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wow kya plot hain yaar guli continue soon nah!
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Part 21


S: what you thought that you can escape???

Kanya is like oh no!

S comes closer to her!!!

Kanya moves back!!!

He's smiling

She's scared!

She runs to the site thing

And there's so much things

She goes around and what not

Samar is like come here!!

Kanya is going in and out

Samar is following her

But loses her once a while!!!

Ranbir arrives there

He goes there

He's calling her name!

Kanya is like Ranbir!!

Samar is like Ranbir???

Kanya calls Ranbir's name

Samar hears this

Follows the voice

Ranbir does too

Ranbir spots Samar

Ranbir is really angry w/ him

Samar sees him

Ranbir goes him

Grabs his collar

And says where is Kanya?

He's like relax!

She's here around somewhere

Ranbir Is like I wont spare you!

Ranbir looks at her!

And so does he!

Ranbir is calling her!!

Kanya is like where are you?

Samar hears

Ranbir hears

Both are going to her

Kanya is sitting on the floor

She stands up

Someone puts their hand on their shoulder

She screams

Turns around

She turns around

Its Ranbir!!!

Kanya: Ranbir!!

She hugs him!!!

Ranbir: Its okay! I am here!

They both start heading out!

Samar shows up

Kanya is behind Ranbir!!!!!!

Samar is looking at them!

Cant stand to see both of them together!!!!

Ranbir had already called the cops!

And they arrive!!!

Samar hears this

And he runs for it

Ranbir sees this

And chases him

He catches up

And drops him on the floor

And both are rolling on the floor

Kanya is screaming Ranbir!

Cops come

Separate both of them

And arrest Samar!

Kanya goes to Ranbir!!

She runs to him

He's a little hurt

But he's okay!!!

Kanya hugs him!!!

Both of them go

Kanya arrives back home!

Aayan and Shanaya are happy to see her

Shanaya hugs her!!!

Kanya is like I am okay!

RANBIR takes her inside the room!!!

Ranbir changes his clothes!!!

He sits next to her!!!!

Puts his arms around her!!!!

She hugs him!!!

Kanya: I am so happy you came!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir: Why wouldn't I?? I was worried sick!!!

They keep hugging!!

Shanaya's in the kitchen

She is stuffing her face!!

She's on her 6th month!

She is big!

Aayan walks in on her!!

She smiles

And asks him whether he wants to join!

Aayan: I am full thank you!!!!!

Shanaya : More for me!!

Aayan is thinking how can she eat??

Never seen this side of her!

Next Morning

Ranbir and Kanya are cuddled up!!!

Kanya wakes up

And comes closer to Ranbir!

And tells him gently and softly to wake up!

Ranbir: Later!

Kanya; Come on!!!

She tries to take the blanket off!

Ranbir: Kanya its cold!!!

Kanya laughs!

Kanya; You big baby!!

Ranbir: I am not!!!

He gets more comfy w/ her!!!!

And puts his arms around her!

Kanya; I have to wake up!!

RANBIR: No you don't!!!!

Kanya: Says who!

Ranbir: Says me!!!!

Kanya; Ranbir!!!!!…

Ranbir: I say we are sleeping in!

Kanya; And I say that we are getting up!!!

Ranbir: but its such a nice morning!!!!

Kanya; Exactly! Get up and enjoy it!

Ranbir: Whats more better than enjoying it w/ ur wife?

He hugs her!!

Kanya: Ranbir!!!!

Ranbir: no! I aint letting go!!!…… This feels so nice!!!!!! Just u and me!!!! No one else!!

Kanya blushes

He comes closer to her

And rolls over

She's on the bottom,

He's on top!!!

Ranbir: No more Samar! What more can we ask for!!!!!

Kanya: can I go now!

Ranbir nods his head no!!!!

Kanya; Please!!!!!

RANBIR: U have an appointment somewhere????

Kanya: no!

Ranbir: Then??

Kanya: Ranbir!

He gets off!!!!

She sits up!

Kanya: thank you!!!

She's about to go

Ranbir grabs her hand!!

Ranbir: You think I will listen to you like that!!!

He pulls her closer

And hugs her

She just melts

And doesn't say anything!!!!

Both of them are happy!!!

No more Samar

No more problems!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Samar is in jail!!

He's like there is no way

I will be here for long!

He's thinking

And then he smiles

He calls the cops

And tells him let him make a call!

Cuz he's only allowed one!!

He calls someone!!!

And hangs up

Going back

He's smiling!!!!!!

Samar is looking around

And is saying

He wont be here for too long!!!

Ranbir and Kanya are still enjoying themselves!

No more problems!

Everything is okay!

Samar is looking down!!!!!

And then he sees a shadow!!!!!

He looks

It's the cop

And it opens the cell!!!

He smiles

And he heads out!!!

A person is standing there!!!

Samar sees

Takes her blessing!!!

And says mom-in-law!!

Mom: What happened???

Samar: Ur daughter left me for another woman!!!!!!!!!!!

She is shocked!!!!

Mom: WHAT???

Samar: Yes!!!!

Samar: Yea!!!! She has left me for another man!!! The same daughter who I took care of.. and brought her into my own home and took care of her! Betrayed me… and went w/ someone else!!!

Mom is none other than Pammi herself!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Samar puts up an act in front of her!!!

So the question is how does Samar know Pammi… if Kanya has never met Pammi….. (she has her pix.. but never met her)

What had happened was….

When Samar provided a home for Kanya…

Samar always use to come over and what not

One day when he had come over

She was looking at pix

And Samar was looking too

After that….

He had seen Pammi

And he came to her

And Samar started talking to her and what not

And Pammi assumed that he was her son in law!!!

Samar didn't say anything!

And she said… I just want my daughter to be happy

And not to mention that you had met me!

Samar is like okay!!!!!!!

Cuz Samar thought.. that One day….

Kanya and Him would get married!

but that never happened!

And since then

Samar was always lying to Pammi how happy she is!!!

And how happy he is!!!!!!!

And now..

Samar is trying to make Kanya look like the bad person here!!!

Pammi is angry at her!!


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Posted: 17 years ago
hey great part please continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
oo yaar guli ur are simply brillliant ! i love yyour plots!
contineus sooon!
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Part 20

Pammi; Kanya cant do this!!

Samar is like she has!!!!!!!

Samar's pretending to be all sad and what not!!!!!

But at the same time he is enjoying this!!!!

Kanya and RANBIR are enjoying themselves!!!!!

No problems for them!!!!!!

So they are relaxed!!!

Kanya: Ranbir.. its 10!! Go to work!!!!

Ranbir: Why??? I'll call in sick!

Kanya: You are fine! Now go!!!!

Ranbir: arre.. Kanya… if I don't go there for one day nothing will happen!!!!!!!

He kisses her!!

Kanya: Ranbir!!!!! Stop it!!!

Ranbir tickles her

And she laughs!!!!!!

Pammi is thinking about what Samar said!!!

She's thinking

He was kind to her

And this is how he repaid her!

She's like what kind of daughter do I have??

Now she is upset!

Pammi calls Shanaya up!!!

And asks her how she is and what not!

Shanaya is surprised!!!!

Pammi has called!!!

Shanaya is like if ur in town

Come down!!!!

Pammi is like maybe some other time!

Shanaya is like no!

U will come now!!!!

Pammi is like okay!!!

Pammi gets the address

And she goes to the house

She comes in

Shanaya sees Pammi

Shanaya hugs her!!!!

Shanaya: I am glad u have came!!!

Pammi: me too!!!

Kanya comes out!!

Kanya sees Pammi

And she is shocked!

Kanya recognizes her right away

Cuz of Pictures!!!!!

She's like omg!!

She is shocked!

Pammi sees Kanya!!!!!!!

Pammi is shocked to see her as well!!!

Pammi saw a glimpse of her one day!!!!!

Pammi cant believe it!!!

Shanaya is smiling!

Shanaya: remember her……

That smile that Pammi had

Went right away….. after she saw Kanya!!!!

Kanya comes to her

Kanya is happy

Her mom is standing in front her!!!!

She's smiling

Pammi isnt

Kanya goes to take her blessing

Pammi moves

And nods her head no!!!!

Kanya is shocked!!!

Pammi: Who are you to do that?

Kanya: Momma!!!!

Pammi: NO!! Don't call me that!!!!!!!

Kanya is confused

So is Shanaya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shanaya: Momma what are you saying????

Pammi; She knows what I am saying!!… How dare you!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya; But what did I do??

Pammi: Don't act innocent!!! I know everything!!!!!!!!!!!!!…….

Shanaya: Momma what are you saying????

Pammi: She left her husband!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya is like what???

Pammi repeats everything!!!

Kanya is like no!!

Pammi: You left such a good man!!! Who took take care of you!!!! And this is how u repay him!! I am disgusted!!!!!

Kanya; I never……

Pammi: I don't want to listen….. I cant believe this!!! I cant believe that u are my daughter!!!!

Kanya is crying

Pammi isnt listening

Shanaya: Momma… but she didn't do….

Pammi: Don't take her side!!! I know everything!!!!!!…

She turns around

And Ranbir is standing there!!!!

And boy o boy

He aint a happy camper!!!!!

Ranbir comes towards her

Ranbir: whats going on here???

Shanaya: Jiju… Um…

Pammi: Oh so this is ur husband!!!!!!!

Pammi is like heh!

Kanya: He's rich that's why u married him!!!!!…… U weren't satifisied … so u came here!!!!

Ranbir is looking at her!!!!!

Kanya is crying

Ranbir is looking at her!!!!!!

Ranbir: I don't want people… coming into this house….. and talking rubbish!! That is one thing I will not tolerate!!!!! And I don't care who they are!!!!!

Pammi looks at him!

They exchange words back and fourth!!!

Kanya is like no!!!!

She stops Ranbir!!!!

Pammi is like… I don't know why I came here!!!!

And she walks off!!!!!!!

Kanya is crying!!!!

So is Shanaya!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya holds her heads…

She feels dizzy ( She aint pregnant )

And she faints on Ranbir!!!!

Ranbir and Shanaya are shocked!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir: Kanya??????

She faints!!!!!

Ranbir puts her on the couch!!!

They try to wake her up….

Throws some water on her…..

And she wakes up!

Kanya gets up!!!!

She cries!!!!

Ranbir consoles her!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir: its okay!!!!

Shanaya is like oh man!

What just happened!!!!

Pammi is accusing her of running away….w/ another man!

Pammi goes to see Samar!!!

Samar pretends to be all goody goody!

Pammi is like I just saw Kanya

Samar is shocked!!!

S is like oh no!!!

Am I in trouble?

Pammi: I cant believe I called her my daughter!!!!

She tells him

How Kanya doesn't feel bad at all and what not!

Samar is like phew!!!!!

She doesn't know!!!!

Kanya is crying!!

She's been accused of something she didn't even do!!!!

Shanaya is thinking

How could she even think this!!!!

Kanya goes out…….

She goes to the temple!!!!!!!

Samar runs into her!!!

Kanya is shocked to see him

Samar is smiling at her seeing her!!!!!

Kanya is like whats he doing out??????

She is scared!!!!!!

Samar: My lovely mother in law.. bailed me out!!!!

He laughs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Samar sees Pammi coming!!!

Samar starts all this crap!!

That how he leaves her….

But she has betrayed me and what not!!!

Pammi hears!!!….

Samar: I gave you everything….

He pretends to be sad!!!!!

Kanya is confused!!!!

Samar: See u don't even care!!!

Samar pretends to get mad

And he walks off

He gives a smile!

Kanya turns around

And sees Sum!!!

Kanya is surprised to see her!!!!

Pammi is like disgusting!!!!

Kanya; Momma…

Pammi: Chup!!! Completely!!!! Who gave you the right to call me that!!!……

She's all mad

And she leaves!

Kanya is crying!!

She sees Pammi going

And sees her getting into her a car

Samar goes w/ her

He smiles at her!!!

Kanya is shocked!!!

She's like Samar is doing all of this!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya calls Ranbir……

And tells him

Ranbir is shocked!!!!!…..

Ranbir's furious!

Ranbir is like Samar will pay for this!

He now wont spare him!

Samar is enjoying this!!!!

Pammi hates Kanya!!!!

Kanya is feeling bad!!

What more can he ask for!

He's laughing!

RANBIR goes

And looks For Samar!!!!

He's thinking where could he be

Then he goes to his house!!!

Momma is staying there!!!

Only cuz

She's in town for a few days!

Ranbir comes to his house

And he yells his name out!!

Samar sees this

He stands up

So does Pammi

Ranbir goes to him……

Ranbir is about to talk

But Pammi stops him

Saying what are you doing here???

Ranbir grabs his shirt!!!!

And he yells at him!!!!!

Momma: Leave him alone!!!!

Ranbir: Why should I???? .. Huh?? Why should I???

Pammi; becuz this poor guy….

Ranbir: Poor guy??? Poor guy my foot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pammi: of course… U wouldn't understand what he's going through!!!

Ranbir: U don't understand what ur daughter is going through!!!

Pammi: What daughter? I only have one!! And that's Shanaya!

Ranbir is like u got to be kidding me!!!!

Ranbir: This guy who u trust soo much… I wouldn't trust him!

Samar: Whatever Kanya did w/ me..

Ranbir: Shut up!! No one told u to speak!

Ranbir tells her everything!!!

Samar is like no

That's a lie!!!

None of that is true!!!

Ranbir is like this is the truth!!!!

Samar is like no!!!

Pammi is looking

And ends up believe Samar!

Samar is happy

Ranbir is like omg!

Pammi tells Ranbir to leave!!!!!

Ranbir's had it

He leaves

And he turns back…..

And tells Pammi

By the time she realizes the truth

It'll be too late!!!!

And he walks off!!!!!

Samar does an act in front Pammi

And she tells him

That she's always w/ him!!

He's like thanks

He turns around

And smiles!

Ranbir comes home

Kanya is like anything!

Ranbir is like no!!!!

Kanya is sad!!

Ranbir is like u better forget this whole thing

Cuz Samar has completely brainwashed Pammi against you!!!!!

Kanya is crying!!!!

She runs into her room!!!



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Posted: 17 years ago
Nice twist to the tale. Hopefully Pammi gets to know the true colors of Samar. Keep up the good work.
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Posted: 17 years ago

oh no the mother doesn't know anything and just blames someone innocent. hope the misunderstandng is cleared soon. great part please continue soon.

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gr8 twist
hopfully pammi realizes the truth
continue soon!
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excellent part simply brillaint!
im telling u ur have such good idea's!
great just great! love the trak!
continue sooon!
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Part 21

Ranbir is sad!

Ranbir goes into the room

He cant stand to see Kanya crying!!

He goes to her

She looks at him

And she hugs him!

Ranbir: its okay!!!!!!!!

Shanaya is looking from the door!!!

She's sad as well!!!!

Next day…..

Ranbir's at work!!!

Kanya decides to go to his work!!!!!

And give him a nice surprise!!!

While she's driving…

She spots Samar!!!!

Samar turns around

And sees her!!!!

Samar is surprised as well!!!!!!

He's waiting outside some store!!!!

Samar looks back in the store!

Becuz Pammi is in there!

Kanya pulls the car to the side!!!!!

And comes face to face!!!!!

S: Well, well, well… this is a nice surprise!!!!!!

Kanya is mad!

And giving him an angry look!

S: Don't be so angry!!! It doesn't suit u!!!!

Kanya: You will pay for everything you are doing!!!

S laughs!!!!

S: Hey.. u ruined my life…. I will do the same thing to you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya: What are you getting out of this???

S: That you are miserable! Becuz ur mom hates you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya is so mad!!!!!

S walks around her!!!

Kanya turns around!!!!!

Pammi is coming out!!

S says something to her

Kanya is about to slap him!!!!!

S stops her hand!!!!

Pammi sees this!!!!

S is like…..

U ruined my life what more do u want???

He's like enjoy ur life w/ Ranbir!!!!!……!!

And he throws her hand

He walks off!!!!

Kanya turns around…

Sees Pammi standing there!!!!!!

Kanya is shocked to see her!!!

Pammi comes to her

And she slaps her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya cant believe it!

Pammi: Why do u keep coming to him???? … Leave him alone!! What more do u want!!!!

She walks off!!!

Kanya cries!!

And stands there!!!

She comes back home

She doesn't even go to see Ranbir!!!

She comes in crying

Shanaya is like whats wrong?

Kanya w/o saying anything

Goes into the room!

Shanaya goes after her

Shanaya: DI whats wrong?

Kanya is quiet!!

Shanaya makes her tell her!!!!

Kanya tells her!

Shanaya is shocked!!!!!!

Kanya: And she slapped me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shanaya is shocked!!!!!!!!

Kanya cries!!!!!…

Shanaya consoles her!!!!!

Shanaya is like this isnt right!!!!

She tells Kanya

That she will have a talk!!

Kanya is like no!!!!!

And besides

Nothing will work!

Shanaya is sad!

Kanya is crying!!!!!!

Ranbir comes home!!!!….

Kanya isnt crying anymore!

He goes in the room!

Kanya is doing things

To keep her mind off from everything!!!

He comes in

Kanya sees him

Goes to him

And she hugs him!!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir: Whats wrong?? Are you okay??

Kanya: I just wanted to hug you!!!!

Ranbir: Anytime!!!!!

Kanya's brother ends up calling Pammi!

And asking her how is she?

Pammi is like I am mad!

He's is like why!!!…

And she tells him the whole story and wat!

He's is shocked!

He's like what??

Pammi is like yes!!!

This is what happened!!!

He's is like omg!!!

That's his sister!

And she could stoop so low!

He is like anyways…

I will be coming there!!!!!!

Pammi is like good!!!

Cuz Shanaya's baby shower is coming up!!

And it would be a nice surprise…..

He is like that's why I am coming!

They talk

And then they hang up!!!

He's is like…

Some sister I got!!!

He's like heh!

Kanya doesn't tell Ranbir about the slap

But Shanaya tells him

Becuz Shanaya is like Ranbir needs to know

Ranbir is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He cant believe this!!!!!

Ranbir: And she didn't tell me?

Shanaya: U know how Kanya is!!!!!!

He's like this has gone way to far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She tells him

Don't do anything!!!

Its pointless!!!!!

He's upset!

And while talking

He turns around

And she's standing right there!!!

She's crying!

He goes to her!!!!

Looks at her!!!!!

Both look at each other's eyes!

She hugs him!!!!!

He hugs her back

Saying why didn't you tell me!!!!!

She's just hugging and crying!!…..

She's a little relieved becuz… the person she needs the most..

Is with her!!!!!

They both hug!!!!

Kanya is telling Ranbir!

That she is very happy

To have a husband like Ranbir!!!!

And he's w/ her

In these moments!!!!

Ranbir is like telling her..

That I cant see you like this!

She hugs him tighter!!!

In the night…

Kanya is just thinking about everything!

And then she is like…

This problem is never gonna resolve!

So just forget about it!

She will just live her life in peace!!

And whatever Samar wants to say

Let him say!!!!!

Few days later

Its Shanaya's baby shower!!!

The whole house is decorated!

She is excited!!!!!

Aayan leaves!!!!

Ranbir isnt home yet!

He' still at work!!!!

The guests arrive!!!

Kanya makes sure everything is okay!!!!

Then Pammi comes!!

Kanya sees her!!!

Pammi sees her

And makes a face at her!!!

Kanya is like…

This isnt going to work out!!

So she takes Shanaya….

And tells her that

She will be leaving!

Shanaya is like u cant leave!!!!

Kanya tells her people's mood will be ruined if they see me!

And she doesn't want that to happen!!

Shanaya is like but..

Kanya is like please!!!

Shanaya is sad!!!

Kanya hugs her!!!

Then Harpal comes!

Shanaya is shocked to see him

And surprised!!

She goes and hugs him!

He came down to surprise her!!

Kanya comes out!!!!

She takes the keys

And she leaves!!

Pammi sees her leaving as well!!

Shanaya is sad!!!!…..

Her mood goes all off!!!!

Pammi comes to her

Saying whats wrong????…..

She's like are you sad becuz Kanya left?

Harpal is like that was Kanya?

Pammi is like yes!

W/ like anger!!

Pammi is like..see….

She couldn't even stay here!!!

Ruined Shanaya's mood!!!!

Shanaya gets upset!

And she tells them

She left becuz…. Of you!!

And becuz of you… she couldn't be here!!!

And she walks off!

Pammi is shocked!!!!!!!!

Pammi tells Shanaya

If she left

Its her problem!!!

I have nothing to do w/ this!

Shanaya turns around

Shanaya: After everything you did to her…. How can she come in front of you??…

Shanaya is like u didn't do the right thing!!!!

Kanya is walking on the road!!!

She has to do something for another 2 hours!!!

She goes to the park

And sits on the bench!

She just thinks!

And isnt moving!

She wanted to forget everything!!

But one way or the other

Pammi will come in front of her

And then she will feel more hurt!!

Later on….

The baby shower is over

And the guests leave!!!!!

Servants clean everything up!!!!

Shanaya is thinking where could Kanya be?

Aayan comes back home!!!

Pammi and G are still there!

Shanaya is like….

Why isnt Kanya here yet?

Pammi hears!!

And she's like

She left on her own!

She will be back!

Don't stress over her!!!

Shanaya gets all mad!!!

Then Ranbir comes home!!!!

He sees Pammi…

He could care less!!!!

Shanaya: jiju…. Di….

Ranbir looks at her when she says that

Shanaya tells him

That she left….

Ranbir: Where is she???

Shanaya: I don't know!!!

Ranbir goes and looks for her!

Kanya conts walking

Ranbir is looking for her

But cant find her!!

He calls her cell

Its ringing

Kanya picks up

Puts it by the ear

Ranbir: Kanya?? Where are you???? Where are you?

Kanya is quiet!

Ranbir: I will come by you!!!

Kanya is like I am home!!!!

Ranbir turns his car around

And drives sooo fast

And he arrives home!!!!!

Kanya is standing in front of the house!!

She waits for Ranbir!

Ranbir comes

He comes to her

And asks her where were you?

Kanya is like I am fine!

Ranbir is like u don't look fine!!!!!

She looks all pale!!!!!

Kanya is like I am fine!

He brings her in!

Pammi and G are still there

Don't know why they haven't left!

Shanaya sees Kanya!!!

Shanaya goes to Kanya and hugs her!!

Shanaya is like I was getting worried!!!

Kanya is like I am fine!!

In a low voice!!


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