ABHIGYA OS : THE LETTER...pt2(pg4)...5/9/14 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg very emotional letter plz continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OF COURSE YOU MUST CONTINUE!

Finally Abhi knows the whole, whole, whole truth! I hope he goes after her, finds her and makes it right! Actually you reminded me of the heroine's letter in Friday's Child by Georgette Heyer, my favourite book of all time. In that one the hero suffers a lot before he finds his wife...here we see our Abhi already suffering, with Daadi locked away 😲

Thank you for such a compelling start, really loved Pragya's letter. Could hear her tired, sad voice as she finally let out all her pain and anxieties. Very scary to think of Abhi turning all controlling and making her unable to leave the house, but it makes sense too, very good story twist! Wonder why Pragya lied to Daadi, did Daadi really believe her? 😔

Hope you come back with some answers and new twists for us! This was beautiful, dramatic, and so intriguing. Please please please PLEASE continue!! And thanks for sharing!!! 👏👏👏❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Come back. There are so many questions unaswered in your letter...Good start...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yes buddy u should definitly continue super soon =)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it very much.
Please do continue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Its nice start..you should continue it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Marvellous OS Dear!Thanks fr pm!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi sweets...
I am back to update this...
First of all bada wala sorry for not replying to all your comments...i am very busy with studies
But your comments means a lot to meee...it encourages me
PS : I have typed the update on my phone so grammatical errors and spelling mistakes honge...moreover I have not done any proof reading tho uske liye bi sorry...
The update can also be short...
I hope you all like it
PART 2
" daadi , please talk to me once , I need you now" abhi begged for the nth time and gave out a breathe
The door opened and daadi came out
" daadi , I was sooo scared" abhi said almost immediately
" kyun ?" daadi asked as if nothing happened
" daadi , chashmish ... I mean pragya left " abhi said
" what difference does that make?? Its good that she left , she never loved you right?? All she wanted from you was money so why worry for a golddigger ?" daadi asked
Abhi was shocked...daadi said everything he used to say to pragya but he never felt so bad but hearing it from daadi made him feel miserable, he realized how much he wronged her
" daadi , aap ghalat samaj rahe hain " abhi said immediately, he can't let daadi think so bad of chashmish
" nai abhi , ghalat tho main pehle samajti thi , agar mujhe ye sab aisa hoga ye pata hota tho main kabhi bi tere shaadi pragya se nai karati thi , ye sab meri galati hai , Maine hi tujhpar zor lagaya aur tune pragya jaise ladki se shaadi ki , ye sab meri galati hai " daadi said
" nai daadi , aap jo pragya ke baare main soch rahi hain wo sab ghalat hai " abhi said
" nai abhi , jo pragya ke baare main pehle sochti thi wo ghalat hai , Mai sochti thi ki wo tujhe sudhar degi , Rishton ki aimyat ka ehsaas dilaayegi , sahi aur galat ki farak samjaayegi , tujhe sahi raste pe laayegi " daadi said
" daadi main aapko kaise samjaaun ki jo kuch bi hua hai usme chashmish ...mera matlab pragya ki"
" koi galati nai hai " daadi completed for him and abhi was shocked
" daadi ?" abhi looked at daadi questiongly
" Maine kab kaha ki pragya ki galati hai ? Maine tho ye kaha ki meri galati hai , jo Maine uss jaise ladki ki zindagi bar baad ki tujhse shaadi karakar , Maine kabhi nai socha tha abhi ki tu itna bura insaan hoga , shayad meri parwarish Mai hi koi kamhi reh gayi hogi warna mera potha kisi ladki ki zindagi ke saath aisa nai khelta , kisi ki poori zindagi kabhi barbaad nai karta , arre Maine tho Teri shaadi karayi thi usse , ye sochkar ki tum dono ek dusre ke bhagya banoge par Maine kabhi ye nai socha tha ki tu uska bhagya kharaab kar dega , tu mera potha nai hai , tu mera potha ho hi nai sakta , tu rockstar abhi hai aur mera abhi iss rockstar main kahin kho gaya " daadi said and tears escaped from her eyes
abhi wanted to hang himself, he loved his daadi more than his life and seeing daadi cry was the most cruel punishment for him and he realized that he was responsible for his daadi's tears
" daadi , I promise..." abhi started
" promise??? Tum iss shabd ka matlab bi jaante ho ?? Shayad tujhe yaad nai tune shaadi ke waqt 7 wachan liye the, 7 wachan matlab 7 promise, kya tune unn 7 wachanon Mai se ek wachan poora kia ?" daadi questioned
Abhi started remembering how he treated his betterhalf
" ek bi nai na ? Ab yaad karke bata pragya ne in 7 wachanon mai konsi wachan nai nibhaya ? " daadi asked
Abhi remembered everything pragya did for him and his family
" mujhe chodkar chali gayi wo " abhi said after thinking a lot
" abhi beta , wo apne marzi se nai gayi , tune usse jaane keliye majboor kia " daadi accused him
" sahi keh rahi hai aap , saari galati meri hai , main pragya ko bilkul deserve nai karta , par daadi mujhe galati ka ehsaas hai , Mai apni galati sudharna chahta hoon , Mai sab kuch teek karna chahta hoon , ab aap hi bataayiye main kya karoon ?" abhi asked
" pragya bhabhi ko wapas le aate hain bhai " aakash interrupted
" tu jaanta hai wo kahaan gayi hai ? " abhi asked quickly
" bhai Maine bhabhi se insist kia ki wo akele naa jaaye , tho driver unhe chodne gaya hai , tho agar hum driver ko poochenge tho wo Hume bata sakta hai ki bhabhi kahaan hai " aakash said
" daadi Mai aapko promise karta hoon , main pragya ko leke aaunga " abhi said and ran out and aakash followed him
" tumne pragya bhabhi ko kahaan choda ?" aakash asked the driver as soon as he came back
" Saab , bhabhi ji ne beech raste hi gaadi roka di aur kahin akele chali gayi " the driver said
" akele ? Tumne usse akele jaane kaise dia ?" abhi asked angrily
" bhai aap shaant ho jaayiye , main poochta hoon" aakash controlled abhi
" tum Hume wahaan le chalo jahaan tumne pragya bhabi ko choda " aakaash said to driver
" aakash , Mai dusre gaadi mein aata hoon " abhi said and ran towards his car
she looked at the bus and wiped her tears
" zindagi Mai hamesha aage badna chahiye beta , peeche modke dekne Mai kuch fayda nai hota " she remembered her mom's words
" life ko jeene ke do tariken hai di , pehla ye ki hum apni dukh logon se baantkar apni dil ko halka karke muskhuraane ki koshih karein aur dusra ye ki hum itna muskhuraaye ki taqleef khud confuse ho jaayegi " she remembered bulbul's words
" aap sabne hamesha sahi kaha , ab main apni zindagi apne sharton par jeeungi , mere hisaabse , bohut ho gaya , ab Mai wo hi karungi jo mera dil kehta hai " she decided and boarded the bus to walk ahead
" are you sure tumne usse yahaan choda ?" abhi asked the driver
" jee Saab , mam yahin utar gayi " the driver answered
" bhai ya se left lenge tho bus stop aata hai and straight jaane pe railway station" aakash said
" teek hai tum railway station jao aur main bus stop jaata hoon , agar tumhe pragya milti hai tho mujhe immediately call karo " abhi said " teek hai bhai " aakash told abhi
" tum auto pakadke ghar chale jaana " aakash told the driver
" jee Saab" the driver answered and left
Abhi and aakash started driving in their respective directions
" please pragya...just give me one chance " abhi begged
To be continued
Will continue based on the no of comments I get
I plan to finish this in 5-6 parts
Do comment and give me your feedbacks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome yaar... do continue soon...

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