Abhigya FS:THE PASSENGERS(note on page 1... updated final part-page11)

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A note below dis TS...Plz see...:) He didn't knew what went wrong!! Everything was so perfect.. But today he was feeling dejected, depressed n sad!! Tanu dumped him n married a businessman four months ago. N his recent album didn't got good response.. It did average business.. Come on abhi it was a flop!! Just accept it!! He sighed.. After a not so happening show in Delhi he was walking alone on a road leaving his car and driver behind... He didn't knew where he was goin.. He was wearing a long overcoat n glasses n d woolen scarf hiding him from his crazy fans!! He liked winters coz it was easy to go outside with disguised look during this season!! He arrived at a railway station.. N he just boarded on the train... Not knowing where is it heading to?? After so many years he was travelling in a train... They used to travel like this when they would visit their naani with mummy n papa... N remembering his parents made him more sad!! He just stared outside the window.. Engrossed in his thoughts he was just about to doze off k suddenly a heavy bag fell on his lap n he was just about to shout but the girl appologised n took her stuff. She adjusted her things in the compartment n sat in seat in front of him. A girl in her late 20's wearing chashma n anarkali suit, a book in her hand n a frown on her forhead, long flowing hairs! So boring thought Abhii.. She didn't even bothered to look towards him and was all lost like a book worm in her boring book!! In his life no matter what had happened and what the situation is abhi never learnt one thing. And that was-How To Remain Silent!! He tapped his foot, tried to hum a song.. But all in vain!! Finally he gave up.. And not knowing how to start a conversation said- Hiii... She nodded.. A- so you are travelling alone haan?? P- Have u seen anybody with me??? A-Nooo... P-its common sense na k m alone!! How arrogant... A-yeah me too.. A- hey i am abh.. Abhishek!!! P-myself Pragya arora... N then She gave a don't bother me look!! But dat ain't gonna stop the rockstar... Przgya saw that the stranger (with his face covered wid a scarf kind f thing) kept on blabbering.. About rock n pop music.. How much he love Abhi's song especially Happy Love.. This and that... Prags was gettin annoyed. He started asking her whats her problem??? Why is she so quiet??? He asks him to share her problem?? Finally she shouted- U R MY PROBLEM!! Tab se bolte hi ja rahe ho!! Bolte hi ja rahe ho!!(u keep on blabbering so much!!) Look!! Umm.. Abhishek... I am least interested in knowing k u love some abhi or kavi or watever!!! U adore Happy love or Sad divorce... Please Just keep QUIET!!!! Abhii noticed her eyes for d first time.. She has a sharp tongue but had so peaceful eyes.. There was a weird sadness in her eyes.. A restlessness... But after getting the warning he stopped talking n don't know when he fell asleep!! Suddenly he woke up n saw the front seat empty.. He looked around him n then outside he saw pragya walking alone in a opposite direction with her bag still in her seat... N then the train started moving but she kept walking in opposite direction!! He ran towards the door n shouted-HEY!!! STOP!! WHERE ARE U GOIN??? THE TRAIN IS LEAVING!! HEY WHITE SUIT!! What was her name... Haan...PRAGYA.. But she kept going n finally he also came down n ran towards her.. HEY PRAGYA... TRAIN is Leaving... He pulled her hand n said to run to the train.. But she jerked his hand and asked to leave him alone.. He said what??? He removed his scarf n said... Hey THE ROCKSTAR ABHI is runnin behind u n you are giving attitude... Girls die for this moment!! She was shocked.. Abhi said- now u know me.. Chalo ab!! She didn't gave attention n walked away.. He just couldn't believe this n screamed-Go To Hell.. N ran towards the train but train was nowhere to be seen... He just couldn't believe dat!! He saw in the direction of dat CHASHMISH... Goes to her n says- hey you!! What do u think of youselves?? Because of YOU i missed my train?? P- did i asked u to?? A- unbelievable man!! U are giving attitude to THE RoCKSTAR!!! Did u even recognised me?? P- YES.. I KNOW U... YOU R D ONE WHOSE GF LEFT HIM N MARRIED aonther man!! N NOW U HAVE BECOME DEVDAAS!! Tum pe drunk n drive ka case bhi hua.. U have also beaten a reporter recently!!! So i know U!! Abhii went silent. Both stared at each other.. She said:umm.. Look i didn't.. A- u are RIGHT!! I am the one whose gf dumped him!! P- look!!! I am sorry.. I didn't meant that... Really i am so engrossed in my problems..N u were bothering me n all.. So really sorry.. Abhi flashed a smile n said.. Its okay... I UNDERSTAND!! They consulted the station master.. He said he can only help prags to get her luggage to be dropped in the next station. She stood there.. Then abhi said she can come with him n they can find a way.. She resisted..He said. Look!! U know me.. Right!! N i m just tryin to help.. This place is not safe.. She didn't know why but she agreed.. To be continued:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys.. I m guessin u read it!! If anyone of u have seen JAB WE MET..They will find some similarities... Dis OS is inspired by The movie JAB WE MET.. Not the whole but some incidents are inspired from the movie... This may be a two shot or three shots.. Do comment and let me knw...:) PART 2- Page 3... PART 3- page 5.. PART 4-page 9...:) final part- page 11...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg!!
Yes I thought it was similar to jab we met!
Hope you update soon!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: simsim25

Omg!!
Yes I thought it was similar to jab we met!
Hope you update soon!!

m glad u did!!! But do tell me if u find too much similarities annoying???? N thanks 4 commenting..:)
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Originally posted by: niru04

Nice start.cntnu soon

thnks 4 takin ur time n read this...:):)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yes i did feel like its JAB WE MET types 😃
My fav movie 😳
Loved it.
Continue soon 😊😊
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Loving it Shikhu!!! So much fun!! Train mein antics...Abhi resentful that Pragya won't give him attention...Prags least interested in rockstar!! Yes so good!! Keep it up and write more soon please 😊 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you!!! Wonderful start ... I'm enjoying it!!!! Please continue!!!


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Originally posted by: MayurnASYA

Yes i did feel like its JAB WE MET types😃

My fav movie😳
Loved it.
Continue soon😊😊

hey buddy.. Thnks 4 commentin... JWM is my all tym fav too...
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Originally posted by: -mina-

Loving it Shikhu!!! So much fun!! Train mein antics...Abhi resentful that Pragya won't give him attention...Prags least interested in rockstar!! Yes so good!! Keep it up and write more soon please😊👍🏼

minaaa... Thnks a ton buddy!!!!!:):) so dis is sum part of the cooked receipe... Ha ha... Lets see how d other parts pans out..:):):)

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