The Hookup | in progress | an AbhiGya FF by mina - Page 29

Originally posted by: frenzyy

Did you jus do what I thought you did? Oh my God! YOU Updated Hookup? Thank you thank you thank you!

Res!! 😳

Originally posted by: SaaraDON

YAYYY YAYYY YAYYY!!!!! FINALLYYY 😃😃😃
yes!!! thank you for keeping me in mind of it these last few months 😉

What a hook-ass start to February 😆😛
hook...ass? 🤣

First and foremost, thank you for the recaps...they weren't really useful for me because I have read Part 1 & 2 umpteen times in anticipation of Part 3! Still, appreciated.
awww! thank you so much 😳 I figured that maybe I should save someone the trouble of re-reading 25,000 words since it had been 10 months. Amazing to know it wouldn't actually be needed!! 😃

Abhi and Pragya's natural comfort and chemistry with each other post their divorce - LOVE!
meant - to - be!!!

Pragya getting to see there is more to Abhi than what she experienced while being married to him...him surprising her by not amending things as per his wishes - LOVE!
I love this, "not amending things as per his wishes" - yes!! As for there being more to Abhi, Pragya and I are both learning...some of it was there when she was married to him and she couldn't see, and some if is new.

Those who didn't like show wali Pragya's makeover + bold attitude will definitely like your Pragya...who hasn't made changes to her clothes and accessories but is more positive, daring and lively...yet composed and practical.
Hahahaaa. And best of all...she didn't change for Abhi or Daadi 😉

I knew it Abhi will be the one to ponder over the fact that there is more to this hookup than it apparently seems to be 👏 Loved how you described his thoughts full of dilemma in the balcony (sipping scotch) scene and how he shut his feelings off and reassured himself what all this with Pragya was about!
Now how did you guess Abhi would be thoughtful one here? And yes, you have exactly described the purpose of that scene. Even I didn't realize...but yes he was reassuring himself. Poor fool 😛

OMG!!!! The nicknames bit had a surprise element 'Meri Jaan'...I loved how you incorporated that. Loved how Abhi unconsciously gave her sort of a nickname which never went on to be something official right away!!!! ❤️😆
I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED THAT!! I was nervous nervous about it. And I wonder if/when Abhi will ever realize what he did there? Guess we'll all have to wait until he finds out 😆

Rooftop is definitely the most visually amusing bit in PART 3 😳 How I would love to see it actually picturised on AbhiGya - Fantasy! ☺️ Your description/writing and my mind were completely in perfect sync visualizing each and every bit!
If we actually had TiSha in this scene I might actually expire from heart failure - happy fangirl heart failure! So pleased to know my words could bring the scene to mind for you 😊

And protective Abhi is a dream to watch on the show yet...but this Abhi is love love happy love for all the moments he wraps his arm around her...protectively, caringly, compassionately...like he is HER man!!!! ❤️
EEEPS! The way you said this. Instead of the possessive/usual spin of her being "his woman." Love love love! Let's see how soon Abhi realizes that this is what he wants to be always 😃

There's a lot a liked about this part...somethings I have expressed above and somethings might be left unexpressed because I just cannot put them in words at the moment...maybe when I re-read PART 3, while waiting for PART4...I can point them out, later 😃
Please point out often and freely 😆

BTW, till now, your buildup is completely perfect for future parts...so rest assured about that! 👍🏼
Haaye! Thank you so much. Means a lot. 🤗

Bhai, I am so pleased so know that after all that waiting the update was worth it for you. Thank you so much for this lovely detailed comment. And I know bhai log ko thanks nahin kehte but how can I help it?? Thank you for being my bhai 😳 😛😛

Originally posted by: columbia

Part 3 - I am completely loving Abhi - just dying for him,,the feels is ultimate. You have done a great Job building the angst from his side, I love how they stand together with her head resting near his chin, it's the pose of love not lovers.

He is a goner and I love that you took it there

Thanks so much for continuing this, don't take another year for the next part. In fact I cannot wait for him to see her with that other prof. Please please write soon

Originally posted by: columbia

Part 3 - can we please please make him call her and say

Are yu cramping too much my jaan??

It's cheesy and sexy at the same time...the feels

Originally posted by: columbia

Pagal you don't need me at all. You have done a fantastic job with this story - beyond my expectations. I cannot help but feel for Abhi in this fic like never before, I don't think I have ever felt for a hero who has wronged his woman in any other fic as much as here. I cannot wait for him to grovel to bring her in by loving her in every way, in so many ways you are making him worship her. It's brilliantly written. going back to read it again. Can you give a date for part 4. Write all the sections for part 4. We want him to OWN her!

Originally posted by: chubbygirl

Mina it's awesome.
Pragya's pov about the relationship with Abhi👏

Originally posted by: columbia

Bridge my foot!

And I demand a date...don't hide procrastination behind the don't want to be mean garb

More comments on your comments on my comments..unless they never come! 😉Q🤗

Originally posted by: putturani

MINAJI!! OMG you updated Hookup! Congratulations! I know how much hard work, dedication, time, effort, planning and exhaustive research went into this endeavour. So be proud :) and I am honoured that you considered my two-word replies a sounding board

Ok on to the update. I really loved the negotiation bits, because you know how much I like enthusiastic consent. I also liked all the little hints you threw in about how it's becoming more than a hookup for both of them. I thought you struck just the right note with the whiskey scene, after worrying about it. Love his reaction to the list and rules btw.

Also like how they are slowly realising that they're both different people now.

There were a lot of layers in your writing. I especially liked the darkness that was lurking in the edges of Abhi's mind throughout. I know you prefer witty banter and fluff but Abhi's loneliness was well depicted.My favourite moment in the update is when Abhi has Pragya in his arms and contemplates contentment. Very poignant.

And finally her period plays villain! Maybe a rehash of your period-intimacy fic is in order? ;)

Originally posted by: -mina-

Sanya 🤗

Yes the steam factor of Hookup is pretty high 😆😳

Thank you for concentrating on the emotions wale part! Now about this falling for each other, which would be knowingly and which unknowingly in your guess? 😲 I am intrigued! And I can neither confirm nor deny...😉

Glad you like this Pragya...human and balanced would definitely be my ideal for her. 😃

Thank you for reading and for the thoughtful comment!

Originally posted by: Nora9497

That wasn't expected ...a very great surprise Mina you don't know how long was I waiting for this update...Thank you so so much

Please don't leave it for long please