First Love : Abhi & Pragya SS Part 4 at Pg. 10 (Updated) - Page 5

Totally what Diahh said...

Did you not get the memo girl?? Tannu is a witch-bitch. Bas.

This story is so so so ... sigh. I won't say perfect because that means there is no room for something to be even better. See how selfish i am?? Need the next update and expect it to top this one 😆.

Very well conceived and written Renuka. well done. Thank you for sharing.

really it is a very interesting,amazin update and very cool...abhi is now with Tanu but always dreamed of his first love pragya...in his superconscious mind abhi always love pragya...I love the twist in this story...l can't wait to read more,pls update soon

Originally posted by: vivkriti

Amazing Renuka . Loved it. Continue soon

Originally posted by: Diahh

Gosh!!!!!!! What was that!!!!!!!😲

I was happily reading... Smiling to myself... Admiring how totally adorable Abhi is...☺️

And then Pragya sneaks in...they admit their feelings and they have their first kiss!!!

All was going so so SO well!!! And then bam!! 🥺🥺

It was his dream!!!! All that happened 10 years ago!!!!and now he is with Tannu!!!!😡

What!? Why!? How!? When!?

You really got to update soon Renu!!!! Curiosity is killing me!!!!😆

Ohh I almost forgot!!! Thank you for updating Renu!!! I loved this!! And the story is so gripping! Good job!⭐️

Originally posted by: 26javey

That was amazing. Abhi telling her he likes her, Pragya sneaking out, the kiss, it all turns out to be a dream of what happened 10 years ago. Very sneaky and clever. Continue soon.

Originally posted by: kubare

Renu darling...any thing that gets you inspired to write...do it...English, American, Indian, Pakistani, Arabic, Spainish go for it...😆, because what you cineup with us wonderful...teenage love so cute...one is merrily reading and then Bam...what do we have...A hi in the present sleeping with Tanu...and Pragya his past...in his dreams from 10 yrs ago...wow...wow...wow...what a cliff hanger...so be ready to be harressed by me...for the up coming parts....😆

So here me harassing you...when's the next 😆

Hope you have a great Diwali dear😃🥳❤️

Originally posted by: Tupimanmus

This part was nice but i like the 1st part. Must be due to his dream of the past. The thing I didn't understand was, the mother-son relationship was a dream too or what ? The first paragraph where he had woke up from his sleep, it means that the first part was a dream too ?

Not to forget Aakash was really funny, by the way. Absent mindedly, he strummed his guitar which almost irritate Abhi. As if the tension between them got fueled up by his nonsense musician avatar.

Thank you for the PMs. Hope you won't kill me because of the curiosity.

Originally posted by: -mina-

renu!! don't have time for a comment that will do this chapter justice but thank you SO much for an amazing update! the tension and development kept me thrilled, and the college setting is so so cute. and the ending made me cry i am hoping you make up for that omg renu please find a happy ending please please please??

but whatever you write i'm sure i will love it in the end. thank you for this gorgeous story! <3 you renu :)

Originally posted by: Lkb79

I thought we were friends, Renu. How could you do that to me? The end of the chapter?!! Sigh. 😆

I love this story. It's so sweet. I am looking forward to how you are going to bring these two together again. I know it's going to be amazing. I love the songs you're picking, btw. I read the story twice with them in mind and it really does add to the story. I've also downloaded a few to my iTunes. Thanks!

Originally posted by: Anbhigya

Again OH EM GEE for dat scene where he wakes up sleepin next to tannu n coughs... N i thought story was goin so smoothly everythin in place!!!! Tadam tadam... Wat would have happened?????? Eagerly waitin... Dis was an awsum update...:)