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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 13

Kanya is looking for Shanaya

But doesn't know where she is!!

She is thinking she probably stepped out!

Ranbir comes home from work

He hugs Kanya from behind!!!

Kanya smiles!!!

Aayan comes too

Ranbir lets go quickly!!!

Kanya: Everyone is here… but where is Shanaya???

Aayan: I don't know!! She didn't tell you!!

Kanya; NO!!

Ranbir: She will come she probably went somewhere!!

Aayan goes into the room

He sees the envelope

He opens it

And reads Shanaya's letter

He is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And he sees the divorce papers and her signature!!!!

He cant believe it!!!!!!

He comes out

Tells them both

Ranbir: What did you do??

Aayan: I didn't do anything!!

They are shocked!!!……

Ranbir: Then why did she leave?? There must be a reason!!!!!

Ranbir gets mad at Aayan

Kanya tells him to calm down!!!!!!!

Aayan reads the letter over and over again

And Shanaya wrote hope he finds someone that he can be happy with!

And all she cares about is his happiness!!!

And that she is taking her memories w/ her!!!

Aayan is like now what!!!

Ranbir and Kanya both have read it!!

And they feel so bad!!!!!!!

Aayan even tells them

That he didn't do anything

Becuz they haven't talked to each other what so ever!!!

And they haven't even fought w/ each other!!!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir yells at him

Aayan feels bad

And he goes in the room

Kanya tells Ranbir to cool it!!!

Kanya goes into the room

And she tells him a calm matter!!!!!

Aayan is just lost in space!!!

Kanya tries to explain……

She doesn't know if she has gone through him!!!!

She leaves……..

But before she does…..

That photo that was on the floor…. Gets stuck on the bottom of her shoes….

She sees picks it up …….. sees it….. and is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya looks at the photo and she's like omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya; Where did you get this picture from???

Aayan sees

Aayan: That's Shanayas!!!

Kanya: No its not!! Its mine!!!!!!!!!!

Aayan: WHAT??? But Shanaya has always had it!!!!

Kanya runs to her room

Looks through something

And finds the exact same picture

She is shocked

She runs back to Aayan…

And shows him

He is shocked!!!!

Kanya; That's me!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And the other girl

Aayan: That's Shanaya!!!

Kanya is shocked!!

Ranbir is calling Kanya

But she is too shocked

Ranbir sees her Aayan's room

Kanya is crying

Aayan is like omg!!

Aayan; That means you too..

Kanya cries even more

Ranbir: Kanya whats wrong??

He comes to closer…..

Ranbir is like whats going

Ranbir: What is this??

Kanya; Ranbir…

She cries

She is soo shocked that she cant even talk!!!!

Ranbir comes to know

He is shocked!!

Kanya: Please bring my sister back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aayan is shocked!!

Kanya: I want her here in front of me!! Please!

Ranbir tells her to calm down

She starts crying

Ranbir consoles her

Kanya looks around

Maybe to find more pictures!!!

Aayan is like she took her whole box!!!!!

Cuz it isnt here!!!!

Then she finds an envelope

She takes that out……

But she's like whatever

Throws it on the bed

Aayan looks at it

Like glances at it

And then he opens it

And he is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir: Whats wrong??

Aayan is speechless!!!!!

Ranbir takes it

He reads it…

He is shocked!!!

Kanya sees

He is shocked!

Its her pregnancy papers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aayan is like she is pregnant!!!!!!!!!!

He cant believe it!!!

Kanya grabs Aayan by the collar

And tells her that she wants her sister back!!!!!!!

She wants her sister back

And she should be back

Becuz you are the father of her child!!

Aayan is speechless

Aayan goes to look for Shanaya

He's thinking where could she be?

How could she be???

Kanya is crying

Ranbir consoles her!!!!

She hugs him!!!!

Ranbir is like he will find her!

Aayan drives around

He asks people

But they say they haven't seen her!!

He's like where could she be!!!

Then he thinks their home!!

He drives there

The door is open

He goes to the front door

comes inside

Shanaya is coming out

And she sees him

She is shocked!!

Aayan sees her

Shanaya is like omg!

Whats he doing here?

Aayan comes in

Comes closer to him

Shanaya: What are you doing here??

Aayan: I should ask you the same thing!!!!!!

Shanaya: Meaning?

Aayan: You wanted to give me a divorce… even though you found out that you were pregnant

Shanaya is looking down!!!

She doesn't know what to say

She closes her eyes!!

Aayan: do you know what I was going through when I found those papers

Shanaya is quiet

Aayan: Come on!! You are coming w/ me!!

Shanaya: I am not going anywhere!!!!! I gave you the divorce!! You are free now!!! You can do whatever I want!!

She assumes he signed them

And he doesn't say anything!!!

Aayan: Look Bhabhi's orders were you bring you back!!

Shanaya: Well tell her that I don't belong in that house anymore!!

Aayan: You do!!!

Shanaya: Oh yeah who says so!!….I am divorced to you!!! So now I have no one!!

Aayan: OH yeah well there's a person that is waiting for her sister to come back home!!

Shanaya: Sister?

Aayan; Yes sister!!!! She is crying becuz she has found her long lost sister!!

Shanaya: Wait!! What??

Aayan: Bhabhi found a picture on the floor and when she picked it up she was shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!

He tells her what picture it was

And tells her that Kanya is her sister

Shanaya is shocked!!!!

She cant believe it!!

She is speechless

Shanaya: Sister??

Aayan: Yes sister!!!!!!!!!!

Shanaya is like omg!

She is crying

She is like Kanya is my sister!!!

Aayan tells her to come w/ him

But w/o thinking about Aayan

She goes w/ him

They both arrive

Kanya sees Shanaya

She cries

So does Shanaya

Kanya runs to her

And she hugs her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Both of them are crying!!!

Ranbir and Aayan are looking on

Ranbir: Kanya….. I was thinking…

Kanya: Hmm…

Ranbir: WE haven't gone our honeymoon yet???

Kanya: And??

Ranbir: Well.. I think we should go!!

Kanya smiles

She turns around

Kanya: But.. what about…

Ranbir: They will be fine

Kanya; Yeah but…

Ranbir: Oh come we will be only gone for one week! And plus I couldn't take you!!! Which I felt bad!!

Kanya: Ranbir….. as long you are there….. I don't care!!!

Ranbir kisses her!!!

Ranbir: So I will book the tickets???

Kanya: Yes!!

He smiles!!!

Kanya smiles!

Kanya tells Shanaya

Shanaya is happy for her!!

But Kanya tells her she doesn't want to leave her…

But Shanaya is like don't worry about me!

I will be fine!!…….

Kanya smiles!!!

At NGI….

Aayan comes

Ranbir is like what a surprise!!!!

Aayan comes in

Ranbir tells him to sit!!!

Ranbir tells him

That him and Kanya are going on their honeymoon

So he wants Aayan to take care of everything

Aayan is like okay!!!

Then a gal comes in

She works there

She comes in

She asks Ranbir for an advance

She's the best worker there is

Ranbir trusts her a lot

She says that she's getting engaged so she needs the money!!!

She wants to buy the ring for her fiance!!

She has the best one picked out for him!!

Ranbir is like forget the advance

He tells Aayan to take her

And she can get any ring she wants.. for him

She's like omG!!

She thanks him so many times!!!!!

Ranbir is like its okay!!!

Aayan takes her

They both go

And they look at rings

Gal is so happy…

Shanaya is passing by

She sees him w/ her

She's shocked and sad!!!!!!!!!!!

Aayan is like try this

Slips the ring on

Shanaya is like omg!

She starts to cry

And she walks off!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She closes her eyes!!

She's like he's getting married

To someone else!!!!!

She's thinking

Now she really cant stay in this house!

Aayan likes a ring (Woman's)

And he thinks about Shanaya….

And gets one for her

But he wont give it to her now!!

He will wait!!!!!!!

Shanaya comes home

She goes into the room

And that picture of today

keeps coming to her head

Shanaya is like

He really doesn't care about me!!!

Not at all!!

She is crying!!!

The gal picks out the ring

And he thanks Aayan for

Aayan is like no problem!

He drops her off

And he comes home

The ring which he got for Shanaya is in his hand

Shanaya sees it

She's all sad!!!!

He goes into the room

And he puts it away!

Aayan is thinking if only I can give this to you!!!

He puts it on the un signed divorce papers!!!!

And he closes the drawer!!!

Meanwhile

Kanya packs for their honeymoon

Ranbir comes home

And sees her

He comes behind her!!

Ranbir: What are you doing?

Kanya; Packing!!

Ranbir: This many clothes??

Kanya; We need them!

Ranbir: Who needs this many clothes?

Kanya: RANBIR???

Ranbir smiles!!

He kisses her!!

Kanya: Ranbir stop!!!

Ranbir: what?? Just getting ready for it!!

Kanya; badmaash!!!!

He smiles!!!!

Ranbir: I am happy!!! That we are seeing this day today!!!

Kanya: really??

RANBIR: Yes!!!! And I am happy cuz I have everything!!!

Kanya; You mean all of this!!

Ranbir: No!!

Kanya; Then?? You said everything

Ranbir: My everything is you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya smiles!!!!

Ranbir: You are my everything!!!!!…… as long as I have you…. I don't need anything else!!

Kanya blushes!!

She continues to pack

Aayan and Shanaya come out of their rooms at the same time

Aayan sees her

Shanaya sees him

And she walks away

Aayan is sad!!!!

He was hoping she would say something!!!

But she didn't!!!

He's like okay!!!!

Kanya goes into the kitchen

And starts to cook

Dinner is ready….

She puts it on the table

She calls everyone!!

No is coming

Kanya: I SAID DINNER!!!!

But still no boday!

Kanya: YOU KNOW I JUST DIDN'T COOK FOR MYSELF YOU KNOW??

Ranbir: Arre we are coming why are you yelling??

Kanya; Just making sure you heard me!!!!

Ranbir: why are you yelling??

Kanya; Becuz!!! Come on now!!

Kanya goes back into the kitchen!

Aayan and Ranbir eat!!!!

Aayan tells Ranbir about the ring

Ranbir is shocked!!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir: ring??

Aayan: Yes I got her one!!!

Ranbir: Does she know?

Aayan: No!! But please don't tell her!

Ranbir: wait didn't you sign the papers??

Aayan says no

Ranbir is shocked!!!

Ranbir: That means

Aayan: we are still married!!!!!

Ranbir: Then..

As soon as he says then

Shanaya comes out…..

Aayan: Please I will handle everything when the time is right! But you have to promise me u wont tell this to Shanaya!!

Ranbir: I wont!!

That's all she hears

And Ranbir asks him how the ring looks and what not

And he tells him

Ranbir: I am sure she will be happy!!

Aayan: I hope so too!!!!!!

Ranbir: U better tell me when you give it to her!!!!

Aayan: Of course!

Both smile

And continue to eat!


plz comment!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
WOW Yaar. It was really nice but you updated it so late😭. I was literally refreshing the Kuch Is tarah discussion page every 5 mins to see if I can get the update. But anyways it was worth the wait. Keep up the good work
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
hey great part please continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
hey if shanaya doesn't want aayan to know that she is pregnant why did she leave the paper in the nanda's house.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
oo i luv this part
especially the missunderstandings!
continue sooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
hey great update!
please continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome update, that was cute!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88

Part 14


Shanaya walks away from there

And she is sad!

She's like even Ranbir is siding w/ him!!!

She is like omg!!!

She wants to get away from there!!

She doesn't want to stay there!…..

2 days later

Both Ranbir and Kanya leave !!!

Ranbir is telling Aayan

To take care of everything at work

Aayan is like I will

Kanya tells Shanaya to take care of herself!!!!!

Shanaya says she will

Ranbir and Kanya leave

Aayan and Shanaya are alone!!

Shanaya walks away

Aayan tries to talk to Shanaya

But Shanaya is like leave me alone

Shanaya: Don't talk to me!!!! Infact stay away from me if you can!!!

Aayan: But..

Shanaya: Please!!!!!

Aayan: What did I do??

Shanaya: U know what you did! And you are still acting like u don't know!!!

She leaves

Aayan is confused!

Ranbir and Kanya are on the plane

Ranbir puts his head on her shoulders…..

And she has her hands on his face

Both are acting lovey dovey!!!

Some girl keeps turning back and seeing

Kanya moves her hand…..

Kanya tells him to stop

Ranbir is like why

Kanya is like that girl is watching

Girl giggles

Ranbir is telling the girl to sit back down

So she does

Ranbir comes to her

Girl looks

Ranbir sees her… and he's like this is gonna be interesting!

The girl keeps looking at Ranbir!!

Ranbir is like what??

Girl giggles

Ranbir: what she giggling about?

Kanya; You!!!!

Ranbir: I can see that!!!

Kanya: What are you laughing at??

Girl: Him!!

Kanya: Why??

Girl: Just becuz!!

She sits back down!

Ranbir: What do I have something on my face??

Kanya: No!

Ranbir is like okay!!

He keeps romancing w/ her

And comes closer to her

The girl looks back again!

Ranbir sees her

Kanya smiles!!!

Ranbir tells her to turn around

She does

She keeps doing that!….

Ranbir: Cant I just have you all to myself??

Kanya; You do??

Ranbir: not now!

Kanya laughs!!!

They arrive…

They get checked in and everything

And go to their rooms

The guy puts their things away

And he leaves

Ranbir hugs Kanya

Ranbir: Finally!!!

He smiles

She giggles!!!!

Meanwhile

Nanda House

Shanaya is sad

The scenes keep coming into her head

She's so sad!

Then… the gal comes over to Nanda House

Shanaya's in her room

Aayan comes out

Aayan: What a surprise!!! What are you doing here??

Gal: Came to say thank you!!!!

Aayan: For what??

Gal: For everything!!!!

Aayan: There's nothing to worry about!!

Gal: You are a very good friend!!!!

Aayan smiles

He hugs her!!!

Friendly hug!

Shanaya comes out

And she sees her

She's shocked!!!!

They un hug!

Gal: Here I came to show you our invitations what do you think?

Aayan: Nicely done!

Gal: I picked it out!

Aayan: You have really good taste!

Shanaya has watery eyes!!

Gal: Well you keep that one… but our names aren't on it!!!

Aayan: Its okay!!!

Gal: Bye!!

Aayan: bye!!

He puts the card on the table

And walks off!!

Shanaya comes and looks at the card!

Shanaya looks at the card

The date is in two weeks!!

She looks at it

And she is crying!!!

She is thinking

That she knows everything is over!!

Here she is crying

In the room

Aayan is crying

He is looking at the ring that he had got for her!

Meanwhile….

Ranbir and Kanya come back

They went to get something to eat…..

And they are back

It's a little cold

Kanya goes by the window

And she goes and closes it

While she is closing it

Ranbir comes from behind

He puts his arms around her

Kanya: Ranbir let me close this!!

Ranbir: Why?

Kanya; Cuz its cold!!!

Ranbir: No its not!

Kanya; Ranbir please!

He picks her up

Kanya; RANBIR??

Ranbir takes her by the bed

She is smiling

He puts her down

He comes down…….

Scene fades away slowly

In the middle of the night

Aayan cant sleep

He comes out

And sits on the couch

Flashbacks of Shanaya

Keeps coming in his head

Of how they fought

And when they got married

He didn't like her

And what not

But all those feelings have changed!

Shanaya cant sleep either

She keeps tossing and turning

When she turns around

She sees no one next to her

Before she was use to Aayan being there

Now he's not there!

She puts her hand there!!

And closes her eyes!!

Afterwards She falls asleep

Aayan goes in her room

Opens the door

And for a good chunk of time

He looks at her!!

She moves a little bit

So he quickly closes the door

And he leaves from there!…….

Shanaya turns

But she didn't hear or see anything!!!!!

Aayan goes back in his room

And tries to go to sleep!!!

ext Morning

Ranbir and Kanya are cuddled up….

Kanya is cold

Cuz the window is open a little bit

She comes closer to Ranbir……

After a couple of mins

He opens his eyes

And sees her

He smiles

He caresses her face a little bit

She opens her eyes

Ranbir: Good Morning!!

Kanya smiles

Kanya; Good Morning!!!!……..

Ranbir: Someone is cold this morning!!

Kanya: I told you… to close the window… its so cold!!!

Ranbir: Its not cold!!

Kanya Yes it is!!!

She gets bundled up in the blanket!!…

Ranbir laughs

He takes away the blanket

Kanya: Ranbir stop!!!!!!… give it to me!!!

Ranbir: Why?

Kanya; Becuz!!

Ranbir: U don't need a blanket!! I am here!!!

Kanya; Ranbir!!!

They fight over it

And he pulls a little hard

And she comes on top of him

He smiles at her

She blushes

He tries to come closer to her

But she nods her head no

And she tries to get up……..

But he isnt letting go!

Back at home

Shanaya is talking to the gal on the phone

And this time

He talks to her fiance

They have a nice chat

Aayan is like he's a nice guy

The guy has to go

So he gives it back to her

They start talking again….

Shanaya is listening

Gal is asking

If Ranbir and Kanya will be coming?

Aayan: Of course!!! Brother and bhabhi will both come!!! Would bo ever miss it?? He cant!!!

Shanaya listens

She's sad again!!!

Misunderstanding!

Aayan: I would tell Shanaya.. but I don't know!!!…

Shanaya is shocked and sad!

Aayan: I wouldn't mind telling her but I don't think she would come!!!!

They keep talking

Shanaya cries

And she goes back in her room

Aayan finishes talking to her

And hangs up the phone

Aayan gets up

Goes towards his room

While going he sees Shanaya crying

Aayan comes in

And ask her whats wrong?

Shanaya looks up

And yells for him to leave her alone

Aayan is shocked!!

Shanaya: LEAVE!!!! PLEASE LEAVE! GET OUT NOW!!

She yells and she screams!!!!…

Aayan: Shanaya why are you yelling???

Shanaya: Please leave me alone!

Aayan: I wont leave you til I know whats bothering you!

Shanaya: You are bothering me! Now leave!!

Aayan is sad

And he leaves!!

Kanya and Ranbir are out

And having a blast w/ each other

They look at different things…

They go by the beach

They walk hand in hand….

And talk…

Ranbir lets go of her hand

And he goes by the water

Goes down

And splashes her a little bit

Kanya; Ranbir no!!

She comes and both splash each other!

And then Kanya pushes Ranbir and he falls

And he gets wet

Kanya gets up

And she laughs

Ranbir: Kanya..

He gets up

And runs after her!!!

He grabs her by the waist

And he spins her!!!!

She smiles….

Both have a good time!!

Both later on

Sit down

They are going to watch the sunset

Its almost time for it

Then they both watch it

And it looks so beautiful!!

They both stay there

Neither of them want to get up!….

They stay there for about a good amount of time!

Meanwhile

Shanaya is walking

The gal comes

Shanaya sees her

She is shocked!!!……..

Gal sees Shanaya

Gal: hey aren't you Shanaya?

Shanaya doesn't even want to look at her

Shanaya: Yes! But how do u know?

Gal: Aayan has told me so much about you!

Shanaya is like he's been talking to her about me!!

Gal: He wont stop talking about you!!

Shanaya is like oh brother!

Shanaya: Congratulations!!!

Gal: Oh thank you very much!!!! We love each other very much!!!

Shanaya is like please don't tell me that!

Gal: Please come!!

Shanaya: I don't know I will see!

Gal I would love it if you would come!!!…… So will Aayan!!!!

Shanaya is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gal: well I got to!! I have to meet him!!! U know??!!

Shanaya is like whatever!!!

Gal leaves

She ruined her mood!!!

Shanaya just walks off….

She comes back home

Aayan isnt there

She's sad!!

Shes thinking he's w/ her!!!!

She's like whatever!!

Shanaya goes into his room

She is looking for something that might be there

And she finds it!!

She sees the box on the table

She comes to it

And sees the ring

She starts to cry!!!


plz comment!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
Awesome Awesome Job!!!!!!!!!!!
Please Please Continue A.S.A.P
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
awesome update, I hope Shanya realizes the truth soon!

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