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Mina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#271

res for part 5

Edited by -mina- - 9 years ago

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columbia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: -mina-

YOU BHIII NAAA 😡

😆 🤗

Please don't ever disappear on me. Need you to set me straight like this now and again 🤡

I highly doubt there will be any sexting in the entirety of this 125,000 word fic...but we'll see 😛

Pagal you don't need me at all. You have done a fantastic job with this story - beyond my expectations. I cannot help but feel for Abhi in this fic like never before, I don't think I have ever felt for a hero who has wronged his woman in any other fic as much as here. I cannot wait for him to grovel to bring her in by loving her in every way, in so many ways you are making him worship her. It's brilliantly written. going back to read it again. Can you give a date for part 4. Write all the sections for part 4. We want him to OWN her!

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Mina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: columbia
I thought the follow- up was a cheat part! Too short! Would have loved to have the whole texting thing become a sexting thing! Hmm sigh! More comments soon

btw it was not a cheat it was a BRIDGE ok a bridgeee

i can't give a date for part four because it's like barely formed in my head and also when i give dates and fail to meet them it is not a nice thing! so in the interests of not doing mean things i won't give a date i'm not sure i can make.

more comments on your comments later 😃 😆

Edited by -mina- - 9 years ago

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chubbygirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#274

Mina it's awesome.
Pragya's pov about the relationship with Abhi👏

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columbia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: -mina-

btw it was not a cheat it was a BRIDGE ok a bridgeee

i can't give a date for part four because it's like barely formed in my head and also when i give dates and fail to meet them it is not a nice thing! so in the interests of not doing mean things i won't give a date i'm not sure i can make.

more comments on your comments later 😃 😆

Bridge my foot!

And I demand a date...don't hide procrastination behind the don't want to be mean garb

More comments on your comments on my comments..unless they never come! 😉Q🤗

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@putturani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#276

MINAJI!! OMG you updated Hookup! Congratulations! I know how much hard work, dedication, time, effort, planning and exhaustive research went into this endeavour. So be proud :) and I am honoured that you considered my two-word replies a sounding board

Ok on to the update. I really loved the negotiation bits, because you know how much I like enthusiastic consent. I also liked all the little hints you threw in about how it's becoming more than a hookup for both of them. I thought you struck just the right note with the whiskey scene, after worrying about it. Love his reaction to the list and rules btw.

Also like how they are slowly realising that they're both different people now.

There were a lot of layers in your writing. I especially liked the darkness that was lurking in the edges of Abhi's mind throughout. I know you prefer witty banter and fluff but Abhi's loneliness was well depicted.My favourite moment in the update is when Abhi has Pragya in his arms and contemplates contentment. Very poignant.

And finally her period plays villain! Maybe a rehash of your period-intimacy fic is in order? ;)

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Nora9497

@Nora9497

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#277

That wasn't expected ...a very great surprise Mina you don't know how long was I waiting for this update...Thank you so so much

Please don't leave it for long please

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dee

@deefan

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#278

A very pleasant surprise indeed Mina ❤️. I enjoyed Part 3 sooo much! Love the rooftop, love how you've created Abhi in your fic and there are so many layers- so much depth in your writing, LOVE IT!

I'm very curious about what happens with the job Pragya is excited about.

This makes me want to read Part 4 so bad!!!!

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Mina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: Mystery1
Res Res Res...

Originally posted by: anamika.vg
Res :)

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Mina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#280

Originally posted by: sanya_p
OMG!!!
Too hot to handle...seriously.
I tried reading from part -1 but couldn't finish all three in one go😉

You are way too descriptive to keep readers their cool👏👏

I'll only write about emotions wale emotion part. 😆
So Abhi still thinks that they are not meant for each-other as a couple and Pragya doesn't even think in that direction.

Looks like they will fall for each-other almost at the same time, one knowingly and other unknowingly.

I like this Pragya, tries to be comfortable and balanced in her new changed attitude/life but loose it at times just like humans.

Enjoyed it by all means!!

Sanya 🤗

Yes the steam factor of Hookup is pretty high 😆😳

Thank you for concentrating on the emotions wale part! Now about this falling for each other, which would be knowingly and which unknowingly in your guess? 😲 I am intrigued! And I can neither confirm nor deny...😉

Glad you like this Pragya...human and balanced would definitely be my ideal for her. 😃

Thank you for reading and for the thoughtful comment!