FF: Jeevan Saathi #2: Pg 24 (End) - Page 12

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Posted: 17 years ago
grrr samars always creating problems between them!
plz continue :D
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey great part please continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
oo love the suspence!
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Part 19

RANBIR is shocked!!

Kanya screams!!!!

She holds his hand!!!

Ranbir is standing right there!!!!

He doesn't move!!

Shanaya is like omg!!!!

Aayan and Samar are looking at each other!

RANBIR: U will not touch me!!!!!!!

Cops stop!!

Samar: Don't be scared of him!!!!!!! He's just saying that! Arrest him!!!!

Cops go to him

And stop

And they turn around

They say we cant!!

Samar: Why?

Cop: He didn't do anything!!!

Samar: He escaped from jail!!!!!! Arrest him!

Cops look at him

He's like what are you waiting for!!!

Aayan is looking all around!!!!

Kanya is scared!

Samar is like arrest him!!!

Now!!!!!

Kanya holds Ranbir's hands

Shanaya is looking on!

RANBIR: They cant arrest me.. becuz I haven't done anything wrong! Its you that has been doing everything wrong!

By sending Kanya to jail…

And making the cops torture her!!!

Ranbir is getting mad at Samar!!!

Ranbir: I aint going anywhere!!! Neither of Kanya!….. Cops…. Arrest Samar!!!!

Cops look at him

Samar is like u cant do this!!!

Samar: Aayanant… tell them…..

Aayan looks at S

And then looks at Ranbir!!!!

Aayan: Cops… arrest Samar!!!!

Samar is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Samar: Aayan???

Aayan: What do u think?? I am stupid!!! And that you can break our relationship?? That can never happen!!!

Ranbir: what did you think?? We were fighting?? We were putting up an act against you!!!

He is shocked

So is Shanaya and Kanya

Cuz they had no clue!

Aayan: When you came to me…

Cont's talking…

About saying that brother doesn't care

And when he dies

I wont get anything…..

I came to him that same day

And told him what you had told me

So we thought of this plan..

To make it seem like…

That you were influencing me!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir: No way!!!!!!!!!…….. I told Aayan to keep listening to you

Which he did!

Aayan: I know that if anything happens to him … God Forbid….. I would get it…….. u can never break our bond!!!

Ranbir: Never!!!!!!

Ranbir: And as for us escaping from jail…. It was all planned!!!!!!!!!

Samar is shocked!!!!

He's like how!!

Ranbir points

Samar sees

Its that one guy…

the one where Ranbir was trying to make a phone call

and the guy came him

Starting causing trouble

And then they fled

Ranbir: All part of the plan!!!….

Both are smiling

Samar is like I have been tricked!!!

They take him away

And everyone see him leaving

Shanaya: Jiju.. u mean… when I heard you guyz….

Ranbir: Aayan knew I was here!!!!… WE just didn't tell you guyz!!

Kanya: very rude!!

Ranbir: arre sorry!!!!

Aayan: Yeah we are very sorry!!!!.. But our plan worked!

They are happy

And give each other high fives!

Ranbir: Now we can live in peace!!!!

Aayan: That's right!

Kanya is reliezed!!!!

Samar is thrown inside the cell

And he's saying

That they cant do this to him

But no one is listening

And he's talking to himself

He's soo mad

Everyone is busy doing there own things!!

He's yelling

Samar is rotting in jail!!!

He's so mad!!

He's saying he will get out

He talks to himself

Becuz no one is listening

To what he is saying!!!

And he says he wont spare any of them!!!!!

Back at Nanda House:

Things get back to normal

Kanya's in the kitchen and she's cooking

Shanaya goes and helps her

Aayan and Ranbir are sitting

And they are talking

They finish cooking

And come out

Then they become quiet when they come out…

Kanya: Keep secrets from ur wife… aren't you ashamed???

Ranbir: Nope!!

Shanaya: U should be! U two… always keeping things from us!!!!!

Aayan: Arre… its between us!!!!

Kanya; Oh so that special bond that u two have!!!!!!!!…..

Ranbir: Of course!!

Aayan: Our bond will never break!!!!!!.. and plus Brother likes me more than you!!!!

Kanya; Oh really??

Aayan: Yes!! Its obvious becuz I've known him longer!

Kanya folds her arms

Kanya: So.. he doesn't love me as I thought he would

RANBIR: Arre nahin.. its not that….

Aayan/Kanya: Then??

Ranbir: Why am I stuck in the middle???

Shanaya: So now I know that Aayan loves jiju more than me!!!!…. And I thought he loved me more!

Aayan: No its…..

Kanya; Seems like it!!

Aayan: Arre.. how did I get stuck??

Ranbir: U started it!!!!

He's like aww man!

All laugh!

Aayan: But bhabs… I cant believe that you went w/ brother!!!

Kanya; And why not??

Aayan: becuz.. no wife would do something like what you did!!!!

Shanaya: Only Di???

Aayan: Oh so u do care about me?

Shanaya: Aayan????

She hits him

Aayan is like just joking

But Ranbir and Aayan know

That their wives

Would do anything for them!!!!!

Which is why they are so special to them!

Afterwards

They all eat

Shanaya pigs out

Aayan: Hey… don't take all of it…….. leave some!

Kanya; Leave her!

Shanaya: Yeah…. I am eating for 2!!

Aayan: really?? I thought you were eating for all of us!!!!

Shanaya hits him

Aayan; Hey why do I get hit???

Shanaya: becuz!

Ranbir: U let them eat!!! Then they become all fat… and then they will realize it….

Kanya: Fat???

Ranbir: Yeah!

Kanya gives that look

Ranbir: Arre Kanya.. ur not pregnant… u don't have to worry!

Kanya: In the future I will!!

Ranbir: Then let that time come!!!!

Kanya: But if u ever call me fat….. then..

Ranbir: Arre meri ma.. I wont call u fat! Promise!

Samar is like no!!!!!

He has to get out!!….

He cant be in here!!!

He thinks of a way to get out!!!

He's like if Ranbir can escape

So can he!!!!

Next Morning…..

He pretends that he wants to make a phone call

Cop looks at him

Samar is like please

Then he comes out

And stands by him

Samar dials a number

He looks around

And then he sees the cops gun!!!

He looks side to side

Front to back

Then he grabs the gun

And holds it up

Everyone is shocked!!!

Samar is like don't move!

They put their hands up

Samar is pointing the gun everywhere

He makes his way

And he runs!

Cops are like get him!

They run after him

Samar runs…. And runs

Cops are right behind him

He takes weird routes……….

Kanya and RANBIR are cuddled up w/ each other!…

Ranbir's phone rings

He moans

And doesn't want to answer it!!!

Ranbir doesn't pick it up!!

Kanya wakes up

Kanya: Ranbir pick up ur phone!

Ranbir: No!!!

Kanya; Ranbir!!

Ranbir: let it ring!!! I am enjoying this moment!!!!

Kanya: Ranbir!!

Then his phone stops!!!

Ranbir; See even they agreed!!!!

Then it rings again!!

Ranbir is like who it is!!!

Kanya: That's why pick it up!!!!

Ranbir: no!!!

Then she goes over him

Tries to take it

But he stops her!

Kanya: let me get it

Ranbir; no!!!

Kanya; Ranbir!!!

She laughs

He stops her!!!!

Kanya; Ranbir! Let me answer it!!!!

Ranbir: No!!!!

Then she reaches

And answers it

Kanya; Hello!!

Ranbir is like why she have to answer it

Kanya; Hello???

They hang up!!

Kanya They hung up!!

Ranbir: good!!…

Kanya: Ranbir!!

Phone rings again

Ranbir grabs it

RANBIR: Hello??

Ranbir: Hello???

No one is talking

Ranbir hangs up!!!

He's like stupid phone!

Ranbir: So where were we??

He comes closer to her

He kisses her

Kanya; Ranbir stop!!!!

Ranbir: No!! U come closer this is ur punishment!

Kanya: So I guess I wont come by you!

RANBIR: OH NO WAY!!!! That's not possible

She laughs!!!!

Ranbir: Its not funny!!!!

Kanya: So u really cant be w/o me!

Ranbir: No!!!

Kanya; Not even for 1 day!

Ranbir: No!

He comes closer

She blushes

And his phone rings again

Ranbir: No!! not again!!


plz comment!



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Posted: 17 years ago
Nice update. This ff is really going good. But who is calling them? You really left it at a cliffhanger. Continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
gr8 update
they r outta jail!!!
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
brill update... pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
brill plan..yaar kya shaalu plan tha brilliant!
excellent part
contineu sooooon!
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Part 20

Kanya goes to pick it up

He stops her

And kisses her

Kanya is like stop!

Ranbir is like leave it!

Kanya is like no!

She hands him the phone

He answers

Ranbir: HELLO????

It's the cops…..

They tell him that Samar has escaped

Ranbir is shocked!

He's like what??

Kanya looks at him

She gets worried

And she doesn't know what it is!!!

Ranbir is like oh my god!!!!

Kanya asks him wat happened

Ranbir tells her

She gets scared!!!!

Ranbir is like its okay

Nothing will happen!

Kanya gets freaked out

Both of them get ready!

Samar is hiding from the cops!!

He's thinking where could I go!

He sees where he is!!

His house is like 2 miles away!

He makes a run for it!

He tries to reach his house

Cops are looking for him

Ranbir is on the phone

And tells them to find him

They are like we will!

Samar makes it home!

And he hides there

He's like phew!!!

He's thinking

No one will ever come here!!

He laughs!!!

He calls Nanda House

Kanya picks up the phone

Kanya; Hello?

Samar smiles

He's all excited cuz its Kanya

Kanya keeps saying hello

But no response

She hangs up

Samar is smiling

He listened to her voice!!!

He calls her again!!

Kanya answers

Still nothing

He's like melting on the other side!!!

He is smiling

Kanya starts yelling

Saying stop calling if u aren't gonna say anything

S's about to say Kanya

But she has hung up

Phone rings

Kanya is getting annoyed!!!!

She picks up

And yells

Saying don't call here

Ranbir: Kanya??

Kanya: Ranbir??

RANBIR: Whats wrong??

Kanya: I don't know someone keeps calling.. and wont say anything!!

Ranbir is thinking who could that be!!!!

He's thinking could it be Samar?

But why would he call

Ranbir tells her don't worry about it!!!

Kanya is like okay!

Samar is in his home!!!!

He's hiding out!!

Ranbir is telling them to keep looking!

Cops are like they are trying!

Kanya steps out

She goes out

And buys a few things!!!

Its only her!!!

She looks

And buys and what not!

Samar is looking out his window!

And from far

He spots Kanya!

He's shocked

But also happy

He looks around

Its only people!!

No cops or anything!!

He changes his clothes

And makes his move!

Kanya is looking

Samar is looking at her!!!

Kanya is thinking

And she has a feeling

That she is being watched!

But she's like no!!!!!

She keeps continuing

And does what she does

Samar comes closer and closer

Kanya hasn't seen him yet!!

He looks around

Makes sure the coast is clear!!

He comes closer

Kanya's in her own world

Minding her own business

Then her phone rings

S is like damn!

Kanya talks to Ranbir!

S is like oh god!

Give me a break!

She hangs up

S makes his move…..

And grabs her hand

She turns around and sees him

Samar grabs her hand

Kanya turns around

And sees him

She is shocked!!!!!

Her heart just drops after seeing him

She's like you!!!

She's scared out of her mind!!!!

Kanya is making him let go!

But he isnt!!

Samar is like shh!!!

Kanya is like no!

Kanya makes him let go

And she goes

But he grabs her again!!

Kanya is stuck!

She cant go anywhere

Kanya is really mad!!!

Samar is like don't even try to do anything funny!

Kanya is like what u mean!!

Samar has a gun!

Kanya is shocked

She sees the gun

And sees him

He's smiling

Kanya is scared!!!!

Samar tells her to keep quiet

And come w/ him!

And don't try anything funny!

Kanya looks around

Samar is like lets go!

Kanya walks!!

S is behind her

Acting all normal!!!

Kanya cant even reach for her phone

Becuz its in her purse

They arrive at his place!

Samar is like finally!

I have you to myself!

He is happy!

Kanya is like what do you want?

S: I want you!!!! I have always loAayan you! But you never loAayan me!!!!!!!!

Kanya is looking at him!!

And she's least interested

And he's saying

That he is way better than Ranbir!!!!

And he will make her happy!!

Kanya: What makes you think I am not happy?? I am so happy w/ Ranbir!!!!!…….

S: Yeah but I will make ur life even more happier!!!!

Kanya; Ranbir has already done that!!

Samar is getting irritated

Ranbir Ranbir Ranbir!!

Samar is like u cant be his

Only mine!

Kanya is freaking out!!!!!

Her purse is by her

She needs a way to get to her phone

But he's right there!!!!

Ranbir comes home

Call for Kanya

but she isnt there!!!

Shanaya comes out

And tells him that she's gone out

She'll be back!

Ranbir is like okay!

He goes in the room

He calls her!!!!

Kanya's phone is ringing

Kanya is shocked!

So is Samar!

The phone rings

Both hear it

Kanya goes to her phone

Samar is like no!!!

Kanya gets scared

S is like give me the phone

Kanya is like no!!!

S goes to her

He grabs it

Kanya is yelling no!!!

Both are fighting for the phone

til it lands on the floor

upside down!

Ranbir is like hello!!!!

S is talking to Kanya

S: What do u think?? I will let you go easily!

Kanya is screaming saying help!

S is like no one can today!

Ranbir is listening

He's like Samar

Kanya??

He's like he has her!!!

Ranbir is shouting hello!!!

But he can only hear!!

S: I wont let you get away from me!

Ranbir informs the cops

And tells them

To look for S

Cuz he has Kanya!!

Samar is like don't do anything funny!!!

He is watching her!!!!

Kanya is crying

And scared at the same time!!!

Samar picks up her phone

He sees

No one is there!!!

Looks at her!!

Ranbir calls the number again

Samar sees

Ranbir calling

Kanya sees

Samar cuts it

Ranbir is like damn!!

He must have the phone!!

Kanya gets up

Ranbir calls again

Kanya grabs the phone

And answers

And yells

Telling him to save her

Samar is like no!

He's getting angry!!

Kanya is like I am here @ his house

Ranbir is like house!

He calls them

And they head over there

Samar grabs Kanya's hand

And goes w/ her

They both escape!!!!

Cops arrive

Ranbir is w/ them

Sees that the door is open

He runs in

But nothing!!!

Ranbir is like no!!!

He's upset!!

They search everywhere but nothing!

Ranbir is like I am not going to spare Samar!

Gives a mean look!

Kanya and Samar are running

Kanya tries to make him let go

But he has her hand held!

Then she lets go!!!

And she runs off

Samar calls her name

Runs after her

Kanya some how loses him!

Samar is looking for her!

Kanya goes

And finds a phone

She dials Ranbir's number

He picks it up really quickly

Kanya is like Ranbir

Ranbir is saying where is she?

Kanya tells him

She looks around

And finds some construction site

RANBIR is like I will be there!!!!!

Kanya is like hurry!

Ranbir gets on it

Kanya looks around

And she runs over there

But while going

Samar comes in front

Kanya is shocked!


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Posted: 17 years ago
hey gr88 update
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