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Part 11


Ranbir: Stay for a while

Kanya; No!! Come on get up!!

Ranbir: Kanya!!

He whines a little bit!!!!

Kanya comes closer to him

He hugs her!!!

Kanya; Ranbir let go!!! And up!!

Ranbir: Kanya!!!

Kanya; Don't u have to go to work!!

Ranbir: so?

Kanya; Don't you so me!!

She gets up

He wont let go!!

He pulls her hard

And that she falls on top of it!!

Ranbir: That's better!!

Kanya blushes!

He goes to kiss her

Kanya stops him!!!

Kanya nods her head no!!!

Ranbir: one more!!

Kanya: No!!!!

RANBIR: Pleaes!!

Kanya: Ranbir no!!!!

After a while..

She finally makes him let go

She takes her shower

And comes out

She tells Ranbir to get up

Ranbir gets up

He kisses her again

Kanya; RANBIR go!!

He smiles!!!

He goes into the shower

Kanya goes in the mandir and she goes and prays!!

Ranbir comes out

Hears the bell…

So he knows that she is praying

He goes in the living room

Shanaya and Aayan come in….

Aayan: brother!!!!

Ranbir sees them

Ranbir: Aayan!!!!!

They both come in

Ranbir: What are you doing here?

Aayan; Why didn't you tell me what happened?

Ranbir: Aayan..

Aayan: What?? Am I no body to u anymore!

Ranbir: its not that!!

Aayan; Than!!

RANBIR: well everything is over!!! So forget about it!!

Kanya comes out a thali

Kanya: RANBIR!!!!!!…… Are you out yet??

Aayan and Shanaya see her

They are like who is she?

Kanya sees them

Aayan: Brother is there something you want to tell me!!

Ranbir: Yes… meet ur bhabhi!!!

Aayan/ Shanaya: Bhabhi???

Ranbir: yes!!

Kanya comes to them

Ranbir: Kanya…. This is my younger brother Aayanant!!!!!

Kanya smiles!!

Aayan: Brother….. so much happened and you didn't tell me!!!!… Bhabhi…. U and brother?? How????

Kanya: Don't ask!!!!……….

Ranbir: What??

Kanya laughs!!!

Ranbir asks them are they going to stay!!

Aayan says no!!!!!

They will go back!!

Kanya asks why!!

Ranbir asks too!!

Aayan is like no!!!!

They don't want them to know about their fighting and what not!!!

He doesn't give them an answer

But Kanya says that they will stay here

Aayan and Shanaya look at each other

Kanya forces them to stay!!

So they end up staying!!!

For the next couple of days…

Kanya gets to know more about them

And they get to know more about her

Aayan and Shanaya have been at it

But quietly

So the other two don't suspect a thing!!

One day

Kanya's in the kitchen

Shanaya comes and helps her!!!

Shanaya asks her about her family!!!!

Kanya: I don't have anyone!!

Shanaya: WHAT?? Why?

Kanya: My parents died when I was little!! I know nothing about them!!

Shanaya: U must have siblings!!

Kanya: I heard that I had a brother and sister… but I was only 4!! So I don't know!!!! Someone else brought me up!!!

Shanaya: Oh!!!…. I had a sister too… but she isnt here anymore!

Kanya; Oh I am sorry!!!!

Shanaya: Its okay!!!!… I had a picture of her…. When I was only like 1 years old!!!….

They both talk to each other!!!

Ranbir and Aayan are talking….

Ranbir: So???

Aayan: So?!

Ranbir: How's life been treating you?

Aayan: Okay I guess!!

Ranbir: How are you and Shanaya??

Aayan: Okay!! Good!!

Ranbir: Aayan.. I can tell when a person is lying so don't even lie to me!!

Aayan: Really brother!! Nothing!!

RANBIR; Aayan???

Aayan looks down!!!!

Aayan; Okay!!!….U win!!

Ranbir: Wats been going on w/ u 2??

Aayan tells him everythinG!1

Ranbir: I told you!!… but did u listen!!! No!!! Why didn't you come back?

Aayan: Becuz!!! I didn't want to face you!!

Ranbir: How long has this been going on?

Aayan: for the past 1 year!

Ranbir: Past year??

Aayan: Yes!!!

Ranbir: Why?? Whats the problem?… u or her???

Aayan doesn't say anything

Ranbir: You or her???

Aayan: Me!!!

Ranbir: what did you do??

Aayan: I don't love her!!!

RANBIR is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir: WHAT???

Aayan: I don't love her!!

Ranbir: Then why the hell did you get married??

Aayan: Becuz!!! I don't know!!! I made a stupid mistake!

Ranbir: Not only did you ruin ur life… but you ruined her life as well!

Aayan: I know!!!

Ranbir: You married her and you don't even love her???…

Ranbir is getting mad at him

Aayan is listening cuz he derserves it!!!

Ranbir: Aayan how can you be so stupid????

Aayan: I know I know!!!!

Ranbir is so mad at him

The thing about it is that Shanaya like him a lot

But he don't like her!!!

Ranbir: She loves you and this is how you repay her back!!!! Wah!!!! You are simply great!!!…. Even I wouldn't stoop this low!!!!

Aayan: Look it was my mistake!!!!!!!

Ranbir: You listen to me carefully!!!!…. U have married her…… and now you will stay married to her!!

Aayan is shocked!!!

Ranbir: You aren't going to ruin her life!!! And I don't want to hear any fighting from either of you!! You got that!!!!

He walks away!!

Kanya is talking to Shanaya

And she comes to know about them two as well!!!!

Shanaya: I love him… but he doesn't love me!!

Kanya is shocked!!!!

The problem is… that if Shanaya and Aayan divorce….

Shanaya has no where to go!!

So either way no matter what….

Aayan cant leave her!

Kanya feels bad!!

Later on in the night

Ranbir is on the bed

He is thinking about everything about today

Kanya comes

And sits next to him

Kanya; What are you thinking about?

Ranbir: Nothing!!

Kanya: Yes you are! U are thinking about Aayan aren't you?

Ranbir: How do u know?

Kanya: Becuz Shanaya told me!! And plus… I know you too well…!

Ranbir: Its scary isnt it?

Kanya; Ranbir??

RANBIR laughs a little bit!!!

Kanya places her head on him!!

Kanya: I think that they will become one!!

Ranbir: Knowing Aayan… I don't know!!

Kanya: He wont realize it now.. but he will!!

Ranbir: Well now I just hope so!

Shanaya is sleeping

Has her back turned

Aayan looks at her

He turns the other way

He is thinking about Ranbir's words

(Guess it haunted him!!!)

Aayan is having flashbacks

Of him getting married to her

And how she was all lovey dovey

And he hated it!!

And how much they fighted w/ each other!!

For the next couple of days

Shanaya and Aayan haven't fought!!

One reason behind it

They haven't said one word to each other!!!!

Kanya goes and wakes up Ranbir….

Kanya; Ranbir come on get up!!

He wont get up!

Kanya: Rise and shine! What a beautiful day!! Come on!!

Ranbir: Kanya!! Let me sleep!!

Kanya: No come on

She comes to him

And shakes him a little

But he's in a comfortable position!!!

Kanya: Ranbir!!!

Ranbir wont say anything!

Kanya: Fine!!!

She takes cold water and throws it on him

And he just gets up

Kanya is laughing

Ranbir: KANYA?????

Ranbir: Kanya

She laughs

He runs after her

She is running….

He follows her out!!!!

Shanaya is there

Kanya goes behind Shanaya

Kanya; Help me!!

Ranbir: Kanya!!!!

Shanaya: Whoa whats going on? And why are you wet?

Ranbir; Ask her that!!!

Kanya smiles!!

Aayan comes out

Aayan: Good Morning!!! Brother why are you wet?

Ranbir: Ask ur bhabhi that!!!!

Kanya is smiling!!!

Ranbir: Kanya.. u will pay for this!

Aayan: Bhabs!! Way to go!!!!!!!!

Kanya: Thank you!!

Ranbir: U are supporting her?

Aayan: Of course!!!!

Ranbir: You all!!

Shanaya: Don't worry I have your side!!!!!

She moves

Kanya; Shanaya???

Shanaya smiles

Kanya runs for her life

RANBIR runs after her

Shanaya is laughing

So is Aayan

Then they look at each other

She stops laughing

So does he

Then she walks away!!!!!

Aayan sees her leaving!!!!

Ranbir is ready

He is fixing his tie!!!

Kanya: Here let me help you!

Ranbir: Do u have water??

Kanya: No!!!!!!

She fixes his tie!!

And then he leaves for work….

plz comment!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
WOW 👏👏👏. Beautiful update. I must say your Jeevan Sathi #2 is very good. The updates are quite longer than the earlier one and are really beautiful. Keep up the good work
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
Wow that was reli cute and sweet plz plz continue fast!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
dats was an awesome update.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#75
ooo loved that part especially the lastr scene!
cute! .....continue soooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
very cute update
the last part was funny
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 12

In the house

Its quiet..

No one is saying anything

Shanaya and Aayan don't even meet eye to eye!!!!

Later on….

Ranbir comes home!!!

Kanya's in the room

He goes there

He puts his bag down

And puts his arms around her!!

She smiles!!

Kanya: Ur back!

Ranbir: Yes!!!…… its nice to see you after a long day of work!!

Kanya: Really!!!

Ranbir: Yes!!

They are all lovey dovey

And laughing and giggling

Shanaya passes by

She sees them!!!!!!!

She's all sad!!!!!

Cuz her and Aayan aren't like that!!!!!

She sees them for a while

And then she leaves

She goes into her room

Sits on the bed

And is thinking why isnt she and Aayan like that!!!!!

Then she pictures the same scene but w/ her and Aayan!!!!!! ………

She is thinking about it

Aayan walks in

She snaps out of it

And she looks at him

He looks at her!!

Neither of them say anything

Shanaya gets up

And walks away!!!!!!!!

Aayan looks at her go

Kanya; Okay now let go and change!

Ranbir: why?

Kanya; Becuz!!

Ranbir: Kanya!

Kanya: No Kanya come on!

Ranbir: You are no fun!

Kanya: I know!!!

Ranbir: Infact you are boring!

Kanya; Thank you!!!

Ranbir: Very boring!

She laughs!!!!!

Ranbir goes in and changes

Kanya goes into the kitchen

And she cooks….

And she cleans up a little bit

She's so use to doing everything herself…

She sometimes forgets that there are servants!!!

Ranbir comes into the kitchen

Food smells good

He goes to pick at it

He doesn't see Kanya

Cuz she is on the floor cleaning

Kanya: Stop!!!!

Ranbir is like where is she

Then he looks

Ranbir: What are you doing?

Kanya: Catching people like you!

Ranbir: No really wat are you doing?

Kanya: Cleaning the floor

Ranbir: Kanya how many times do I tell you not to do that?? Why do u think I have servants?

Kanya; I am sorry Ranbir!! But I am use to it!

Ranbir: Come on get up!

Kanya: I am almost done!!

Ranbir: I promised myself that I don't want to see you working!

Kanya; Ranbir …. It's a habit!!!

Meanwhile

Shanaya is back in the room

She has a shoe box…

There are pictures

She is looking at pictures

It's pictures of the family and what not

She starts crying!!!!!!!!!!!

She is missing them a lot

And she doesn't have no one!!

Shanaya is thinking to herself

That she knows that Aayan will never love her

So the best thing is to let him be happy

And he will be free from her!!!!!!!!!

She is willing to give me a divorce!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She doesn't care where she goes!!!

But she will go away from here

And go somewhere far!!!

She wipes her tears…….

Someone knocks on the door

She quickly puts everything everything away….

One photo drops on the floor and lands under the bed a little bit!!!

She opens it…

Its Kanya

Kanya jus came for the heck of it….. And asks her what she doing!!!!!

Shanaya is nothing!!!…….

Kanya tells her to come out….

Cuz she was by herself!!!!

Shanaya is like okay

The photo stays there!!……

Kanya knows that she is thinking about Aayan!!!

But she doesn't say anything

Or else she will get even more sad!

In the middle of the night

Shanaya is looking at Aayan

He is sleeping

She is crying!!!!

She made the decision to divorce him

And she will do it!!!

Poor thing is sad!!

Next day……

Early in the morning

Shanaya wakes up

She goes to the lawyer

And she gets the divorce papers!!!!!

Kanya is praying

She is praying

That everyone is happy

And that Aayan accept Shanaya!!

And she wants them to become one!!

Kanya wants all four of them to stay together

All under one roof

And be happy!!!

Shanaya gets the papers……

All they need is both of their signature

And everything will be done!

Shanaya is like thank you!!

She leaves from there

Shanaya is walking

Lost in her thoughts!!!!

She is sad!!!

This is gonna be it!!!

She's thinking now its going to be all over!!

She cries!!!

She doesn't know how to approach him w/ it

So she says that she wont give it right away!!!!

For the next couple of days

Shanaya feels all blah!!!

She's so tired!!!

And she doesn't feel good!!

She goes to the doctor for a check up

Docs are like they will have her report by tomorrow

So she can pick it up!

Doc says don't worry!!!

She's probably not getting enough rest!!

Shanaya comes the next day

And the reports are in

She picks her report up

Its in an envelope

She opens it

And is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She is pregnant!!!!!!!!!!!!

She cant believe it!!!!!!!!!

She touches her stomach!!!!!!

But then divorce comes into her mind

So she is sad again

But then she says its okay

She has Aayan's memories w/ her

And this baby too!!!!

So both of them will go away!!!!!

And she and her baby will make a new life!!!!!!!!!

Becuz all she cares about is his happiness!!!!!!!!!!

Couple of days later…..

She writes a note to Aayan

But she cant face him to say good-bye!!!!!!!!

She says her final goodbyes in there

She has signed the divorce papers

And all he needs to do is sign it and give it!!!!!!!!

In the note

She doesn't mention what so ever

That she is pregnant!…..

And just says her final goodbyes!!!!!!!!!!!!

She puts the note w/ the papers in an envelope!!

Packs her stuff

And she leaves!!!

She cries!!!!

Looks back at the house

And says bye

She doesn't know where she is going

She just goes!!!


plz comment!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78

great part please continue soon.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
I'm loving this ff.IT's better than your 1st one.Great going so far.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80
ooo brilliant part guli...
continue soooon!

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