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Posted: 9 years ago
Mina fabulous
waiting for the update.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey minu. After a lot of time you updated 👏
He he I had readed the teaser. Like sanny said I am happy that minu you updated that teaser.
The question pragya asked I just fell for it. It was so genuine question. And the answer. Abhi said?!! Wow he said no he is going to yeah yeah hip hil hurray!!!!
And the bonus 😛
He was frowning at her, and the hot look in his eyes told her that he wasn't in the mood for talking. Still, she tipped her head in the direction of the living room and asked, "Could we go sit down?"

what was the need for them talking when we are hooking for their hook up. this pragya bhi na. always talkinh and talking
"I don't know," Abhi drawled, leaning in to cage her again. "Is this going to be a long talk?"
No!!! I don't want much talk 😕 😕

Pragya felt her pulse kick up a notch, and she bit her lip to keep herself steady. She met his gaze and tried not to melt in the heat she saw there. "That - that depends on you."
Yah!! I love the description of how much effect he have on her it is completely awsome

Abhi skimmed her jaw with the back of his fingers. He was barely touching her, but still a sweet electricity surged through her blood. "Well, I would rather not talk at all. How. About. That?" He leaned closer with every word, until finally his lips were on hers again.

This kiss was softer, but somehow more demanding. Instead of raw hunger, the easy slide of his mouth on hers called to some deeper need she couldn't quite name. Coherent thought blanked out under the sudden feeling that this was exactly how she should spend the rest of eternity.

So atlast we have that this is just freaking. I smiled at noticing your ff teaser. My mom asked me are you mad why are smiling at phone? Does something happened to you? She asked. Wow minu you making me freakinh and freezing out of this cute update 👏

Rest of update still baking! Approximate cook time...as yet unknown 😕 😕
Love you minu not for this but for all by your ayeshu 😳
Hey hey I forget it come let have a big hug 🤗
Edited by NasreenAyesha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!
i love the teaser!!!!👏

UFFF!!!UFFF!!!! UFFF!!!!!

and i am so excited!! since you said you will update in a week i am taking it as a month! and believe me it actually sounds really really short!!!!🤡


eeepss!!!!

Edit: okay i just read your note again and realized you meant that the chapter will take more than a week not A week!

but thats okay! i will wait! (as if i have any other choice!😛)

and i am actually happy seeing this teasing teaser! it somehow tells me that you have not given up on this story but working on it! (even though i know you would never give up on this!😛)
Edited by -Nimmy- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: frenzyy

Yay we are gonna get an update soon! Loved the teaser



Eeps thanks for the comment 😳 😃

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

awesome teaser glad you are updating again!



Glad you liked it!! Thanks for commenting ⭐️

Originally posted by: --simmi--

YAY MINA! A teaser! So teasy too! And why would anyone want to leave this story! It is hooking 😉 Honestly!



Haila Simmo so cute!! Thank you for saying that. *hugglesquishes simmo* 🤗
Edited by -mina- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sunkissed

MINA DI!! *runs and hugs her* 🤗

FINALLY, finally you updated, no matter even if it is a teaser. 😃
You know what, you can't tease us like that 😳😆
I'll be waiting for ya to update the next part on Rajdhani speed, okay? 😉😳
Fine, Metro speed bhi chalega but it shouldn't reach a turtle speed. 😆😆
Will be waiting!
Loads of kisses and bone-crushing hugs ❤️🤗



Oh my, a teaser counts as an update?? Hmmm this is useful knowledge 😈

I am sorry for teasing!! I'm just excited by the next part so had to share..it was hard to pick exactly which portion to post...there are parts I like better and hopefully you guys will too when the whole thing is ready 😉

OK I will aim for faster than a turtle and you can tell me how close or far I got to metro speed...good thing sore bones don't delay writing 😆 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AbhiGya_sh

Yeh...Yeh...Yeh...Finally!! Finally!! You have did it mina di...wow...yeh...love it soo much...

Thankyou so much...Even if it a teaser...It was hooking...wow...
Worth-Waitng for it...sooo happpy...thankyou...
Th eteaser was awesome di...sooo lovely...Do update the chapter soon lyk this di...
I AM WAITING...
Loads of love and Lovely hugs and kisses...
Thankyou sooo much diii...love it..



Aww thank you Amaya!! Hope you will like the chapter too. Will try to shorten your wait 😳 😆

Originally posted by: chubbygirl

Mina fabulous
waiting for the update.



Thank you for the comment Chubby 😃
Edited by -mina- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha


I know I am special ayeshu for my minu. 😉 in that place I'm the one 😆
And how I come know what they going to do even you don't knew it minu 😆 let me think. Sorry I ddon'thav idea I think I have wear glass for my brain.
Okay bye I have to comment for minu hookup teaser 😳



You are sooo cute ayeshu haila!! Glasses for your brain 🤣

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

Hey minu. After a lot of time you updated 👏
He he I had readed the teaser. Like sanny said I am happy that minu you updated that teaser.
The question pragya asked I just fell for it. It was so genuine question. And the answer. Abhi said?!! Wow he said no he is going to yeah yeah hip hil hurray!!!!
And the bonus 😛
He was frowning at her, and the hot look in his eyes told her that he wasn't in the mood for talking. Still, she tipped her head in the direction of the living room and asked, "Could we go sit down?"

what was the need for them talking when we are hooking for their hook up. this pragya bhi na. always talkinh and talking
"I don't know," Abhi drawled, leaning in to cage her again. "Is this going to be a long talk?"
No!!! I don't want much talk 😕 😕

Pragya felt her pulse kick up a notch, and she bit her lip to keep herself steady. She met his gaze and tried not to melt in the heat she saw there. "That - that depends on you."
Yah!! I love the description of how much effect he have on her it is completely awsome

Abhi skimmed her jaw with the back of his fingers. He was barely touching her, but still a sweet electricity surged through her blood. "Well, I would rather not talk at all. How. About. That?" He leaned closer with every word, until finally his lips were on hers again.

This kiss was softer, but somehow more demanding. Instead of raw hunger, the easy slide of his mouth on hers called to some deeper need she couldn't quite name. Coherent thought blanked out under the sudden feeling that this was exactly how she should spend the rest of eternity.

So atlast we have that this is just freaking. I smiled at noticing your ff teaser. My mom asked me are you mad why are smiling at phone? Does something happened to you? She asked. Wow minu you making me freakinh and freezing out of this cute update 👏

Rest of update still baking! Approximate cook time...as yet unknown 😕 😕
Love you minu not for this but for all by your ayeshu 😳
Hey hey I forget it come let have a big hug 🤗



Ayeshuuu ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Ok, glad you enjoyed the teaser and the bonus!!

As for Pragya's question, her number one concern is being open and honest about what their deal is. She doesn't want anymore lies and games in her life. Abhi of course said no because he doesn't want any games either...will just have to see if life cooperates with them or not!

Yes of course Pragya will talk and talk!! That's Pragya naa. Don't worry, they just need to clear a few important things, then they will be too busy to talk 😉. That being said...most of the scenes in this fic will be AbhiGya having a conversation!! So be forewarned!! 😆

Thank you for the awesome comment Ayeshu!! Big hugs back 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Nimmy-

YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!

i love the teaser!!!!👏

UFFF!!!UFFF!!!! UFFF!!!!!

and i am so excited!! since you said you will update in a week i am taking it as a month! and believe me it actually sounds really really short!!!!🤡


eeepss!!!!

Edit: okay i just read your note again and realized you meant that the chapter will take more than a week not A week!

but thats okay! i will wait! (as if i have any other choice!😛)

and i am actually happy seeing this teasing teaser! it somehow tells me that you have not given up on this story but working on it! (even though i know you would never give up on this!😛)



Nimchu tu bhi na...😆

Taking it as a month is probably a good move. I'm aiming for less but only time will tell na. Glad you liked the teaser. And of course I'm still working on it! Does that mean I should post Anarkali teasers to ensure people know I haven't given up on it? But Anarkali is not like Hookup, it's hard to pull sections for teasers 😕

Thanks for the comment Nimchu!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -mina-



Nimchu tu bhi na...😆

Taking it as a month is probably a good move. I'm aiming for less but only time will tell na. Glad you liked the teaser. And of course I'm still working on it! Does that mean I should post Anarkali teasers to ensure people know I haven't given up on it? But Anarkali is not like Hookup, it's hard to pull sections for teasers 😕

Thanks for the comment Nimchu!

Nahi!!!! nahi nahi nahi nahi nahi nahi nahi nahi nahi nahi!!!! NAHIII!!!!!
don't post more teasers please!!!! finish this hookupdate first and only then you will be allowed to aankh-utha-ke dekho other fics!!! tab tak keep a tunnel vision on hookupdate!

and i know you are working on anarkali update! 😃 (and i am hoping i am right😉😆)


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Posted: 9 years ago
you are right! actually the next fic i'm hoping to update/finish is "revelations in mehra madhouse." then anarkali (part 3) and hookupdate (for part 3) at roughly the same time...hopefully!!

anarkali is actually supposed to be a much shorter story than hookup; it's just...fled to some corner of my mind i have trouble accessing! but...getting there, bit by bit!
Edited by -mina- - 9 years ago

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