fAn fiC - - UPDATE pg. 3 !!

hi people! i hope u guys wont mind if i make a FAN-FIC , im rly bored and yah lol so i hopee u enjoy itt :D and hopefully im allowed to make oneee..hehe 😳

A= Agni

N= Niyti

S= Shourya

V= Vikram

R= Rajlaxmi

RA=Rajveer

V= Vasu shouryas mom

P= Padma Dadisa

DD= Shouryas Dadisa

C=Carol

when i get a lil lazi i will start using the letters..lol

and soooooo on...lol not even sure if im using all of them today hehe

well here i go..:D

i'll try to have everything in it... not sure about comedy tho.. coz u noe..lol ok now finally here i go

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Setting: Rathore House Cooridor

(Niyti is walking down the hall)

Shourya: Niyti Merii Jaan!!!
Niyti: (thinking what the heck) Shourya App Itna khush kyon hoon!

Shourya: Because, I Love you Niyti

Niyti: Kiya??????????? Mein tum sa nahi agni sa pyaar karthi hoon

Shourya: AGNI??????

Niyti: my stupid shouryaaa..!! nahii mein sif app sai pyaar karthi hoon aur kisi sa nahi mein app sa humasha sai pyaar karthi thi

Shourya: what? mein tho sif maazak kar ra tha

niyti : (gets all teary) Mee too (niyti starts walking backwords for some reason and is falling)

Before niyti falls.. someone catches herr.. its none other thenn

"oooooo surya surya agni joyti joyti agni swahhhhaaaa"

agni: (angry face) deek kar chala karo

niyti: uuuuuhhh uhhhh sorrrry (runsss)

shourya: (grabs her arm)

niyti: (getting all nervous n tense pushs shourya away)

niyti is runninggg...

Vikram: Niyti baata...thum bhag kyon ri hoon?

Niyti: uhh baara papa ....uuuuuuuhhh kyon ka shourya mera peecha para hai ..

Vikram: haha. shourya ki adath gay nahi ha..

Niyti: (smiles)

Agni over hears this and says to himself

agni: (thinking ... yeh ladka sif mera ho gi.. sif meri)

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DD: oyyyee vasu, shourya aur niyti ki PARTY ki thiari kari ha yah nahi

V: haa maSa abhi sif thodi baaaki hai

DD: yeh rajlaxmi ... where is she?

V: room mein check karo maSa

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in the meantimeee... Niyti is getting ready in a Red & Gold Sari with lotss of shinnyy glitterrry things on itt.. she lookss rly pretty!!

Knock at her doorr

Niyiti: who is ittt

Agni: Shourya!

(Opens doorr!)

*ooooooooo agni joyti joyti agni swaaahhhaaaaa*

niyti: (shocked)

agni: (grabs niytis hand)

.......

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meanwhile downstairss guests are arrving and some light musik is playingg in the backround tht music tht came in ek ladki anjaani si "dil pa maar da gohli ,mein teri peecha choorroo na na na )... &&& pardesiya and lots of other party Music!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Guests are comming in and Shourya is also downstiarsss and greeting them n everyone is downstiars having funnn!!

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so agni grabed niytis had and then...

Niyti: kiya kaar ra ho tum?

Agni: (kisses her hand)

Niyti: (pulls away and moves back while agni follows her)

Agni: (lookin h0t and is follwing niyti )

niyti: agni !!! what the hell are you doing

Agni : Niyti thum siif mera hoon aur humasha raho gi

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downstairsssss...

people are dacing and partying ...until they hear this big crash and the lights goo offff... and pple hear a big SCREAM!!!!!!!...

everyone is shocked

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thts all for now..!!!

YAH this was LAMEEEEEEEE too...lol

well if u want more just tell me and ill think n postt !!!

hehe sorry if it was boring.. lol 😆

Originally posted by: ayeshag

niceee...i like itt....good jobb sis 👏 👏 👏

hehe thnxxxx i didnt noe how i shud of ended itt soo i jus did tht.. i cudnt think anymore 😃

i thought it was OK.. 😳

wow! 👏 that was verryyy goood!! you should continue writing it and i would absouletly love to read it! its awesome!

Originally posted by: Deepii

wow! 👏 that was verryyy goood!! you should continue writing it and i would absouletly love to read it! its awesome!

Thanks!!!!! well if more ppl like it then i guess i can be one of the offical fan fictORsz of kulvaddhu section :) only with kimis permission 😳

Awsome Job sis I will cont.. Reading tomorrow. 😃 But nice one. 👏

thx bella n aman glad u liked it 😃

i loved it please continue thanks alot yaar keep it up and a nice one 😛

😆 😆 😆 thanks it was great!! keep it up 😉