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Part 23

Ranbir comes to him!!!!

And he's like give me one good reason why I shouldn't hit you right now!!!

S is looking at him!

Ranbir is so upset

And he just punches him one!!!

He's like how dare you?

He knows…

That he isnt the father

But he did something over there!!!!

S looks at him!!!!!!

RANBIR beats him up!!!

Then Pammi comes

And stops him!!!!!

He's like get out!!!!!

Get out now!!!!!

Ranbir is so angry!

He doesn't say anything

And he walks off!!!!

Kanya comes home!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shanaya is like what happened?

Kanya is quiet!

She isnt saying anything!

Shanaya is like answer me!

She tells her!

Tells her all slow!!! And what not!

Shanaya is shocked!

She just sits on the couch!!

And just stares into space!!!!!

Ranbir comes home!

Shanaya: jiju??… wat happened???

Ranbir sees Kanya!!!!

He sees

Kanya isnt moving!!

Ranbir comes to her!!

Ranbir: Kanya???

Kanya is numb!!!

Ranbir is like…

Please answer me Kanya!!!

Please!!!!!

She keeps repeating

This isnt ur child!!!

Ranbir closes his eyes!

Ranbir is like

This is my child!!!!

I am the father!!!

And he's like Samar did this!!!!!

I know so!!!!

Ranbir hugs her!

But she isnt reacting!!!

Ranbir is like…. Kanya!! Please don't be like this!!!!!

Shanaya is so upset!!!!!

She leaves

Goes to Pammi

Pammi is smiling to see her!!!!!

Shanaya is mad!!

Shanaya is like…

Ever since you have come here… you have made our lives miserable!!

And she's like…. From now on…. She doesn't want to see her….

Or does she want Pammi to come to her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pammi is shocked!!!

Pammi; What are you saying?

Shanaya: What I am saying is true!!!…. I don't want you to come and see me… or will I come and see you!!…. What you are doing is bad!!!…. U don't even know whats going on…Why are you trying to ruin my house!!!…….

Pammi tries to talk

But Shanaya is like no!

I don't want to hear it!!!!

She's like from now on

You stay away from me

And the house!!!!

And she walks off!!!!!

Pammi is sad!!!!!

Ranbir is trying to get Kanya..

Out of her state!!!

Ranbir is like please Kanya!!!!

Ranbir: Kanya.. for my sake… please!!!!!!…….

He keeps saying

I know I am the father of this child!

He's like I am!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir: Samar did this!!!! Samar is like who cares what he says!!! I know and you know who is the father!!!

Kanya looks at him!

Ranbir is almost about to cry!!!

He's like please!!!!!

Ranbir holds her face!!!

She comes closer to him!!

Places her head on him!!!!

And just holds him!!

He kisses her!!!!!!

Shanaya is cooking dinner!

Aayan comes

And is like

What are you doing?

Shanaya: Making something!!!!!

Aayan: U shouldn't be doing this!

Shanaya: I am okay!!!!!!

She smiles!!!!!

Aayan is like okay!!!!

Shanaya: And besides its done!!!!!!!

Aayan is about to walk off

But she grabs his hand!!!!

And she hugs him!!!

Aayan: Whats this for?

Shanaya: Just felt like it!!!

He hugs her back

And he's like…

Well..

I will take this anytime!!!!

Shanaya brings food for Kanya!

Ranbir feeds her!!!!!!!

Afterwards

He puts her to sleep!!!!!

caresses her forehead!!!!

And she closes her eyes!!!!!

He kisses her forehead

And he comes out!!!

Shanaya is like…

Is she asleep??

Ranbir is like yes!!!

Shanaya is like good!!

And she tells

Both him and Aayan

That she tells them

What she said to Pammi!!!!!

Both are shocked!!!

Aayan; When?

Shanaya: Today!!!… and I told her not to come to meet me

Cuz I don't want to meet her either!!!!

She's pretty mad!!

Ranbir is like…. Whats the point telling her now!

Next Morning

Kanya wakes up!!

She opens her eyes!!!!!

Ranbir is sleeping!!!

She looks at him!

Ranbir turns

And sees her!!!!!

She comes closer to him!!!

Ranbir: Good Morning!!!!

She smiles!!!!

She hugs him

And he hugs her back!!

They both get ready

And they come out!

Shanaya sees her

And she's happy!!

And hugs her!!!!!

Shanaya is like how are you??

Kanya; I am fine!!!!

Everyone sits around

And they have breakfast!!!

Afterwards….

Everyone is sitting!

Ranbir doesn't go to work!!!!

Then…

Everyone looks by the door…

Ranbir and Kanya sees them

And they smile!

Remember that one couple…. That was living w/ Ranbir and Kanya..

Kanya felt bad for them cuz they were on the streets……

So they were staying w/ them!

After Ranbir got everything back…

Ranbir told them they could stay there!!!!

Well they are there to see them!!!

They haven't seen them for a while!!!

They invite them in!

They talk

Ranbir and Kanya tells Aayan and Shanaya who they are!!

The guys talk

And the gals go

And talk amongst themselves!!!

The lady asks Kanya

How is she?

Kanya tells her that she is pregnant and what not!!!!

She's very happy for her and what not!!!

Kanya is like thank you!!

They all talk and what not!!

Kanya tells them the present situation!!

She is shocked!!!!

She's like what?

Kanya is like yeah!!!!!

The lady is like even I know what happened!!!!!

Afterwards…..

they leave!!

Ranbir is like you guyz are welcomed anytime!

They all leave!

The woman tells her husband

And he's like that's bad!

They are talking

And walking!

Samar and Pammi are out!!!!

They bump into them!!!!

Lady recognizes Samar!

And gives him a mean face!!!!!!

Samar looks at her

And then he recognizes her!!!!!

Lady is like how dare you???

Samar is like oh god!!!

Cuz Pammi is there!

The lady is yelling!!

Pammi: Hey who are you?? And why are you yelling at him?

Lady: becuz this is man.. is the biggest liar in the world!!!!!

Pammi: excuse me.. who you are to say that???

And then……

Lady starts w/ the story!!

Samar is like this isnt true!!!

None of this!

Lady puts her hand up

And tells him

I am not finished yet!!!!!!!!

And she cont

And tells Pammi

What he did w/ Ranbir

And how they met them and everything!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pammi is looking at her!!!

She is shocked!

L: Today we went to go see them to see how they were… when Kanya had told me what had happened!!!… You are sick!!!!

She's looking at Samar

W/ a mean look!!!!!

L tells her this is the truth!!

But she also says

That why will you believe me???

Becuz you didn't believe ur own daughter!!!

So whats the point if a complete stranger tells you!!!!!

And she just walks off!!!

Samar is looking at Pammi

Pammi is like is this true???

And he's quiet!

Pammi asks him again!

He is quiet!

Pammi slaps him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

S is shocked!!!

Pammi is like how could you do this??????

Taking revenge like this!!!

She's yelling at him and everything!

And she's like I even bailed you out!!!!!!!!!

Thinking that it wasn't his fault!!!!!……

She's so mad at him!!!

She's like how could you???

Pammi: You are a fraud!!!!!……..

And she tells him that she will take him where he belongs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Samar is shocked when he hears that!!!

Pammi calls the cops!

Samar makes a run for it!!!

Cops look for him!

But it turns out

He wasn't as slick

Cuz he's caught!

He's back in jail!

Pammi is just lost in her thoughts

And she's like what have I done?

She's feeling really bad right now!!!

Kanya is sitting on the bed!!

Ranbir comes in

And he sees her!

He comes and sits next to her…..

She sees him

And rests on him!!!!

She feels relaxed!!

Both talk to each other

And share a moment!!!!!!

Slowly

She falls asleep….

And Ranbir lets her sleep!

Pammi is at the temple…

And she's like what have I done????

She cries and cries!!!!

And is like.. I am an aweful mother

Pammi feels bad for what she did!

And she's like I can never come face to face w/ Kanya!!!!!

Pammi is like

She probably hates me!!!

She keeps crying!

Next Morning

Kanya and Ranbir are sleeping!

Kanya has finally got a good nites rest!!!

Ranbir opens his eyes

And sees her sleeping!

And he's happy!

She got complete rest!!!

He gets up

And lets her sleep!

Shanaya's in the kitchen…..

She's cooking

She has a plate in her hand…

And she drops it

Cuz she feels a sharp pain in her stomach

Aayan and Ranbir hear and run into the kitchen

Both see her on the floor holding her stomach!!!!!

Aayan screams her name

Aayan takes Shanaya to the hospital

Ranbir stays

Cuz of Kanya!

Kanya comes out

And she's like what happened???

Ranbir turns back

And sees her

And he tells her

Kanya is shocked!

She's like WHAT??

And she gets ready

And both go to the hospital

Aayan is waiting

Ranbir and Kanya come there

Pammi hears the news

And she goes to the hospital

When she comes there

She sees Kanya!!

She's all sad

But then she remembers Shanaya's words

About not coming by anyone

So she hides around the corner

Doc comes out

And tells Aayan

That congrats!!

Wife gave birth to a baby girl!!!

Aayan has a huge smile

And he's like really???

Doc is like yes!

Both are happy to hear the good news!!

Pammi is like thank you God!!

Aayan goes in to see Shanaya!

And afterwards

Ranbir and Kanya go and see her!!

Shanaya is smiling!

Nurse brings out the baby!

And everyone is like how cute!

Pammi quickly

Goes by the door

And peeks!!

And she's happy!

She's like I got to see my child!

That's okay!

Before anyone sees her

She goes away!!!!

Kanya; So what are you going to name her??

Shanaya: We are going to name her Neha!

Ranbir and Kanya like the name!!!!

Shanaya is discharged after 2 days

And she comes home!!!

Happy atmosphere!!!!

Few days later….

It is Ranbir and Kanya's 2nd wedding anniversary!!!!

(just go w/ it)

they have been married for 2 years now!!!!

Kanya turns around

And doesn't feel Ranbir!!

She opens her eyes

And she's like where is he?

She sits up

And calls him

He's not around!!!!!



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Part 23



She gets out of bed

And looks

But he isnt anywhere!

She calls his cell….

Ranbir: Hello?

Kanya; Ranbir where are you??

Ranbir: I left early! I didn't want to wake you up!!

Kanya: But what was it that you had to leave early!!

Ranbir: Just had to finish some work!

Kanya: When are you going to come home?

RANBIR: I don't know yet!!!

Both hang up!!!

She gets ready and comes out!!!!

She looks on the calendar

And she realizes that its their 2nd wedding anniversary!!!

She's smiling!

She calls up Ranbir again

Ranbir: hello?

Kanya: Ranbir??….

Ranbir: Yes!

Kanya: Do you know what is today???

RANBIR: What??

Kanya; think!!!

Ranbir is thinking

Ranbir: What I don't know!!!!

Kanya: Stop playing you do!

Ranbir: I do??

Kanya; Yes!!!

Ranbir: I don't know!!!!!!

Kanya; That means you forgot??

Ranbir: I guess!!!

Kanya is sad!!!!!!

Kanya is like its okay!!!

And she hangs up!!!

Kanya; He forgot!!

Later on in the afternoon

Ranbir comes home!!!!

Kanya is sitting on the couch

Reading something!

He comes and sits next to her!!!!

Ranbir: Hi!!

She is quiet!!

RANBIR: Why are you quiet?

She flips through a magazine!

He takes it from her

And asks her!

She gets up

Ranbir: Kanya.. what did I forget?

She's quiet!

He asks and asks..

And then she tells him that how could you forget..

She's talking a little fast and what not and a little loud

And when she goes to look at him he's not there

She looks down and he's on his knees!

He's on his knees!!!!

He holds her hands!!!!!

Ranbir: U thought I forgot????…. I would never forget it!!!

Kanya: Forget what???

Ranbir: U tell me!!

Kanya: OH no!! I wont tell you!! Cuz I know u forgot!!

Ranbir: Kanya… I knew what today was… becuz I have been thinking about it for the past week!!!!

She is looking at him!

And he's like….

I have been planning today for the longest time!!!!!

He holds her hand….

Ranbir: Kanya…. We have been married for 2 years!!!!!….. And today is our wedding anniversary!!!!….. And I am grateful to God that I have married you!!!! I couldn't ask for more!!!

Kanya is shocked!!!

She's about to cry!!!!!

Ranbir: These two years have been great becuz I have you by my side!!!!!

She's looking at him!

And she's like omg!!!!

Ranbir: Kanya w/ the circumstances we had when we got married…. They weren't that great! And we didn't have a big wedding!!… But today I would like you ask you…. Will you marry me again????????

Kanya's looking at him

Ranbir: And this time… we will have everyone!! We will have a big wedding!!……… So Kanya….. I ask you again.. Will you marry me???

He takes out the ring

And shows it to her!!!!!

She starts crying!!!!!

He stands up!!!!!!!

And looks at her!!

Ranbir is waiting for an answer!!!!!

He slips it on her……

And she just straight out hugs him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir: Yes or no??

Kanya: Ranbir!!

She hits him!

He knows the answer is yes!!!!!!!

Ranbir is happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shanaya and Aayan come out from the room

Aayan: Arre.. not in the living room you guyz!

Shanaya hits him!!!!!

Ranbir: Aayan???

Aayan laughs!!!!!!

Ranbir: Well since you two are out here we might as well tell you…..

Shanaya: tell us what?

Ranbir: That we are getting married again!!!!

Shanaya: What???? Really???

Kanya: Yes!!!!!

Aayan and Shanaya knew about that happened the 1st time!!!!!

They are like wow!!!

Congrats!!!!

Kanya is happy!!!

Shanaya is like when u guys getting married??

Ranbir is like next week!!!!

Kanya is happy!!!!!

Kanya: Well that requires a new wedding dress!!!

Puts her hand out!!!

Ranbir is doesn't say anything!!!!!

And gives it to her!!!

She's like thank you!!!!

They both go shopping!!

Later on in the night

Ranbir and Kanya are cuddled up!!!!!

Both are happy!!!!

Kanya is like I cant believe we are getting married again!!!!

Ranbir is like neither can I!!!!!!

Kanya sits up

And looks at him

And she's like I am happy that I have you as my soul mate!!!!!!

He smiles

Kisses her on the forehead!!!!

Both hug each other!!!

Kanya has picked out her wedding outfit

And it looks nice!!

Ranbir and Kanya invite everyone they know!

Pammi comes to know

And she is sad

That she cant be a part of it!!

But she's like I deserve it!!

The wedding preparations are on!

Kanya is happy!

She always dreamed of having a big wedding

And now she's getting one!

Ranbir tells her not to stress out

And to take care

Cuz she's pregnant!

Kanya: I will be fine! Nothing will happen!!!!!

The day before the wedding…

Everything is done!!!

Both are happy!!

Ranbir puts his arms around her!

Shanaya: Jiju!!!!

Ranbir: What??

Aayan; Brother don't u have no shame!

Ranbir: No!!!

Aayan: hugging in public!!

Ranbir: I am in my home! I don't care!! Like you don't do it!!

Aayan; I don't!

Neha is crying

Shanaya goes to her

And picks her up!!!

She's in a small cradle type thing

And picks her up!!

They all sit

And just talk

Shanaya: U know since you guyz are getting married again… u should sleep separately!!

Ranbir: oh no! I don't want to lose my sleep before the big day!!

Shanaya: oh come on!

Ranbir: No way!

Kanya laughs!!!

She knows that Ranbir cant go one night w/o her

Shanaya puts Neha to sleep

And then everyone goes to sleep!

Next day

Everyone is getting ready!!!

Guests have come!!!!

Ranbir and Kanya are happy!!!

Kanya is getting ready

Ranbir has no idea

Wat Kanya has brought!!!

They are in different rooms getting ready!

Ranbir comes uot

He goes by the guests and tells them thanks for coming!

Ranbir sits on the mandap

And everyone waits for Kanya to come!!!

And then

Pammi comes hiding her face!!!

No one can see her

And she makes sure no one sees her

She's hiding behind the crowd

From where she is

She can see everything!!!!!

Ranbir is waiting for Kanya!!

Shanaya goes and gets her!!!!!!

Kanya comes down!

Everyone looks at her!!!

She looks awesome!

Pammi sees her

And smiles!!!!!!

Ranbir isnt looking just yet!!!!

Kanya comes and sits next to him!!!!

Kanya sits down!!

Ranbir finally turns

And looks at her!!!

And he's just amazed as anyone else!

She smiles!!!!

Ranbir whispers saying that she is looking stunning!

Kanya blushes!!!!

They do their pheras and all that again!!!!

And same thing

Ranbir buys her a new mangalsutra!!

And its better than the 1st one!!!

Kanya is happy!

Everyone is looking on

And they are like awww!

Pammi sees this

And is crying!

She's thinking that she cant be part of this happy moment!!!!!

She quietly goes off!!!!

Shanaya turns a little bit

And sees her going out!

And she spots right away that was Pammi

She is shocked!!!

And she's like what was she doing here!!!!

Pammi leaves!!!!

And goes home!

.After the wedding

Everyone starts cleaning up!!!

Kanya is helping

Ranbir tells her not to do anything!

She shouldn't be doing this!

Kanya is like I am fine!!

And besides she's only 3 months pregnant!!!

Ranbir is like so!!!

U aren't gonna do this!

She's like okay!!!!

She goes in the room

And takes off her jewelry!!!!

She's smiling!

Her dream wedding came true!

She's thrilled!

Ranbir comes

And helps her

Wraps his arms around

Ranbir: I love you!!!

Kanya is like I love you too!

She cries a little bit!!!

And hugs him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Next day

Shanaya goes to Pammi

And she sees that the door is locked!!!!!

Some lady is passing by…..

Lady: can I help you????

Shanaya: I am looking for Pammi Godbole

Lady: Oh she doesn't live here anymore!!


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Part 24


Shanaya: Then where is she?

Lady: I don't know!! She said she's going somewhere far!!!! She went to her daughters wedding yesterday and afterwards she came back and said that she saw that both of daughters were happy so there was no reason for her to be here so she moved!!

Shanaya: Do u know where she is?

Lady: No! But I have the key if you want it!

Shanaya opens the door

And its all empty!!

There is nothing left!

Shanaya is like where could she go?

She keeps the key w/ her!

And she leaves!

She comes back home!

Kanya: Where were you???

Shanaya: Huh? No where!!

Kanya: u went no where in the morning?

Shanaya: I went to see Ma!

Kanya is shocked!!!!!!

Kanya; What??

Aayan comes out!!

Shanaya: yes I want to see her!

Aayan hears that

And he's telling her

Didn't you tell her not to see her again!!

Then what happened??

Shanaya: I told her that but I wanted to find out what was she doing here at the wedding!!

Kanya: What?? She was here!!

Shanaya: Yes I spotted her leaving from here!!

Kanya cant believe!

She's thinking

Why was she here?

Kanya; So what did she say??

Shanaya: She's not there anymore! She's gone!

Kanya: What?? Where?

Shanaya: I don't know I have the key to the house!!!!!

Kanya: She just left w/o saying anything!!!

Both of them are like now what!!!

Meanwhile

Ranbir is still sleeping!

He doesn't feel like getting up!

Kanya comes in

And starts yelling

And telling him to get up!!!!!

But he isnt listening!

He has the pillow over his head

Kanya takes the pillow!

She sees him fast asleep!

She's smiling

Cuz he looks so cute!

She comes closer

And tells him softly

Kanya: Ranbir…. Wake up!! Time to get up!!!!!!

Ranbir doesn't say anything!!

Kanya: Please!!!!!!!

She comes even closer!!

She puts her hand on his face!!!

Then..

She takes the pillow

And whacks him w/ it!!

And keeps hitting him and hitting

Ranbir suddenly gets up!

Ranbir: WhaT??

Kanya; Oh ur up!!!

She smiles

Acting all innocent!!

Ranbir: Is that a way to wake someone!

Kanya: but if they don't get up I have no choice!!!

She laughs!!

He looks at her

She hugs him!!!!

Ranbir; Ur so lucky… I love you!!

She smiles!!

Kanya: I love you too!!!!

He laughs!!

And hugs her!

Meanwhile

Pammi is getting on a bus

And she goes on there

And she's like this is it!!!

My daughters will be happy! … that's all I ask for!

She gets on

And goes!!!

Then all of a sudden

Bus gets into an accident

And you hear an explosion!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shanaya turns the tv on…. And they show it on the news!

Shanaya is listening

And she comes to know that Pammi was on that bus!!

She is shocked!

She calls Kanya!

Kanya comes out

And asks her whats wrong?

Shanaya: that bus got into an accident!!

Kanya; And???

Shanaya: Mom was on that bus!!!!!!!!

Kanya is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She's like what?????

The names are shown on TV

For all the passengers that were on that bus!

And they see her name!

Both look at each other!

They go the place

To see if they can identify anything!

More Shanaya then Kanya can!

Shanaya spots a bag

Opens it

And sees her things!

Shanaya screams saying no!!!!!

Kanya closes her eyes

And tears are coming down!!!!!!!!!

Its not a very pretty site!

Both of them leave from there!!!

And they head back home

And when they do

Pammi is right there!!

She has bruises and what not

But she surviAayan!!

She's thinking a lot of things right now!!

And then she thinks that

Both Shanaya and Kanya mustve heard the news about me dying

So now she can go and wont have to worry about them!!

She leaves the scene

And goes somewhere!!!

Both gals come home

And are too sad to even do anything

They both sit on the couch!!!

Later on

The guys come home

Sees them sitting on the couch

And their moods are off!!!

Ranbir: Kanya??

Kanya sees Ranbir

She stands up

Goes to him

And cries!!!!

He's like whats the matter!!!!!!

She hugs him!

Ranbir has no idea what the matter is!!

Aayan comes to Shanaya

And she does the same!

Then

Kanya ends up telling him

And Ranbir is shocked!

He's like what????

Kanya is like yeah!

Ranbir consoles her!!

And tells her its okay!

He tries to calm her down

Cuz she's pregnant and all!

Kanya is like yes I was upset

But I didn't want this to happen

Shanaya agrees!

Pammi goes

She comes to a place

Where no one knows her!...

Pammi gets a small house for herself!!!

And she stays there!

Shanaya and Kanya are still hanging in there!!!

But they have to live their lives!

4 months later

Kanya is on her 7th month

She's big!!!!!

In the morning

Kanya is awake

Kanya goes and brings him tea

Ranbir is sleeping peacefully

She wakes him up

He doesnt wake up

Kanya: Come on Ranbir! wake up!!!

SHe comes closer to him

Kanya: Please!

He slowly opens his eyes

Kanya smiles!!

Ranbir: Good Morning!!

Kanya: Good Morning!!

Ranbir: I was sleeping so peacefully and u woke me up!

Kanya: Thats my job!

Ranbir: I can tell!

She smiles!!!

Ranbir: Its nice to that smile on ur face!!!!!!

He pulls her closer!!

Kanya: Ranbir?? come on!! Get up!

Ranbir: I like it here!!

Kanya; Come on ur so lazy!

Ranbir: When ur around anyone can become lazy!!!

Kanya: Ranbir??? Stop it!Lets go!!!

Ranbir: Where we going today????

Kanya; NO where!!

Ranbir: U said lets go!!

Kanya: Ranbir i know ur stalling lets go!!!

Ranbir: Cant i spend a little more time w/ you!!

Kanya: No!

Ranbir: Fine then i will go back to sleep!!!

Kanya: Ranbir please!!!

She begs!!

Ranbir: Nope!

Kanya: Fine then i am leaving

She walks away

Ranbir: Arre where are you going?

Kanya: Out!!

RANBIR: Kanya please come back!

Kanya: NO!!!

Ranbir: U cant go in this state!

Kanya: Oh yeah watch me!!!!

Ranbir is shocked!!!

He jumps out of bed

And stops her

Saying ur not going anywhere!!!

Kanya: But…

Ranbir: No!!!

Kanya: Okay if you say so!!

Ranbir: Serves you right!!

Kanya laughs!!!!

Kanya; At least I got you up!! That's the only thing that matters!!!!!

Ranbir: Kanya??

She smiles!!!

And then he does to!!!!!!

She hugs him!!!!!!!!!

He gets ready

And is about to go!

Kanya: wait.. ur forgetting something!

Ranbir: no I have everything!!!!

Kanya; But..

Ranbir: Bye!

Ranbir leaves!!!!

Kanya turns around

And does something

And then she turns around

And Ranbir is standing right there!!!!!!

Kanya; What??

He kisses her!

Ranbir: I cant forget it!!

He winks at her!!!!!!

She blushes!!!!!!

And hugs her

And then he leaves!

Ranbir: take care!!!

Kanya: I will!

In the after noon

She sits on the couch!!!

She turns on the TV

And starts watching it!

She flips through!

Nothing exciting is coming on!!!

Its all news!

She watches the news!!!

And then

Right before shes about to change it

She sees something!!

She records it really quick

And watches it

And in the background

Its none other than Pammi!!!

Kanya is confused!

Shes like shes alive???

Shanaya comes

And asks her wat are you looking at?

Kanya points

Shanaya looks

She doesn€™t see it

Shanaya: WHAT?

Kanya: Look.. she€™s€. there€.

Shanaya: who?

She looks carefully

And then she spots it!

Shanaya is stunned!!

She€™s like how can this be?!!

Both look at each other!

Pammi sees the news people

And tries to get out the way

Before anyone sees her!

Shes like I hope no one saw me!

Kanya and Shanaya dont know wat to say!!

The guyz come home from work!!!

Kanya sees Ranbir

And comes to him

And hugs him!!

Ranbir is worried

And asks whats wrong?

She cries!!!!!

Aayan goes to Shanaya!!

Shanaya is looking at the TV!!!!


plz comment!
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Posted: 17 years ago

hey great part please continue soon

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