Tanu : how about if we ruin that beauty

Aliya : what

Tanu : burn that beauty with acid then she will never be able to face anybody

Aliya : what if she gets more sympathy from Purab

Tanu : as far as I know, boys like more outer beauty, and you know your Purab more

Aliya : No we can't do this

Tanu : Don't worry nobody will suspect us

Tanu's parents come to Mehra house. (Roma and Shashank)

Roma : So what have you decided

Abhi : Aunty actually, we can start preparation after Purab's wedding, till then our divorce procedure can start

Roma signals to go and take blessing from Dadi.

Abhi : Thank you dadi

Tanu : dadi, you agreed to our marriage

Dadi : I agreed for Pragya's sake and abhi's happiness not for you, abhi I will give you blessing but she will never be able to win my heart and I will not accept her by heart

Tanu and Aliya gets to know about Pragya and Bulbul going to mall for shopping.

Aliya : There they are

Tanu signals somebody to follow them,

Pragya and Bulbul looks at some dresses and goes out of mall. Pragya sees somebody behind Bulbul, when the goon tries to throw acid Pragya pushes Bulbul away as Pragya's hands get burned. She shouts out loud,

Bulbul : Di, are you okay

Pragya gets unconscious while Neil comes to their help

Bulbul : You?

Neil ; Don't worry, i will drop you at hospital

Neil drops both of them to hospital. Bulbul calls Purab at hospital.

Bulbul : Thanks

Neil : Its okay, let me know if you need anything (leaves)

Purab : Bulbul, what happened to di

Bulbul ; doctors are checking

Tanu : Alia, how could this happen

Alia : I don't believe this, I told you before now if anybody comes to know then

Neil claps seeing the master plan.

Tanu : You ?

Neil : I must say what a plan but so sad that it ruined someone else's face, I will not spare you both, i have proof against you

Aliya : Are you not happy that your Bulbul got saved

Neil : what do you mean

Alia: I mean you don't want revenge for your insult Arora family did

Neil : what can i do about it now

Alia : I have a deal for you, today is Bulbul's engagement ,and we want the same, break it

Neil : but how?

Purab : Acid?

Doctor : her hand is half burnt, she is unconscious because of trauma

Bulbul : but she will get okay na

Doctor : she will be fine, but she needs complete rest, you can take home in few hours

In few hours Pragya regains consciousness. She behaves completely normal as if nothing happened

Bulbul : are you okay

Pragya ; I am fine, why are we here, we need to make arrangement

Purab ; No way you need rest,

Pragya : I am completely okay, lets go

Bulbul shouts at Pragya.

Bulbul : what are you made up of ? you are behaving as if nothing happened, be quiet

Pragya : you are worrying for no reason

Bulbul gets worried seeing her sister's condition

Mehra house

Pia ; I am ashamed to call you my friend Abhi,

Abhi : what are you saying

Pia : do you know the meaning of breaking this marriage, you will get married and settle down, but this society will never let this girl leave in peace

Abhi : I am leaving her by her consent

Pia : look I don't know much about her but she might be divorcing for your happiness, if there was another girl like me I would have never let that happen

Abhi : you are saying inspite of being Tanu's sister

Later in the evening everybody gathers for the engagement. Pragya sees her wound and tears falls from her eyes but decides to stay strong for everybody. She covers the injured part with her sleeve.

Dasi : Purab I know you are not able to take your eyes off from her but control till marriage

Purvi ; By the way jiju, don't put ring on somebody's else hand

Bulbul : Shut up he will never do it

After the ring engagement Bulbul goes out for a while suddenly lights go off. Somebody in the dark put chloroform on somebody's mouth. Lights turn on. Alia and Tanu thinks their plan worked not knowing bulbul was outside. The goon informs them about the kidnapping. Both gets shocked when Bulbul comes in.

Tanu : if she is here then who they took

Aliya : what are you staring, go find who they kidnapped,

Tanu : but who is missing

Bulbul : Ma, where is di

Sarla : I don't know she might be around

Tanu : did they kidnap Pragya instead of her,

Alia : I think you are right, she is not the one here now

The goons takes Pragya to an old factory. Neil removes the cloth and gets shocked when he sees Pragya.

Neil : who did you bring, I gave you the pictured

Goon : but I was standing behind her, i don't how suddenly how she changed in the dark

Neil : its okay, I will still have chance to revenge

Mehra house

Bulbul : Jiju, di is not in the whole house

Abhi : are you sure? did you look everywhere

Purab : but where can she go

Purab and Abhi goes outside and finds Pragya's bracelet.

Guard: I saw the car taking madam this way

Tanu tries to divert Abhi's mind but does not succeed

Abhi, Purab and Bulbul goes to find Pragya. They gets to know her whereabouts when Neil calls them there.

Neil : Hello Pragya ji

Pragya : You? how dare you brought me here

Neil : I wonder how you always come in your sister's way, all the plans made for bulbul but you get the benefit, well why wouldn't you,after all people always chose her instead of you

Pragya : did you kidnap me to say all this nonsense

Neil : You always come in my way

Bulbul comes there and slaps him hardly.

Bulbul : So this is your real face

Neil : No, actually I sent these goons to bring you but your sister always mess my plan, i wonder how her husband tolerate her

Abhi punches him on his face and starts beating him

Abhi : what did you say? I think I lacked in beating you up that day, I should have gave you more reward that day,

Neil hits him but abhi continues to beat him

Abhi : how dare you talk to her like that

Purab : Abhi leaves him, police is here

In process Pragya gets injured when the goon hits her injured part of hand. Police comes and arrests the corporator. Abhi takes Pragya back to home.

Sarla : Beta, are you okay

Abhi : don't worry she is fine, I will get the first aid box

Alia and Tanu gets furious on Abhi.

Abhi applies the medicine on her hand in room and sees the bandage on her hand.

Abhi : What is it?

Pragya : Nothing, I just got burn in kitchen

Dadi : but the mark does not look like that

Purab tells everything to Abhi

Abhi : this much happened and you all did not bother to tell me

Purab : Pragya di did not want us to tell you

Abhi : And you listen to her

Pragya : what do you mean

Purab : I guess we should leave

Abhi : So you like to be mahaan every time

Pragya : I am not being mahaan, i did for my sister alright

Tanu : what is wrong with you? what was the need to fight for that girl

Abhi : you know what is your problem you can never care for anybody you are selfish, I could have died if something happened to her

Next day Abhi decides to find out the real culprit behind all the attacks.

Pragya : here are the divorce paper

Abhi : divorce?

Pragya : Are you in your senses? how will you marry until you will divorce me

Abhi : What is the hurry sweetheart

Pragya : seems like you did not get over with your hangover

Abhi : have some patience

Alia : bhai, why did you call us here

Abhi : i have some exciting news for some people here

Tanu : what is it abhi? ( says excitedly)

Abhi : Police found out the person who threw acid on Bulbul

Tanu and Alia gets scared

Bulbul : who is it

Pia : Patience bulbul, you will get to know

Police calls Pia and informs about the real culprit

Pia : Time to break the suspense, police called and inform about the attackers

Abhi : Even this time the person was too smart but he did one mistake

Pia : Tanu, I had doubt from beginning when mom and dad came suddenly for this marriage, then I heard you both talking to the corporator

Tanu : Abhi, I did not do this, Pia is trapping me, tell truth Abhi that you did this not me

Flashback

After everybody left from factory, Pia checks the corporations and finds Tanu number as last recent call

Pia : Abhi, I am sure Tanu is behind this all

Abhi : why would she do this? she is not that type of girl

Pia : She is my sister i know her better

Flashback ends

Tanu : You are doing this because you are jealous of me, that mom dad gave me more love than me

Pia is fuming on anger.

Tanu : I know you loved Abhi from college days but you never got him so you are trying to steal my love

Tanu's dad tries to slap her but Pia stops her.

Pia : No dad, slapping her will not make her realize her mistake, Tanu you are blinded by fame and money when you will open your eyes it will be too late and you will see nobody near you

Tanu : if you care so much about me then why did you tell abhi everything

Pia : By ruining Pragya's life you would be never be happy to by marrying Abhi

Tanu : Somebody or you never wanted me to be happy

Pia : You know thats the reason you will never be able to maintain marriage

Abhi : I think it's high time tanu I should rectify the mistake I did by bringing you in my life

Abhi comes forward to Alia,

Abhi : Do you know dadi, i was so happy but also sad that my sister is suffering from pain, but I was happy seeing that she grown up

Alia looks down

Abhi : But i was wrong (shouts)

Dadi ; Abhi what happened?

Abhi : Dadi, not only tanu but she was the one behind every plan, she pushed Bulbul in pool and then fire, she was the one who made deal with that corporator to kidnap Bulbul but Pragya became the victim

Dadi : Why did you do all this?

Abhi : what if something happened to her? she did it for her own reason, if something happened to Bulbul then not you but we would be responsible

Purab fumes on Alia

Purab : Are you not ashamed of doing this? you never thought about your family

Alia : No I did not and whoever comes in between us I will finish him off

Purab : Shut up (says loudly) what did you get doing all of this

Bulbul : I told you Purab she can never change but you did not listen to me

Dadi : did we raise you so you can make us see this bad day? abhi why don't you say anything to her

Abhi : what should I tell her? its not her fault her dadi, it is all my mistake I never gave her good education maybe thats why I have to see this day, I will punish today myself not her for

Alia : bhai, please don't punish yourself for something you did not do

Abhi : I deserve big punishment for this mess, from today i will be dead for you

Alia gets astonished hearing it

Alia : bhai please don's say that

Abhi : Stay away from you, I wish I could have died in childhood so I could have been not alive to see this

Dadi : Abhi, why are punishing yourself

Abhi : No dadi, I deserve it, tell me Aliya why did you do this (grabs her shoulder)

Alia : bhai you know I love him

Abhi : that's your obsession not love if you did then you would have sacrificed for Purab, I understand your pain but you did not trust your brother

Abhi breaksdown by Alia's deeds and goes to his room. Police arrest Tanu for acid attack.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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aaash!!!! AMAZING!! very nice and long so many scenes and characters. i really like how you showed all the moments we are looking forward to. character of Pia was great too. but it can't end there!! is there gonna be more??
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I might update next part depends on how I get time
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ok!! and congrats now you are a goldie :)
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LOVED THE STORY REALLY NICE
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Amazing os... very nice.. all the scenes in 1 os... 😊 loved it...
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Really nice os poor Pragya she always has to get hurt
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Fantastic work! Loved it! Great way of including everything.
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Perfect it was nice to see a new character
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thank you guys for your comments and likes, appreciate it

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