First Love : Abhi & Pragya SS Part 4 at Pg. 10 (Updated) - Page 7

Originally posted by: -mina-

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aww renu, where are you taking us with this story!! from the sweetness of first love tinged with difficult life circumstances to the complications of adult life and all its half-met dreams! uff! thank you for giving us this different kind of story, it is a treat and a challenge. the library bits were so adorable and meaningful. loved pragya not being able to get used to kissing, uff! and so charan, i do wonder how he came into pragya's life...demanding little fellow, but just like his mom too. fascinating!! thanks again renu :)

ps Mina di does not approve of Renu talking down about her writing ability 😡 Mina di thinks Renu is a fantastic writer, thank you very much!! 😃

Originally posted by: kubare

Renu darling...brilliant...and still maintaining the suspense that's killing me...

Wow...love the way you are moving your story dear from past to present to FB of past to present again...

Love...the new character Charan...now this mystery is going to kill me till you reveal all...he's cute SBD a typical 7 yrs d boy...lol

Sigh...love Purvi's entry and locked diaries... Walkman...vintage indeed...

The FB gave us another glimpse into their past...and Renu agree with Mina Darling you are a dsmb good writer too...along with being a great VM maker...⭐️

Till the next part dear...

"I'll be waiting" 😉😆

Originally posted by: sara7iris

awesome and geat update ...I love it just question ahbi is the father of the child pragya I feel that this is the case in this story...I love the mix between the past and the present It is wonderful...I can't wait to read more ...pls update soon and good luck with your Final Year Project

Originally posted by: rbb1

Nice update aww her son is so cute I wonder if Pragya is married God what happened between Abhi and Pragya hope we get to find out soon

Originally posted by: Tupimanmus

My mood was literally bad for some time but your update makes my anger *Poof*

Charan- An introvert who likes to play games and an average scorer. It reminded me of myself not completely just the introvert and video game ones.

So Purvi's been added too. Loved their conversation of Rain and the books moment. In old times, they were two teenagers madly in love with one another but something change. What was it? The last part where he was gone disheartened me a lot.

You like coffee's or what cause you wrote a lot about the variety of coffee in this story till date.

Thanks for clearing my doubts and best of luck for your Final Year project. But what are you studying ?

Originally posted by: Lkb79

Aww that flashback was so sweet and also sad. 😊 😭 I know you're busy so take your time (and good luck with your project!) but I must know how Abhi and Pragya finally reconnect again. They seem miles apart right now. He just straight up ditched her in the store! 😲

Btw, I liked how your segued from present to past. The whole Walkman and mixtape thing made me nostalgic and I'm actually going to look for all of mine in a few minutes now. 😆

And no, you are not a shitty writer. Don't talk about my friend that way. 😡 You're a wonderful writer and I'm looking forward to what's nexts!

Originally posted by: Diahh

What do I say!!! I really want to repeat my previous comment on the last update! But restraining myself!!

Errr Renu!!! How? Why? When? What? 😉

Pragya and Charan?? I like Charan already he is just so adorable!!!! And also because I am thinking he is Abhi's son! Or at least in my demented head he is!!! 😈

And AbhiGya meets again! And that flashback of their kiss was just so ☺️ AbhiGya as teenagers were just so cute! And I really wonder what happened that changed all this!

Love the update Renu! As usual it was just too good! It is always a pleasure to read you!

And one more thing!!! I agree with Mina Di totally!!! Stop talking down your wonderful fabulous writing skills!!! Consider this as a warning from all your Behenas! 😉*pyaar se* ❤️