Abhigya FS:THE PASSENGERS(note on page 1... updated final part-page11) - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys.. Had some time off.. So decided to update.. Its a bit long.. N also this is the second last update.. Want to finish this FS as have to cope up with studies too.. So here you go... PART 4: ABHI'S HOUSE: finally he reached home... As usual he chatted with daadi n she was happy that he was moving forward now.. She noticed a calmness in his behaviour... Purab n akaash who were managing his business along with their own works met him.. Purab told him about the concert which was impending n how the organisers were affected by his negative publicity... He told them to CHILLAX n asked them to just go on dates with their gf's.. To which three of them laughed...:) He came to his room.. Saw the pics they took on the journey once again wondering had chashmish reached home??? N realised k he did the biggest mistake of his life by not getting her phone number.. He cursed himself n checked his twitter account n slept... One week later he was there at the concert which purab was talking about... He met the guests n yeah among the many guests, there was Tanu with her husband and a renowned music critique who never gave him more than one star or a single praise for his albums... He remebered pragya's-FORGET n FORGIVE... He met the man, shook hands n flashed a smile saying-enjoy the show Mr Pathak...:) n yeah you inspire me to do better... N then came Tanu's husband Mohit Singhania.. As he was a friend... He hugged him n praised the couple.. After that Mohit had to attend a call n tanu n him were alone.. He looked at her smiling.. N said your husband is a gem of a person!! Tanu was surprised.. He continued- you know i am not angry on you anymore.. N besides we would never had marriage as our happy ending.. Whatever your reasons were... I am happy 4 u.. He hugged her n said- I FORGIVE YOU.. STAY HAPPY ALWAYS.. Tears brimmed in her eyes.. He smiled n said teasingly- u know if u ever want to have an extra marital affair.. Call me... She laughed n he said- I am just kidding haan.. Enjoy the show..:) He reached the stage.. He felt so free today... That night he rocked the stage... He even dedicated a HAPPY LOVE to Tanu n Mohit... The moment of night was when he sang- 'Na hai ye paana, na khona hi h... Tera na hona jaane... Kyun hona hi h... Tumse hi din hota h... Surmayi shaam atii h..'!! Everybody was awestruck even the critique guy who gave him standing ovation... N his concert became a HIT!! After dat there was no looking back!! Back to back 2 Superhit albums... Many collaborations... N concerts.. Abhi became a rage with his newly found music which has soul.. His album 'KHWAHISHEIN-The DESIRES' became the most downloaded albums in such a short span of 1 month of release... His episode on MTV COKE STUDIO was considered the best episode of whole season n his new song he sang there became a national rage.. The wordings were- Jado ambara barseyaa paanii... Mitti di khushboo ayiii...(when water drops from sky, i remember my home)... His interviews were mostly hilarious as ever.. People wondered what has gotten into him.. Purab even joked- kisi ladki ne jaadu kar dia h kya tere uper Abhiii??? Abhii just nodded- YUP... Magic it is... In studios when he was alone he would imagine the girl with specs... N would sing some songs close to his heart!! In balcony drinkin his coffee... He would wonder where would be that girl who made him start afresh!! He would check his tweets now with great fondness... He would retweet the hate messages he recieved from boys who complained their gf's were more into him than them n posted smileys n emojiis with them... N yeah he also shoot an advertisement with a director on whom he had a huge crush.. But she was 2 years elder than him n was committed.. He told her jokingly that she broke his heart by considering him boyish n immature when he used to flirt with her in early days.. He even tweeted a pic of her with him.. Life was good!! N he knew because of whom!! A boring Lecturer who had the most beautiful eyes, Who was not at all interested in him n gave him lessons for life!! She teached him to LET GO!! May be all the soulful music he was doing now was due to her!! The way she got all excited on listening to him in the car... May be she would have become my fan now or maybe not??? Wondered abhi.. Adjusting his guitar strings n smiling to himself...(continued below:))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PRAGYA'S HOME: It has been 5 months since she met Abhi.. Time flies.. She remembered the day she got home.. 5 MONTHS AGO... She reached home... But instead of greeting her, her maa n family were staring at her... Before they asked... Come on people this is gift from a friend.. Thats why i am wearing jeans n shirts... Purvi n bulbul teased about the friend!! But she shoo them away... She came to her room.. And wondered about him.. Had he reached home.. N she mentally cursed herself for not exchanging phone numbers with him...:) she waved goodnite to suresh from her window n slept.. Next morning her Mom was again on a spree to find her a groom!! One fine day she switched on TV n they showed some clips of abhi's concert.. Oh myy.. He was looking so cute... Pragya smiled.. CHAHMISH word ringed in her mind!! They also showed fans going all gaga over him.. Bulbul n purvi n even daadi were fangirling... Suresh came n said- this guy is of no use.. What do u ladies see in him?? N all four of them screamed-HE IS NOT USELESS.. It was expected from the three but suresh glared pragya not sure what he just heard!! She defending ABhi the rockstar!! Before he could ask she excused herself... Pragya has downloaded his whole album on her phone... What a unique name-KHWAHISHEIN.. The guy has awesome voice.. N she also made suresh to watch his COKE STUDIO episode... Bulbul n purvi noticed her interest in ABHIi's songs.. They never asked but were happy that she is also in the team now.. She would read his interviews n would remember their first meeting.. Tarun met her after he recovered from the shock that prags gave him when she abused him on the phone with abhi.. He appologised... N asked for second chance but was refused straight away by pragya.. Her mother was annoyed but she told her- I will meet all the guys u keep on choosing for me... But i will marry the one whom i like.. So please don't force me to do something stupid which we both will regret afterwards.. Mom was convinced.. Bulbul would check Abhi's tweets on her laptop.. She would pretend to study but through the corner of her eyes she would check his tweets.. She would laugh with bulbul when she told her he retweeted a boy's tweet who said- ' My Gf is more interested in u than me.. I hate You so much!!'... Only he can do stuff like this smiled pragya.. She also saw his pic with the director woman on twitter when bulbul was going all awww on them.. The tweet read- MY FIRST CRUSH!! N now she is engaged to an awsum guy'' at first pragya didn't liked that but then she heard the engagement part n sighed n slept off... While studying a book.. Or checking papers... She would wonder- what he would be doing?? N where he would be?? Kya main usko yaad hoon??? Stop pragya... Stop being a fan girl!! She would think about the Man who looked so arrogant n devilishly handsome taught her to think about herself.. That she deserve better!! She is not the one to feel sorry.. N most important how to tackle her mom now... N again she got back to checking the papers smiling to herself...:):)
Edited by Anbhigya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful!!😛
Abhi and Pragya both living separate lives but still thinking about eachother!😳 Very nice!

Waiting for the final part!😊
Edited by Diahh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update aww they are both thinking about each other, hope they met soon, it's nice to see them both change positively
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Diahh

Beautiful!!😛

Abhi and Pragya both living separate lives but still thinking about eachother!😳 Very nice!

Waiting for the final part!😊

thanks buddy..:):) yup me waiting for more ideas to arrive in my mind to finish this off..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

nice update aww they are both thinking about each other, hope they met soon, it's nice to see them both change positively

thanks Ray for takin ur time n for commenting.. Yes they will meet soon..;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👏👏👏👏👏👏 continue soonnn
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnks 4 commenting..:)

Originally posted by: shivaniaroraji

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continue soonnn

awww.. Thnk u so much...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww...Thank you!!!! Such a beautiful story... I'm loving it!!! Abhi so caring and tender ... please continue!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Your update was so adorable. I was smiling so hard reading it. I always wanted Pragya to influence Abhi to make more sincere, better music. I love how you incorporated that into the story.
Fingers crossed that the passengers' paths cross again!! Maybe on a train?

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