Abhigya SS - Endings UPDATED 23/12 Part 5 Page 7

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Devika

@WaterIce

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

The update was worth the wait...

Chatri part was really funny😆

Loved it...

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Parm

@Parm.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Loved the update! It was truly amazing and as Mena said, it flowed beautifully from the previous update. I cannot wait to see what transpires next and am so glad Pragya left without looking back!👏

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advena

@advena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Since I just read Vulnerable, I thought I'd catch up with Endings. Once again Wonderfully done, I love the way you have managed to hone in on Abhi's levity being a cloak that he uses, such great insight and one I have often shared. I am now definitely interested in where you go with Vulnerable, you are clearly worth the read.

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Krishna

@kubare

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Rani ...wow..Loved It Love It Loved it...This This was what was needed to be shown during that track...

I so wanted Pragya to leave...and she so did no need to prove herself innocent to a person who was guilty of that crime 100 times over...

Loved her giving back..after she came back to life...because a person can cry so much after that the one gets angry and gets thinking really...

Though three days of crying in solitude...hum...a person like me seeing my loved one in such a state would have left her to cry for a day...but the next day...she would have gotten a pep talk ...but then that's me...😆😆😆 and if she still wanted to cry and wallow...I would be like fine do whatever you want to do Man...😆

Sorry for the humour..

Oh loved the way you gave us all a glimpse into Abhis head..the CV's need to do that more often for serious stuff then...nonsense...

Loved that..

And loved loved loved...how she gave him back...Loved that..

I think you ended on a Beautiful note...her leaving with her head held high and with dignity...

No am off to read Vulnerable...😃

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Taash

@Taash

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Pragya pulling a Rhett Butler. Go, Pragya!

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

wow loved this pragya
do continue
bye sumi

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Maruthi Ganesh

@MarGan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Wonderfull SS...👏
You have written the pragya fire scene very well...that is what I expected during the MMS saga...I loved her words so much😛...
Bulbul is such a sweet sister and Purab is a very good person.They are enough for Pragya to move against any number of odds😊...

Waiting 4 next update ...

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Fanaah

@Fanaah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Rani-sa! 🤗

In an attempt to fulfill my promise of completing all your unreses, I've decided to start from this one as it's a prequel and since I HAVE started, I WILL finish them, so I hope you take mercy on your poor behena's soul! 😉 😊

For: PART 1

What a powerful start! No matter how many time I read fics in this track, I can't stop from finding and reading more! My feelings for this track are no surprise, but I have nothing but respect for a Pragya who leaves the MM in self-preservation. At one point, something's got to give and here, I'm glad that RaBul were there to help support her in her actions.

Pragya's respect and love for Daadi is always wonderful to see and I liked how Bulbul pointed that out by saying that Daadi will understand. And I'm also glad that Bulbul finally started questioning how her sister is being treated in her sasural.

My favorite parts: "Bhai," Purab started, that one label again putting more distance between them than closeness, "I would think you would have at least respected your own daadi enough to allow her to make that decision."

... And also...

"I have so, so much to say to your sorry face, jiju," she spat that epithet as though it were a curse word, "but since you've robbed her of everything else I don't want to rob my sister of the right to say it first."

All I can say is, "BRAVO, PURAB! 👏" As for Abhi, Aliya and Tanu, I have no words for them. The latter two will never change, but while I might hate Abhi here, I'm glad that he's in conflict.

Off to read the next part!

Edited by Preeah - 10 years ago

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Fanaah

@Fanaah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

For: PART 2

GOOD! Abhi's second guessing himself! Should've tried listening to it much earlier! *rolls eyes*

Tanu's bad-timing was so hilarious though, especially because Daadi was acting as a cock-block. 🤣

I liked Bulbul's personality here. For once, she was the voice of reason for Pragya, just there silently without forcing her opinion on her sister. I know Pragya appreciated it since she needed the strength to deal with her mother's hysterics! *rolls eyes* Seriously! I don't question her love and genuine feelings for people, but by GOD! She increases people's BP's!

And though this is a serious chapter, all I could think of was Tia when I read, especially the bolded part, "She had read somewhere that any emotion can maintain its original intensity for only three days before humans' daily needs take over. And actually, her pressing need for a hot bath had forced her out of the room and made her feel, if not okay, then at least not catatonic in grief."

*snorts* Bilkul AT behena's, especially Tia, ka asar hi hai. Bet Tia would immediately point out the emotional benefits of personal hygiene! *😆 and hugs Tia* Not complaining!

Anyway, can't wait to see what happens when Pragya goes and visits Daadi. On to the next part!

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Fanaah

@Fanaah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

For: PART 3

No matter how many times I read it, I still frown at the length. You were teasing us, Rani-sa! 😔 So short! 😭

Par chapter toh bohot accha hai! The trust that Daadi has in her bahu always warms my heart. Honestly, it is something that should've been in her husband's, but regardless, I ADORE Daadi! And I respect her decision to not say anything regarding her situation, even to Daadi, until she talks to Abhi.

And Pragya's bodyguards! 😆 And what an answer she gave to that chudail! Off to the next part!