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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kyun? KYUN purab? Another lightning nd he closed his eyes...he could clearly see her ..her beautiful long hair completely wet in rain her fringes sticking to her wet face..her lips parted nd quivering in cold rain...her beautiful amber eyes nw looks dead with so much pain that it took every ounce of self control to nt hug her...she looked diff ?bt then dint he break her..those harsh words of his it still kills him every time she think abt it

"haha ms Arora u were jus another flick for me..a very short time relation..haha..ppl like u think so high abt urself lol..what was it main tumare jaise ladkon blah blah nd look at u ...u are here jus like all my other so called gf begging me to take...
I HATE U


purab tum?aaj balki abhi tumari shadi hai aur tum Uhh teek tho haina..tum itne down kyun lag rhi hai? Tumare aur Al ka jagda hua hai kya? Asked Abhi looking all worried bt purab nw dint have d energy to answer all his q's ...so jus said a nothing nd turned other way

Purab dekh main jaanti hoon Al thodi ziddi hai aur uski apni soch bhi hai lekin im sure u will b able to set her right...nd im sure u will do this for me..he asked with bit uncertainity he hated seeing Abhi like this...purab noded..bt Abhi was nt convinced..

Pu...suddenly d door opened nd pragya babhi entered d room bt dint look at me bt abhi nd said panditji dulhe ko bula tahi hai...if it was dme other time i would have laughed nd teased abhi d way he slightly flush evrytime bhabi adress him he is in love bt wonder what it will take him to confess it! Abhi left nd i was abt to leave when bhabhi looked at me with pity...


he remembered during his engagement day

"why did u do this to my sister purab why? Usne tumara kya bigada tha...tumse pyar karne ki itna bada saza ki tumne usse hi thod diya...kyun thoda uska dil tumne? KYUN?

KYUNKI MAIN USSE PYAR KARTA HOON...i screamed unable to stop my self ..bohut pyar...

Phir kyun ? Bhabi asked shocked

kyunki Abhi kabhi nahi manegi iss rishte keliye...aur mai. Abhi ke khilaf nahi jaa sakti...

So u left my lil sister...she asked with lots of anger nd confusion

i looked down unable to meet her eyes " yes"...main abhi ko dukh nahi de sakta ...
Its nt worth it purab..she said bt nw i was angry..
Abhi is most imp tome than anyone...nd i will kill myself if he ask me too..so leaving my love wa nothing compared to what he has done for me...for an orphan like me...u will never understand...bt she shaked her head n said
I do one thing that is u do not deserve my sister nd her love...or anyone's love...nd one day u will realise that nothing is worth leaving ur love nothing...!


Someone was screaming inside him dat she is right bt then he heard Abhi's voice
"Mere liya Aliya sab se zyada maine rakhti hai aur woh tumse pyar karti hai...agar tum ne use ke dil thod diya iska matlab tumne hamare frndship thod diya"

this mrg is worth saving ma frndship so it is worthy.. he reached d stairs...there were lots of media nd lots of ppl bt his eyes searched for that beautiful eyes where i always feel at peace nd i saw her standing there in a white anarkali looking beautiful bt she looked diff ..her eyes were nt red like hw her eyes are alway it was normal bt still her eyes were full nd when looked straight at her as sensing my eyes she looked at with no hatred bt...love? My heart was beating at an abnormal rate ...as if it would burst open..nd then she smiled a smallcute smile nd my eyes involantrily searched for bhabhi nd saw her looking at bulbul then at me...nd then it hitted she knws ...she knws i love her...apart of him rejoiced at d knowldge that she doesnt hate him...bt d other part cried thinking abt her future life nd then he saw she walking forward dropping a piece of paper nd looked at me nd left...

I half ran thru d stairs why idk...i wanted to stop her..hug her nd kiss every inch of her face nd make her feel my love bt no a hand crabbed my arm nd saw Abhi smiling nd asking "itna kya jaldi hai jiju" nd d whole crwd laughed bt irritated i turned arround nd saw she has left! I reached d mandab nd took d piece of paper without any one noticing ...

I forgive u

I was nt able to think properly or see ...smeone made me sit at mandab...aliya was complaining abt d dua bt nothing mattered nw other than d girl who left d hall whom i have hurted more than anyone...bt who jus forgive me without evn asking...
Its nw or never purab said someone in his mind ...grw a back bone fight for ur love ...said a voice very much like Abhi in his heart..
Abhi was asking me something...i nodeed a no nd stood up..."i cant""i cant"

What?Abhi asked
I love her abhi nd i cant marry Aliya...i said
What are u saying purab? Abhis ghussa was evident in his voice almost all d guest took a step back...
I love smeone else Abhi...i said
nd i asked u to forget nd move on with Aliya nd u promised...he screamed nw hding my collar
i tried ...bt i cant..aliya doesnt deserve it abhi nor my love plsAbhi...
Bhai dont listen to him...he jus cant dumb me on mandap...u cant purab...u jus cant...aliya screamed...
Bt all those thing tuned out when pragya bhabi suddenly gasped nd a ph fell frm her hand ...she was panting...tears where forming in her eyes bt she jus looked at me horrified and ran..
Nw my heart was beating or thumping nd i knew it "bulbul" evryone who was looking at babhi leaving d hall nw evryone was looking at me..bt i ran as fast as i could nd while running i saw realisation stucking Abhi nd he holded my hand bt i was running ...still i heard him say/ask bulbul

It was pouring outside heavily that we cant evn see properly bt i vaguely saw a fig running nd i follpwed her...there was huge traffic ...nd then suddely babhi stopped infront of ppl gathered bt this time i dint wait fir babhi nd i pushed back every one nd saw her my bulbul..lying under d cover of colorful umbrella's in her own pool of blood...i wanted to cry...scream for help bt nothing came out of my mouth i jus kneeled down nd hugged her unmoving body to my heart nd jus sat holding her close to my heart!
Babhi was right it was nt worth it..nothing was worth more than having her close to me...having her alive bt it was too late!



Hahaha im sorry if anyone has read this bashan ...i knw it is plain headache bt this qas giving me head ache nd wanted very badly to get it out
😆 😕 sorry 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
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kuch samajh mein nahi aayaa...
i dun know why.. 😛 ..kidding!!
but anyways RaBul just awesome always'
keep writing!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dude u made me cry...Aisa end kabhi na ho...god I really feel bad for RaBul...y them...ekta can't do this to us...i m very attached to them..n if they don't end up I will be devastated
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful dude 😃👏👏👏 <3 loved it ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome
i thought they will unite in the end but...😭
Edited by siliya21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS!!

But the end !! :'(




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written! pls write more OS on RABUL :)
Edited by simran422 - 11 years ago

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