The Hookup | in progress | an AbhiGya FF by mina - Page 27

Originally posted by: -mina-

Timing worked out pretty well!! I hope it's not churlish of me to say so but I didn't intend it as specifically your birthday present...ten months in the making, THE day just so happened to coincide with your day 😉 😆

Originally posted by: Mystery1

🤗 Mina...

OMG ARE YOU KIDDING ME?! I WOKEUP STARTLED!!!!!

Okayyy, I didn't mean to scream there 😆. I know you never intended it to, but who cares you still ended up on the day somehow 😊. Ten months was worth it. Thank you for the morning treat 😳 😆...

You are welcome birthday girl! But how did the update wake you up? 😲 😆

Don't forget to unres part two, even though part three answers some of your questions ok? 😛

OMG!!!

I thought the follow- up was a cheat part! Too short! Would have loved to have the whole texting thing become a sexting thing! Hmm sigh! More comments soon

Did you jus do what I thought you did? Oh my God! YOU Updated Hookup? Thank you thank you thank you!

Res!! 😳

YAYYY YAYYY YAYYY!!!!! FINALLYYY 😃😃😃

What a hook-ass start to February 😆😛

First and foremost, thank you for the recaps...they weren't really useful for me because I have read Part 1 & 2 umpteen times in anticipation of Part 3! Still, appreciated.

Abhi and Pragya's natural comfort and chemistry with each other post their divorce - LOVE!

Pragya getting to see there is more to Abhi than what she experienced while being married to him...him surprising her by not amending things as per his wishes - LOVE!

Those who didn't like show wali Pragya's makeover + bold attitude will definitely like your Pragya...who hasn't made changes to her clothes and accessories but is more positive, daring and lively...yet composed and practical.

I knew it Abhi will be the one to ponder over the fact that there is more to this hookup than it apparently seems to be 👏 Loved how you described his thoughts full of dilemma in the balcony (sipping scotch) scene and how he shut his feelings off and reassured himself what all this with Pragya was about!

OMG!!!! The nicknames bit had a surprise element 'Meri Jaan'...I loved how you incorporated that. Loved how Abhi unconsciously gave her sort of a nickname which never went on to be something official right away!!!! ❤️

Rooftop is definitely the most visually amusing bit in PART 3 😳 How I would love to see it actually picturised on AbhiGya - Fantasy! ☺️ Your description/writing and my mind were completely in perfect sync visualizing each and every bit!

And protective Abhi is a dream to watch on the show yet...but this Abhi is love love happy love for all the moments he wraps his arm around her...protectively, caringly, compassionately...like he is HER man!!!! ❤️

There's a lot a liked about this part...somethings I have expressed above and somethings might be left unexpressed because I just cannot put them in words at the moment...maybe when I re-read PART 3, while waiting for PART4...I can point them out, later 😃

BTW, till now, your buildup is completely perfect for future parts...so rest assured about that! 👍🏼

Part 3 - I am completely loving Abhi - just dying for him,,the feels is ultimate. You have done a great Job building the angst from his side, I love how they stand together with her head resting near his chin, it's the pose of love not lovers.

Originally posted by: columbia

I thought the follow- up was a cheat part! Too short! Would have loved to have the whole texting thing become a sexting thing! Hmm sigh! More comments soon

🤣 👏

Definitely something I missed to mention in the above comment!

Part 3 - can we please please make him call her and say

Originally posted by: columbia

I thought the follow- up was a cheat part! Too short! Would have loved to have the whole texting thing become a sexting thing! Hmm sigh! More comments soon

YOU BHIII NAAA 😡

😆 🤗

Please don't ever disappear on me. Need you to set me straight like this now and again 🤡

I highly doubt there will be any sexting in the entirety of this 125,000 word fic...but we'll see 😛