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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys, I will try to update next part in weekend
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Part 2

Later Tanu is bailed by her mother. Abhi who is totally broken starts breaking things in his room. He starts to burn his pictures with Aliya.

Purab : Abhi, please open the door

Akash : Bhai, please

Purab and Akash try to open the door but was in vain. Dadi tries to tell him but Abhi cries by his heart.

Someone calls Abhi by heart which makes him calm none other than Pragya.

Purab finally opens the door. Everybody is shocked to see Abhi's state when burn all his memories with Aliya. Pragya tells everybody to let her talk to him. She goes and seat near Abhi who is sitting on floor with on his knees with red eyes and dark circles

Abhi : Pragya, what harm I did to anyone, that I have to see this days

Pragya : You have done nothing

Abhi : I lost my parents but I never let myself become weak so I can take care of my sister

Pragya is silently listening to his plea

Abhi : I worked so hard just for her, I stayed hungry so she can survive . I thought she is my shadow but she proved I did not do enough for her, she thinks I am against her happiness

Pragya : No brother would ever do this much you did for Aliya, I know you always her happiness, thats' why you married against your wish

Abhi : For first time I feel I have nothing today, after mom dad left us, I made every effort so I can make my sister happy

Pragya : there is nothing big than a love in this world, I know you love Aliya a lot, nobody can take her place,

Abhi : I built this house just for Aliya and Dadi when she asked for luxurious life, she wanted this comfortable life, I made every possible effort so before Aliya can ask anything I could give her, I guess that was my mistake

Pragya gets more emotional hearing it.

Abhi : No brother will be this unlucky that his own sister betrayed him. I never asked for love for me, even though I know my dadi loves me a lot

Pragya : and no girl will be lucky like Aliya who has a brother like you

Abhi : why do have such a big heart? I never gave you a single happiness

Pragya : Because I know you were under a big misunderstanding, you are not a type of person who would do this to any girl,

Abhi : Pragya, why Aliya cannot see your goodness that everybody can see

Pragya : If everybody would be same in this world, we would not be sitting here like this, we have to bring her to right path before it gets too late

Abhi : No, I will never forgive her nor myself

Pragya brings food for Abhi but he refuses to eat

Abhi : I am not hungry

Pragya : Please eat it, for at least dadi's sake

Pragya makes Abhi eat food, Slowly Pragya makes Abhi rest for a while

Tanu's dad gets furious on his wife for bailing out Tanu.

Roma : I know what tanu did was wrong but do we let her rot in jail

Shashank : Enough, because of your pamper she is going on this wrong way

Tanu : Dad, you are going against me knowing I love Abhi

Shashank : You know we sent Pia to boarding far from us so you never feel we love her more

Tanu : Why don't you tell her, she snatched my love

Shashank : You should be thankful to your sister she saved you from this unhappy marriage

Roma : You know why we sent her, because of her mistake

Pia : Mom, i know from childhood you never liked me because I was never good in study and you thought I would ruin my sister's future so you distanced me from yourself

Roma : Yes I sent you to boarding so Tanu can study peacefully, so she never feels we don't care for her

Pia : But I feel happy today that you did not raise me, if you did then I would be like her

Roma : Then what are you doing here,

Shashank : what are you saying she is our daughter too

Pia feels bad seeing her mom still against her

Shashank : Pia wait

Pia : Please dad, you can still be quiet just like you were from years (leaves sadly)

Mehra house

Dadi : how is my Abhi dear?

Pragya : He is fine, we should let him stay alone for a while

Dadi : I never thought my Abhi would become weak like this,

Pragya : dadi, its just a bad phase right now, you know I will take care of him

Dadi : Today you proved that my making Abhi marry you was my right decision, nobody can take care of him like you

Pragya : Even he took care of me and my family Dadi every time

Pragya goes to her room and looking Abhi sleeping peacefully after the big storm in his life. She goes near him but move away when Abhi holds her back.

Abhi : Pragya

Pragya pretends not to listen to him first

Abhi : Aye fuggy, I am talking to you

Pragya turns around smilingly

Pragya : I should tell everybody to call me by this name

Abhi : Its my copyright nobody can call that name except me, not fair I gave you that name as reward

Pragya : Then I have condition

Abhi : Yes Princess

Pragya : I want to hear a good song

Abhi : I feel like I lost music today,

Pragya : It is your life, you cannot deny this gift of nature gave. you said destiny did not give you anything but nature gave you this gift of music which made you a rockstar today

Abhi sings Chaun main ya na and plays his guitar. Pragya gets happy as her efforts worked to make Abhi happy.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Excellent update. Feel bad for pia. Thank you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was amazing... How sweet... I love it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic work! Loved reading it. Abhis heartbreak was described perfectly, he tried so hard to keep Aliya happy. Tanus mum just like I expected. Abhigya scene at the end was fab! I have always imagined them singing that song, so happy it was included in here. Loved it! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic 👏!!!! Pragya is such a beautiful person ... hope Abhi realizes just how lucky he is!!!

I'm loving this!!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks guys appreciate your comments, glad you all liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ash thank you for the pm... your Os is amazing and superb ... in the the first and second part each character had a capital presence to make the scene intense with a lot of emotion ...good job ...I can't wait to read more from you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sara7iris

ash thank you for the pm... your Os is amazing and superb ... in the the first and second part each character had a capital presence to make the scene intense with a lot of emotion ...good job ...I can't wait to read more from you


Thank you friend, so happy you liked both parts, did you like Pia's character?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashpat3


Thank you friend, so happy you liked both parts, did you like Pia's character?

yes she is a person correct and who does not like injustice and she will do
the right choice even against her own sister or family

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