Abhigya FF: Cupid chapter 4 updated

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@u.a1254

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Posted: 11 years ago

(Hey, I just had the idea that what if Abhi and Pragya had twins. A girl and a boy but for some reason they got divorced. Abhi was given the custody of the daughter while Pragya got the son. Now what happens what the children finally meet and decide to play cupid for their parents?)

Chapter 1: Page 1

Chapter 2: Page 3

Chapter 3: Page 4

Chapter 4: Page 4

Part 1:

"Bari Daadi." Aditi sais as she hugged Daadi. "Where's Dad?"

"In his room." Daadi replied. "And you... did you have your lunch?"

"Yes, Bari Daadi." Aditi smiled. "How can I skip lunch when you make sure all the servants are keeping an eye on me?"

"I would have checked myself but you know, I am so old. I can't really come up and down again and again." Daadi told her. "God knows how many days I have."

"Stop talking like this. You have to be there for my children's wedding as well." Aditi told her.

"We'll see about that." Daadi laughed. "Now go Abhi must be waiting for you."

"Okay Bari Daadi." Aditi said as she hugged her again. "I'll be back later and we can discuss you know Uncle Sharma matter." Aditi winked at her Daadi and left the room.

***

"Dad." Aditi hugged him. "You're back!"

"Yes, I am back." Abhi replied. "One week without me, how did you feel?"

"I am sure I have gained three kilos." Aditi laughed. "Bari Daadi made sure I eat."

"Well that's who Daadi is." Aditi laughed. "So you're to start your college tomorrow?"

"Yes." Aditi replied. "I am extremely nervous."

"You know you're starting your college makes me feel old, literally really old." Abhi sighed.

"Well Dad you can't deny the universal truth." Aditi told him. "Even the Rockstar Abhi turns old."

"Do you have to keep reminding me?" Abhi asked.

"I won't now." Aditi laughed. "It could be our little secret."

"Done." Abhi replied smiling.

****

"Arjun?" Pragya said coming inside. "Are you ready for tomorrow?"

"Yes Mama." Arjun replied. "All done."

"I can't believe you've grown so much." Pragya replied with tears in her eyes. "You're going to college."

"Mama." Arjun laughed. "You know this makes you sound old."

"Maybe I like be old." Pragya replied. "Wise, old woman."

"You're certainly the best." Arjun said hugging her. "I love you so much."

"I love you too Beta." Pragya replied.

"So this means... I can have a girlfriend?" Arjun said raising his eyebrows.

"We'll see about that." Pragya replied.

"Please." Arjun pleaded.

"Stop whining, as if you're asking for pizza." Pragya replied.

"You know I love teasing you." Arjun said as he hugged Pragya, while Pragya caressed her hair.

(enough for now. This is just the opening extract. If you like it, I will continue it.)

Edited by u.a1254 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

hmmm. . .i really loved the concept!!! hoing to read this one
nice start

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@u.a1254

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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 1:

"Ah. College." Arjun said coming out of the car. He parked the car and went to find his classroom. On the other hand, Aditi just reached the college. She hugged her Dad one last time before coming out of the car to fine her class room.

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"Aditi and Arjun Mehra?" The teacher asked. Aditi turned to look at Arjun. Arjun looked at her. She couldn't believe her ears. This was Arjun? Her brother Arjun? Her Daadi had told her everything and now she couldn't believe her eyes when she saw her brother in front of her. Arjun was staring at her too. This confirmed the fact that Arjun was indeed her brother. Arjun felt the same. He felt so excited to see his sister. His mother was never comfortable talking about her father but Nani had told him everything. He just wanted to run up to her and hug his sister.

After what seemed like eternity the class finally ended. Arjun and Aditi took the first moment to meet each other near the cafeteria.

"Arjun Mehra?" Aditi confirmed. "Pragya and Abhi's son?" Arjun just nodded in response. Aditi hugged him letting her tears fall. Arjun couldn't help but cry too. He after eighteen years had seen his sister.

"Gosh, look at you." Arjun said. "You're so old."

"You too!" Aditi. "I can't believe we missed eighteen years of each others lives. Twins should have been together not poles apart."

"Nani told me about you and I always wanted to see my little sister." Arjun smirked.

"Just five minutes." Aditi countered. "How's... how's Mom?"

"She's good." Arjun replied. "I've seen her cry at nights holding a picture of us. She's a mother after all. She misses her daughter. How about Dad?"

"Same." Aditi. "He would never admit, but he misses you and mom. I found a picture of us and mom in the pillow cover."

"Hmmm." Arjun replied.

"Can I come to your place?" Aditi asked. "I desperately want to see my mom."

"Sure." Arjun replied. "But she can't know who you are."

"I'll take care." Aditi replied wiping her tears.

"Then I'll come at your place." Arjun smiled.

"I'll tell Daadi." Aditi told him.

"I'll tell Nani." Arjun replied.

"So see you later." Arjun hugged her one last time before leaving for his next class. Aditi smiled and left for her class. Destiny did have something in mind when it made them meet. Maybe it was there turn to play the part of cupid.

****

"So hobbies?" Arjun asked during their free time.

"Singing." Aditi smiled.

"Who would have guessed?" Arjun laughed.

"I love to read as well." Aditi replied laughing.

"Surprisingly, we have the same hobbies." Arjun laughed. "I wonder why?"

"You're a Mama's boy." Aditi said shoving him.

"Says the Daddy's girl." Arjun replied rubbing his arm. "That was hard."

"Every morning, Dad and I workout." Aditi laughed.

"I will strangle you with the intensity of my words." Arjun told her.

"And you've got some power over words." Aditi smiled.

"Mama." Arjun replied.

"Self explanatory." Aditi laughed.

****

"Mama?" Arjun said coming inside.

"Yes." Pragya said coming outside. Aditi controlled her urge to hug her.

"This is my class fellow and little sister." Arjun told Pragya. "Aditi." Aditi saw many emotions on Pragya's face hearing the name Aditi but Pragya shrugged them off.

"Hello Aditi." Pragya smiled.

"Hello M-Auntie." Aditi replied. Mentally cringing at word Auntie. Who calls their mom Auntie?"

"Okay, Mom I'm hungry." Arjun said. "So is Aditi. Can you make us something?"

"Right on it." Pragya said. "You go meet Nani."

Pragya left the room. Nani (Pragya's daadi) came inside. She saw Aditi and quickly hugged her.

"This is her?" Nani asked. "This is our Aditi?"

"Yes." Aditi replied hugging her. She controlled her tears. "You can't tell Mom."

"I know beta." Nani said caressing her face. "You're just like a male version of your father. We were great friends." Aditi smiled at Nani. Her heart was overwhelmed seeing her mom, her nani, her brother.

(enough for now.)

Precap for next

"I never had a mother." Aditi cried while hugging Pragya. "Seeing you just brought out all of those emptiness."

"Shhh." Pragya consoled her. "I am sure Dad is there for you."

"He is." Aditi cried. "He tried so hard to be my mother but you know sometimes you need a mother."

"I can be your mother." Pragya smiled wiping her tears. Something about Aditi reminded her of Abhi...

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vivkriti

@vivkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome. Abhigya parents of teenagers. Great concept. Continue next part soon

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Sandhya

@Sandrav

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Posted: 11 years ago

that was too good...loved the concept awasome pls continue soon...😊

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FhatTheWuck.

@FhatTheWuck.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Love love love the concept!!!!

Cant wait for more!

Edited by -Martinski- - 11 years ago

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@RatiTheAngel

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Posted: 11 years ago

amazing concept update soon

Edited by ratitheangel - 11 years ago

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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you so much for this story

In another forum I am reading a similar story (started a while ago)

There the dad has the son n mom has the daughter

Twins

They meet at a camp

I want the son to take his sis to meet their dad n introduce as his friend she will be the house guest till dad does not realize this is my girl just when he realizes the children run off to the city their mom is

Dad follows kids there n then mom dad reunion

Umm you have part 1 n chapter 1 := I am 😕

Edited by Chahanya - 11 years ago