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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sara7iris

yes she is a person correct and who does not like injustice and she will do
the right choice even against her own sister or family


True thing 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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do you guys want me to continue this OS for little bit? because I came with up with one last track
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3

Part 3

Abhi and Pragya's life gets full of roses but does not know the evil lurking around them.

Tanu : I will not accept defeat Aliya

Aliya : what are you expecting? bhai will never forgive us

Tanu : not forgive but he will have to accept us

Alia : All your plans gets flop, so don't use your brain

Tanu : I have a trump card, i know this will never fail

Both smirks when Tanu tells the plan

Roma ; do you know what are you doing Tanu

Tanu ; Mom, I will get Abhi at any cost

Roma ; I am with you but be careful what you are doing

Tanu goes to a hospital and fakes a pregnancy report

Later Pragya goes to her room and find it decorated with roses and candles. She finds a gift on bed and opens it. She finds a white sleeveless dress with a note on it. Abhi insists her to wear it only if she is comfortable. After a bit of hesitant Pragya wears it.

Abhi get stunned to see Pragya wearing his given dress.

Pragya : what is all this?

Abhi : it is a candle light dinner

Pragya ; for me?

Abhi ; No for me, I am in mood to take dinner here alone (says teasingly)

Pragya : okay then have fun, why did you waste my time to get ready

Abhi : you are so unromantic, it is for us

Pragya : couldn't you say it straightly

Abhi : i thought you don't understand simple language

When both of them starts their dinner somebody interrupts them. Daasi informs them Tanu came downstairs

Abhi : what are you doing here? do you want me to kick you out of here

Tanu : you will not kick me after you hear the news, you will give me place in this house

Pragya : say clearly what you want to say

Pia and Purvi comes there to meet Pragya. Tanu calls her parents

Tanu : read this report abhi (gives the report )

Abhi gets shocked to read the letter and later Pragya slaps Tanu

Pragya ; what kind of joke is this?

Tanu ; it is not a joke, it is truth, don't you want to know the name of the father of this child

Pragya ; we don't care

Tanu ; But I do,

Tanu points the finger on Abhi and tells everybody he is the father.

Pragya : Enough of your nonsense

Tanu ; Abhi why don't you tell her, that we had a relation before your marriage

Abhi : I don't remember that we even did something like that

Tanu ; I don't care if you forgot that but it is the truth

Pragya : what is all this?

Abhi : Trust me I don't know anything

Purvi signale Pia to come out.

Pia ; whats wrong

Purvi tells how she saw Tanu outside a clinic with Aliya. She shows the video clip of Tanu bribing the doctor.

Pia : lets show it everybody

Purvi : wait, what if they don't believe it

Both of them goes to clinic to bring the doctor.

Roma (tanu's mom) : Abhi you have to fulfill this responsibility now and marry Tanu

Tanu ; if you still don't believe me then you can talk to the doctor, I will call her

Pia ; you don't have to take trouble, I brought her here

Tanu ; you?

Pia : Me, i thought its not good for you to take stress in this state so I came to your help, after all I am you elder sister

Purvi gives a thumbs to Pia when the doctor comes in

Tanu : Doctor, tell abhi that I am pregnant and you checked me and have my reports

Doctor : She is right, i did her routine check up and she is

A moment of silence

Doctor : Not pregnant

Tanu and Alia gets stunned to hear it

Tanu : what are you saying doctor, I know you are bribed by this two

Purvi : you are right we bribed her but to tell the truth

Abhi : what are you trying to say

Purvi plays the video on live when Tanu and Alia give money to doctor for her fake pregnancy.

Pia : doctor are meant to cure patients not to make problems for people, I am ashamed to call you my sister, Tanu

Abhi is in shocked that Alia still cheated on him.

Roma : Enough Pia, if you would have cared about your sister you would have supported her in getting her love before but you chose to help this middle class girl

Abhi ; I never thought my Alia would be so cruel to me like this (in tears)

Dadi gives a hard slap to Alia

Dadi : for which mistake you are punishing your brother, the one who loves you like nothing, he starved day and night for you, the one who hide his tears so you would stay happy, but you don't deserve him, get out from this house

Alia : dadi, listen to me

Dadi drage Alia out of the house and closes the door.

Roma ; Now you listen to me Pia, you snatched my daughter's life today, I am disowning you now from our family

Pia gets in tears

Pia : Mom

Roma ; don't call me mom, you lost that right , you are dead for us from today, lets go Tanu

Pia ; just because I supported right

Roma : No because you chose this girl over your sister

Pia : Fine, i was not your daughter anyway, I don't need anybody, I can survive by myself

Roma : All the best then, till today I thought I was wrong for sending you away but you proved you are not worthy of being my daughter

Roma drags Tanu from the house

Pia gets emotional hearing her mother's words.

Dadi ; No dear, don't waste your tears for people who don't care about you

Pia : dadi, what was my fault, why did she hate so much

Abhi : From now this whole family is yours, you are not alone, right dadi

Dadi ; I might have not raise you but you will be the daughter of this house from now

Later Pragya and Abhi continue their dinner and have some light moments

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update. Roma needs to get her head check because what kind mother supports wrong doing daughter over pia who supports right. Dadi kick out aliya nice going dadi. Tanu got slapped by pragya that was great. Thank you.
Edited by sam78 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
I hope you guys didn't mind me writing Roma's character like this but I have gut feeling she will support Tanu in show in future
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great work Ash! I loved this! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ash it was amazing and AWESOME ...this update was fab ash ...abhi he is so cute to decorated the room with roses and candles and give her a dress...it's so romantic ...ash this part was perfect
tanu and aliya and her new plan OMG this two is really evil ...but we have pia and Purvi they know her plan ...I am so happy for that ...very good twist Ash I love it ...poor abhi he was heartbroken when he know that aliya cheated on him ...it's very sad to see him like that ...
also poor pia disowning from the familly she didn't deserve ...her parents are cruel
so ash this update I really enjoy it it's was superb ...I can't wait to read more from you my sweet friend Ash

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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Wow! Just read all the chapters and its superb!! Please updaye soon! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: sara7iris

ash it was amazing and AWESOME ...this update was fab ash ...abhi he is so cute to decorated the room with roses and candles and give her a dress...it's so romantic ...ash this part was perfect
tanu and aliya and her new plan OMG this two is really evil ...but we have pia and Purvi they know her plan ...I am so happy for that ...very good twist Ash I love it ...poor abhi he was heartbroken when he know that aliya cheated on him ...it's very sad to see him like that ...
also poor pia disowning from the familly she didn't deserve ...her parents are cruel
so ash this update I really enjoy it it's was superb ...I can't wait to read more from you my sweet friend Ash


aww thank you for the comment 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
ash this was just amazing.. I was feeling so bad for pia but now I'm glad that now she has a loving and caring family...
I'm happy too that now aliya and tanu are out from abhigya's life..
Nicely written..👍🏼

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