First Love : Abhi & Pragya SS Part 4 at Pg. 10 (Updated)

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Diahh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Gosh!!!!!!! What was that!!!!!!!😲

I was happily reading... Smiling to myself... Admiring how totally adorable Abhi is...☺️

And then Pragya sneaks in...they admit their feelings and they have their first kiss!!!

All was going so so SO well!!! And then bam!! 🥺🥺

It was his dream!!!! All that happened 10 years ago!!!!and now he is with Tannu!!!!😡

What!? Why!? How!? When!?

You really got to update soon Renu!!!! Curiosity is killing me!!!!😆

Ohh I almost forgot!!! Thank you for updating Renu!!! I loved this!! And the story is so gripping! Good job!⭐️

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26javey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

That was amazing. Abhi telling her he likes her, Pragya sneaking out, the kiss, it all turns out to be a dream of what happened 10 years ago. Very sneaky and clever. Continue soon.

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Krishna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Renu darling...any thing that gets you inspired to write...do it...English, American, Indian, Pakistani, Arabic, Spainish go for it...😆, because what you cineup with us wonderful...teenage love so cute...one is merrily reading and then Bam...what do we have...A hi in the present sleeping with Tanu...and Pragya his past...in his dreams from 10 yrs ago...wow...wow...wow...what a cliff hanger...so be ready to be harressed by me...for the up coming parts....😆

So here me harassing you...when's the next 😆

Hope you have a great Diwali dear😃🥳❤️

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@rbb1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

nice update oh wow Abhi dreams of Pragya and he is with Tanu, this is interesting, hope you post the next part soon

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Tupimanmus

@Tupimanmus

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

This part was nice but i like the 1st part. Must be due to his dream of the past. The thing I didn't understand was, the mother-son relationship was a dream too or what ? The first paragraph where he had woke up from his sleep, it means that the first part was a dream too ?

Not to forget Aakash was really funny, by the way. Absent mindedly, he strummed his guitar which almost irritate Abhi. As if the tension between them got fueled up by his nonsense musician avatar.

Thank you for the PMs. Hope you won't kill me because of the curiosity.

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Mina

@-mina-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

renu!! don't have time for a comment that will do this chapter justice but thank you SO much for an amazing update! the tension and development kept me thrilled, and the college setting is so so cute. and the ending made me cry i am hoping you make up for that omg renu please find a happy ending please please please??

but whatever you write i'm sure i will love it in the end. thank you for this gorgeous story! <3 you renu :)

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Lkb79

@Lkb79

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

I thought we were friends, Renu. How could you do that to me? The end of the chapter?!! Sigh. 😆

I love this story. It's so sweet. I am looking forward to how you are going to bring these two together again. I know it's going to be amazing. I love the songs you're picking, btw. I read the story twice with them in mind and it really does add to the story. I've also downloaded a few to my iTunes. Thanks!

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indi

@indi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Thank you, Renuka!!!! That was so wonderful ... aww ... so sweet ... first kiss, first love 👏!!!! Totally enjoyed it!!! Can't wait for more 😛!!!! Please continue!!!!

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

really cute, surprised they broke up but hoping they find each other again

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Anbhigya

@Anbhigya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Again OH EM GEE for dat scene where he wakes up sleepin next to tannu n coughs... N i thought story was goin so smoothly everythin in place!!!! Tadam tadam... Wat would have happened?????? Eagerly waitin... Dis was an awsum update...:)